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Gup Shup / My poetry -2. The reply
« on: September 14, 2015, 12:27:26 PM »
I waited for a reply..

Every day and every night..

Yes, waited for a reply...

From sunshine till moonrise..

Day after day..

N day after night..

I kept waiting for the reply..

From sunshine till moonrise..


Days passed on..

N did pass the night..

My wait never ended..

In the ray of hope of light ..


The needle of the watches started to tease..

As the wait for the reply never seemed to cease..


Emotions tht used to flow like the breeze..

Had gone cold as the ice..

I often did wonder..

If being patient was so wise..


The following Day passed on,

N again came the night..

No sleep did I get again,

With even my eyes shut tight..



I stared at the full moon..

Who was the king of the night

Wishing he could tell me the time..

Tell me the time..

When,I, was gonna get the reply..

The stars started shining,

As if they were winking at my plight..

My heart was like the kite..

Tht was Lost in thundering light

The moon did find me..in brightness of his night

He Did notice me lonely, in the darkness of my life

The next day he came,

He came With a vertical smile..

Seeing the quarter moon

My heart got the strength to fight

The stars were shining again,

As if they were still winking at my plight

I decided to strengthen myself..

N be patient for the reply..


The following day there was a rainbow..

But no moon at night..

Stars were still shining..

But there's was No glow of the night..

Darkness was conquering..

Both the sky and the night..


A star fell from the sky in  middle of the night..

I closed my eyes n wished with a heart of delight..

Maybe it was the moon..

Tht had gone above the roof of sky ..

To kick down the star tht Was winking at my plight



Day after day..

N day after night..

I still wait for the reply..

From sunshine to moonrise.

I know the  falling star cannot decide the  fate of my life

But the feeling for the wait..

is just like a wine deep dug in a ocean..

tht keeps geeting better with time..

Shayari / My poetry - 1. Ik kudi punjab di
« on: September 11, 2015, 12:12:07 AM »
Mein Hasdi a par khush nae..

Mein Dukhi a par Rondi nahi..

Sehndi a par kuch kehndi nae..



Labdi haan  us guvache yaar nu…

Dardi a... pyaar to..

Jet to an wali pehli haar to


Mardi a khushiyan de mele laun nu..

Jeundi a hanjuan di mehfil sajan nu..

Yaad kardi a jo menu bhula deve..

Pyaar kardi a jo menu nafrat sikha deve



Rehndi a dil diyan galyan vich..

Vasdi a roohan di laryan vich..

Bundi a sab nu pyaar di fulkari vich..


Ardass kardi a..

Rab ji nu inna dunyadariyan vich…


Menu doojyan li jeena sikha deve..

Iss dil nu dhaadkana sikha deve..

Iss rooh nu Khul ke saa lena sakha deve…

Zindgi di har rut nu seene naal lagana sikha deve..


Gup Shup / Let's make a song...
« on: August 04, 2015, 09:24:39 AM »
Think of one ghaint line write it down...Each person one line at a time n we will keep adding those lines .try to rhyme...:)

Gup Shup / What type of sounds your stomach makes ? :hehe:
« on: July 11, 2015, 04:24:10 AM »
Stomach sounds :D:

Gup Shup / Thinking difference btwn Guyz and Girlz
« on: July 09, 2015, 06:39:11 AM »
Discussions on the difference in thinking among guys n girls. ..like boys are trust worthy among them. ..N girls zyada shak kardiyan. ...let's have a healthy debate ! :)

Knowledge / Back 2 Sikhi..
« on: July 07, 2015, 02:02:30 PM »
Waheguru ji ka khalsa Waheguru ji ki fateh
Friends aj di bzy life wich apan apne dharm apne virsa apni pehchan to door hunde ja reha a..
So I propose this topic jede wich daily ek Gurbani di verse nu explain kita jauga.with a real life example..rest what u ppl think do let m know ! :)

Like tuc ki use krde instead of cars ghode ghade 3tc etc :superhappy: :thinking:

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