Author Topic: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above (Read 174152 times)

« **Reply #2180 on:** October 13, 2012, 04:47:18 AM »

Traashti nazron ne har pal tera sath manga
Jaise aasman ne har rat chand.. manga
:5:

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **Reply #2180 on:** October 13, 2012, 04:47:18 AM »

♥ ѕαя∂αяηι ♥ · « **Reply #2181 on:** October 13, 2012, 05:30:14 AM »

ਇੱਕ ਦਿਨ ਸਾਡਾ ਸਾ ਰੁੱਕ ਜਾਣਾ_,♥
ਮੇਲਾ ਦੁਨਿਆਂ ਦਾ ਫੇਰ ਸਾਡੇ ਲਈ ਮੁੱਕ ਜਾਣਾ_,♥
ਤੁਸੀਂ ਚੰਨ ਵਾਂਗ ਰਿਹੋ ਸਦਾ ਅੰਬਰਾਂ 'ਚ ਵਸਦੇ_,♥
ਸਾਡਾ ਤਾਰਿਆਂ ਦਾ ਕੀ ਹੈ 'ਕਦੋਂ ਅਸੀਂ ਟੁੱਟ ਜਾਣਾ....♥

« **Reply #2182 on:** October 13, 2012, 05:36:02 AM »

very nice shayri mithiye
but there is a rule in this post is tht
we have to write just two lines shayri :5: :5:
example
---------------

@topic
mai ohnu keha ki adiya kite bahar jaan da jee karda hai
onne keha ja meri jindgi chon bahar chali ja...
:break:

♥ ѕαя∂αяηι ♥ · « **Reply #2183 on:** October 13, 2012, 06:08:49 AM »

Quote from: Ambitious Jatti on October 13, 2012, 05:36:02 AM

very nice shayri mithiye
but there is a rule in this post is tht
we have to write just two lines shayri :5: :5:
example
---------------

@topic
mai ohnu keha ki adiya kite bahar jaan da jee karda hai
onne keha ja meri jindgi chon bahar chali ja...
:break:

theek aa jatti... ago oh dhyan rahu...
@topic

tere naal mahobatta pai ke dass sanu ki mileya.......... :(

Parv... · « **Reply #2184 on:** October 14, 2012, 11:07:21 PM »

aaj wohi geeto ki rani aaj wohi hai jaan-e-ghazal
chalte chalte raah mein jiska saath hua tha pal do pal...

Gujjar NO1 · « **Reply #2185 on:** October 15, 2012, 12:02:13 AM »

Wohi rakhe ga mere ghar ko balaaon se mehfooz,

Jo shajjar se ghaunslaa girne nahin deta

...
.......................................................
Tera mukhrra chaand ka tukrra,
Woh bhi pathar tu bhi pathar.. :happy:

« **Reply #2186 on:** October 15, 2012, 10:34:57 AM »

tere naal baharan ne ,,,, sadi zindgi vich sajjna,,,,,,,,,,
chadd ke na tur javien,,,, mera dil nhi lagna,,,,,,,,,,
:sad: :sad:

The King · « **Reply #2187 on:** October 15, 2012, 10:39:59 AM »

eklo hichki hickki pikolo tum yha tuna kikli cora mora hui hui

Parv... · « **Reply #2188 on:** October 15, 2012, 10:43:54 AM »

saaaf kab imithian lete hai woh to dam de ke jaan lete hain
zidd har ek baat mein nahi achhi dost ki dost maan lete hain...

The King · « **Reply #2189 on:** October 15, 2012, 10:49:07 AM »

pooooooooooooooooooooo tha tha tha tha bahjoooooooooooooooooooo

Kamz~K · « **Reply #2190 on:** October 19, 2012, 09:16:11 AM »

Quote from: Parv... on October 15, 2012, 10:43:54 AM

saaaf kab imithian lete hai woh to dam de ke jaan lete hain
zidd har ek baat mein nahi achhi dost ki dost maan lete hain...

Halaat mere mujhse na maloom kijiye,
Muddat hui hai mujh se mera wasta nahi..

Parv... · « **Reply #2191 on:** October 19, 2012, 10:53:45 AM »

Dil mein aub dard-e-mohabbat ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
zindagi meri aub ibadat ki siwa kuch bhi nahi...

Kamz~K · « **Reply #2192 on:** October 20, 2012, 09:06:26 AM »

Kaisay Ajeeb Log Bastay Hain Tere Shehar Main ,
Shounk e Dosti Bhi Rakhtay Hain Aur Yad Bhi Nahi Kartay

The King · « **Reply #2193 on:** October 20, 2012, 09:08:16 AM »

aaraz haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Parv... · « **Reply #2194 on:** October 20, 2012, 10:24:34 AM »

Quote from: ♥~Gollu~♥ on October 20, 2012, 09:06:26 AM

Kaisay Ajeeb Log Bastay Hain Tere Shehar Main ,
Shounk e Dosti Bhi Rakhtay Hain Aur Yad Bhi Nahi Kartay

yeh kisne mujhe mast nazro se dekha
k lage khud b khud hi kadam ladkhadane...

Kamz~K · « **Reply #2195 on:** October 22, 2012, 08:01:47 AM »

Wo mohabbaton k sauday bhi ajeeb kerta hai ..
bas muskurata hai aur dil khareed leta hai..!!

Parv... · « **Reply #2196 on:** October 22, 2012, 08:05:18 AM »

Achaw
ha ha ha

ho gayi thi dil ko kuch umeeed si
khair tumne jo kiya achha kiya ...

Kamz~K · « **Reply #2197 on:** October 22, 2012, 08:12:41 AM »

opps! main dekhiya nhi upper kida msg aa

Khud ko chuntay huway din saara guzar jaata hai
phir hawa shaam ki chalti hai tu bikhar jaate hein

Parv... · « **Reply #2198 on:** October 22, 2012, 08:17:48 AM »

mujhko sham bta deti hai
tum kaise kapde pehne ho ...

Gujjar NO1 · « **Reply #2199 on:** October 22, 2012, 09:14:21 AM »

Udaas udaas har shaam thi,
meri zindagi bhi veeraan thi,

Nikle ujalon ke safar mein
hamara muqadar to andheri raat thi..

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