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GUJJAR NO.1

 
mere dill da weda ujad gaya
mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya
 
main kenu payar de geet sunaa
meri qismat da sitara weged gaya
 
har raat nu chan bolanda ey
mere dill de zakhm sunada ey
mere payar diyan gallan kar kar ke
o channi naal udanda ey
 
meri haavan vich o rehnda ey
o apni gall te akd gaya
 
mere dill da weda ujad gaya
mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya
 
menu dill te koi ikhtiyar nai
eyhnu tere sawa payar nai
ethee koi karda payar nai
ethee mousam naal bihaar nai
 
mere dill nu pera vich regd gaya
menu waang dushmana jikd gaya
 
mere dill da weda ujad gaya
mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya 


PANGEBAAZ MUTYAR URF NIMANI DEEP

Har Vele Kara Sukrana Rabb Da

Har vele kara sukrana rabb da
rakhda khyaal hai jo sabda
har vele kara sukrana rabb da

na kade maada sochain , na kade maada kahain
os rabb di rajja vich , raji sada rahain
jhukdi na kise aage ,waheguru de dar te kardi haan sajda
har vele karain sukrana rabb da

teri es duniya de lok v ajeeb ne
karde ne dhokha jo v aounde kreeb ne
na koi gila , na shikwa kara
vakho vakh hunda a subah sabda
har vele kara sukrana rabb da

jo tu dukh dite hasske kbool kite
dukhain nu hasseya ch badaln vale kuj dost dite
de k khusi de bhandar ,diti meri zindgi sudahar
dita janam anmol “deep” nu ,jo labheya na labhda
har vele kara sukrana rabb da


GARRY SANDHU FARIDKOTIA

Rabb hai k jabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!
Ethe jorr laya sabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!

Kuj paa lainde jungla cho..
Kuj mandra vich v taras rhe..!
Kuj jhuggi vich v labh lainde..
Kuj paise lakhan khrch rhe..!
Ethe sbh andar rabb hai..
Dikhda hi nhi..!
Rabb hai k jabh hai.......

Je rabb nu pauna "sandhu'a" oye..
Shd jhoothe eh dikhawe..!
Ethe sach syane aakh gye..
Rabb Milda Greebi Daave..!
Kyu goorhi neendar soun gya tu..
Hillda hi nhi..!
Rabb hai k jabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!
Ethe jorr laya sabh hai..
Milda hi nhi..!


© Garry Sandhu Faridkotiya


 DESI DESI


 Rabba

Mai naa samjh haan rabba tainu samjhawa kive,
Apni majboori da ehsaas tainu dilawa kive,
Tu te khush e apni dunia vich par dhillon nu v ta dass,
Apni ujjadi dunia vsawa kive (rajdeep dhillon)


  ₦ł ₮ɆⱤ₳ Ɏ₳₳Ɽ ₥₳Ⱡ₳₦₲ JɆⱧ₳



Rabba naa kuj mangna hai taitho,
 na hai koi gila,
Bhawe asmaan te chahd de mainu,
bhawe mitti de vich mila,
Lok ajkal aap hi rabb ho gaye ne,
 changia kittia krayia da milda na koi sila,
Bande di aukat na tere agge koi,
bhawe jihnu karde abad mint vich
Chahe kise di dunia dewe hila,
Murshid nai milda injh kehnde,
 jinne marzi mathe pitt lai te,
 jinna marzi chilla,
Daulat shohrat loka nu baksh de,
 mainu sirf ghut sabar da pila.


KARAMVIR SINGH


Hun oh mere dil vich nai rehnda
Pehla te dil ohde chaawaa naal bharya rehnda c ,
Pehla ta jad mai kuj puchda c ohvi kuj kehnda c,
baba! Merya hungarya ch kol beh  hungara v bhar lainda c,
Pehla te kai galla oh bina bolya hi sun lainda c,
Pehla te mere har kamm vich braber hissa lainda c,

Par ajj pta ni kyo dil khali khali lagda e ,
Koi te khtaa hoyi e ,eh khyaal dil nu thagda e,
Pehla jithe swer hundi c hun athan charya lagda e ,
Pehla nirmal chashma c jo hun shappad bharya lagda e ,
Khyaal ujjde rooh khali jyo full koi jhadya lagda e.

Shayd hun oh mere dil vich nahi rehnda :(

your welcome bai ji :happy:

Hanji! 8->

aapa aagaye ji fer tuhade kol :excited:
eh contest apna simple hi aa ji..
Jo jo apne PJ de gabhru regularly ethe hajiri lwaunde aa sirf ohna de naam paaye ja rhe aa.
Jo tuhade mutabik "Gabhru" hon diya jimewaria nibha reha hai poori trah ohnu vote kro ji!
tusi 3 bandean nu vote pa sakde ho. :smile:
ek war paa k dobara change nahi kar skde es wari so, soch samjh vote paayi jawe :mean:

Basis- jinha nu dhyaan ch rakhde hoye tusi vote pa skde ho:

1) Sabh nal pyaar-satikaar nal bolna.
2) Wadiya topic create karna.
3) PJ de layi kujh na kujh nawa try krde rehna.
4) PJ Forums de layi useful suggestions te PJ de wadiya bhavikh layi change change suggestions dende rehna.
5) nawe users da welcome karna te ohna nu comfortable feel krauna.
6) overall jyada faltu de larhayi jhagde ton door rehna.



Voting:- jo jo vote paun ja reha hai ohna diya posts 100 ya 100 ton wadh honia chahidia hai apni vote count krwaun layi :okk:
majority of members jis nu vote krnge. oh winner declare kita jauga.! Apni vote nu jad tak poll band nai hunda. gupt rakho ji. es trah competition da suspense banea rehnda hai.

Chalo ji hojao shuru :dumlak: leaado haneriaa.. chakkdo fatte!!

P.S = es topic wich ik option voting layi Non-Gabru da paya jawega. jis ch koi naam nai howega. par jo v tuhadi nazar ch ehna qualities te poora utarda hai osda naam topic ch mention kar skde ho. fer STAFF oste nazar rakh k, soch vichar krega k osnu v gabru di post te leauna chaida hai k nahi :)

bhehne, aukha bhehne tera aukha. :

Ik war sare rules nu padho!! Critics es criteria de nal hi marks denge.. Jinha diya lines poorian nai.. oh apni apni entry update kro j full marks lene.. with janta voting!
50% janta di voting count hougi te 50% critics' choice hougi. aap sabh nu benti kiti jandi.
Make sure- tuhadi entry sahi criteria de mutabik aa.. je part lea aa te changi trah hi part lao!

sabh ne bahut wadiya likheya aa.. all the very best to each and everyone!

jinha di entry punjabi ch hai... oh english font wich likho tah ke jinha nu nahi aundi punjabi..
oh v padh k tuhanu vote pa skn

PJ shayari Competition 2014

Lao bhi dosto tuadhi demand de upper shayari competition a gyia hai...hun chak lao apne kalma teh kagaz teh ho jao shuru.......................


- Asin eh 2 theme rakhe ne, ehna dowan de wich tusi ik - ik kavita, shayiri,geet,ghazal post krni hai. 

1) Ishq-e-Haqiqi(Shayiri Rabb layi)
- Es theme wich tusi apne vichaar likhne ne, rabb de layi. rabb, ohi! jo is sari shrishti/qainaat da karta dharta hai. jis di raza bina patta v nahi hillda. jo es sari khed da chalak hai. tusi ohnu ki samjhde ho? kehan wale ohnu, "Gorakh dhanda" (tricky man) vi kehnde ne. chor vi kehnde, thagg vi kehnde, rabb vi kehnde te "sabh" vi kehnde. tusi ki kehnde ho? apne akhran de zarriye, beyaan karna te naah de brabar hai ous de ranga nu par fer v ik koshish krn ch koi harz nahi.

lao koi sufi gaana, bnao mahaul :)
ho jao shuru, likhdo fer kujh ohde naam wich :rabb:


2) Shayiri Punjabi Janta de layi
Es theme wich tusi apni kavita/shayiri/geet etc raahi PJ site bare apne vichaar pesh kro. tusi kiwe da mehsoos krde ho ethe aa ke, eh tuhadi life ch kini k importance rakhdi hai. ethon de members bare tusi kujh vi likhna chaho, es kavita ch beyaan karo. bas es gal da khyal rkheo, k kise da dil na dukhayeo!! :)

Rules :


- Shayari should be your own (No plagiarism)

- Shayari Should be of Minimum 3 Paragraphs of 4 Lines Each at least

- Last Date for entries- 28 April 2014 & entries should be PM'd to KARAMVEER SINGH
voting topics ch sarian entries ikathian hi show kitian jaangia...!!

Voting Criteria:-
public voting hougi! sirf ohna members di hi votes count hongian jinha diya 100+ posts hongia. es competition de 2 winners announce kite jange, one from each theme. sirf jyada votes wala winner declare nahi kita jauga.. 4 Anonymous Judge choose kite jaange, jo apne apne view har participant layi denge. sare angles ton jo perfect winner lagguga, ohi asli winner announce kita jauga. public voting v apna major role play krugi par ohi sabh kujh nahi.

NOTE: Rules are strictly enforced in this competition and google search will be performed on every line of shayari

Competition idea: On PJ users Demand

banda kujh nai kar skda!
jo rabb ne krauna ohne kara hi dena!
 ohnu sunaun li likhan bolan di v lorh nai!


baseless topic :

AAP

baki gall te sari theek aa.. :
ah janta jehdi es article thalle commento-commenti hoyi jandi.. ehna da nazara v dekhan e wala :D:

User nu keh dwo apni apni poetry likh k fer ese topic ch reply kr den.. Pbi to engliah.. Jittan maare aape krn ge :D:

gal aahvi sahi aa :laugh:

buraaahhhhh :D: