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ssa friends............mainu kuj lok puchde ne teri umar aje bahut ghat hai par tu enaa kuj kyu likh dinaa hai......aisi ki wajah hai jo tu likhda rehnda hai.......... te ajj mainu kise ne puchya ke tenu inspiration kitho mildi hai ta .....mere bulla te kuj aaya jo mai likh ditta ....mai usda jawab dain di koshish kiti hai...i hope tuhaanu sab nu pasand aavegi.......je pasand aave ya bhaave na aave please apne comments jaroor shadnaa ....mere wallo sab nu ehi apeal hai..........

apni majboor kalam di siyaahi naal
apnaa har gamm likh ditta mai
wajah ik hove ta dassa mai
har wajah te ik geet likh ditta mai

jdo usnu dekhyaa c mai pehli vaar
usdi tareef ch sab likh ditta mai
usnu dekh ke jo khyaal dil ch aaye
onaa khyaala nu kagaz te likh ditta mai

fir jado oh supnea ch aun laggi
apna har supnaa jhat pat likh ditta mai
usde khyaala ch chan tareaa de naal
jo waqt bitaaya oh likh ditta mai

fir rut jo pyaar wali aayi c sade utte
usda har din khushiaa bharea likh ditta mai
jo gallaa asi kitiaa jo waqt bitaya
usdiaa baaha ch likh ditta mai

fir hauli hauli oh mere to door hon laggi
ta usda badaldaa vateera likh ditta mai
har bahaana jo bnaa ke mainu shadd gyi oh
dil te pathar dhar likh ditta mai

kade vaada jo lagdaa c mainu
usda har laara likh ditta mai
apne geeta ch kade changi usnu
te kade buri likh ditta mai

usne ta pyaar kitaa hi nae kade mere naal
aive apne dil da haal likh ditta mai
usde ishq ch hoya jo khajjal khuyaar
oh tazurbaa likh ditta mai

likhdaa likhda kade thakea na mai ajj tak
usto bgair guzar riha waqt likh ditta mai
chotee jihi umar hai "joban" di te chotee jihi kahani
lok kehnde khabre kyu dukhaa da pahaad likh ditta mai



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