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« on: June 24, 2014, 09:47:50 PM »
22 pehla sharta dsbdyo.. jo shart mainu vdia lggu m ohi kamm pakad laa ga... vaise mere chbtalent ala koi software ta h ni. Bt j tuhaanu koyi kamm mere laayk lgda h ta ds dyo.. apa tuhaade naal aa...
khaapp jinni marrji pwa lo.. ohnda ta award milya hoya mainu pj hall of shame ch
jarur jnaab! fer v msg krdio kehra section tuhanu wadia lagda.. fer ohde according tuhadia duties dasdange.. jyada aukha kam haini.. par fer vi ik war section select kreo forums wicho! ... tusi sare form fill kar kar k hi admin bane aa ? ehna ne app nhi si mod banaya tuhanu ?
tusi har time ikko suit payi rakhde? garmia ch hor hunde aa.. syal ch hor par main kam jis li suits bannde oh te ohi rehnda - shareer nu dhakk k rakhna!! eda hi time te situation nal changes aaunde jande rehnde! par main kam te ohi rehna - pj ch sudhaar aunda rahe.. @all janta di site aa eh.. asin koi aap nai bnaayi!! asin v pehlan member hi si.. tusi sirf apne tak seemat ho.. tuhanu ethe aa k change dost mil gaye.. tusi ene ch khush ho.. sanu(pj staff) change dost mile ethe aa k te asin chaunde aa hor v lok ethe aaun te ohna nu v change lok milan.. te eh platform eda hi barkrar rawe! par eh gallan har ek de khaane ch nahi pai sakdia! es lai har kise bare jaan k hi koi swaal uthauna chaida! bhala kuch bol veh jogi :pray:
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« on: June 24, 2014, 11:39:43 AM »
main hun te drawing chhad ti krni... par bahut time pehlan...bahut krda si.. kujh k gwaach gayia... kujh haigia.. ah wali folders ch labh gayi. pehlan v main ik war upload kiti si pj te..! 3 ku saal purani a..
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« on: June 24, 2014, 11:34:52 AM »
full version uploaded :hehe: thanku chhalle bai
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« on: June 24, 2014, 11:33:29 AM »
What incentive and salary packages are offered ?
$20 per hour on PJ(working) :pagel:
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« on: June 24, 2014, 04:08:10 AM »
hun vacancies khulnia pj staff ch... lazy bande retire honge te jo pj system ch sudhar krn de chahwaan apne forms fill kr k sade nal contact krn. je koi banda koi khas activity nahi dikhauga ohnu fer ton pj gabru/mutiyar bna ta jauga. jo changa kam kar k retire honge.. sirf ohna nu hi retired staff ch jagah milugi..!!
asin kise nu apne aap promote nai kar skde.. jad koi banda aap aa ke nahi kehnda k main kujh karna chahunda es section layi...osnu mauka jrur ditta jauga... te agge v promote kita jauga..! (local mods)
koi v member jo jimewari chukk skda... apna manpasand section select kr k dasso sanu.. ohde ch tuhanu mod bnaya jauga... par sharat eh aa k jo duties dittian jaangia.. oh krnia paingia... nahi tah jald hi demote kr ditta jauga!
chahwaan users, ethe post v kr skde... ya fer pm v kr skde aa!!
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« on: June 24, 2014, 02:22:19 AM »
main v labh k leauna fer apni draang wali kapi :hehe:
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« on: June 24, 2014, 02:08:28 AM »
asal ch checking ala banda marha nikleya... ohnu kaabu kita jana chahida... PJ security team apne kam te lagg chukki aa :lol: jald fadd k janta de sahmne leaandda jauga  :
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« on: June 23, 2014, 02:34:01 AM »
shehnshah
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« on: June 23, 2014, 02:32:40 AM »
aur kuch is trah! punjabi janta di history wich ik hor twist! : mubaraaka dao ji nawe jetu nu...!! :blowout: sorry sareef bai... ik din da winner hi sahi... :hugg:
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« on: June 23, 2014, 12:27:56 AM »
omkara
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« on: June 23, 2014, 12:18:49 AM »
maine pyar kyun kiya :
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« on: June 22, 2014, 08:46:00 AM »
AAPE MASHI MASHLI, AAPE PANI JAAL !!
AAPE JAAL MANKADA, AAPE ANDAR LAL !!
AAPE BAHO BIDH RANGLA, SAKHIYE MERA LAL ! 8-> mauj ohdi!!
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« on: June 22, 2014, 07:55:25 AM »
Names added! ... I personally loved contestant no. 2 's story! amazing performance! :) alas! i was busy in voting days, if i had voted for him, he was a clear winner : anyhow! jo hunda changa hunda... wohi hota hai jo manzoor -e- khudah hota hai. :pray: no. 4 di story vi mainu apne wargi hi laggi si... ik bacheyan nal pyaar hon kr k dujja apne ikallepan nal .. :) thanks to all the judges sahi sahi har pakh ton padtaal kr k fainsla sunaun layi.. love ju guys :happy: all are winners :won:
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« on: June 22, 2014, 06:18:02 AM »
sat shri akal to all ji
pehla te sabnu bht bht mubarka jaina participate kita
jis ghadi da tuhanu bht besabri nal intjar c oh ghadi a gayi hai aayo ji aj da din ralke manode aa punjabi janta de  de naam
tuhade intjar diyan ghdiyan khtam karde hoye announce karde a k
Judge 1
contestant 1
Storyline
Story da suruwat bhat vadiya c.. eh ik nani pari di story a .. j k es duniyan te aoun layi khush c .. bt usnu es duniyan te aoun nai dita geya .. msg vadiya aa k save da girls ..oh v eh duniyan dekhna chonindi .. end was good = 4
Performance
The way she present the story was really good awaz bhat sohni a .. bolan da andaaz bhat vadiya c.. mainu kite voice drop hundi nai laggi .. creativity was ok .. all the time she was in her character… end was really good =6
Total =10
Contestant 2
storyline
Story da start v baht vadiya treeke nal suru kita geya .. ik lele di kahni jisne kini hushyri nal na museebat da samna kita .. Hanji sahi keha k sanu greedy nai hona chida Sanu help karni chidi museebat vele That is really interesting story .. End vi sohna c =4
Performance
The way he persent the story was really good .Awaz was brealaint .bolan da andaaz bhat sohna c ,full of confidance .koi dar nai che was enjoying the story, expression is good .Creativity is good ,”jehda vich bache ne participate kita that was really nice ,that was plus point for that .” thoda jeha vich jahe mainu lagga k jiwe lost jahe hunde aa over all it was really good = 5.5
Total = 9.5
Contestant 3
storyline
Story da start sohna detailed c . fer vich jahe ja k up down jeha hon lag geya. Eh ik old fashioned story a ik raje te osde bête di ,kiwe osdi maout hundi aa te kise de kite di saje kise hor nu mil jandi .Sanu apne karma di saja bhugtni paindi aa waheguru te wishwas rakhna chida bht sohni sikheya aa esde vich aa. bht hi sohne treeke nal ehna ne end kita story da = 3.5
Performance
The way of persent the story was gud .Awaz was so nice n sweet , start vich awaz ok c fr laga jewe dari jah n kambdi jahi. kite kite awaz drop ho rahi c , like jiwe lost jehe hude hon .Confidence di kami lagi mainu ,start vich ok c, fr thoda lost jeha ho geya ,fr baad ch ok ,kind a up n down . expression theek theek c .over all it was gud .Creativity was gud , ehna ne bht hi chnge treeke nal sab suneya . kind a simple =5
Total = 8.5
Contestant 4
storyline
Story di suruwat eni detailed nai c , was really simple .Eh ik emotional story c .kade kade eho jahe hadse hunde aa jisde nal kise di sari jindgi hi badal jandi aa. I think esde vich j dhyaan nal dekheya jawe te eh sikheya mildi a k sanu kade v nashe te vich drive nai karni chidi ,os ik galti karn ik bache ne apni ma te bhen nu hameshsa layi kho leya .again end was really simply = 3
Performance
The way of he present the story was gud .Awaz was brilliant koi dar nai c show Honda. Expression was gud story de hisaab nal change hunde c .confidance v poora c . mainu kite v esdi voice drop hundi nai lagi . n kite v mainu character toi bahr nai laga, it was gud = 6
Total = 9
Contestant 5
storyline
Story di surwat bht sohni n detailed c .. story emotional c jo k ehna di aapbeeti c .bht hi dukh vali gal a sunke dil kambh janda .moral eh a k jo aj hai ohi hai.kal kise ne nai dekheya so love your parents end was really gud =4
Performance
the way she present was really nice .voice is really gud ,boln da andaaz v sohna c , confidence v poora .. expression was ok .. apne character toi baher nai c = 6
Total =10
Janta 's Choice
| Voter | Voted for | Posts | Status | | azs10107 | Contestant 1 | 2440 | Y | | munna bhai | Contestant 1 | 16163 | Y | | Ankhi__Punjaban | Contestant 1 | 7594 | Y | | Sweet_Desi_kuri | Contestant 1 | 3605 | Y | | Sareef JATT | Contestant 1 | 1827 | Y | | apurv | Contestant 1 | 3076 | Y | | harmeets1991 | Contestant 1 | 2038 | Y | | kala naag | Contestant 1 | 130 | Y | | Manmeeet | Contestant 1 | 731 | Y | | d3si_j4tt | Contestant 1 | 4 | N | | RooH | Contestant 2 | 770 | Y | | admin | Contestant 3 | 7846 | Y | | sandhuonline | Contestant 3 | 3165 | Y | | Dhillon and Aujla | Contestant 3 | 1015 | Y | | kamal.preet | Contestant 3 | 6698 | Y | | Jatt. | Contestant 4 | 3406 | Y | | The desi dude | Contestant 4 | 4142 | Y | | jaspreetmand | Contestant 4 | 6616 | Y | | ♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥ | Contestant 4 | 690 | Y | | Lucha_Indien | Contestant 5 | 5132 | Y | | the goru | Contestant 5 | 5013 | Y | | ashfaq_gujr | Contestant 5 | 6872 | Y | | s_deep | Contestant 5 | 330 | Y | | sanjana gill | Contestant 5 | 4900 | Y | | marjana_komal | Contestant 5 | 195 | Y | | Raj Aulakh | Contestant 5 | 1912 | Y | | Mani Kaur | Contestant 5 | 3156 | Y | | NIMANI KAMAL | Contestant 5 | 1808 | Y | | Sau Jatt | Contestant 5 | 245 | Y | | Mor di Morni | Contestant 5 | 1485 | Y | | S.S.P Gabru | Contestant 5 | 573 | Y | | behl.him | Contestant 5 | 907 | Y | | StylO_HeeR | Contestant 5 | 0 | N | | chocolate_heer | Contestant 5 | 37 | N |
| Top User | Votes | 100+ Voters | | Contestant 1 | 9 | azs10107, munna bhai, Ankhi__Punjaban, Sweet_Desi_kuri, Sareef JATT, apurv, harmeets1991, kala naag, Manmeeet | | Contestant 2 | 1 | RooH | | Contestant 3 | 4 | admin, sandhuonline, Dhillon and Aujla, kamal.preet | | Contestant 4 | 4 | Jatt., The desi dude, jaspreetmand, ♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥ | | Contestant 5 | 13 | Lucha_Indien, the goru, ashfaq_gujr, s_deep, sanjana gill, marjana_komal, Raj Aulakh, Mani Kaur, NIMANI KAMAL, Sau Jatt, Mor di Morni, S.S.P Gabru, behl.him |
Janta's Choice
contestant 1: 9 votes
Percentage out of 60% : 9/31 = 17.4%
contestant 2 :1 vote
Percentage out of 60% : 1.95%
contestant 3 : 4 votes
Percentage out of 60% : 7.75%
contestant 4 : 4 votes
Percentage out of 60% :7.75%
contestant 5 :13votes
Percentage out of 60% : 25%
Judge 2
1. contestant
storyline te 4 vichon 4 points
story short ci, par apne wal khish ke rakheya kahani ne..bilkul vi interest level nhi tuteya!
kahani boht vadya seekheya dindi aa, ki dheeya nu putta warga pyar dao and aggeh vadhan da haunsla dain .. ta ki auh vi padh-likh, mehnat kr ke - ucche rutbe hasil kar sakhan.
performance te 6 vichon 5
kahani sunon lge awaaz ch kafi tehrav ci .. different roles lai awaaz da sahi vartu kita geya ae ..
awaaz kafi clear ci .. maybe BG music nal thoda enhance kr sakhde ci apni story nu.
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2. contestant
storyline 4 vichon 4:
story simple aa, isley har ummar de listeners (vaddean toh chote) lai samjhan nu saukhi ci.
story sunondea, key words de arth vi dite gaye san, jo ki story samjhan lai help kar dinde ne.
story nu jada lamba nhi khishyea geya .. length bilkul sahi ci, jis karan listener da interest level bilkul nhi ghatteya.
another point, jis kar ke interest kahani vicho nhi ghatteya was ki listener nal taal-mel bana ke rakheya geya (introduction and end ch)
Kahani de sare matlab (morals) vadya ci.. especially ki kahani suna ke aap sare morals changi tara explain kite gaye (again har ummar de shorte lai samjhan nu saukha ci)
performance 6 vichon 6:
Awaaz ne shrotea nu story nal ban ke rakheya,
Contestant ne kafi vishvastpadak dhang nal jazzbatan nu listener tak pounchaya (awaaz ch khushi bayaan hundi ci - jo ki story de mutabik bilkul sahi aa).
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3. contestant
summary:
storyline: 4 vichon 3
story kafi aachi aa, jo ki bohat vaadya message dindi insaan de karma de lekh-jhok bare.
par sunon lageya uhsnu kafi lambha khishea gea, jisnal listener da interest-level ghat sakhda te story de end ch vadya message miss ho sakhda.
performance: 6 vichon 4
awaaz sohni aa - par je story sunon lageya thora hor effort paunde, it could have been even better.
(like in 8:33 te contestant nu story sunondea aap saah charh geya, so maybe sunon toh pehla auh thoda soch-vichar kar sakhde ci, ki kithe pause laina and kehde words te vajan daina)
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4. contestant
summary:
storyline: 4 vicho 3.5
story kafi aachi aa, jo ki ek bohat aacha message dindi aa, ki jo pal hega - uhsnu jee-jaan nal jeeyo .. agle pal da kise nu nahi pata so jo pal hega, uhsda shukrana mana ke chalo.
story thodi choti rakh ke sunonde ta shayad jaada dehr tak shrotea da interest level bann ke rehnda..
Eh kahani baki stories (5th wali nu chad ke) kafi alag aa.
performance:6 vichon 5.
contestant di awaaz achi ae, jisda vartu v bohat vadya kita geya aa
[different roles(kale kapdea wala admi, bacha & saleswoman] lai awaaz de alag tehraav]
contestant ne BG ch music da sahara lai ke, kahani nu alag tareeke nal pesh kita (background music di volume thodi hor ghat hundi ta shayad kahani hor vi vadya lagdi sunon nu)
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5. contestant
Storyline: 4 vichon 2
Contestant ne apni hadh-beeti sunai, jo ki kise lai vi judge karna mushkil ae,
par je judging criteria dekhiye ta ehna da moral ta bohat aacha aa,
ki apne parents da satikar karo and auhna nu proud feel karao, par with all due respect - message story de nal changi tara judd nahi paya.
Performance: 6 wichon 4
i liked the intro, bas hadd-beeti sunan lageya .. you could leave out sentences like 'so emotional hon lai ready ho jao'.
Story di shurvat te ant song nal kiti gaye, jo ki listener ute kafi prabhavashali rehnda,
baki background music da sahara lai ke, kahani nu vadya tareeke nal listener tak pounchaya contestant ne. Judge 3
Pehla te ji sarya da dhanwaad jinha ne hissa liya is comp ch. Sarya ne boht vadia khania sunayia , kuj sikhan nu milya. Sarya nu mubarka. Sadi majboori thode effort nu judge karna pai riha mafi chahage ji . :rabb:
Contestant 1:
Inha ne boht sohni khani sunayi. Ajj de boht hi gambheer dukhant nu darsaundi mann nu tumban vali. Marde jande insani jazbataa nu haloondi es khani nu vadia dhang naal nibhaya. Par thode thehrao di kami laggi es vich. Baki sab vadia tareeke naal nibhaya.
Storyline vaste ehna nu 4 no.
Performance layi 4 no
Contestant 2:
Ehna ne bachya de layi khani sunayi. Khania bachya nu sab to vadh bhaundia ne te eh es kamm ch mahir lagde ne k bachya nu kive khush rakhya janda. Apne effort ch
Poori tra khare uttre ne. Par vich ik do jgah ehna nu v track te aun nu thoda zor launa pya lagda bhull gaye c. Ik slah e ji khanikar nu eh dhyaan zroor rakhna chahida k ohna de readers or listeners kaun ne.
Story line layi 2.5
Performance layi poore 6 no.
Contestant 3:
Hanji ehna di khani mai personally kafi enjoy kitti. Eh khani mai aap suni hoyi aa meri daddi kolo. Bt she was better :pagel:
Tuc v vadia sikhya den vali story sunayi. Bt ik laiy di kami jihi c. Khani ruk ruk k agge vadh rahi c. Kafi confuse jihe hoye paye c tuc. Bt natural way naal sunayi story.
Storyline layi 2 no.
Performance layi : 5 no.
Contestant 4:
Inha ne vadia khani chuni maasoomiyat bhari. Kise da v dil ro pawe ik masoom de aise jazbaat sun k. Khani sunayi v vadia dhang naal. Ik laiy vich. Gambheer awaz vadia andaaz.
Storyline layi 4 no.
Performance layi 5 no.
Contestant 5:
Inha ne jo hadbiti sunayi e. Sab to zyada parbhawit karan vali c. Shayd es layi k oh effortless c. Apne dil de jazbaat bakhoobi pesh kite. Jive kise sahmne baithe naal galla kar rahe hon.
Par mai muafi manda k tuhanu mai es judgment cho bahr rakh riha. Mere apne vichar mutabik khanikar nu har tra de te har kise de jazbaat mehsoos karne te byan karne aune chahide. Par tuc apni hi khani suna k apne aap nu limited jiha kar lya. Beshak tuhada effort sab to vadia. Es layi mai muafi chahuga.
Tuhanu mai koi number ni de sakda , kise de jazbata nu koi kiwe numbera ch tol sakda. Sry ji Judge 4
Contestant 1 - Nanni Pari
Story = 3
Length poori a
Nice story…bahut meaningful....ik social problem naal related....par linear te coherent nahi….Kade narrator intervene karda characters di gall introduce karn lei kade nahi…..
bahut vadiya sikheya dindi a.
Performance : 3
It’s nice that contestant tried to give the character different voice…par couldn’t maintain it coherently till the end....Rabb ji te narrator di avaj mil jandi.....better ho sakdi si inserting also more pauses...Starting sohni hoi si...Par end tak maintain nahi hoi
Total = 6
Contestant 2 - Lella
Story = 4
Length fine a (more than 3 min)
Nice and funny story, very linear and cohesive...Narrator da bahut work disea is story ch...
Ik hi story cho 3 morals kad dite, Wah !
Performance= 6
"lelle " da meaning dassan to shuru kar ke end tak bahut vadiya tarah....easily sunai jida bacheya nu sunai jandi....Is contestant nu music di lor ni pei creativity dikhoun lei…awaaj naal hi kmaal kar dita......so alag tarike naal creativity dikhai....ik normal story nu Awaj de andaaz nal funny jehi bna dita and apne comments add karke narrator ne story nu hor vadiya kar dita....Ena de sunaun de andaaz to lagda ke eh competion di spirit nu samj geye
Total = 10
Contestant 3 - Raja
Story= 3
Length sehi a
Story sohni a... Bahut sare listeners nu ona da bachpan yaad aa geya huna par…..coherency and cohesion hai nahi….story jada details and explanations ch kho jandi....
Eh story vi bahut vadiya sikheya dindi , Sab karma da khed.....jo bijeya ohi vadna
Performance: 2
Nice start. Par Stability ni hegi....story sunandi sunadi contestant vi guaach jandi….apne sentences ch thori confuse ho jandi.....she should have used more pauses, dividing it in parts....creativity vi nahi dikhai....
Total = 5
Contestant 4 - Christmas day
Story= length is fine
Story bahut sohni a…Linear,coherent, cohesive…It’s short but it has its start and a coherent ending.
Moral contestant ne explicitly nahi dassea….par story adult audience lei so last words are enough to get the meaning of the story. Kei war insaan kush eda da experience karda …jo ke as a singles episode shayed kush vi na lagge par poori life badal jandi.
Performance = 6
Sab Ton best performance is contestant di a….Story da har ik scene bahut sohna describe kita..... Narrator often intervenes to describe the characters emotions….narrator nu alag te each character nu alag avaj diti... te eh end tak fully maintain vi kita…..should be appreciated also the use of pauses…..
Background ch music di use ch vi creativity….music situations naal change hunda….starting ch chritsmas vala, fer sad ho janda…..overall very nicely performed
Total = 10
Contestant 5-Personal experience
Story = 3.5
Length sehi a
Personal experience sunaya es contestant ne…very sad story...Rabb di raza hundi….Us de Hukam ch sab kush hunda….es lei os nu comment nahi kar sakde
Story ch coherency poori maintain nahi rehi till end…specially last ch last ch aa ke bikhar jandi
story da moral nahi dasde contestant but ik message dinde listeners nu ...jo ke bahut vadiya a
Performance = 6
Nice use of music….Song nal story introduce kiti….background ch music chalda reha….last te rok dita to have the attention on the words…to be noticed also the change of tone…that comes actually naturally because it’s a personal experience
Total = 9.5[/size] Critics Choice
Judge 1Total Marks : 10 contestant 1 :10 Percentage out of 40% : 10/10 x = 40% contestant 2 :9.5 Percentage out of 40% : 38% contestant 3 :8.5 Percentage out of 40% : 34% contestant 4: 9Percentage out of 40% : 36% contestant 5:10 Percentage out of 40% : 40% Judge 2contestant 1:9 Percentage out of 40% : 36% contestant 2:10 Percentage out of 40% : 40% contestant 3:7 Percentage out of 40% : 28% contestant 4:8.5 Percentage out of 40% : 34% contestant 5:6 Percentage out of 40% : 24% Judge 3contestant 1:8 Percentage out of 40% : 32% contestant 2:8.5 Percentage out of 40% : 34% contestant 3:7 Percentage out of 40% : 28% contestant 4:9 Percentage out of 40% : 36% contestant 5:0 Percentage out of 40% : 0% Judge 4contestant 1:6Percentage out of 40% : 24% contestant 2:10 Percentage out of 40% : 40% contestant 3:5 Percentage out of 40% : 20% contestant 4:10Percentage out of 40% : 40% contestant 5:9.5 Percentage out of 40% : 38% Average of all the judgescontestant 1:33% contestant 2::38% contestant 3:27.5% contestant 4:36.5% contestant 5:25.5% Total pointsContestant 1 : 17.4%+33%=50.40% Contestant 2 :1.95+38%= 39.95% Contestant 3: 7.75%+27.5%=35.25% Contestant 4: 7.75%+36.5%=44.25% Contestant 5: 25.5+25%= 50.50% and the winner is (contestant no. 5) Mani Kaur   PS: Special thanks to all the judges & Mr. Chhalla(takneeqi uljhana nal aap ne jaanu karwaya) , deepsandhu (for her hard work) for making this huge! Contestant no. 1 = Sehaj Randhawa
Contestant no. 2 = Grenade Singh
Contestant no. 3 = taur kaur
Contestant no. 4 = Sareef_jatt
contestant no. 5 = Mani Kaur  Je kise ne math dekhna howe tan spreadsheet sshot dekh sakde and mein file wi send kar sakda.
Maafi zaroor mangde a, sareef jatt bai ton, galti naal winner saabit karta. As consolation, Sareef_jatt nu 1 mahina mod banan da offer ditta janda hai. Kise wi staff member or menu msg kar sakde.
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« on: June 21, 2014, 01:13:16 PM »
aport te eh bahut khedi yaaran ne inter school matches bahut khede jadon asin 6th grade ch hunde si.. par ah teama jehia bare kujh khas pata ni... es lai "no comments" :pagel:
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« on: June 21, 2014, 12:12:00 PM »
"ਸਹਸ ਸਿਆਣਪਾ ਲਖ ਹੋਹਿ ਤ ਇਕ ਨ ਚਲੈ ਨਾਲਿ ॥ (sehas siyaanpa lakh hoye'h ta ikk na chlai nal)"
Man budhi duara prabhu tak pahunch sakna asambhav hai. ous sarab-giyaata nu koi aapne gyaan nal kiwe prapat kar sakda hai? Guru Nanak sahib kehnde han,
"sehas syaanap pvai n tau||"
Guru Arjan dev ji kehnde han,
"sehas syaanap nh milai meri jinduriye jan nanak gurmukh jaata raam||"
budhi ya syaanap manukh nu apne aap dharamta nahi bna dendi. raavan nu dehsir matalb das siran wala keha janda hai kyun k 4 veda te 6 darshana da gyaan os diyan ungliyan te si. ene gyaan de bawjood v oh apne man nu kaabu na kar skeya te na hi neki te sachai de raah te na chal skeya.
guru Nanak sahib da farmaan hai:
"padhiya moorakh aakhiye jis lab lobh ahankaara ||
nao padhiyai nao bhujhiyai gurmat veechara|| "
lobh te hankaar nu janam den wali vidvata viyarth hai. aale duaale nazar maar ke dekh lao ajj vigyaan ne bahut tarraki kar layi hai. par gyaan di varton manvatan di bhalayi lai ghat te os di tabahi layi jyada kiti ja rahi hai. budhi do dhari talwar hai. oh theek paase vi katt sakdi hai te galat paase vi katt sakdi hai. Budhi sansaar de kaar viyaar layi hai. oh sarab gyaata parmeshwar nu apne gyaan ya apni budhi duaara nahi mil sakde. oh alakh, agam prabhu man-budhi da mazmoon nahi. oh aatma duaara anubhav kita jaan wala param tatt hai.
To Be Continued..... ਕਿਵ ਸਚਿਆਰਾ ਹੋਈਐ ਕਿਵ ਕੂੜੈ ਤੁਟੈ ਪਾਲਿ ॥ (kiv sachiyaara hoyie kiv korhe tutte paal) Guru Sahib ne japuji de pehle shalok wich parmatma nu sach keha hai. Oh parmeshwar sach hai kyunki oh apna adhaar aap hai. Oh sach hai kyunki oh sada ek rang te ek roop rehanda hai.Oh na hi badalda hai te na hi binasda hai. os amar-avinashi parmeshwar ton bina baki har cheez badlanhaar te binasanhaar hai. Es lai guru sahib ne parmeshwar ton bina har cheez nu koorh ya jhooth keha hai.
Guru Sahib rachanaroopi koorh nal prem karn wale nu koorhiyaar te parmatma roopi sach wich smaa k os da roop ho jaan wale viyakti nu sachiyaar kehnde han. aap kehnde han k jeevatma te parmatma wichkaar koorh di kandh hai. eh kandh nu dhaah k koorhiyaar ton sachiyaar bn'an da ikko ikk saadhan man-matt nu tyaag ke apne aap nu parmatma de adheen karna hai.
Guru Amar Das ji da kathan hai,
" trai Gun Kalai ki Sir'i Kaara ||"
Guru Arjan Dev Ji di bani hai,
" Surat dekh n bhool gawaara|| Mithan mohaara Jhooth Pasaara ||
Jag meh koi rehn'u na paaye nehchal ek'u narayana || "
Eh sansaar baharli nazar nal dekhya sacha te sadeevai parteet hunda hai par asal wich maayea da jhootha ya naashwaan pasaara hai. os parmeshwar ton bina sabh kujh naashwaan hai.Guru Nanak sahib "aasa di waar" wich kehnde han,
" Nanak'u Vakhanai benti tudh'u bhaajh'u koorho koorh||"
Aap prabhu roopi sach ton bina baaki har cheez nu koorh kehnde han. Aap ne 'koorh' pad maayea layi vi varteya hai te agyaanta, davait te houme layi vi. koorh di kandh dhahun ton guru sahib da asal bhav maayea, davait, agyaanta ya houme de bandhan torhan ton hai. Aap parmeshwar de hukam di paalna nu eh bandhan torhan da asal saadhan dasde han.
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« on: June 19, 2014, 04:54:09 PM »
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« on: June 19, 2014, 09:14:33 AM »
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« on: June 06, 2014, 11:56:28 AM »
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