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Who had the best story?

Simarii
3 (11.5%)
Gurpinder Mand
3 (11.5%)
Tarn Ji
1 (3.8%)
♥ღஜ♥ Raunak.♥ღஜ
2 (7.7%)
Shokeen Munda
8 (30.8%)
Jatt Beparwah
5 (19.2%)
§¤§ Karam §¤§
4 (15.4%)

Total Members Voted: 26

Voting closed: February 15, 2011, 12:23:49 PM

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Voting:Complete the Story Competition Poll
« on: February 03, 2011, 12:23:49 PM »
Jidi story sab toh jyada changi lagi thonu...ohs shaksh nu vote pao...

Ill post all the stories here so u can refresh ur memory...n remember vote Fairly!  :rockon:


Simari's Story

IK kudi car vich behti jah rai hundi ah ....te red light te jake ruk jandi...ohde nal ik munda pull up krda... jera motorcyle te hunda...n fer oh ohdi tarf dekh da... te oh odi purani school friend hundi ah... oh ohnu bulonda but janu signal green ho janda te oh chale jandi !

Munda dekh keh shocked reh janda ehne saal wad ohnu Puja disi! Kiunki Puja nu mareh hoye nu 4 saal ho chuke hunde ah. Oh ghare jake apne dosta nu phone karda te ohna nu dasda ohde nal ki vaprea aaj. Oh sab suhn ke haraan reh jande…keh Puja wapas kiwe ah skdi ah. Ya ta koi hamshakal ho skdi ah ya fer Raj nu galt famli hoi honi.  

Fer oh munda soch da vi kal fer ohi time ohi signal te jake apne friends nal karu ga. Te agar Puja fer aii…sab ohda yakeen karan geh..na ki ohnu pagal kahon ge. So agle din sab Raj de nal, light stop te jake kar jande ah. Thore kk time wad fer ohi gadhi ondi a te Raj sab nu ohde val ishara krda…sab dekh keh chaunk jande. Kiunki ohs gadhi ch behti ladki khuba hoo Puja wangu lagdi ah.

Fer oh sab apni car ch bheke Puja da picha krde ah. Te thora jea aghe jake ik kabristan vich Puja di gadhi ruk jandi. Oh bahar nikal di ah…te oh sab ohde piche piche hunde. Turde Turde kaafi sama nikal janda par Puja ni ruk di. Sab nu shak hon lag janda…vi kuch gar baar ah. Te jis waqt eh keyal ohna de mann ch onda…Puja uhse waqt wapas murke deki di a ohna val. Te ohde face te ik smile hundi. Oh sab dar jande…te dar de mare pajan lag jande. Ohsi waqt ik toofaan onda te oh sab apni safety lai ik purane ghar ch var jande.

Ohte andar varde sar jo chandelier hundi…ohna te dig jandi…te Raj de sare dost mar jande. Raj bach janda…te ohtho paj janda. Fer dwara jad bahar nikalda…ohde samne Puja kari hundi. Par ohda muh parle pase nu hunda. Te oh Kabraii hoi awaz ch ohnu pukarda. Te jad oh wapas murdi ah…Puja ek kaaufnakk bhoot da naqab ch disdi ah. Te Raj dekh kar dar janda…oh ohto wapas ghar de tarf pajan lagda…achaniki ik truck onda outta no where…te ohnu chak dinda…te ohde utte chi nikal janda.

Puja di aatma nu finally mukti mildi ah. Asal gal eh c…jo Ladki c Puja. Ohnu shaajish nal Raj te ohde friends ne marya c. Te apna wadla lehn lai oh ohna nu mardi c. Jad ohs din Raj ne Puja nu dekya signal te…oh shocked hogya c kiunki ohne ta apne hatha nal Puja nu marya c. Par jo hunda…kismet ohnu wadal ni skdi…Puja ne apna wadla lehna c…te oh ohne pura krke chdya. Te hun oh mukti pake kushhi kushi janatt ch reh skdi c !


Shokeen Munda's Story

oh kudi jehri hundi aa ohnu chete aonda aa ke, haye mai taa pehla hi late aa minu time naal viah ch phuchna c, oh confuse oh jandi ah soch rahi hundi ah, ke hun ki kariye je ehde naal gall karagi taa late hona hi hona, ohde kol ek coin hunda ah, tuwanu chete howe taa eh sikka(coin) tusi pehla v vekhea howega, sholey movie ch jehra lamboo kol sikka hunda ah, mera mtlb amitabh bachpan, oh sory bachhan, aho ohi sikka kuri ute nu suttdi ah, like jida cricket match ch tose karde hunde ah, te fer tusi jande hi oh ke sikka dowe passe ek sign wala siga, oh kuri viah wala passa hi wish karke suttdi aa sikke nu, fer hona ki oh jitgi, te chali oh kush hoke apne frnd de viah ch, gaddi shooooooooooooo karke legi mitro, oh munda chalan lag pea ah taa vekhda bike nu puncher ho gea, hun oh puncher lawan li phuch janda aa shop te, othe jake ki vekhda ah ke eh banda taa oh ah jehri mai exam sheet chori karke exchange karti c, like jida mel karade rabba movie ch hunda ah, same to same bas bai oh banda masa hi otho jan bacha ke onda ah, te suddenly ohnu raste ch ohda ek frnd mil janda ah, oh bolda aja mitra viah ch chaliye, oh v chal pehnda aa viah ch, mundeya nu taa mauka chaida hunda ah, bas fer oh kuri v othe hi aai hoyee c, ah mai thori jehi hindi movie di story churai ah, kise nu naa dassi ok, hanji aghe suno bai fer ki oh munde te kuri nu taa pata  ni c, ke ethe mil jange, bai mundeya ne gaah paya hoyea c, sare rurki marka pegg laye hoye, sab nu 1 bande de 4 dis rahe c, bai kuria v rajj ke nach rahia sigia, te oh kuri da v man kita ke mai v nachagi, oh v hulle hullare karan lag peyee, bas fer munde ute ohdi najar peh jani ah, kuri nu kushi hundi ah bot bot, kushi kahdi guess taa karo.........hmmmmmmmmmm........oh yaar oh kuri nu kushi esh karke hundi aa je oh sika karke tose na kardi te viah attend karan toh reh jandi hun vekho viah v attend ho gea, utto viah ch bane aa garam garam gulabjamun or goll gappe, kuri nu dowe hi bot pasand bas fer ohdi kushi da tikana ni reha, te munda v mil gea, bai fer ki eda hi oh dowe mil jande ah, ohna di sohni jehi love story chal pehndi ah, oh kuri school time toh hi like kardi hundi c waheguru ne hun ohna di love story sire lati, yaar thora suspense karde aa, subhash ghai di movie toh chura lende aa thori jehi story, acha aghe suno bai kuri dilo jaan toh munde nu pyar karan lag peyee, or munda v, done jane ek duje bina nahi reh sakde c, bai kuri ne keya ke mere nal viah kado karona ah,
munda v ohnu bot chaunda siga, but mai ek suspense paon laga movie toh chakk ke oh ah ke munde da viah hoya hunda aa pehla, v but oh pehla toh hi ek duje nu pasand karde c,oh school wali kuri nd eh munda kade oh viah wali kuri nu smj leyo ok, or munde di gharwali ohnu payr c ni kardi, bas fer bai ethe panga peh janda, hun kuri bole ke viah kar lende ah, hun ni vichora seh hunda, hun munda kiwe ohnu dasiye, oh soch soch kamla hoyee janda, ke mai ehnu kiwe dassa, mai taa apne pyar naal dhoka kar reha ah, oh sochda ke minu eh sab pehla hi dass dena chaida c, dowe pyar jaano wadh chuande ek dujje nu but munda darda naa dasse ke kade mera pyar minu shadd dewe, taa kiwe dassa, mitro fer ki ohne himmat karke ek din osh kuri nu sab dass deya, oh kuri sacha pyar kardi c ohnu, osh kuri ne pushea ke tusi mainu eh dasso tusi apni life ch kush nahi c, oh munda dassda bai ohnu kuri nu ke nahi sohniye je mai kush hunda taa, mai inna begairt ni ke dokah deke mai apna pyar poanda, bolea mai shru toh hi tainu pyar karda, bas bapu di job karke ohne ekdum bharo jana peya, othe ghar deya ne thakke naal viah kar deya c munde da, ohne sab dassiya ke ohdi biwi ohnu kuttdi aa, rojj kutta khani kardi ah ohde naal, or ohdi wife ch bot atitude hunda aa, paise da, oh munde nu tourcher kardi rehndi ah, fer ohna wicho kade pyar nih hoya, hun bai vehlro fer kuri ohnu pajj ke jaffiiiiiiiiiiiizzzzzzzzzzz pa lendi ah, boldi ah ke haye tu inna pyar karda minu, boli tusi mere pishe inne dukh sehe, boli hun nih dukh jarne asi, mitro fer ki oh court ch case pa ke divorce kar lende ah pehle viah toh, bacho apna viah kar lende ah,
kushi kushi rehn lag jande ah, bot bot bot pyar karde ekdujje nu, haye mai war dewa sara jahaan ehna ute inna pyar karde dowe jane,

waheguru ji sab nu ohna da pyar dewe, sab kushi kushi rehn ekdujje naa,


Gurpinder Mand's Story

IK kudi car vich behti jah rai hundi ah ....te red light te jake ruk jandi...ohde nal ik munda pull up krda... jera motorcyle te hunda...n fer oh ohdi tarf dekh da... te oh odi purani school friend hundi ah... oh ohnu bulonda but janu signal green ho janda te oh chale jandi ! ........... Jado signal green hunda tae munda b apne ghar wali sadak tae ghar chala janda. Pher agla din ous time oyi signal tae munda dubara ous nu dekh da, par ess time kuri kise munda naal hundi tae munda soch da shaydh ous da pati hao ga. pher green signal hunda tae oh apne ghar chali jandi tae munda apne ghar chala janda. Pher next day munda thora late ho janda par oh  pher ous kuri ous signal tae milda ki dekh ajj oh 4 different mundaya naal haa. tae mundae 4 bahut kush san par oh kuri apna dhyan sadak rakh k signal di wait kar rahi c. tae ana nu signal green hunda tae oh apne ghar chali jandi tae munda apne ghar chala janda. ajj 4th day c oh apna office kam finish time ous signal tae ponch janda par oh kuri ous signal tae nai dekh da kush time motorcyle side ta la k wait kar da par o kuri nahi andi pher apne ghar chala janda..... pher 5ve din ous di wait karda par kuri nahi andi. 6ve din oh pher ous kuri nu ous signal tae dekh da tae ess waar oh 2, 40 saal dae kareeb bandaya naal ja rahi c tae sab bahut kush najar rahe san... aah dekh k Munda sochan tae majboor ho gaya k roj aah nave bandaya ja mundaya aah andi aa chakar ki aa........  tae munda nu oh kuri school time toa bahut pasandh c par oh apne dil di galh das ni sakya. ess time b oh dasna chounda c par nahi dass sakya. ana nu oh ghar ponchya gaya tae ous di mata nae pushya putt odas kayun haa tae munda khenda kush ni maa ajj office vich kaffi kam hun kar k thoda jaya thakya haan. anae nu ous da dost aa janda tae pushda da kanjra ki galh ajj totae udae lagg dae aa... tae pher ous sari galh das dae tae ous dost khenda salya ohde pishae jaa k dekh pher koi decision. tae munda haaaaaaa aah tae mae sochaya nahi c. pher agla munda 1 ghanta phela ja k signal tae khara rehnda kuri andi tae oh apna bike ous dae pishae la lenda. pher oh ki dekh k kuri ik thaa gadi ta othe 2-3 munde gaddi vich bethae utar jande tae 3-4 hor char jande  oh munda hakka bakka rahh gaya k ho ki raya ........ pher oh ous dae pishae 50-60 km janda tae oh kuri ohna munda nu utyaar rahi hundi k oh apna biki ik dam ous gaddi dae aggae la k khara kar dinda tae utar k khar janda... anae kuri b gaddi cho utar di tae ous valah dekh k thora jaya hass di tae pher valah tur pendhi aa.. tae munda ous valh tur penda..... tae kol k kuri push oye bandar dae bacha motorcycle kyu khari ti... tae mundaya ni bandar diya bachiya ki galh roj tu nayae nayae bandar na ghum di chakar ki aa.... oh kuri kehndi teri matt ta ni vajj gae bhootni daya mae ta apna kam kar di aa.. munda anda manu pata tu jerda kam kardi aa roj navae mundaya la k kadae odar kadae adar ghum di rehndi aa... kuri kahndi chup karja nahi ta ik thoak deni mae  ana sundae munda da sara pyar bhoot utar janda tae pher push da hasha pher dass galh ki a? tae dass di k galh ni tenu pata ayi aa india da haal. jidae kolo paisa tae safrish ous nu job mil jandi aa mae apni ist grade vich degree lan toa badh unemployment aa tae ghar dang saran layi mae hun taxi chalandi aa. tae bapu ji tae maa ji tae shotae veer di pardayi likhayi sari jumevari mere taae aa gae haa. tae mundae akha vich athroo aa jande tae apna ghar chala janda aah sab sunn k tae... tae badh vich oh pher kinaae dina baad ous nu signaal tae milda tae ous nu ishara karda oh ess time ous kolo andi tae munda ous nu signal tae vichkar traffic intersection tae vichar kar sare side traffic jam ho gaya tae sab ohna valh dekhan gussae vich dekhan laggae tae ana nu oh munda ous kuri nu purpose karda tae kuri  hass k mandh jandi tae oh purpose ta chalon theek ana nu traffic police vala janda oh phar k munda da sara ashqi da bhoot thane vich kadh dae .......  pher oh munda ous kuri naal shaadi kar lenda tae ous dae mummy daddy tae shotae veer nu sab nu laa k ik family vich rehna shuru kar dinda tae....


hun kuri nae taxi job shad diti tae oh mundae nae safarish labh k paisa pusae dae k kuri nu b job utae lava  ta happy happy rah rahe nae.........

♥ღஜ♥ .....♥ღஜ's Story

os to baad oh munda ohda pisha karda wa per kuri nikal jandi wa
oh munda himmet nai haarda wa .. oh kehnda j kismet ch milna hoya ta rabh jrur milauga..
fir ik din munda apne ik frd nall ohdi engagement (mangna) lai shopping mall janda wa
uthe oh kuri b hundi .. oh munda us kuri nu wekhda wa te bahut khush hunda wa .. jado tak oh ohde kol janda kuri chal jandi a (sad)
oh munda bahut sad ho janda wa .. fir oh sochna shad dinda wa ik apa kadi milage
finally oh apne frd di engagement te janda wa .. jaddo ohda frd ohnu apni mangetar nall milon lai janda wa
ta oh kuri ohdi ohi purani frd nikaldi (lol).. oh ohnu wekh k bahut khush hunda wa per jad ohde dimaag ch onda ki ehdi ta engagement ah
ohda dil tutt janda .. hun tuci sochegi kiu .. coz oh onh pyaar karda hun wa .. is tarah oh hun uthe shad chal janda wa
hope u like it
thanks


Tarn Ji's Story

IK kudi car vich behti jah rai hundi ah ....te red light te jake ruk jandi...ohde nal ik munda pull up krda... jera motorcyle te hunda...n fer oh ohdi tarf dekh da... te oh odi purani school friend hundi ah... oh ohnu bulonda but janu signal green ho janda te oh chale jandi !



THEN BOY US NU FOLLOW KARDA HAI …. GIRL FEEL KARDI HAI KI KOI US NU FOLLOW KAR REHA HAI…. THEN OH POLICE NU CALL KARI HAI. BOY APNE MAN CH BAHUT HI KUSH HO REHA HUNDA HAI  KI OHH APNI FRIEND NU MILAN JA REHA HAI BUT US NAHI PATA KI US NAAL KI HOON WALA HAI … KUDI DI CAR FIR IK RED SIGNAL TE JA RUKDI HAI THEN MUDA GAAL KARAN HI WALA HUNDA HAI TE INNE TIME CH POLICE UTHE AA JANDI HAI … BOY DI KOI GAAL NAHI SUNDA OHHHH BOLAN DI KOSHISH KARDA HAI BUT POLICE US NU NAAL LE JANDI HAI … MUNDA KEHDA MERA KI KASUR HAI MAIN TE KUCH KITA VI NAHI BUT KOI NAHI SUNDA …. OHHH SARI RAAT POLICE STATION CH SPEND KARDA TE SOCHDA USNE KITA KI JO US NU SAJA MIL RAHI HAI ….


THEN NEXT DAY POLICE OHH KUDI NU VI BULANDI HAI SETTELMENT LAI … JADOO KUDI ANDI HAI TE MUDA LITTLE BIT RO REHA HUNDA HAI …. OHHH KUDI NU IGNORE KARAN DI KOSHISH KARDA HAI INNE HI TIME CH KUDI US BOY NU PEHCHAN LENDI HAI THEN US DA NAAM LE KE BULANDI HAI JADO MUNDA US WAAL DEKHDA HAI TE KUDI SORRY FEEL KARDI HAI … OHH KEHNDI MENU MUAFF KAR DE KEHANDI INNE DINNA BAAD MILE OHHH VI GAL FEHMI DI SIKAR HO GAI MAIN PEHCHAN NAHI SAKI C TENU US TIME…
BOY US TIME US DI SORRY ACCEPT KAR LENDA HAI THEN SMILE KARDA HAI. KUDI APNI COMPLAINT WAPIC LE LENDI HAI TE BOY NU APNE GHAR INVITE KARDI HAI …


KUCH MONTH BEET JANDE NE THEN ….  MUNDA KUDI DE BIRTHDAY PARTY TE JANDA TE NAAL KUDI TE MAAN PASAND FLOWER LE K JANDA TE NAAL HI KUDI NU PERPOSE KAR DENDA HAI … US DI SHAYAD KISMAT CHANGI C JO KUDI VI US NU ACCEPT KAR LENDI HAI … MUNDA BAHUT HI KUSH KAMLA HOYA FIRDA …. JIVE US NE RAB NU PA LEYA HUNDA HAI … US NE KUDI NU PROMISE KARDA J US DI LIFE CH AA JANDI HAI TE OHH APNI SUB MADIYAAN ADTAAN CHAD DU GA … US NE KITA VI KUDI VI CAHUNDI C KI OHH US NAAL RAVE …..

OHHNA TE PARMATMA DI MEHAR HOI TE DONA DA VIYA HO GEYA …. KUCH MAHINE BEET GAYE ….ACHANAK BOY DE FRIEND DE GHAR PARTY CHAL RAHI HUNDI HAI TE MUNDA BAHUT HI JAYADA DRINK KAR LENDA HAI .. TE US DE FRIEND US NU FIR TOON US DI WIFE DI GAAL US NU YAAD KARWA DENDE NE KI US WIFE DE KARAN OHHH SARI RAAT JAIL CH REHA … JO INSULT HOI OHHH KIVE BARDASH KAR SAKDA HAI….US NE DARU TE PEHLAAN HI PETI HUNDI HAI OHHH GHAR PAHUNCH K APNI WIFE NU KUTNA SURU KAR DENDA HAI … PATA NAHI JIVE US TE KOI SHATAAN SAVAR HO GEYA HOVE OHH TE JANWAR BAN GEYA APNI WIFE NU JANWARAAN DI TAAN MAARI JA REHA TE KEHNDA TERI WAJHAN NAAL  MAIN SARI RAAT JAIL CH REHA … THEN AGAIN KUTNA SURU HO JANDA HAI ….


BUS MORNING HUNDI HAI TE MUNDE NU YAAD VI NAHI HUNDA KI US NE KITA KI C … OHH DEKHDA HAI KI US DI WIFE GHAR NAHI HAI OHH TE US NU CHAD K JA CHUKI HUNDI HAI US NU PATA OHH FLOOR TE KUCH BLOOD DEKHDA HAI TE SOCHDA HAI KI KI HOYA BLOOD KIS DA HAI TE US DI WIFE KITHE HAI … OHH APNI WIFE DE CELL TE CALL LARDA HAI BUT OHH VI SWITCH OFF HUNDA HAI … OHH TENSION CH AA JANDA TE KUCH HOR NAHI SOCHDA SIDA POLICE KOL CHALA JANDA TE MISSING COMPALIANT LIKHA DENDA HAI OHH SOCHDA SHAYAD US DI WIFE KIDNAP HO GAI HAI …

KUCH DIN BEETDE NE…….. TE US NU IK UNKNOWN NUMBER TOON CALL ANDI HAI … OHH KEHNDA HAI KI IK DEAD BODY MILI HAI TE VERIFCATION  LAI AA JAOOO … OHHH RONA HOYA TENSION DE VICH PAHUNCHDA HAI … JADOO OHH DEAD BODY NU DEKHDA HAI OHH BURII TARAN DAMAGED HUNDI HAI … OHH PEHCHAN CH NAHI AUNDI OHHH US DEAD BODY DI FINGER CH IK RING DEKHDA HAI TE APNI MANGNI DI RING YAAD AA JANDI HAI …. TE BODY VERIFY KAR K US NU LE JANDA HAI AND ANTIM SANSKAR VI KAR DENDA HAI ….. OHH ALMOST SHOCK WICH HUNDA HAI KI ACHANAK AA SUB KI HO GEYA …

IK DIN OHH APNE OFFICE JA REHA HUNDA HAI TE IK KUDI TE ACHANAK DEKHDA HAI OHH HOR KOI NAHI US DI WIFE HUNDI HAI OHH US DE KOL JANDA HAI TE RONA SURU HO JANDA TE KEHNDA TU KIYOO CHAD K CHALI GAI US NU … OHHH US NU KUCH NAHI KEHNDI TE JAN LUGDI HAI …
MUNDA US DA HUTH FAD LENDA HAI TE DEKHDA HAI US DE HUTH TE
BAHUT SARE NISHAN HUNDE NE TE PUCHDA AA KIVE HOYA
TE KIS NE KITA … KEHDA OHH KOUN HAI JIS NE US DI WIFE TE HUTH CHUKAN DI KOSHI KITI …. OHH US NU KHATAM KAR DEVE GA …

US DI WIFE US NU KEHNDI OHH INSAAN HOR KOI NAHI OHH TU HI HAI
….. FIR INNI GAAL GAAL SUN K OHH CHALA JANDA HAI US NU YAAD AUNDA KI US NE KI GALTI KITI C … OHH FIR APNI WIFE NU MILDA TE MUAFI MANGDA OHH MUAFF NAHI KARDI .. EH GAAL US DE DIL TE LUG JANDI HAI ..TE OHHH SUCIDE KAR LENDA HAI TE APNI LAST NOTE TE LIKH JANDA HAI KI “JO HOYA US NU PATA NAHI PAR HO SAKE TE US NU MUAF KAR DEVI”

FIR HONA KI C KUDI NU JADO US DA KHAT MILDA HAI TE TE DEPRESION CH CHALI JANDI HAI AND OHHHH PAGAL HO JANDI HAI … KI SOCHDE HOYE KI US DE KARAN AA SUB HO GEYA ……ITHE HI IK LOVE STORY KHATAM HO JANDI HAI …………  


AA KOI FILMI  KAHANI NAHI JO REALALITY CH HUNDA MAIN OHHH DUS REHA ….IF JE MERI STORY KISE NU PASAND I HOVE TE DHANWAD …. US DA JIS NU PASAND NA I HOVE US DA VI DHANWAD

                                                                      
                                                                         SUB DA HURMAN PIYAARA
                                                                         TARNBIR SINGH



Jatt Beparwah's Story

jhanu signal green ho jaanda munda motorcycle tor lainda fer gahan 20 k rpaaye da tail pvaunda te ahaate ch beh jaanda botal le k naal de yaar nu phone launda kehnda ure aaja oh jad pahunchda onhu kehnda veere mere to paise haini hun tu ain kar daane mangaala chatni jehi vale fir ohda yaar mangaa lainda. fer dovein jaane tait jehe ho k uchi gallan karn lag jaande kehnda veere hoyi ain oh school vali takkri c. ohda yaar kehnda bai oh ta chaloo jehi a. koi gaddi ch tail pava k dinda onhu koi mobile ch paise karzaayi karte peo de putt onhe. fer hor ghutt k pee k tait ho k apne yaar nu jaffi pa k kehnda veere jaan a tu apni teri khaatar harek nu wadh dena koi jhaake sahi tere vall fukre a sab. bass fir ohto baach ohde fone te ohde baapu da phone a jaanda oh chakkda ni fer chak k kehnda daddy 2 minta nu aaya 2 minta nu aaya par janda ni fir ohda buda adhe k ghante baad fone karke kehnda saleya hoye ni hale tere 2 mint. fir oh haarke ghare chal janda ghar ja k soh jaanda bursh karke. savere uthke dobara bursh karda sala pee k do tin baar ta bursh hi kar lainda dand bilkul chitte nikal jande sale de.





§¤§ Karam §¤§ 's Story

Driver da pyar
ik din ik kuri signal te khari hundi inne nu ik munda usdi car de brabar a khra ho janda e. Munda kuri nu dhyan nal dekhda oh kuri usnal parhdi hundi c . Kuri ne v ik sarsari nazar mari par ine nu signal green ho gya. Kuri car nu race den lag payi jive munde nu race lai uksa rahi hove. Munda us val hairani nal dekhda e par kuri gusse race dayi ja rahi c shayad  usnu school di koi purani dushmani yad aa gai c. Fir achanak munde ne chup tori te usnu kiha "biba gear ta paa lai"
Eh sun k kuri nu bohut gussa aya . Kuri gear pa k gaddi chla k idhar udhar thokdi lai jandi e . Ghre ja k oh apna gussa apne bhra te kadhdi e " ve veera aj teri bhain di bdi besti hoi , tainu kini var kiha k mainu v car chlauni sikha de" usne apne bhra nu sari gall dasi usda bhra gusse vich aunda te puchda kaun a oh mai hune ohdia latta bhan dyaga ago kuri kehndi " ve hun tu kehri takkar mar k khurli dhah deni a oh te chla gya hona" kuri da bhra kehnda k mai svere hi trainer nu bulauna.
Agle din kuri lai trainer aa janda. Kuri dekh k hairan k eh ohi munda c . Eh munda texy union de pardhan da bhatija c. Oh kuri nu gaddi sikhaun lai chla janda. Raste vich dono galla karde te dono ik duje nu pehchan lainde . Hauli hauli dove ik duje nal khul k galbat karna shuru kar dinde ne.
Achanak kuri ik din usnu puchdi k oh school ch usnu ghoorda kyo rehnda c. Ta munda himmat karke das dinda " dekh nimmo mai tainu like karda c par himmat ni pai kehen di . Mai jad v tainu eh kehna chahya pta meri zuban bolno nah kar dindi c chit ghau mau karan lagda c akha age bhuchake pain lagde c godya ch jharn jharn hon lagdi c mere kadam tere val jan to pehla ruk jande latta tractor te lagge arial vang kambdia san. Par aj mai kehna k mai tainu aj v pasand karda."
Eh sab sun k kuri v thora sochdi a te fir kehndi a " ve bhoobya kamlya ik vari das te dinda mai v has k han kar dindi ve "
Bas fir dova da ishq mushk shuru gaddi sikhdya ne door chle jana chaha pinia parka ch ghumna. Par kehnde hunde k ishq te mushk luke ni rehnde. Akhir kar kurit de ghar khabar pohnch gai.
Kuri de bhra ne kurit nu kiha " dekh nimmo tainu bohut time ho gya gaddi sikhdi nu hun bas. Inna tel fook dita ine da nva rikshaw te ik bhaiya aa jana c jithe marzi ghumi jandi" eh sunke kuri da dil tut gya . Himat kar k usne apne bhra nu das dita k mai bhoombe nal viah krauna chohndi a kuri de bhra ne saaf inkar kar dita te nimmo lai hor rishta labh lya. Jad bhooba nimmo da rishta lain aya ta usde bhra ne us nu puls kol fra dita. Par usnu nai c pta k bhoombe di bhua da munda mla da driver e . Bhoomba use rat shutt janda.
Nimmo de viah da din a janda par use time sare texi vale brat nu nah kar dinde kyo k bhoombe de chache ne sarya nu is tra karan lai kiha hunda. Is tra nimmo da viah tal janda.
Par hun nimmo de bhra de viah da din v nere aa janda . Fir use tra hunda brat lijan lai ik vi gaddi ni mildi . Nimmo da bhra vichara pehla e 45 sala de lage hunda oh ni chohnda eh rishta hatho nikal jaye. So majboori vas usnu nimmo te bhoombe da viah karna painda . Is tra ik driver da pyar bre pyar nal parvan charda.


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Voting:Complete the Story Competition Poll
« on: February 03, 2011, 12:23:49 PM »

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 12:39:35 PM »
come on start voting :angry:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 01:53:27 PM »
:angry: :angry: :angry: meri story kithe aa mai ni karda voting vooting :angry: khalli

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 01:55:25 PM »
ohh shitt whose gonna read it lol
i need few months before i can vote

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 01:56:49 PM »
:angry: :angry: :angry: meri story kithe aa mai ni karda voting vooting :angry: khalli

resend ur story i lost it i think

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 02:04:53 PM »
Story added to the main...

Putt 2 week voting chalone aa.. Ke week kar deye :hehe:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #6 on: February 03, 2011, 02:05:43 PM »
but janta dekh di ta haini ...well i guess...week kardo ...  :lost:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #7 on: February 03, 2011, 02:06:35 PM »
let me know wat date u set it to ...n fer final results kiwe calculate hon ge?  :lost: :lost: :lost: :lost: :scared:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 02:07:40 PM »
simri teri story ta kise hindi film wargi lag diaaaaaa........kcuh nava ni hega teri story chhhh....so no vote for uuu sorryyy  :loll:



agli story fer wada ga kadee  :happy:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #9 on: February 03, 2011, 02:10:24 PM »
let me know wat date u set it to ...n fer final results kiwe calculate hon ge?  :lost: :lost: :lost: :lost: :scared:

Dont worry Bacheee.. Sabh kar lavva ge.. final date Feb 13 he theek aa.. koi na :hehe:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #10 on: February 03, 2011, 02:11:47 PM »
And Thank You for hosting a Competition on PJ  :happy:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 02:13:54 PM »
no problemssssssssssss meh ik hor competition shuru krn chali ah lolzzzzzzzzzz  :rockon:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 02:17:34 PM »
ek hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr  :nthg: :nthg: :nthg: :nthg: kinddingggggggggggg

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« Reply #13 on: February 03, 2011, 02:21:15 PM »
ek hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr  :nthg: :nthg: :nthg: :nthg: kinddingggggggggggg
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Re: Voting:Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 02:32:30 PM »
na na dukh lag da simri thand a ..........agle ch main pakka hissa lenaa tu vas suro kar  :happy: :hug:

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« Reply #15 on: February 03, 2011, 02:34:11 PM »
na na dukh lag da simri thand a ..........agle ch main pakka hissa lenaa tu vas suro kar  :happy: :hug:

okk pata link...hoja shuru


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Re: Voting:Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #16 on: February 03, 2011, 02:36:13 PM »
par tu  :happy: :happy: :happy: ahi hoyiiii  :huhh:

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Re: Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #17 on: February 03, 2011, 06:53:01 PM »
simri teri story ta kise hindi film wargi lag diaaaaaa........kcuh nava ni hega teri story chhhh....so no vote for uuu sorryyy  :loll:



agli story fer wada ga kadee  :happy:

hor changi tara nuksh kad la  :okk:

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Re: Voting:Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #18 on: February 03, 2011, 11:56:41 PM »
Nice stories guys. lol

Simari: Yours reminds me of a really bad Indian serial.

Gurpinder: Sounds like an immigrant's story in the US of A

Shokeen: Another love story...

Taran: I was reading and reading, then I got lost. Story is confusing.

♥ღஜ♥ .....♥ღஜ : Reminds me of a Davinder Kohinoor video.

Karam: I love the names you picked and it reminds me of a Guggu Gill film.

Jatt Beparwah: story makes absolutely no sense but made sachi laugh out loud.


Appa voting karti.
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Re: Voting:Complete the Story Competition Poll
« Reply #19 on: February 04, 2011, 02:52:31 AM »
"chit ghau mau karan lagda c"  :love:

 

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