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Meri Shayari
« on: November 17, 2011, 11:58:01 AM »
Samandar gehra hai magar Roohain Wahan Bhi Rehti hain
Tarey Door hai Humse Roohain Wahan Bhi Rehti Hain
Dil ki dhadkaan Rook Jati hai ek din, Jism Saath Shor Deta Hain Ek Din
Magar Meri Rooh Fir Bhi Basti Hai Terey Rooh Main.

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DO I MAKE ANY SENSE HERE?
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« on: November 17, 2011, 11:58:01 AM »

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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2011, 12:02:50 PM »
wha wha kamal karti bro
very  nice poetry :okk:

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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2011, 12:18:57 PM »
Quote from: gujr on November 17, 2011, 12:02:50 PM
wha wha kamal karti bro
very  nice poetry :okk:


naa 22ji tuhadi wargi kethay.
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2011, 12:25:07 PM »
bhut vadyia  =D>
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2011, 12:28:41 PM »
 
 
Do you really want criticism?
 
Or should I just say, well written? :pagel:

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by the welcome back to PJ :)
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2011, 12:47:09 PM »
bomb likheya baai
 kise di gall ni sunni tu, kamli emi mardi aa  bas tu  likheya kr na ta saare bnde  burra kehnde hunde aa te na saare chnga
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2011, 01:40:29 PM »
Quote from: _noXiouS_ on November 17, 2011, 12:28:41 PM

 
Do you really want criticism?
 
Or should I just say, well written? :pagel:

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show your criticism
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #7 on: November 17, 2011, 11:00:22 PM »
gud work...kafi diff likhia ..
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #8 on: November 17, 2011, 11:02:14 PM »
boht sohna likhea bai

nave nave bane shayar saabh :hehe:
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #9 on: November 17, 2011, 11:08:39 PM »
dosto manu yaan na maano tusi main likhi eh shayari jado main thread bana reha see
right at the point.. hahaha
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #10 on: November 17, 2011, 11:09:48 PM »
baaala tez dimag munda :hehe:
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #11 on: November 18, 2011, 12:06:16 AM »
Quote from: ~Marjana Gill~ on November 17, 2011, 11:09:48 PM
baaala tez dimag munda :hehe:
chamanplash hai bonvitta roxxx
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #12 on: November 18, 2011, 12:17:58 PM »
veerji jan te mein na samaj aa..jihra tusin likhaya menu eh shyari ghat te gallan jayda lagiiyan...

par chalo jo vi aa..nice try veerji
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #13 on: November 18, 2011, 12:19:46 PM »
Quote from: Sxy GAbRu on November 18, 2011, 12:17:58 PM
veerji jan te mein na samaj aa..jihra tusin likhaya menu eh shyari ghat te gallan jayda lagiiyan...

par chalo jo vi aa..nice try veerji
ty 4 honest opinion 22g yaar ethay kehra main enam jitna hahaha apan ta try kiti..
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #14 on: November 18, 2011, 12:42:45 PM »
Tuhadi shayeri difficult de naal intresting v hai    :happy:
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #15 on: November 18, 2011, 01:04:40 PM »
oh ty ty :) yaar m not professional m just casual...
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #16 on: November 19, 2011, 01:33:39 PM »
NA KOI YAAR ETHE NA PYAAR KOI,...
SAB MATLABPRAST NA SACHA DILDAAR KOI,..
NA HEER NA RANJHA ,..
NA ISHQ DI GAL NA SACHA KARAAR KOI
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #17 on: November 19, 2011, 01:35:42 PM »
Quote from: marjani_jugni on November 19, 2011, 01:33:39 PM
NA KOI YAAR ETHE NA PYAAR KOI,...
SAB MATLABPRAST NA SACHA DILDAAR KOI,..
NA HEER NA RANJHA ,..
NA ISHQ DI GAL NA SACHA KARAAR KOI
very nice realy so nice ji =D> :okk:
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #18 on: November 19, 2011, 01:37:01 PM »
NYC GUJR CARRY ON

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Masoom mohabbat ka bus itna fasana hai, kagaz ki
haveli hai baarish ka zamaana hai. Kya shart-e-mohabbat hai, kya shart-e-zamana hai, aawaz
bhi zakhmi hai aur geet bhi gaana hai. Uss paar utarne
ki umeed bahot kam hai, kashti bhi purani hai, tufaa
ko bhi aana hai. Samjhe ya na samjhe wo andaaz
mohabbat ke, ek shaks ko ankho se ek sher sunana hai.
Bholi si ada, koi fir ishq ki zid par hai, fir aag ka
dariya hai aur dub ke jana hai......
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Re: Meri Shayari
« Reply #19 on: November 19, 2011, 02:01:25 PM »
Quote from: marjani_jugni on November 19, 2011, 01:37:01 PM
NYC GUJR CARRY ON

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Masoom mohabbat ka bus itna fasana hai, kagaz ki
haveli hai baarish ka zamaana hai. Kya shart-e-mohabbat hai, kya shart-e-zamana hai, aawaz
bhi zakhmi hai aur geet bhi gaana hai. Uss paar utarne
ki umeed bahot kam hai, kashti bhi purani hai, tufaa
ko bhi aana hai. Samjhe ya na samjhe wo andaaz
mohabbat ke, ek shaks ko ankho se ek sher sunana hai.
Bholi si ada, koi fir ishq ki zid par hai, fir aag ka
dariya hai aur dub ke jana hai......
 :dnk:
so nice g
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