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Birthdays / Happy Birthday Taur Kaur
« on: July 17, 2015, 06:46:52 PM »

tick tock tick tock!!! ek saal hor ghat geya beeba teri umar cho ...   :dnk: ajj beh k socheo kujh wakhra jo pichle saal ch nai kita..  es din nu aiwe kalli party wich hi na kadd deo.. socheo ajj de din.. k zindagi kinni chheti nikaldi jaa rhi.. !! eh din kalli khushi vaste nai aunde... nal ek reminder v leaunde k time ghat reha.. ! :)

ki asin oh sabh kar leya jo karna chaunde si? te jo asin chaunde aa ki ohi sabh kujh aa zindagi ch karn li? k sadi life kise paase jaa v rhi aa ya khadi aa ek jagah ? :) den nu main v chaar k smileys paa k haase mazaak ch wadhayian walia wishes de dewa.. :) par pata nai ajj dil krda... k eh kam v krna chaida :pagel:  X_X

parmatma tuhanu agge wadhan ch himmat bakshe te sahi raah wall hamesha guide krda rhe.. khush raho :)

sarbat da bhala howe :)

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Jokes Majaak / 1 Baadshah, 1 Ladki aur 1 Sunaar
« on: July 11, 2015, 09:12:33 PM »
1 badshah apne
sipahiyo ke sath ek
talab par nahane ke
liye gaya




waha
kuch ladkiya thi




unme
se ek ladki
badshah ko pasand
aa gayi..!!








Badshah apne mahel
wapas
aaya, lekin badshah ki
nazro ke
samne bar bar usi
ladki ki surat aa
rahi thi,




uska mann
kisi kaam me
nahi lag raha tha,




raat hui .....




sari raat
badshah usi ladki ke
bare me sochta
raha,




subah usne
apne sipahiyo ko
hukm diya
"jao pata
karo wo ladki
kaha rehti
hai",




sipahiyo ne pata
lagaya,




Uss ladki ka baap
sunaar tha,




badshah ne sunaar
ko darbar me
bulaya.




4 din guzarne k baad
bhi sunar
badshah k darbar me
nahi
aya,




badshah ne
dubara bulawa
bheja,




is bar 8 din
guzar gaye wo
nahi aaya,




badshah ko
gussa aa gaya
aur usne sunar ko
giraftar karne k
liye Sipahi bheje.








Jab woh Sunar k ghar
pahuche to
ghar ko Tala laga hua
tha,




Badshah ne Sipahiyon
ko Hukm diya
ki Sunaar ko dhundo.








Sipahiyo ne sunar ko
har jagah
dhunda lekin wo unko
kahi nhi mila.




Fir unhone ek tarkeeb
nikali aur
ailaan kiya ke jo bhi
sunaar ko
dhundne me madat
karega use 1kg
sona diya jayega.




ek
hafta guzar
gaya,
Fir bhi sunaar nahi
mila.




Fir ailaan kiya gaya ki
jo bhi sunaar
ko chupne me madat
karega use
sooli pe chadaya
jayega.




aur ek hafta
guzar gaya,
Fir bhi sunaar nahi
mila.








Fir 1 mahina guzar
gya fir bhi sunar
nhi mila




Fir raja ne ailaan kiya
ki agar sunar
nhi mila toh woh pure
rajya ko saja




dega fir bhi sunar
nahi mila.




Aakhir mei raja ne
aas paas ke kahi
rajyo ke raja o se
madat maangi,




Unhone bhi sunar ko
apne apne
rajya mei dhoonda fir
sunar nhi
mila.




Badshah mayus ho
gaya,




ek din
badshah ne ek sapna
dekha sapne
me usi taalab ko
dekha aur sapne
me hi daud kar us
taalab ke pas
gaya lekin waha bhi
koi nahi
tha,




udas hokar jab
piche palta to ek
gyani baba nazar
aaye unhone nadi
ko lag kar ek jhopde
ki taraf ishara
kiya aur kaha "tujhe
jiski talash hai
wo wahi hai",




badshah
chaunk kar
nind se utha aur apne
sipahiyo ko
lekar us talab ke pas
gaya,




waha wo
sapne wala jhopda
use nazar
aaya,




badshah khush
ho gaya, aur jab
jhopde me ghusa to
ek ladki aur aur
ek boodha aadmi
nazar aaye,




lekin
wo ladki badsurat thi
aur uska baap
bhikhari tha.








Ab bhi sunar nahi
mila,




Aakhir kar tang aakar
badshah ne
apne sipahiyo ko
Nakara karar diya
aur case CBI ko
saunp diya,




Phir bhi SUNAR nahi
MILA,




Aur aakhir Raja
ka,
uske siphaiyon
ka,
dusre rajya walo
ka
aur CBI walo
ka Sunar ko dhundne
me sara Waqt
aise barbad hua
 jaise
Aap ka is
message ko padhne
me hua...




jis ka koi matlab nahi.




Hasna mat, mere
sath bhi aisa hua
tha..!!




kisi aur ko bhej ke
badla le lo!




Sunar mil jae to bata
dena ......




uski
ladki bahut khubsurat
hai ..!😜

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Maan-Sanmaan/Respect+ / PJ Gabru Promotion -Myself-Ghaint- :)
« on: September 07, 2014, 01:55:25 PM »
Sat Shri AKal Sajjno!

Bade samhe baad PJ nu ik aas di kiran dikhayi ditti hai... ous kiran ch jo chamak damak te roshni hai...
sabh diyan akhan ch wajjdi hain :loll: ... bande ethe keele gaye... :lol: . bibia nu akhan ch jhaul pain lag pe. :loll: . te main piche jehe sunea ke... badeyan de es kiran ne didhi peerhan payia te aukhe saukhe aun laa ditte  ne :pagel:

es aas di kiran nu.. asin 50 watt ton 100 watt di roshni den bare sochea hai... esnu ikko ikk benti aa... k jyada topic bnaun de nalon j ikko thread ch agge ton post kro.. tan roshni da mull pauga... nahi te lorh mutabik je bulb sarhan da dar hoea tan esdi roshni di current supply v katti ja skdi hai :loll:

jinu jinu samjh lag gi... wadhayi dao PJ de nawe Gabru -Myself-Ghaint- :) nu :loll:

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Gup Shup / Women
« on: July 28, 2014, 04:51:34 AM »







Seven complicated facts about Women:
1. They believe in saving.
2. Believe in saving but buy expensive clothes.
3. Buy expensive clothes but never have anything to wear.
4. Never have anything to wear, but always dressed beautifully.
5. Always dressed beautifully, but never satisfied.
6. Never satisfied, but still expect men to compliment them.
7. Expect men to compliment, but don't believe them if complemented.
Extremely Complicated

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Religion, Faith, Spirituality / Bimari te Daulat
« on: July 23, 2014, 09:34:15 AM »
Ik Din Bimari Ne Daulat Nu Keha,"Tu
Kini Kismat Wali Hai, Har Koi tenu Paan
di Kosish Karda hai, Te Main Kini
Badkismta han Har Koi Mere Ton Door
Bhajda hai..!!
Fer Daulat Kehndi Hai,"Kismat Wali
Tan Tu Hai, Jihnu Paa Ke Loki Apne
Rabb Nu Yaad Karde Ne, Te Bad
Kismat Te Main Hai Jihnu Paa Ke Loki
Apne Rabb nu Bhul Jande Ne..!!

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News Khabran / PJ Daily World Weather Report
« on: July 23, 2014, 07:30:48 AM »
SSA! :hehe:

ajj meeh payi janda :rockon: main sochea ah topic hi bna diye... sare jane roz apne apne area/pind/shehar da weather dasso k kiwe aa..garmi sardi thand snow cloudy jo vi a... sare ethe post kro :pagel:
weather te apa dekh skde net te par... akhi dekha haal beyaan kro... apne shabadan de wich :D:

es time main india aya hoea.so,




Amritsar,Punjab, India:  :banana:

bijli chamak rahi aa mitro... badal garzz rhe aaa... te ik hune hune meeh da zordaar shitta rabb ne sutteya 20 minute pehlan te aje tak nikkia nikkia kaniya da meeh payi ja reha aa... baarish di tip tip di awaz sun ke... mera jee krda,.. saun di jhadi wala gaana laa k nachan nu... ese bahane meeh ch syane kehnde hunde pitt marjugi :D:
swer da kaaliyan ghataawan nal poora ambarsar gireya peya si.. akhir kaar rabb ne shehar de lokan diya garmi nal niklian cheekan nu nerhe hoke sunea te hun mamla thanda thanda jea ho gya hai.. lokan de chehre te muskaan aa gayi hai. te jwaakan ne sir te lifaafe bann ke galiyan ch shaalan marnia shuru krtian han.


Dhanwaad!  :banana:

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Competitions / Voting : Awaz Punjabi Janta di 2014
« on: July 21, 2014, 03:04:16 PM »
Sat Shri Akal Dosto!

Ongoing Singing Competition wich dilchapsi dikhaun walean te os wich hiss lain waleya da bahut bahut dhanwaad. jinha di entry disqualify hoyi ohna nal sanu behad afsos hai.  :hugg: par kise kisam di chusat chalaki jida k Pj staff bardaasht nai kr skda  :D: es layi agge ton eda da karnama na kita jawe  :slap:

Enteries jo sade kol pahunchian oh es prakar han. kirpa kar k sare participants nu dhyan nal suno te fer hi vote kreo. ehda na howe k koi deserving candidate tuhade keemti vote ton wanjhe reh jawe . baki eh tuhada nijhi haq hai, jithe jinhu marzi vote kro. dhanwaad!



Contestant no. 1

Contestant no. 2

Contestant no. 3

Contestant no. 4

Contestant no. 5

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Religion, Faith, Spirituality / Ragas in Shri Guru Granth Sahib
« on: July 19, 2014, 02:19:35 PM »
A raga is a complex structure of musical melody used in the Indian classical music. It is a set of rules of how to build a melody which can ignite a certain mood in the reciter and listeners. The Sikh holy book, Guru Granth Sahib, is composed in and divided by 31 ragas. Each raga is a chapter or section in the Guru Granth Sahib starting with Shree raag, and all the hymns produced in Shree raag are found in this section ordered chronologically by the Guru or other Bhagat that have written hymns in that raga.

Ragas have a direct relationship to human moods and the following are the connections between Ragas and feeling:


Raga Asa is an Indian musical raga (composition) that appears in the Sikh tradition from northern India and is part of the Sikh holy scripture the Guru Granth Sahib. Every raga has a strict set of rules which govern the number of notes that can be used; which notes can be used; and their interplay that has to be adhered to for the composition of a tune. In the Guru Granth Sahib, the Sikh holy Granth (book) there are a total composition of 31 ragas and this raga is the fourth raga to appear in the series. The composition in this raga appear on 142 pages from page numbers 347 to 489.
Asa translates to hope. It gives the mood of making effort and provides the feelings of inspiration, courage, determination, ambition, passion, and zeal to the reciter and listeners.
Asa is a very old raga which was once popular in the Punjab (northern India) but seldom heard in concerts today. In the Guru Granth Sahib's Ragmala this is a ragini (subset) of raga Megha. However, today it is assigned to the "Bilaval" thata ("set"). Asa is a devotional raga for the cold season and is performed in the early morning just before sunrise. However, it is also known as a twilight melody with a calm mystical mood. Raga Asa was used by Dhanul Laskangadas, Guru Nanak, Guru Angad, Guru Amar Das, Guru Ram Das, Guru Arjan and Guru Tegh Bahadur



Raag Bairari (ਬੈਰਾੜੀ)
This raga is the ninth raga to appear in the series. The composition in this raga appear on a total of only 2 pages from page numbers 719 to 721.
This raga appears in the Ragmala as the first ragini ("subset") of Sri raga. In the Mesakarna Ragmala (1509), which is almost the same as that of the Guru Granth Sahib, the first ragini of Siri Raga is given as Vairati. However, modern sources do not give Bairari nor Vairati but Barari and Varari as well as Varati are listed. Kaufmann believes that all of these names refer to the same raga, Barari. Whether this is the same as the old Bairari is open to question. The possibility always exists that Bairari was a regional tune. It was used by Guru Ram Das for six short hymns and by Guru Arjan for one. This raga is performed during the evening and it is currently assigned to the Marva thata ("set"). It resembles Purva Kalyan, the main difference being the use of Pa which is strong in Bairari and weak in Purva-Kalyan. Popley places Bairari in the same group as Sri Raga and this would agree with the Ragmala.


Raag Basant (ਬਸੰਤੁ)
During spring season of the year Basant may be performed at any time of the day or night. Otherwise, it is reserved for the time between 9 p.m. and midnight. The Ragmala gives Basant as a putra (son) of Hindol, also a spring raga. Today it belongs to the Purvi thata. The only variant noted in the Holy Book is Basant-Hindol. Basant is a very old raga dating from the 8th century. Guru Nanak, Guru Amar Das, Guru Ram Das, Guru Arjan and Guru Tegh Bahadar composed Shabads in this raga. Performed in slow tempo, this gentle melody depicts quiet joy


Raag Bhairon (ਭੈਰਉ)
In the Guru Granth Sahib, the Sikh holy Granth (book) there are a total of 31 raga compositions and this raga is the twenty-fourth raga to appear in the series. The composition in this raga appear on a total of 43 pages from page numbers 1125 to 1168.
Bhairav was an important raga at the time of Guru Nanak and has continued to retain its significance and popularity. Bhairav (not to be confused with Bhairavi) appears in the Ragmala as husband/wife of Bhairavi and four other raginis. Today it is the head raga for one of the ten thatas. The "Raga Sagara", a journal of circa 8th century, describes this raga as awe-inspiring and as expressing the "fulfilment of the desire to worship." Mesakarna (1509) calls this morning melody of the autumn season one of awesome grandeur. Performed before sunrise, this raga was used by Guru Nanak, Guru Amar Das, Guru Ram Das, and Guru Arjan for 99 hymns.


Raag Bihagara (ਬਿਹਾਗੜਾ)
Bihagara is the seventh raga to appear in the series. The composition in this raga appear on 20 pages from page 537 to 557. Bihagara is very similar to the modern and very popular raga Bihag. The resemblance is so close that many performers have trouble maintaining the significance of each. Bihagara is not given in the Ragmala. Today it is classified under the Bilaval thata. Guru Ram Das, Guru Arjan and Guru Tegh Bahadar set a total of 17 Shabads (hymns), chhants and a var to this raga. This raga is performed during the early night time between 9 p.m. and midnight, and it creates a devotional mood and has a tranquilising effect. The texts composed to this raga describes how complete peace and satisfaction comes to the person who surrenders everything to the Lord.

Raag Bilaval (ਬਿਲਾਵਲੁ)
Bilawal is the sixteenth raga to appear in the series. The composition in this raga appear on a total of 64 pages from page numbers 795 to 859.Bilawal had become the basic scale for North Indian music by the early part of the 19th century. Its tonal relationships are comparable to the Western music C major scale. Bilawal appears in the Ragmala as a ragini of Bhairava, but today it is the head of the Bilawal thaat. The Ragmala gives Bilawal as a putra (son) of Bhairav, but no relation between these two ragas is made today. Bilawal is a morning raga to be sung with a feeling of deep devotion and repose, often performed during the hot months. Over 170 hymns were composed to this raga by Guru Nanak, Guru Amar Das, Guru Ram Das, Guru Arjan and Guru Tegh Bahadar.

Raag Devagandhari (ਦੇਵਗੰਧਾਰੀ)
this raga is the sixth raga to appear in the series. The composition in this raga appear on a total of 10 pages from page numbers 527 to 537.Today Devagandhari is a rare, little known, ancient raga. Its performance time is the morning hours. Historically it has had three forms; the less ornamented type is described here. In the Ragmala, Devagandhari is a ragini of Malkaunsa. Today it belongs to the Asavari thata. Its mood is one of prayerful supplication presenting a heroic effect. The texts set to this raga reveal a heroic search for these qualities which lead one to the Lord. This raga was used primarily by Guru Arjan. Forty-Seven hymns were composed to it including three by Guru Tegh Bahadar and six by Guru Ram Das.

Raag Dhanasari (ਧਨਾਸਰੀ)
Raga Dhanashree appears in the Ragmala as a ragini of Malkauns and currently is a member of the Kafi thaat. It closely resembles Bhimpalasi in musical content but the vadis and moods are different. Dhanashree is performed in the early afternoon and presents a cheerful, happy mood. It provided the setting for hymns by Guru Nanak, Guru Amar Das, Guru Ram Das, Guru Arjan and Guru Tegh Bahadar for a total of 101 hymns


Raag Gauri (ਗਉੜੀ)
This raga is the third raga to appear in the series. The composition in this raga appear on a total of 196 pages from page numbers 151 to 347. Gauri is one of several ragas that appears in the Ragmala as a ragini (subset) of Sri Raga. This is an evening raga assigned to autumn and its mood is contemplative. The composition in Gauri is very voluminous. Gauri was used by Guru Nanak, Guru Amar Das, Guru Ram Das, Guru Arjan and Guru Tegh Bahadur. Several forms of Gauri Raga exist historically and this probably accounts for the large number of variants: Gauri Cheti, Gauri Bairagan, Gauri Dipaki, Gauri Purbi-Dipaki, Gauri Guareri, Gauri-Majh, Gauri Malava, Gauri Mala, Gauri Sorath, Gauri Dakhani.





To be Continued..

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Lyrics / Ikk Albeli shael shabeeli - lyrics - Satinder Sartaaaj
« on: July 11, 2014, 10:00:08 PM »
ik albeli shael shabeeli bhag titliyan fadd'di , urdu parhdi!!
hawa udaawe zulf ohdi tan naal hawa de larhdi , akadd kharhdi

oh jad beparwah jehi ho k edr odr nasdi , nale hasdi
iun lagda ae osdi har ada ch kudarat wasdi..ehi dasdi
mehakan di malika ton kaliyan di toli sarhdi , jugtan gharhdi..
hawa udaawe zulf ohdi tan nal hawa de larhdi , akadd kharhdi..

kashish anokhi akhiyan de wich naina de tan gaunde hosh udaunde..
lukk shipp kayi musammar ohdi tasveer banaunde reejhan launde..
jis nal nigha mila layi os nu nashe wangra chrhdi, dil wich warhdi..
hawa udaawe zulf ohdi tan nal hawa de larhdi, akarh khad di..

jis paase vi jaawe odhr ghaah haryayi farhda, makhmal parda..
osde nazuk pairan nu oh ishiqya sajjde karda nale darrda...
phull puchde taahni nu kad rutt aawegi patcharh di, doori arhdii..
hawa udaawe zulf ohdi tan naal hawa de larhdi , akarh khad di..

ik shayer de safeyan nu ohde khyal gulabi kargye.. panne bhar gaye..
fer "SARTAAJ" horin sabh nazma husan de agge dhar gaye , kehnde marrgaye...
jad kaagaz te potte rakhdi lafaz mohabbat jarhdi, jazbe marhdi..
hawa udaawe zulf ohdi tan naal hawa de larhdi, akadd khad di..
ik albeli shel shabeeeeli..........

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Sat Shri Akal

Ajj da promotion  ♦ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♦ de naam. Hukamnaama Topic wich har roz hukamnaama post krde ne te hor v sanu umeed hai eh eda de PJ nu change threads contribute krde rehnge. es lai aapa ehna nu PJ da gabru bnaun jaa rahe haan. sanu umeed hai eh PJ te hor vi tarrakian krnge!! keep the good work up!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Dao ji wadhayian gabru nu !! :blowout:blowout:


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Lyrics / I Killed Myself Today (lyrics with audio) - Johnny Cash
« on: July 09, 2014, 01:36:11 PM »
The song played at the end of Season 4 Episode 3 of Californication.
Enjoy.

Lyrics are as follows:


I killed myself today
For second life replay
I killed myself today

I had too many lives
I did it to survive
So I killed myself today

But somehow I'm not dead
I'm still inside a head
To testify what's real
When truth is to believe

I killed myself today
For second life replay
Yeah, I killed myself today

I killed myself today
(I killed myself today)
For legendary fame
(For legendary fame)
I blew myself away

I did it in a crowd
(Killed myself today)
The echo was about
(For second life replay)
The old familiar shame

But somewhere I'll survive
To make you feel alive
So you could all reload
Your dreams and all your hopes

I killed myself today
(I killed myself today)
For second life replay
(For second life replay)
Yeah, I had to leave this game

But I'll return tomorrow
Alive to learn again

Alive to learn tomorrow
Alive to learn again



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Competitions / Awaz Punjabi Janta Di Competition - 2014
« on: July 08, 2014, 01:36:17 AM »

       
                Sab to pehla 2no hath jod k Sat Shri Akal to all ji
Lao ji punjabi janta valo kiti gayi mang anusar asi agla competition shuru karan jaa rahe haan.So apnia apnia toombia sur kar lao te kose kose pani de grare karne shuru kar dyo dholkia nu laa lao atta te harmoniaum te maar lao kapda. :D:
                 kyo k shuru karan jaa rahe aa

               
 
       
AWAZ PUNJABI JANTA DI 2014

 


Es mukable layi rules kuch is tra honge:
* gana aapni awaz vich howe te khas taur te ese mukable layi gaya hoya howe. Es de layi tuhanu gane to pehla intro ch pj da naam laina payega.
* apni pehchan dassni sakht mnah e.
* gana ghato ghat 1min 30 sec da hona chahida vadh to vadh jina marzi.
* lachar gayki nu mukable to bahr rakhya jauga.
* tuhadia enteries 20 july to pehla Es email te pohnch jania    chahaidia:punjabi.janta1@gmail.com
* winner votes te judges de points nu mila k kadhya jayega (votes:60% judges:40%)
* es mukable ch ohna user dia vote v count kitian jangian jinha dia post 100 to ghat ne par pj te active role nibha rahe ne


Judges tuhade gane vich inha galla da dhyaan rakhange :

#Bande di awaz kinni stable aa.
#Sur te kinna k kaym rehnda poore gane ch.
#Shabdavli kinni k shudh aa.


               
                      So khich lao tyari mittro te gaa gaa k gwandia de kann dukhan laa dyo te shaa jao :D
                                                  chak lavo apni apni
                             
                                                 ho javo suru 1,2,3..... start


                                     


Special Thanks to DeepSandhu & Karamsingh



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Sat Shri Akal sajjan belio!

Ajj da eh topic mani kaur de naam.. eh biba ji nu te tusi sabh jaande hi hone..
ehna ne pichhe jehe har maheene hon wale competitions wichon Story teller wale competition wich tuhada sabh da dil jitt lea si. os time hi PJ wallon announcement kiti gayi si k jo koi v members Staff nu join karna chahunde ne oh be-jhijhak sanu msg kar k das skde ne... ohna de interest nu dekh k. ohna utte sara Staff soch vichar kr k fainsla lauga.


Ehna de interest te PJ nu apne suggestions te creative ideas nal hor wadiya bnaun de jazbe nu dekhde hoye asin ehna nu Downloads section da mod bnaun ja rhe aa.. jo k "PJ Music Team" de naam nal janea janda hai.
es wich eh jine v songs upload hunde ne.. ohna nu sahi pattern wich modify krnge. te PJ de users nu v eh time to time samjhaunde rehnge tah jo sare jane songs nu sahi category wich paun di kirpalta karn.

Note: baki vi j koi PJ ch sudhar krn li sada saath dena chahunda, bina sange sharmaye .. kise v staff de member nu pm kar k apni ishaa jahir kar skda hai. All are welcome!


Congrats to @Mani Kaur !! Training layi hajiri lwaao!!  :nurse:


You did it! - mullanpuria style :D:

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Lyrics / swaah ban ke - punjab 1984 (lyrics)
« on: June 29, 2014, 07:20:34 AM »
mere pind di oh nehar nu suneha de deo..
ni mai fer taari laun siveyan ch sarh ke..
ni main kujje wich aaunga swaah banke..

methon mareyan nai jana ehna taahneya de wich
eh begaaneya de wich.. eh mehkhanea de wich
mainu chain milu mere pind pipplan de thalle..
patte loriyan sunaunde jadon thandi hawa challe
mere pind di oh paun nu suneha de deo
mainu loriyan sunawe kite maa bankr
ni mai kujje wich aunga swaah banke..

mainu parde nal wekhdi ae maut kamzaat   
jiwe sajjri veyaahi udeeke shagna di raat..
meri arthi sajave utte full rakhdi ae
nit banke kaleere mera raah takkdi ae
meri pind di oh mitti nu suneha de deo
ni mai kujje wich aunga swaah bannke..

rakh haunsla ni maye mera kar na tu dukh
patte jharde hi rehnde kade sukkde na rukh
mainu milea na kite teri godhi jeha sukh
ni mai jinni wari murhan mainu mile teri kukh
meri ganga meri maa de dowe pair hogaye
mainu ohna wich rorheo khudah kar k
ni mai kujje wich aunga swaah banke..

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Lyrics / Ammi udeekdi - punjab 1984 (lyrics)
« on: June 29, 2014, 07:01:54 AM »
haarh deya pendeyan ch vichhdi ae shaan bannke
bedard haakma tu vi wekh kade maa banke
siwe jeunde pind moye.. bujhde nahi chita jo hoye
raakh ch fire aunsiyan uleekdi.. murh aa veh laadiya
ghare ammi udeekdi...

khaure aajawe aathne jhoothi aas jagaundi ae
bhukha hou putt vichara ik roti ohde naam di pakaundi ae
tawi magdi wangu lau jagdi wangu.. raat sari akhan naio meechdi
murh aa veh laadiya ghare ammi udeekdi...

pardesi puttan baajhon kukhan ne ooniya
aukhiyan ne hareya k vi banjaran jeeunia
khed di hundi si jithe teri kulaari veh.. os vehre chup vi ae cheekdi
murh aa veh laadiya ghare ammi udeekdi..

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Maan-Sanmaan/Respect+ / PJ Mutiyaar Promotion H33R (-mesmerized-)
« on: June 26, 2014, 12:40:04 PM »
Sat Shri Akal PJ nivasio

Ajj da din biba H33R kaur de naam....  :banana:
eh biba ji kafi saalan ton pj te dere laa k birajmaan han  :D:
ehna nu eh sanmaan dena bannda si... aap ji pj nivasia da bahut manoranjan karde han
te ehna di baani ton eda parteet hunda hai k eh kise nu v tich nai smjhde  :slap: jani k biba ji khulle subah de ne  :hug:

dil de eh bahut change ne te kalle kalle bande nal eh bade pyaar nal rehnde ne  :hugg:
kise nu marha changa nai kehnde te aap ji sabh de secret safe rakhde ne  =D>
nindeya chugli ton bahut door ehna da ghar hai  :pagel:
aap ji nu ajj eh purskaar dendea sanu atoot anant anhad aseh khushi ho rahi hai jo asin lafzan wich beyan nahi kar skde..  :whew:


sabh parstut sajjana belia mitran sahelia wadde shoteya viyayean kunwarea sarbaale te laadea nu benti kiti jandi hai k aap ji nu wadhayi de k... aap da din shubh bnauna... te aap di agge di taraaki layi mangal kaamna karna..ji!!  :pray:

:omyeyes: :omyeyes:
jinha nu kujh samjh ni aya .. daas nal contact kr len ji ..  :blush:





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Forum Dehshiyat / Rules Regulations / A Chance to join PJ Staff
« on: June 24, 2014, 04:08:10 AM »
hun vacancies khulnia pj staff ch... lazy bande retire honge te jo pj system ch sudhar krn de chahwaan apne forms fill kr k sade nal contact krn. je koi banda koi khas activity nahi dikhauga ohnu fer ton pj gabru/mutiyar bna ta jauga. jo changa kam kar k retire honge.. sirf ohna nu hi retired staff ch jagah milugi..!!

asin kise nu apne aap promote nai kar skde.. jad koi banda aap aa ke nahi kehnda k main kujh karna chahunda es section layi...osnu mauka jrur ditta jauga... te agge v promote kita jauga..! (local mods)
koi v member jo jimewari chukk skda... apna manpasand section select kr k dasso sanu.. ohde ch tuhanu mod bnaya jauga... par sharat eh aa k jo duties dittian jaangia.. oh krnia paingia... nahi tah jald hi demote kr ditta jauga!

chahwaan users, ethe post v kr skde... ya fer pm v kr skde aa!!

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                                                                                     sat shri akal to all ji
                       pehla te sabnu bht bht mubarka jaina participate kita
      jis ghadi da tuhanu bht besabri nal intjar c oh ghadi a gayi hai aayo ji aj da din ralke manode aa punjabi janta de       de naam
                                                            tuhade intjar diyan ghdiyan khtam karde hoye announce karde a k

                                                                                                                                           
 

                                         


Judge 1


contestant  1
Storyline
Story da suruwat bhat vadiya c.. eh ik nani pari di story a .. j k es duniyan te aoun layi khush c .. bt usnu es duniyan te aoun nai dita geya .. msg vadiya aa k save da girls ..oh v eh duniyan dekhna chonindi .. end was good = 4
Performance
The way she  present the story was really  good awaz bhat sohni a .. bolan da andaaz bhat vadiya  c.. mainu kite voice drop hundi nai laggi .. creativity was ok .. all the time she was in her character… end was really good =6 
Total =10


Contestant  2
storyline
Story da start v baht vadiya treeke nal suru kita geya .. ik lele di kahni jisne kini hushyri nal na museebat da samna kita .. Hanji sahi keha k sanu greedy nai hona chida Sanu help karni chidi museebat vele  That is really interesting  story .. End vi sohna c =4     
Performance
The way he persent the story was really good .Awaz was brealaint .bolan da andaaz bhat sohna c ,full of confidance .koi dar nai che  was enjoying  the  story, expression is good .Creativity is good  ,”jehda vich bache ne participate kita  that was really nice ,that was plus point for that .”  thoda jeha vich jahe mainu lagga k jiwe lost jahe hunde aa over all it was really good =  5.5
Total = 9.5



Contestant  3
storyline
Story da start sohna detailed c . fer vich jahe ja k up down jeha hon lag geya. Eh ik old fashioned story a ik raje te osde bête di ,kiwe osdi maout hundi aa te kise de kite di saje kise hor nu mil jandi .Sanu apne karma di saja bhugtni paindi aa waheguru te wishwas rakhna chida bht sohni sikheya aa esde vich aa. bht hi sohne treeke nal ehna ne end kita story da = 3.5
Performance
The way of  persent the story was  gud .Awaz was so nice n sweet , start vich awaz ok c fr laga jewe dari jah n kambdi jahi. kite kite  awaz  drop ho rahi c , like  jiwe lost jehe hude hon .Confidence di kami  lagi mainu ,start vich ok c, fr thoda lost jeha ho geya ,fr baad ch ok ,kind a up  n down . expression theek theek c  .over all it was gud .Creativity was gud , ehna ne bht hi chnge treeke nal sab suneya . kind a simple   =5
Total = 8.5


Contestant  4
storyline
Story di suruwat eni detailed nai c , was really simple .Eh ik  emotional story c .kade kade eho jahe hadse hunde aa jisde nal kise di sari jindgi hi badal jandi aa. I think esde vich j dhyaan nal dekheya jawe te eh sikheya mildi a k sanu kade v nashe te vich drive nai karni chidi ,os ik galti karn ik bache ne apni ma te bhen nu hameshsa layi kho leya .again end was really simply = 3
Performance
The way of he present the story  was gud .Awaz was brilliant koi dar nai c show Honda. Expression was gud story de hisaab nal change hunde c .confidance v poora c . mainu kite v esdi  voice drop hundi nai lagi . n kite v mainu character toi bahr nai laga, it was gud = 6
Total = 9

                                                             
Contestant 5
storyline
Story di surwat  bht sohni n detailed c .. story emotional c jo k ehna di aapbeeti  c .bht hi dukh vali gal a sunke dil kambh janda .moral eh a k jo aj hai ohi hai.kal kise ne nai dekheya so love your parents end was really gud =4
Performance
the way she present was really nice .voice is really gud ,boln da andaaz v sohna c , confidence v poora .. expression was ok  .. apne character toi baher nai c = 6
Total =10


                                                       


Janta 's Choice


VoterVoted forPostsStatus
azs10107Contestant 12440Y
munna bhaiContestant 116163Y
Ankhi__PunjabanContestant 17594Y
Sweet_Desi_kuriContestant 13605Y
Sareef JATTContestant 11827Y
apurvContestant 13076Y
harmeets1991Contestant 12038Y
kala naagContestant 1130Y
ManmeeetContestant 1731Y
d3si_j4ttContestant 14N
RooHContestant 2770Y
adminContestant 37846Y
sandhuonlineContestant 33165Y
Dhillon and AujlaContestant 31015Y
kamal.preetContestant 36698Y
Jatt.Contestant 43406Y
The desi dudeContestant 44142Y
jaspreetmandContestant 46616Y
♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥Contestant 4690Y
Lucha_IndienContestant 55132Y
the goruContestant 55013Y
ashfaq_gujrContestant 56872Y
s_deepContestant 5330Y
sanjana gillContestant 54900Y
marjana_komalContestant 5195Y
Raj AulakhContestant 51912Y
Mani KaurContestant 53156Y
NIMANI KAMALContestant 51808Y
Sau JattContestant 5245Y
Mor di MorniContestant 51485Y
S.S.P GabruContestant 5573Y
behl.himContestant 5907Y
StylO_HeeRContestant 50N
chocolate_heerContestant 537N
Top UserVotes100+ Voters
Contestant 19azs10107, munna bhai, Ankhi__Punjaban, Sweet_Desi_kuri, Sareef JATT, apurv, harmeets1991, kala naag, Manmeeet
Contestant 21RooH
Contestant 34admin, sandhuonline, Dhillon and Aujla, kamal.preet
Contestant 44Jatt., The desi dude, jaspreetmand, ♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥
Contestant 513Lucha_Indien, the goru, ashfaq_gujr, s_deep, sanjana gill, marjana_komal, Raj Aulakh, Mani Kaur, NIMANI KAMAL, Sau Jatt, Mor di Morni, S.S.P Gabru, behl.him

Janta's Choice


contestant 1: 9 votes
Percentage out of 60% :   9/31 = 17.4%
contestant 2 :1 vote
Percentage out of 60% :  1.95%
contestant 3 : 4 votes
Percentage out of 60% : 7.75%
contestant 4 : 4 votes
Percentage out of 60% :7.75%
contestant 5 :13votes 
Percentage out of 60% : 25%




Judge 2

1. contestant
storyline te 4 vichon 4 points
story short ci, par apne wal khish ke rakheya kahani ne..bilkul vi interest level nhi tuteya!
kahani boht vadya seekheya dindi aa, ki dheeya nu putta warga pyar dao and aggeh vadhan da haunsla dain .. ta ki auh vi padh-likh, mehnat kr ke - ucche rutbe hasil kar sakhan.

performance te 6 vichon 5
kahani sunon lge awaaz ch kafi tehrav ci .. different roles lai awaaz da sahi vartu kita geya ae ..
awaaz kafi clear ci .. maybe BG music nal thoda enhance kr sakhde ci apni story nu.

_________________________________________________________________________
2. contestant

storyline 4 vichon 4:
story simple aa, isley har ummar de listeners (vaddean toh chote) lai samjhan nu saukhi ci.
story sunondea, key words de arth vi dite gaye san, jo ki story samjhan lai help kar dinde ne.
story nu jada lamba nhi khishyea geya .. length bilkul sahi ci, jis karan listener da interest level bilkul nhi ghatteya.
another point, jis kar ke interest kahani vicho nhi ghatteya was ki listener nal taal-mel bana ke rakheya geya (introduction and end ch)
Kahani de sare matlab (morals) vadya ci.. especially ki kahani suna ke aap sare morals changi tara explain kite gaye (again har ummar de shorte lai samjhan nu saukha ci)


performance 6 vichon 6:
Awaaz ne shrotea nu story nal ban ke rakheya,
Contestant ne kafi vishvastpadak dhang nal jazzbatan nu listener tak pounchaya (awaaz ch khushi bayaan hundi ci - jo ki story de mutabik bilkul sahi aa).



__________________________________________________________________________
3. contestant
summary:

storyline: 4 vichon 3
story kafi aachi aa, jo ki bohat vaadya message dindi insaan de karma de lekh-jhok bare.
par sunon lageya uhsnu kafi lambha khishea gea, jisnal listener da interest-level ghat sakhda te story de end ch vadya message miss ho sakhda.



performance: 6 vichon 4
awaaz sohni aa - par je story sunon lageya thora hor effort paunde, it could have been even better.
(like in 8:33 te contestant nu story sunondea aap saah charh geya, so maybe sunon toh pehla auh thoda soch-vichar kar sakhde ci, ki kithe pause laina and kehde words te vajan daina)


_______________________________________________________________________________
4. contestant
summary:


storyline: 4 vicho 3.5

story kafi aachi aa, jo ki ek bohat aacha message dindi aa, ki jo pal hega - uhsnu jee-jaan nal jeeyo .. agle pal da kise nu nahi pata so jo pal hega, uhsda shukrana mana ke chalo.
story thodi choti rakh ke sunonde ta shayad jaada dehr tak shrotea da interest level bann ke rehnda..
Eh kahani baki stories (5th wali nu chad ke) kafi alag aa.


performance:6 vichon 5.
 contestant di awaaz achi ae, jisda vartu v bohat vadya kita geya aa
[different roles(kale kapdea wala admi, bacha & saleswoman] lai awaaz de alag tehraav]
contestant ne BG ch music da sahara lai ke, kahani nu alag tareeke nal pesh kita (background music di volume thodi hor ghat hundi ta shayad kahani hor vi vadya lagdi sunon nu)




______________________________________________________________________________
5. contestant

Storyline: 4 vichon 2
Contestant ne apni hadh-beeti sunai, jo ki kise lai vi judge karna mushkil ae,
par je judging criteria dekhiye ta ehna da moral ta bohat aacha aa,
ki apne parents da satikar karo and auhna nu proud feel karao, par with all due respect - message story de nal changi tara judd nahi paya.



Performance: 6 wichon 4
i liked the intro, bas hadd-beeti sunan lageya .. you could leave out sentences like 'so emotional hon lai ready ho jao'.
Story di shurvat te ant song nal kiti gaye, jo ki listener ute kafi prabhavashali rehnda,
baki background music da sahara lai ke, kahani nu vadya tareeke nal listener tak pounchaya contestant ne.


                                                             

Judge 3

Pehla te ji sarya da dhanwaad jinha ne hissa liya is comp ch. Sarya ne boht vadia khania sunayia , kuj sikhan nu milya. Sarya nu mubarka. Sadi majboori thode effort nu judge karna pai riha mafi chahage ji . :rabb:

Contestant 1:

Inha ne boht sohni khani sunayi. Ajj de boht hi gambheer dukhant nu darsaundi mann nu tumban vali. Marde jande insani jazbataa nu haloondi es khani nu vadia dhang naal nibhaya.  Par thode thehrao di kami laggi es vich. Baki sab vadia tareeke naal nibhaya.
Storyline vaste ehna nu 4 no.
Performance layi 4 no

Contestant 2:

Ehna ne bachya de layi khani sunayi.  Khania bachya nu sab to vadh bhaundia ne te eh es kamm ch mahir lagde ne k bachya nu kive khush rakhya janda. Apne effort ch
Poori tra khare uttre ne. Par vich ik do jgah ehna nu v track te aun nu thoda zor launa pya lagda bhull gaye c. Ik slah e ji khanikar nu eh dhyaan zroor rakhna chahida k ohna de readers or listeners kaun ne.
Story line layi 2.5
Performance layi poore 6 no.


Contestant 3:

Hanji ehna di khani mai personally kafi enjoy kitti. Eh khani mai aap suni hoyi aa meri daddi kolo. Bt she was better :pagel:
Tuc v vadia sikhya den vali story sunayi. Bt ik laiy di kami jihi c. Khani ruk ruk k agge vadh rahi c. Kafi confuse jihe hoye paye c tuc. Bt natural way naal sunayi story.

Storyline layi 2 no.
Performance layi : 5 no.



Contestant 4:

Inha ne vadia khani chuni maasoomiyat bhari. Kise da v dil ro pawe ik masoom de aise jazbaat sun k. Khani sunayi v vadia dhang naal. Ik laiy vich. Gambheer awaz vadia andaaz.

Storyline layi 4 no.
Performance layi 5 no.

Contestant 5:

Inha ne jo hadbiti sunayi e. Sab to zyada parbhawit karan vali c. Shayd es layi k oh effortless c. Apne dil de jazbaat bakhoobi pesh kite. Jive kise sahmne baithe naal galla kar rahe hon.
Par mai muafi manda k tuhanu mai es judgment cho bahr rakh riha. Mere apne vichar mutabik khanikar nu har tra de te har kise de jazbaat mehsoos karne te byan karne aune chahide. Par tuc apni hi khani suna k apne aap nu limited jiha kar lya. Beshak tuhada effort sab to vadia. Es layi mai muafi chahuga.
Tuhanu mai koi number ni de sakda , kise de jazbata nu koi kiwe numbera ch tol sakda. Sry ji


                                                               


Judge 4

Contestant 1 - Nanni Pari
Story = 3
Length poori a
Nice story…bahut meaningful....ik social problem naal related....par linear te coherent nahi….Kade narrator intervene karda characters di gall introduce karn lei kade nahi…..
bahut vadiya sikheya dindi a.

Performance : 3
It’s nice that contestant tried to give the character different voice…par couldn’t maintain it coherently till the end....Rabb ji te narrator di avaj mil jandi.....better ho sakdi si inserting also more pauses...Starting sohni hoi si...Par end tak maintain nahi hoi

Total = 6

Contestant 2 - Lella
Story = 4 
Length fine a (more than 3 min)
Nice and funny story, very linear and cohesive...Narrator da bahut work disea is story ch...
Ik hi story cho 3 morals kad dite, Wah !

Performance= 6
"lelle " da meaning dassan to shuru kar ke end tak bahut vadiya tarah....easily sunai  jida bacheya nu sunai jandi....Is contestant nu music di lor ni pei creativity dikhoun lei…awaaj naal hi kmaal kar dita......so alag tarike naal creativity dikhai....ik normal story nu Awaj de andaaz nal funny jehi bna dita and apne comments add karke narrator ne story nu hor vadiya kar dita....Ena de sunaun de andaaz to lagda ke eh competion di spirit nu samj geye

Total = 10

Contestant 3 - Raja
Story= 3
Length sehi a 
Story sohni a... Bahut sare listeners nu ona da bachpan yaad aa geya huna par…..coherency and cohesion hai nahi….story jada details and explanations ch kho jandi....
Eh story vi bahut  vadiya sikheya dindi , Sab karma da khed.....jo bijeya ohi vadna

Performance: 2
Nice start. Par Stability ni hegi....story sunandi sunadi contestant vi guaach jandi….apne sentences ch thori confuse ho jandi.....she should have used more pauses, dividing it in parts....creativity vi  nahi dikhai....

Total = 5

Contestant 4 - Christmas day
Story=  length is fine
Story bahut sohni a…Linear,coherent, cohesive…It’s short but it has its start and a coherent ending.
Moral contestant ne explicitly nahi dassea….par story adult audience lei so last words are enough to get the meaning of the story. Kei war insaan kush eda da experience karda …jo ke as a singles episode shayed kush vi na lagge par poori life badal jandi.

Performance = 6
Sab Ton best performance is contestant di a….Story da har ik scene bahut sohna describe kita..... Narrator often intervenes to describe the characters emotions….narrator nu alag te each character nu alag avaj diti... te eh end tak fully maintain vi kita…..should be appreciated also the use of pauses…..
Background ch music di use ch vi creativity….music situations naal change hunda….starting ch chritsmas vala, fer sad ho janda…..overall very nicely performed

Total = 10

Contestant 5-Personal experience

Story =  3.5
Length sehi a
Personal experience sunaya es contestant ne…very sad story...Rabb di raza hundi….Us de Hukam ch sab kush hunda….es lei os nu comment nahi kar sakde
Story ch coherency poori maintain nahi rehi till end…specially last ch last ch aa ke bikhar jandi
story da moral nahi dasde contestant but ik message dinde listeners nu ...jo ke bahut vadiya a

Performance =  6
Nice use of music….Song nal story introduce kiti….background ch music chalda reha….last te rok dita to have the attention on the words…to be noticed also the change of tone…that comes actually naturally because it’s a personal experience

Total = 9.5
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Critics Choice


Judge 1

Total Marks : 10

contestant 1 :10
Percentage out of 40% : 10/10 x  = 40%
contestant 2 :9.5
Percentage out of 40% : 38%
contestant 3 :8.5
Percentage out of 40% : 34%
contestant 4: 9
Percentage out of 40% : 36%
contestant 5:10
Percentage out of 40% : 40%
Judge 2

contestant 1:9
Percentage out of 40% : 36%
contestant 2:10
Percentage out of 40% : 40%
contestant 3:7
Percentage out of 40% : 28%
contestant 4:8.5
Percentage out of 40% : 34%
contestant 5:6
Percentage out of 40% : 24%
Judge 3


contestant 1:8
Percentage out of 40% : 32%
contestant 2:8.5
Percentage out of 40% : 34%
contestant 3:7
Percentage out of 40% : 28%
contestant 4:9
Percentage out of 40% : 36%
contestant 5:0
Percentage out of 40% : 0%
Judge 4

contestant 1:6
Percentage out of 40% : 24%
contestant 2:10
Percentage out of 40% : 40%
contestant 3:5
Percentage out of 40% : 20%
contestant 4:10
Percentage out of 40% : 40%
contestant 5:9.5
Percentage out of 40% : 38%

Average of all the judges

contestant 1:33%

contestant 2::38%

contestant 3:27.5%

contestant 4:36.5%

contestant 5:25.5%

Total points

Contestant 1 : 17.4%+33%=50.40%

Contestant 2 :1.95+38%= 39.95%

Contestant 3: 7.75%+27.5%=35.25%

Contestant 4: 7.75%+36.5%=44.25%

Contestant 5: 25.5+25%= 50.50%


and the winner is (contestant no. 5) Mani Kaur



                                                                             

PS: Special thanks to all the judges & Mr. Chhalla(takneeqi uljhana nal aap ne jaanu karwaya) , deepsandhu (for her hard work) for making this huge!



Contestant no. 1 = Sehaj Randhawa
Contestant no. 2 = Grenade Singh
Contestant no. 3 = taur kaur
Contestant no. 4 = Sareef_jatt
contestant no. 5 = Mani Kaur





Je kise ne math dekhna howe tan spreadsheet sshot dekh sakde and mein file wi send kar sakda.

Maafi zaroor mangde a, sareef jatt bai ton, galti naal winner saabit karta. As consolation, Sareef_jatt nu 1 mahina mod banan da offer ditta janda hai. Kise wi staff member or menu msg kar sakde.

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Maan-Sanmaan/Respect+ / PJ's Next Global Mod Promotion
« on: June 06, 2014, 07:23:09 AM »
Sat shri Akal PunjabiJanta Nivasio!

Ajj di Promotion Pangebaaz Mutiyaar(NIMANI KAMAL) de Naam. :here:





ehna nu jad PJ di Video Team de member bnaya geya si tan ehna ne sanu poora wishwas dilaya si k eh apni duties poori lagan te mehnat nal nibhaunge... Ajj sanu eh kehndea maan mehsoos ho reha hai ke ehna ne ous wishwas nu hor pakka kita te PJ nu hor behtar bnaun wich poora poora yogdaan paaya.. sare staff wallon ehna nu Global mod di post te niyukt kita janda hai. sanu umeed hai eh apnia jimewaria eda hi poori lagan nal nibhaunde rehange te PJ nu safalta diya bulandia tak pahunchaunge :)

bahut kam kita ehna ne video sections wich, bahut waddhu ghaatu spam te jo videos disabled ho chukia ohna nu remove kr kr k ehna ne PJ de moderations logs bhar ditte.. Radio vi eh bahut wadia karde ne.. janta ehna di awaaaz di deewani hai... sare jane PJ de es honhaar member nu wadhayian mubarkan dao!



:pray: sarbatt da bhala  :pray:

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Competitions / VOTING: PJ Best Story Teller Competition 2014
« on: June 05, 2014, 01:28:19 PM »
Lao ji bahut sarian entries apa nu aayi si... ohna wichon jo nominate hoyian oh eh ne :pagel:


kalli kalli nu suno... te apne apne umeedvaar nu apna keemti vote paa k jitaao!!
tuhade 8 din aa... chakkdo fatte!! :dumlak:



te umeedvaars tussi... baabe nu yaad kro  :pray:





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Contestant 4


Contestant 5



Critics Judge Ban'an de chahwan mainu PM krn ___ tuhanu kam te layie   :cooll:

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