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Meri Kavita Meri Maa nu- Surjit Patar
« on: August 12, 2011, 07:48:41 PM »
Surjit Patar's poem in his own voice..
Meri maa nu meri kavita samajh na aayi -Surjit Patar



ਮੇਰੀ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਨੂੰ.... ਮੇਰੀ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਸਮਝ ਨਾ ਆਈ
ਭਾਵੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਬੋਲੀ ਵਿਚ ਲਿਖੀ ਹੋਈ  ਸੀ..
 ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਨੂੰ.... ਮੇਰੀ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਸਮਝ ਨਾ ਆਈ
ਭਾਵੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਬੋਲੀ ਵਿਚ ਲਿਖੀ ਹੋਈ ਸੀ....

ਓਹ ਤਾਹ ਕੇਵਲ  ਇਂਨਾ ਸਮਝੀ ਪੁੱਤ ਦੀ ਰੂਹ ਨੂੰ ਦੁਖ ਹੈ ਕੋਈ
ਪਰ ਇਸਦਾ ਦੁਖ ਮੇਰੇ ਹੁੰਦਿਆ ਆਇਆ ਕਿਥੋਂ -੨
ਨੀੰਝ ਲਗਾ ਕੇ ਦੇਖੀ ਮੇਰੀ ਅਨਪੜ ਮਾਂ ਨੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਕਵਿਤਾ
ਦੇਖੋ ਲੋਕੋ ਕੁਖੋਂ ਜਾਏ ਮਾਂ ਨੂ ਛੱਡਕੇ ਦੁਖ ਕਾਗਜਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਲਾਉਂਦੇ ਨੇ -੨

ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਨੇ ਕਾਗਜ ਚੁੱਕ ਸੀਨੇ ਨੂੰ ਲਾਈਆ
ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਨੇ ਕਾਗਜ ਚੁੱਕ ਸੀਨੇ ਨੂੰ ਲਾਈਆ
ਖ਼ਬਰੇ ਇੱਦਾ ਹੀ ਕੁਝ ਮੇਰੇ ਨੇੜੇ ਹੋਏ ਮੇਰਾ ਜਾਇਆ.....

ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਨੂੰ.... ਮੇਰੀ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਸਮਝ ਨਾ ਆਈ
ਭਾਵੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਮਾਂ ਬੋਲੀ ਵਿਚ ਲਿਖੀ ਹੋਈ ਸੀ...

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Meri Kavita Meri Maa nu- Surjit Patar
« on: August 12, 2011, 07:48:41 PM »

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Re: Meri Kavita Meri Maa nu- Surjit Patar
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2011, 08:01:18 PM »
very nice
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Re: Meri Kavita Meri Maa nu- Surjit Patar
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2011, 09:03:49 PM »
great
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Re: Meri Kavita Meri Maa nu- Surjit Patar
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2011, 09:43:42 PM »
reali nice one ji

thanx for sharin bebbe kudrat ji
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Re: Meri Kavita Meri Maa nu- Surjit Patar
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2011, 12:29:32 AM »
surjit pater ji bahut sohna likhde ne  =D> =D>


ਮਾਂ ਚੁਪ ਹੈ
ਖੁਰਦੇ ਕਿਨਾਰੇ ਵਾਂਗ ਚੁਪ
ਵਗਦੀ ਨਦੀ ਵਾਂਗ ਚੁਪ
ਧਰਤੀ ਵਾਂਗ ਚੁਪ
ਧਰਤੀ ਜੋ ਰੁੱਖ ਚੋਂ ਫੁਟਦੇ ਪੱਤਿਆਂ ਨੂੰ ਵੇਖ
ਉਸ ਦੀਆ ਜੜਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਗੱਲਾ ਕਰਦੀ

by- surjit patar
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Re: Meri Kavita Meri Maa nu- Surjit Patar
« Reply #5 on: August 14, 2011, 03:57:07 PM »


chup riha ta hanera jarega kiwe

je bolya ta shamadaan ki kehnge
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