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Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« on: June 18, 2010, 10:51:57 AM »
Lafza di pand chuki kalam meri
dastak de rahi tere darvaje te
eh lafaz jo is kolo likhvaye ne mai
vich armaan mere sab chade ne janaze te

kagaj di kori reej utte sajna ajj Mai gam apna har shingar dita
jdo ghaat mehsus hoyi kuj Ta mai thodia khushia nal isnu savaar dita

lok soch samaj ke likhde ne hr shabd par mai likhan to baad sochda ha
ki buraayi hai dosta is vich
je mai pyar usda lochda ha

kuj meriaan kavitaava nu khoobsurat kehnde kuj kehnde sohna hai har khayal tera
Mai jaana ya mera rab jaane is vich likhya hai dil da haal mera

mai khoon di siyaahi nal nae likhya Mera ta thode jihe hanjua de nal sar gya
vajah asal dassa mai tuhanu dosto usto vichoda hi mainu likhan lyi majboor kar gya

na daga ditta us kudi ne mainu na usne koi v laara laya
na kade oh meri saki kyuki izhaar na mai kade kar paya

loki puchde ne vaar vaar ki tere pyaar di kahani hai
loki vaar vaar us mutiyaar da naam puchde jo dil mere di rani hai

ohna nu mai jawab dinda iktarfaa pyaar nu ishq kahani nahi kehnda mai
jinna chir us kol izhaar nahi kar lainda usnu dil di rani nahi kehnda mai

us kudi di shakal surat te naam to bgair na kuj hor jaanda mai
par fir v khabre kyu lagda pichle kayi janama to usnu jaanda mai

hun usnu dekhya nu mahine beet gye waqt de naal mai us to door ho gya
us kudi da naam lai ke kra shuruaat ise karke har kavita har geet mera mashhoor ho gya

jo lok jaande ne mainu te us kudi nu ohna nu kraa mai arzoyi
je kite mile oh kudi ta kirpa karke usnu mere baare das deve koyi

joban di eh kavita
hai jawab ohna loka nu jo puchde ne likhne di vajah meri
oh kudi jithe v rahe khush rahe te geet likhaundi rahe maitho ehi hai duaa meri
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Re: Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2010, 02:37:31 PM »
wow ji... apne zindgi de pala nu kinna sohna akhran ch paroya..
 =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>
 =D>
god bless ya ji
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Re: Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2010, 12:08:43 AM »
Thanks g . . . . . 4 liking nd comenting on my all poems . . . . .
Please pray k us kudi nu koi mere baare das deve . . . . . . .thanks again
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Re: Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2010, 01:34:17 PM »
^^ WAHEGURU ji kare oh din sheti aveh ji... god bless ya
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Re: Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« Reply #4 on: July 08, 2010, 09:29:30 PM »
Thanks roop g very much
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Re: Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« Reply #5 on: July 08, 2010, 11:33:18 PM »
Hath jod main rabb to dua manga oh kudi ban jave takdeer teri...
Jihne Joban nu shayar bana ta e oh ban jave hun heer teri...
Kash oh v kite eh pardi hove te samjhe dil di eh peed teri...
Tera sacha pyar parwan je hoya te banu rani eh aakhir teri...
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Re: Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« Reply #6 on: July 09, 2010, 12:07:23 AM »
Bht sohna likhea veere, waheguru ji tuhanu oh kudi nu mila dain. . . . Oh kudi khushnaseeb hovegi j tusi ohnu mile. . . .Jina pyar tuhadian kavitava vich hai. . . .Uss toi yaadaa pyar tusi ohnu krde ho. . . .Waheguru ji jaldi jaldi tuhanu milaan. . .
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Re: Jo mere likhan di vajah puchde ohna lyi mera jawab . . . . Joban hundal
« Reply #7 on: July 12, 2010, 08:43:47 AM »
Thanks Tezy veer g . . . . . . Vry nice lines g . . , . Thanks 4 praying fr me
unknown veer thanks a lot g
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