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« on: May 12, 2014, 03:28:55 AM »
 Rabb lei shayri nu te asal ch Rabb ji hi judge kar sakde
ohi jaan sakde kine prem vich bhijj ke likhan vale ne likheya
Es lei jo asi judge kar sakde oh poem di external aspect tak hi limited reh sakda. Ik human view human words lei.
Pj staff ne 3 criterions ditia judging lei:
Length: total 3 points
Structure: total 3 points
Content: total 4 points
Length lei points is hisaab naal dite geye:
Minimum 3 paragraphs likhne si, so har ik paraghraph da 1 point.
Paragraph ch mimimum 4 lines chahida , so ¼ = 0.25.
Matlab ik line ghat te -0.25 kite geye
Baki points kide dite oh har poem de lei singularly dassea jaugaJudge 1 Haye baba ji kinna sohna likhya sarya ne. Rabb de layi likhya tuc sare ee kmaal o rabb de layi ainwe nai likhya janda. So jidda competition da asool e ik nu te jitauna paina. Maaf kardyo je koi galti hoje. Gujjer no.1::gujjer ji ne likhya sohna pyar te vichode di gall kiti. Gujjer ji ne kavita di lambayi nu bilkul rule mutabik rakhya so poore 3 no.
Je gall kariye content di ate ohnu pesh karan di ta uche suche jazbaat ne par ohna nu lafza di shakal den ch thodi kami japdi va jisde karke oh jazbaat fikke pai rahe va so 2.5 no.
Te aad madh te ant di gall kariye ik tra di jaldbazi jihi dikhdi e kavita ch so ohde layi 1.5 no. Ditte jande va.
Total : 7
Pangebaaz mutyar::Ehne ne v vadia likhya va. Kavita di lambayi vaste ehna nu poore 3 no. Milde aa.
Content v vadia chunya aa shukar di bhawna te boht vaddi gall aa. Te os nu vadia tra pesh v kita va. So ehna ditte jande 3 no.
Gall karde vaaad madh te ant di ohnu v changi tra nibhaya e laibadh peshkari va so 2.5 no.
Total : 8.5 Garry sandhu ::Garry sandhu ji ne v vadia likhya va. Lambayi lai poore no.3
Content v boht vadia va garry ji da. Te ohnu pesh v boht vadia alfaza ch iksar laey ch kita va. So garry ji nu 3.5 no.
Aad madh te ant di gall kariye ta oh v boht vadia va. Poori kavita vich vichar shuruat to ant takk kahani di tra va. So poore 3 no.
total : 9.5 Desi desi::Dhillon ji ne v vadia likhya va. Bhawe lambayi vich inha di kavita pachad gayi va. Es lai inha nu 1 no.
Par jo content chunya te jehde alfaza ch byan kita va kafi vazandar va so ohde layi 2.8 no.
Aad madh ant di gall kariye ta ohda andaza launa aukha va iko pehre ch. So 1.5 no.
total: 5.3
Kinnu ::Kinnu ji di kavita v boht sohni va lambai lai poore 3 no.
Content boht sohna va kinnu ji da sabar shukar te murshad agge arjoyi kiti va. Te lafza ch jazbaat pesh karan ch v kafi parbhawshali va so 3.5 no.
Aad madh ant v boht laiyatmak va ik saar ohde layi 3.
Total: 9.5Karmveer singh::Karam ji ne v vadia kavita likhi pyar vichode di gall va. Lambai lai ohnanu ditte jande va 2no.
Content v vadia te jazbaat v ubhar rahe va lafza cho ohde layi ditte jande 3 no.
Aad madh ant bare gall kariye ta kavita iksaar e ik vakya poori tra shuru to akhir takk byan kita va. Ohde layi 2.5 no.
total: 7.5Judge 2 sat shri akal ji
jinna users ne particpate kita ohna da bahut bahut sukriya ...
gujar no -1gujar saab likhia sohna .. Rabb nu yaar mann ke..Ishq-haqeeqi nu pesh krn di koshish kiti hai.
lafzan wich thoda thoda sudhaar kita ja sakda si.. pher v bahut sohna likheya. keep it up
point system
based on length -3
based on material -2.5
material tuhade kol bahut si, tusi apni shayiri wich jo murshid de nal ous de taalib da vichora painda hai, os da warnan kita hai te jiwe jiwe shayiri agge wadh'di jandi hai tusi nal nal vichore te birhon di tadaf bare dasea k oh v kiwe baldi agg waang wadh rahi hai. tuhadi eh kavita kise sufi kalaam nalon ghat nahi. bahut sohna!
based on starting nd ending - 2.5
total points - 8pangebazz mutyarhanji pangebazz sohna likhia tusi.. par thodia kujh lines copy kita hoyea
jidan first line a eh song di a lakh vari kra sukarana rab da..bakki hor v lines ne jehdia copy ne .. second pharagraph di lines first two eh v common lines ne aksar use hundia ne
bakki gud se ... keep it up
point system
based on length- 2
length de hisab nal topic sohna se .. keep it up
based on material - 1.5
material kujh words copy ne .. jidan mai phela he keha a .. aghe tho esh gal da kiyal rakhia jave..
based on starting nd ending - 1.5
starting tho ley k end tak sohna se ...
edda he likhde raho ..
total points - 5garry sandhu sandhu saab kaim likhiya tusi.. rab ek bahut he senstive topic a .. tusi apne words nal eh kehn di himaat kiti a .. rab apne dil vich he a.. ohnu laban di lodd he nae .. its very nice ..
point system
based on length- 2.5
length puri sahi se .. topic v sohna likhia ji
based on material - 3
hanji material v sohna se ... sachia gallan likhia ne ..
based on starting nd end - 2
suru tho end tak sohna se .. bs minor he mistakes ne ..,keep it up ..u rocks ;)
total points- 7.5Desi desisukriya for d particpate .. really sad bahut shoota likhia .. atleast thodi length ta deni se topic nu ...
total points
based on length - 1
length de hisab nal topic bahut small a ...
based on material - 1.3
material v bahut gatt a ..
based on strting nd end - 1.5
suru kitho kita mukk kithe gya kujh nae pta lagda ..
total marks -3.8ni yaar tera malang jeha malang sohna likhiya bt pharagraph bna k likhde ta .. its luks awsme...
bakki thnk ju for particpate
point system
based on length - 2
lenght de hisab nal topic sohna se
based on material - 1.5
material hor likhia ja sakda se .. jinna material se its not so sufficent for the topic ..
based on starting nd end - 1
suru tho end tak ek he tappe ch mukkata sab kujh... so its not gud
total points -4.5karamveer singhhanji sardar saab sohna likhia tusi..
edda he likhde raho .. thodi kalam jis din boldi a kaher he kardi a ji
point system
based on length- 2.5
hanji length kujh gatt se topic se .. bakki topic bahut sohna se esh te hor v likhia ja sakda se
based on material - 2.5
material collection sohni se ...
based on starting nd end - 2
starting nd ending is really gud
total points -7Judge 3 Gujjar no. 1 Length = 3
Structure = 3
Bahut hi khoob structure a. Couplet and Quatrain alternate hunde hoe refrain nal jurde a. Introduction ch dassde ki contest a poem da (Rabb ton vichora) , going on explain karde kida kida asar hunda es vichore de dukh da tee da and finally conclude karn lage dass jande kis had tak eh vichore di peer chale geyi.
Content = 4
Jis insaan nu Rabb hi hond da ik war ehsaas ho jae, us da Rabb ton vichr ke ki haal hunda eh es poem ch bahut sohni tarah dassea geya. Har ik verse jazbaat naal bharea hoea a. Shayed pehli baar par ken a lagge na ke eh Rabb di gall ho rehi a….. Par Rabb nu peyaar karn valeya nu samj jande ke Rabb nall Peyaar di te Rabb ton vishore di gall ho rehi
Total = 10Pangebaaz mutteyarLength = 3
Structure = 2.5
The two stophes are well divided according to two different themes: first one talks about the poetess and the second talks about the world . But introduction te conclusion da apas ch mel nahi banda. Introduction is completely detached from the themes treated in the next paragraphs. Paragraph de vich verses ik doosre naal sohni tarah jurde par they stay autonomous from the rest.
Content = 2.5
Rabb di gall marginally hundi. It's a bit off topic. The majority of the words is referred to the poetess herself and to the world
Total = 8
Garry SandhuLength = 3
Structure = 3
Structure poem da bahut sohna . Introductive verses ch dassea kis matter te next strophes ch gall houghi (Rabb nu pauna). First strophe is accuratly dedicated to explain da problem in various terms and the second strophe gives the solution and than it concludes with a nice exhortation.
Content = 4
Shuru to le ke end tak har word Rabb nu paun di gall kar reha. Es matter da har point touch kita geya. Je ik passe eh dassea ke loki kida Rabb nu paun di koshish karde, doosre passe apna personal view vi dita. Te end khud nu Rabb nu paun lei zor dindea hoya kmaal hi kar diti. it's a complete in the true sense of the term.
Total=10Desi Desi Length = 1 oh my God , it’s really a pity ke eh eni shoti a
Structure= 3
4 verses apas vich well related a, kush ukhrea ukhrea nahi lagda
Content = 3
Poem Rabb agge ik question kardi a. Par Theme di har aspect cover nahi kardi. Rabb di gall karn vaste Rabb age apnia problems rakhan da matter choose kita, oh matter poori tarah develop nahi kita. Rabb di Sifat Salah, jan Rabb nal prem di gall reh geyi. Shayed je lambi hundi tan eh kami vi poori ho jandi.
Total=7Ni tera yaar malang jehaLength = 3
Structure= 1.7
Introduction te conclusion ik doosre naal related a. vich vale kush verses mein theme, jo introduction vich dassi geyi, ode to passe hat jande, so structure ik saar maintain nahi rehnda, breaks aa jande.
Content = 3
Poem expressly Rabb nu dedicated a. kei points nu include karan di koshish kiti geyi (Rabb te insaan da relation, Rabb nu kida Pauna, Rabb di power creat te destroy karn lei), par eh sare incompleted shadd dite geye, fully develope ni hoe.
Total=7.7Karamveer SinghLength = 3
Structure = 3
poem is accurately divided in strophes: on describes the past and the second describes the present. Jo Introduction ch announce kita onu well maintain kita throughout the poem.
Content = 4
Es poem ch menu apna haal nazar aya. Shayed har kise Rabb nu peyaar karn vale nu apna haal nazar aya houga. Keo ke poem sirf 12 lines eh dass jandi ke Rabb nu milan te ki hunda, te Rabb ton vichran te ki hunda. Koi gall adhoori shaddi hi ni Karam veer ji ne
Total = 10 | Voter | Voted for | Posts | Status | | ashfaq_gujr | Gujjar no.1 | 6712 | Y | | apurv | Gujjar no.1 | 2833 | Y | | kamal.preet | Gujjar no.1 | 6501 | Y | | rajinder62 | Gujjar no.1 | 2226 | Y | | Mani Kaur | Gujjar no.1 | 3023 | Y | | pj | Gujjar no.1 | 17 | N | | ♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥ | Gujjar no.1 | 315 | Y | | shahzaib sandhu | Gujjar no.1 | 0 | N | | Lucha_Indien | pangebaaz mutiyaar | 5035 | Y | | Jatt. | pangebaaz mutiyaar | 3374 | Y | | Sweet_Desi_kuri | pangebaaz mutiyaar | 3542 | Y | | sanjana gill | pangebaaz mutiyaar | 4738 | Y | | deep shergill | pangebaaz mutiyaar | 541 | Y | | MANU MAAN | pangebaaz mutiyaar | 1312 | Y | | sandhuonline | Sandhu faridkotiya | 3123 | Y | | JAtt In sTYle | Sandhu faridkotiya | 7982 | Y | | The desi dude | Sandhu faridkotiya | 4075 | Y | | NoorSandhu | Sandhu faridkotiya | 4642 | Y | | preet14 | Sandhu faridkotiya | 3631 | Y | | jaspreetmand | Sandhu faridkotiya | 6603 | Y | | kala naag | Sandhu faridkotiya | 66 | N | | Dreamer | Sandhu faridkotiya | 32 | N | | lado_rani | Karamveer Singh | 14528 | Y | | s_deep | Karamveer Singh | 297 | Y | | inder.shergill | Karamveer Singh | 1166 | Y | | NIMANI KAMAL | Karamveer Singh | 1407 | Y | | laraki_jatti | Karamveer Singh | 1653 | Y | | pam_sandhu | Karamveer Singh | 591 | Y | | rabbdabanda | Karamveer Singh | 5616 | Y | | Mor di Morni | Karamveer Singh | 1374 | Y | | behl.him | Karamveer Singh | 796 | Y | | Manmeeet | Karamveer Singh | 702 | Y | | RooH | Karamveer Singh | 293 | Y |
| Top User | Votes | 100+ Voters | | Gujjar no.1 | 6 | ashfaq_gujr, apurv, kamal.preet, rajinder62, Mani Kaur, ♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥ | | pangebaaz mutiyaar | 6 | Lucha_Indien, Jatt., Sweet_Desi_kuri, sanjana gill, deep shergill, MANU MAAN | | Sandhu faridkotiya | 6 | sandhuonline, JAtt In sTYle, The desi dude, NoorSandhu, preet14, jaspreetmand | | Karamveer Singh | 11 | lado_rani, s_deep, inder.shergill, NIMANI KAMAL, laraki_jatti, pam_sandhu, rabbdabanda, Mor di Morni, behl.him, Manmeeet, RooH |
 Janta's Choice Total Votes Cast : 29 (excluding voters less than 100 posts)
Gujjar no. 1 : 6 votes
Percentage out of 50% : 6/29x 50% = 10.34%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar :6 votes
Percentage out of 50% : 10.34%
Sandhu Faridkotia : 6 votes
Percentage out of 50% : 10.34%
Karamveer: 11 Votes
Percentage out of 50% : 18.96%
Critics Choice
Judge 1
Total Marks : 10
Gujjar no.1 : 7
Percentage out of 50 : 7/10 x 50% = 35%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 8.5
Percentage out of 50% : 42.5%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 9.5
Percentage out of 50%: 47.5%
DesiDesi : 5.3
Percentage out of 50%: 26.5%
Kinu : 9.5
Percentage out of 50%: 47.5%
Karamveer : 7.5
Percentage out of 50%: 37.5%
Judge 2
Total Marks : 10
Gujjar no.1 : 8
Percentage out of 50 : 8/10 x 50% = 40%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 5
Percentage out of 50% : 25%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 7.5
Percentage out of 50%: 37.5%
DesiDesi : 3.8
Percentage out of 50%: 19%
Kinu : 4.5
Percentage out of 50%: 22.5%
Karam : 7
Percentage out of 50%: 35%
Judge 3
Total Marks : 10
Gujjar no.1 : 10
Percentage out of 50 : 10/10 x 50% = 50%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 8
Percentage out of 50% : 40%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 10
Percentage out of 50%: 50%
DesiDesi : 7
Percentage out of 50%: 35%
Kinu : 7.7
Percentage out of 50%: 38.5%
Karamveer : 10
Percentage out of 50%: 50%
Average of all the judges
Gujjar no.1 : 41.66%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 35.83%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 45%
DesiDesi : 26.83%
Kinu : 36.16%
Karamveer : 40.83%
Total points
Gujjar no.1 : 41.66% + 10.34% = 52%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 35.83% + 10.43% = 46.17%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 45% + 10.34% = 55.34%
DesiDesi : 26.83%
Kinu : 36.16%
Karamveer : 40.83% + 18.96% = 59.79%
Final Winner Of the Competition
KARAMVEER SINGH with 59.79% :superhappy:
=D> =D> =D> :blowout:Everyone who participated did a great job. Each poetry was full of emotions, described very well and truly enjoyed it. Please do not take this scoring to your heart. The ONE & ONLY ONE reason if anyone has got less points it's only because of the requirements that I was given to keep in mind while scoring otherwise each and every one of you deserved full marks. To be honest no one should be rated because Poetry is full emotions and personal feelings and who am I to judge someone's personal feelings. The only reason this is being rated is so a winner can be decided otherwise we can never decide who won, right? You all did great job and please keep on writing for yourself and PJ.
Well Done everyone & Good Luck!
Thank you :)
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« on: May 11, 2014, 08:31:29 AM »
Sat Shri Akal! Pj Nivaasio! Ajj Apa hun final Winner Result declare karn jaa rhe aa apne PJ Shayri Competition layi. so, dheyaan nal zarra apne pen pencila kadd lo, hisaab-kitaab bathera krna paina :D: :D:
Sarean ne bahut sohna likheya!! watt kadd te main keha haneria leyaatia :rockon:
chakkte fatte... :excited:
Judge 1 Laraki jatti:: Laraki jatti ji ne pj lai vadia te detail ch dassya va so poore 3 no.
Inni lambi kawita ch Content v kafi hadd takk poora kita gya va har jazbaat likhya va par kite kite lafza da her fer aa laey to bhatakdi kite kite so 3 no.
Aad madh ant Bare gall kariye ta ohde ne 2.5 no.
Total : 8.5Pangebaaz mutyar : Pangebaaz ji ne v vadia likhya va. Lambayi lai poore 3no.
Te pj de sare pangya bare detail ch dassya v vadia content aa par kite kite peshkari vich ooch neech va pehre bnaun lagge vazan da khyaal
Ni rakhya va. So ehde layi 3 no.
Aad madh ant bare gall kariye ta poori gall nu vadia dhang naal darsya va ehde layi poore 3 no.
total : 9
Garry sandhu ::Sandhu ji ne es likhat vich v kmaal kitti va. Lambai lai poore3 no.
Content te peshkari v kmaal e ohde layi poore 4 no.
Aad madh ant vich pj da asli roop pesh karan ch poore safal hoye va so ohde layi v poore 3 no.
total : 10Desi desi::Dhillon ji ne pj bare vadia likhya par fer ohna nu lambayi maar gayi. So sirf 1 no.
Content vich pj di gall ghat te apne jazbaat zyada share kite va so ehde layi 1.5 no.
Aad madh ant bare kuj v kehna mushkil hai so 1 no.
total : 3.5
Kinnu:: Kinnu ji ne eh kavita v vadia likhi va. Lambayi layi 2.5 no
Content di gall kariye ta oh v kafi mazedaar aa te pj ta boht vadia naughty pakh sahmne rakhda va te peshkari v vadia va so 3.5 no.
Aad madh ant v vadia ik gall layi te usda visthar kita te baad ch krara jya ant es gall layi poore 3no.
Total : 9Judge 2 sat shri akal ji
HAnji sab ne vadiya likhiya .. larakhi jatti - larakhi jatti ji tusi vadiya likhia ji..thode kol material vadiya se par tusi peresent vadiya nahi kita ji..suru tho ley k end tak kujh pta nahi lagda ji
tappe bna k likhna chaida se thonu ji..odda pj barre bahut theek lagia
keep it up ..
point sytem --
based on length-- 2
lenght de hisab nal thoda way of written is very impressive ..
lines de ta watt kaddte
based on material --3.5
jidan mai upper likhia thode kol material bahut vadiya se ji
tusi hareek barre likhia pj de user lyi .. eh koi koi he kar sakda
thodi kalam da jwab nahi ..
based on starting nd ending -- 1.1
thode topic ch sab gallan theek se ji
bas tusi starting nd ending karn ch galati kar gaye
thoda way of presnt is not gud .this is really disconforting
tappe bna k likhna c .. kitho suru kita kithe katam kita kujh nahi pta lag reha ji
total marks - 6.5
pangebazz mutiyar -- hanji tusi bahut vadiya likhia .. thoda way of writing is great !! tusi nikkia nikkia gallan include kitia .. dil bar bar read karn nu kari janda ji ..
edda he likhde raho ji .. keep it up
point sytsem
based on length- 2.6
hanji mutiyar ji tusi topic di length sahi rakhi ..
suru tho ley k same length nal likhia ...
based on material - 3
hanji mutiyar ji tusi pj barre hor v likh sakde se enna sohne topic se ji thode kol
par jinna material se thode kol sahi se ..
based on starting nd ending- 2
Tusi mutiyar ji suru te end theek kita .. overall v theek se thoda sab
total marks-7.6sandhu fardikotia - hanji tusi vadda sohna likhiya ji pj layi apne diffenrt view dite ji..thora hor lamba likhn di try karni se ji . bakki keep it up buddy
point system
based on length- 2.4
hanji length de hisab nal thoda likhia hoyea vadiya ji .. bs tusi ji shyari same length ch nae kiti
kujh lines lambhia kartia kujh shootia
ji.. waise likhia ji sohna tusi ji
based on material - 3
hanji sandhu ji tusi material nu sahi way ch likhia ji . thodi shyari de kya kehne ji .. tusi ek differnt trah likhia ji
based on starting nd ending - 2
hanji thodi starting nd ending vaddi vadiya se .. dil karda se bar bar read kari javo ji ...
total marks -7.4desi desi - hanji ji tusi vadda sohna likhia ji ..thori jahi length vaddi likhni se ji
bakki tusi participate ta kita ji its nice
point system
based on length - 1.1
hanji tusi length vaddi gatt rakhi se topic di ji.. thoda jeha hor likh dinde ta award ley he jande ..lol
based on material- 1.6
hanji s ji kya kehne .. material jinna v kol se sahi way nal persent kita ji
based on starting nd ending - 1.5
hanji suru vadiya kita se tusi ji
par the end sahi nahi kita ji
total marks -4.2
ni yaar tera malang jeha aka kinnu - hanji your shyari about punjabi janta is nice .. tusi apne topic ch jinna likhia vadiya likhia keep it up
point system
based on length - 1.5
hanji length de hisab nal thoda topic bahut chootha se ... tusi jadda tho jadda likhn di koshish karni c .. aghe tho kiyal rakhna ji
based on material - 1.5
hanji materail jinna haiga se ohnu hor increase karn di koshish karni chaidi se thonu ji ...bakki jinna likhia sohna likhia
based on starting nd end - 1
ek pharagraph ch se sarra kujh likha .. tappe bna k likhna de your way of presntation is not so gud ...
total marks -4Judge 3 Laraki Jatti Length = 3
Structure = 3
Very narrative structure. Introduction ch dass dita kis matter te gall karni te audience nu sunan di appeal vi kiti. Jo matter Introduction ch dassea onu completely develop kita in next verses by telling the whole journy on pj from very first days to the current situation. Conclusion reflect karda introduction nu: she addresses to the audience as in the introduction.
Content = 4
Pj nu fully dedicated poem a. Directly apna experience dassde hoe, indirectly pj da sohna jeha mahol vi describe kar dita.
Total=10Pangebaaz MutteyarLength = 3
Structure = 3
Eh vi vadiya structure a. It starts lightly and than becomes more and more intense, giving in each strophe more details about the life on pj.
Content = 3.8
Nice poem a, bilkul vi off topic nahi jandi . Pj da mahol sohni tarah describe kardi, even staff di gall hundi. Bas thore personal experience , views/feelings di gall adhoori reh geyi
Total =9.8Sandhu FreedkotiaLength = 3
Structure = 3
There’s a really nice structure. First strophe is a nice introduction. The next two strophes divides wisely the two important themes : personal feelings about pj and what peopole do on pj. The last strophe concludes the poem recalling the introduction. Really well structured poem
Content = 4
The poem has nothing to object/criticise. It deals with the theme without going off topic. Covers every aspect of the theme. There are both subjective views, personal feelings about pj and objective views on pj. It’s full of emotions from first to last verse. Overall a complete Poem.
Total = 10Desi Desi Length = 1.75 (0.25 x 6)
Structure = 3
Very beautifully structured. There’s a clear start, a main part and a clear conclusion. In few words he tells the story of these messages: how he finds them, what effect they do on him, and what he would like to with them.
Content = 3
The poem is full of emotions, feelings, but pity ! it’s a bit off topic because the main topic of the poem seems to be messages. Anyway, If he doesn’t talk about pj in general, he does talk about effects of pj on him.
Total=7.75Ni yaar tera malang jiha urf kinnu Length = 2 (-0.24 x 4)
Structure = 1,7
Har do verses touches different topics. Apas ch sari poem Rhyme “ook” karan juri hoi a. Par sari poem di ik common thought nahi lagdi jis uppar gall kiti ja rehi. What lacks is the "leitmotiv" of the poem.
Content =3.5
Poem off topic nahi jandi. Beshak expressly pj di gall nahi hundi lagdi keo ke pj nu nominate nahi kita, par har verse ch pj implicitly dikh rehi. Har verse pj naal related a. In last verses the poem nearly covered the aspect of "life on pj". However there’s a lack of pj’s effect on the poet. Emotions ghat a.
Total=7.2  | Voter | Voted for | Posts | Status | | ashfaq_gujr | laraki jatti (pj layi shayri) | 6712 | Y | | NIMANI KAMAL | laraki jatti (pj layi shayri) | 1407 | Y | | behl.him | laraki jatti (pj layi shayri) | 796 | Y | | skeemy dhillon | laraki jatti (pj layi shayri) | 695 | Y | | ♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥ | laraki jatti (pj layi shayri) | 315 | Y | | desi_jatt077 | laraki jatti (pj layi shayri) | 21 | N | | Lucha_Indien | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 5035 | Y | | Jatt. | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 3374 | Y | | sanjana gill | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 4738 | Y | | deep shergill | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 541 | Y | | Mani Kaur | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 3023 | Y | | rabbdabanda | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 5615 | Y | | Mor di Morni | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 1374 | Y | | kala naag | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 66 | N | | Manmeeet | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 702 | Y | | RooH | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 293 | Y | | sandhuonline | Sandhu fridkotia (pj layi shayri) | 3123 | Y | | KohiNoor | Sandhu fridkotia (pj layi shayri) | 9838 | Y | | s_deep | Sandhu fridkotia (pj layi shayri) | 297 | Y | | kamal.preet | Sandhu fridkotia (pj layi shayri) | 6501 | Y | | The desi dude | Ni yaar tera malang jiha urf kinnu (pj layi shayri) | 4075 | Y | | laraki_jatti | Ni yaar tera malang jiha urf kinnu (pj layi shayri) | 1653 | Y |
| Top User | Votes | 100+ Voters | | laraki jatti (pj layi shayri) | 5 | ashfaq_gujr, NIMANI KAMAL, behl.him, skeemy dhillon, ♥♥ ਗਭਰੂ ਚੋਟੀ ਦਾ ♥♥ | | pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri) | 9 | Lucha_Indien, Jatt., sanjana gill, deep shergill, Mani Kaur, rabbdabanda, Mor di Morni, Manmeeet, RooH | | Sandhu fridkotia (pj layi shayri) | 4 | sandhuonline, KohiNoor, s_deep, kamal.preet | | Ni yaar tera malang jiha urf kinnu (pj layi shayri) | 2 | The desi dude, laraki_jatti |
Janta's ChoiceTotal Votes Cast : 20 (excluding voters less than 100 posts)
Laraki Jatti : 5 votes
Percentage out of 50% : 5/20x 100% = 25% = 12.5%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar :9 votes
Percentage out of 50%: 45% = 22.5%
Sandhu Faridkotia : 4 votes
Percentage out of 50%: 20% = 10%
Kinu: 2 Votes
Percentage out of 50%: 10% = 5%Critics Choice
Judge 1
Total Marks : 10
Laraki Jatti : 8.5
Percentage out of 50 : 8.5/10 x 50% = 42.5%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 9
Percentage out of 50% : 45%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 10
Percentage out of 50%: 50%
DesiDesi : 3.5
Percentage out of 50%: 17.5%
Kinu : 9
Percentage out of 50%: 45%
Judge 2
Total Marks : 10
Laraki Jatti : 6.5
Percentage out of 50 : 6.5/10 x 50% = 32.5%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 7.6
Percentage out of 50% : 38%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 7.4
Percentage out of 50%: 37%
DesiDesi : 4.2
Percentage out of 50%: 21%
Kinu : 4
Percentage out of 50%: 20%
Judge 3
Total Marks : 10
Laraki Jatti : 10
Percentage out of 50 : 10/10 x 50% = 50%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 9.8
Percentage out of 50% : 49%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 10
Percentage out of 50%: 50%
DesiDesi : 7.75
Percentage out of 50%: 38.75%
Kinu : 7.2
Percentage out of 50%: 36%Average of all the judges
Laraki Jatti : 41.66%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 44%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 45.66%
DesiDesi : 25.75%
Kinu : 33.66%
Total points
Laraki Jatti : 41.66% + 12.5% = 54.16%
Pangebaaz Mutiyaar : 44% + 22.5% = 66.5%
Sandhu Faridkotiya : 45.66% + 10% = 55.66%
DesiDesi : 25.75% + 0% = 25.75%
Kinu : 33.66% + 5% = 38.66%
Final Winner Of the CompetitionPangebaaz Mutiyaaar with 66.5% :superhappy: =D> =D> =D> :blowout: Everyone who participated did a great job. Each poetry was full of emotions, described very well and truly enjoyed it. Please do not take this scoring to your heart. The ONE & ONLY ONE reason if anyone has got less points it's only because of the requirements that I was given to keep in mind while scoring otherwise each and every one of you deserved full marks. To be honest no one should be rated because Poetry is full emotions and personal feelings and who am I to judge someone's personal feelings. The only reason this is being rated is so a winner can be decided otherwise we can never decide who won, right? You all did great job and please keep on writing for yourself and PJ.
Well Done everyone & Good Luck!
Thank you :)
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« on: May 02, 2014, 01:40:49 AM »
Sat Shri Akal sajjno!
Shayiri Rabb de layi theme layi,
es poll wich voting karo ji!
Dhanwaad! Entries RABB DE LAYI SHAYRI GUJJAR NO.1
mere dill da weda ujad gaya mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya main kenu payar de geet sunaa meri qismat da sitara weged gaya har raat nu chan bolanda ey mere dill de zakhm sunada ey mere payar diyan gallan kar kar ke o channi naal udanda ey meri haavan vich o rehnda ey o apni gall te akd gaya mere dill da weda ujad gaya mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya menu dill te koi ikhtiyar nai eyhnu tere sawa payar nai ethee koi karda payar nai ethee mousam naal bihaar nai mere dill nu pera vich regd gaya menu waang dushmana jikd gaya mere dill da weda ujad gaya mera yaar mere tu weachd gaya PANGEBAAZ MUTYAR URF NIMANI DEEP Har Vele Kara Sukrana Rabb Da Har vele kara sukrana rabb da rakhda khyaal hai jo sabda har vele kara sukrana rabb da na kade maada sochain , na kade maada kahain os rabb di rajja vich , raji sada rahain jhukdi na kise aage ,waheguru de dar te kardi haan sajda har vele karain sukrana rabb da teri es duniya de lok v ajeeb ne karde ne dhokha jo v aounde kreeb ne na koi gila , na shikwa kara vakho vakh hunda a subah sabda har vele kara sukrana rabb da jo tu dukh dite hasske kbool kite dukhain nu hasseya ch badaln vale kuj dost dite de k khusi de bhandar ,diti meri zindgi sudahar dita janam anmol “deep” nu ,jo labheya na labhda har vele kara sukrana rabb da GARRY SANDHU FARIDKOTIA
Rabb hai k jabh hai.. Milda hi nhi..! Ethe jorr laya sabh hai.. Milda hi nhi..! Kuj paa lainde jungla cho.. Kuj mandra vich v taras rhe..! Kuj jhuggi vich v labh lainde.. Kuj paise lakhan khrch rhe..! Ethe sbh andar rabb hai.. Dikhda hi nhi..! Rabb hai k jabh hai....... Je rabb nu pauna "sandhu'a" oye.. Shd jhoothe eh dikhawe..! Ethe sach syane aakh gye.. Rabb Milda Greebi Daave..! Kyu goorhi neendar soun gya tu.. Hillda hi nhi..! Rabb hai k jabh hai.. Milda hi nhi..! Ethe jorr laya sabh hai.. Milda hi nhi..! © Garry Sandhu Faridkotiya DESI DESI Rabba Mai naa samjh haan rabba tainu samjhawa kive, Apni majboori da ehsaas tainu dilawa kive, Tu te khush e apni dunia vich par dhillon nu v ta dass, Apni ujjadi dunia vsawa kive (rajdeep dhillon) ₦ł ₮ɆⱤ₳ Ɏ₳₳Ɽ ₥₳Ⱡ₳₦₲ JɆⱧ₳
Rabba naa kuj mangna hai taitho, na hai koi gila, Bhawe asmaan te chahd de mainu, bhawe mitti de vich mila, Lok ajkal aap hi rabb ho gaye ne, changia kittia krayia da milda na koi sila, Bande di aukat na tere agge koi, bhawe jihnu karde abad mint vich Chahe kise di dunia dewe hila, Murshid nai milda injh kehnde, jinne marzi mathe pitt lai te, jinna marzi chilla, Daulat shohrat loka nu baksh de, mainu sirf ghut sabar da pila. KARAMVIR SINGH Hun oh mere dil vich nai rehnda Pehla te dil ohde chaawaa naal bharya rehnda c , Pehla ta jad mai kuj puchda c ohvi kuj kehnda c, baba! Merya hungarya ch kol beh hungara v bhar lainda c, Pehla te kai galla oh bina bolya hi sun lainda c, Pehla te mere har kamm vich braber hissa lainda c, Par ajj pta ni kyo dil khali khali lagda e , Koi te khtaa hoyi e ,eh khyaal dil nu thagda e, Pehla jithe swer hundi c hun athan charya lagda e , Pehla nirmal chashma c jo hun shappad bharya lagda e , Khyaal ujjde rooh khali jyo full koi jhadya lagda e. Shayd hun oh mere dil vich nahi rehnda :(
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« on: April 30, 2014, 04:38:37 PM »
Hanji! 8->
aapa aagaye ji fer tuhade kol :excited:
eh contest apna simple hi aa ji..
Jo jo apne PJ de gabhru regularly ethe hajiri lwaunde aa sirf ohna de naam paaye ja rhe aa.
Jo tuhade mutabik "Gabhru" hon diya jimewaria nibha reha hai poori trah ohnu vote kro ji!
tusi 3 bandean nu vote pa sakde ho. :smile:
ek war paa k dobara change nahi kar skde es wari so, soch samjh vote paayi jawe :mean:
Basis- jinha nu dhyaan ch rakhde hoye tusi vote pa skde ho:
1) Sabh nal pyaar-satikaar nal bolna.
2) Wadiya topic create karna.
3) PJ de layi kujh na kujh nawa try krde rehna.
4) PJ Forums de layi useful suggestions te PJ de wadiya bhavikh layi change change suggestions dende rehna.
5) nawe users da welcome karna te ohna nu comfortable feel krauna.
6) overall jyada faltu de larhayi jhagde ton door rehna.
Voting:- jo jo vote paun ja reha hai ohna diya posts 100 ya 100 ton wadh honia chahidia hai apni vote count krwaun layi :okk:
majority of members jis nu vote krnge. oh winner declare kita jauga.! Apni vote nu jad tak poll band nai hunda. gupt rakho ji. es trah competition da suspense banea rehnda hai.Chalo ji hojao shuru :dumlak: leaado haneriaa.. chakkdo fatte!!P.S = es topic wich ik option voting layi Non-Gabru da paya jawega. jis ch koi naam nai howega. par jo v tuhadi nazar ch ehna qualities te poora utarda hai osda naam topic ch mention kar skde ho. fer STAFF oste nazar rakh k, soch vichar krega k osnu v gabru di post te leauna chaida hai k nahi :)
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« on: April 20, 2014, 03:23:24 AM »
Khuda da mehal
Guru Nanak sahib jadon kaabe, jo ke mecca shareef wich hai, Kaazi rukamdeen nu mile tan Os ne puchea ke khuda da mehal keho jeha hai?Ohdian kinia khidkiyan te darwaje han? Kine burj han? Kinne kingre han? Hun eh koi mamuli swaal nahi san, gehre vicharan yog san.
Guru Sahib ne jwaab ditta ke es wajood(Insaani shareer) de 12 Burj han – (3 sajji baanh de jod, 3 khabbi baanh de jod, 3 – 3 dowe lattan de jod, kul 12 hoye).
Khuda de mehal de 9 darwaje han, ( 2 kann, 2 akhan, 2 naasa, 1 muh, 2 suraakh thalle de), 52 es de kingre han – (20 nauh, dono hathan te pairan de te 32 dand). Dowe akhan 2 khidkiyan han. Mehal bahut ajeeb te benazir(bemisaal) hai. Sabh kujh smjha ke Guru sahib kehnde han:
“Uppar khaase mehal te dewe baang khudaye ||”
bhav, tuhade wajood(shareer) de andar khuda baang(anhad naad/shabad-dhun) de reha hai. Jehda wajood(shareer) hai ehi rabb di maseet hai. Asin bahar mathe ragarde haan. Ki oh kadi kise nu bahron mileya hai? Koi nahi! Baang(shabad-dhun/anhad naad) tan har ekk de andar ho rahi hai, magar lok sutte hoye ne:-
“Sutte Baang Na sun sakan rahiya khudaye jagaye ||”
Oh malik tan jagauna chahunda hai, magar koi jaagda nahi. Fir kehnde han:
“Sutti Payi nibhaag sabh sune na baanga koi ||”
Oh Lok Badkismat han jehde raat nu jaag ke ous baang(shabad-dhun) nu nahi sunnde.
“ Jo jaage soyi sune saayin sandi soye || “
Jehda jaagda hai, ohdi "surat" baang( shabad) wich lagdi hai, Oho malik di awaz keya, shabad ya naam nu sunnda hai.
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« on: April 16, 2014, 07:43:24 PM »
kidaa pyaareo? :hehe:
bibia de khed mukable cho beebi fighter kaur ji nu jitt da khitaab ditta janda aa!! wadhayia de k nihaal karo!
baaki sarian beebia hi apne PJ diya changian ne.. :excited:
sabh nu mubaarka !! jittan walea nu 250 gram jyada :rockon:
:blowout:
voting details: | Voter | Voted for | Posts | Status | | Lucha_Indien | Pangebaaz Mutiyaar | 4867 | Y | | deep shergill | Pangebaaz Mutiyaar | 540 | Y | | NIMANI KAMAL | Pangebaaz Mutiyaar | 1285 | Y | | punjabi mutiyaar | Pangebaaz Mutiyaar | 128 | Y | | rabbdabanda | Pangebaaz Mutiyaar | 5371 | Y | | s_deep | Taur kaur | 269 | Y | | nambar_dar | Taur kaur | 2100 | Y | | inder.shergill | Taur kaur | 1165 | Y | | jaspreetmand | Taur kaur | 6579 | Y | | Mani Kaur | Taur kaur | 2992 | Y | | NIMANI KAMAL | Taur kaur | 1285 | Y | | Mor di Morni | Taur kaur | 1342 | Y | | JaTt_o1 | Raunak | 10 | N | | rabbdabanda | Raunak | 5371 | Y | | jaspreetmand | Preeti mand | 6579 | Y | | lado_rani | Lado_rani | 14521 | Y | | pOwerLifter | Lado_rani | 10049 | Y | | Sania. | Lado_rani | 1115 | Y | | Mani Sidhu | Lado_rani | 1462 | Y | | lush | Lado_rani | 908 | Y | | ashfaq_gujr | laraki_jatti | 6659 | Y | | Sweet_Desi_kuri | laraki_jatti | 3416 | Y | | riskyjatt01 | laraki_jatti | 2735 | Y | | mundaxrisky | laraki_jatti | 1011 | Y | | jaspreetmand | laraki_jatti | 6579 | Y | | MANU MAAN | laraki_jatti | 1272 | Y | | NIMANI KAMAL | laraki_jatti | 1285 | Y | | gohalsaab | laraki_jatti | 39 | N | | Different Jatti | laraki_jatti | 38 | N | | laraki_jatti | laraki_jatti | 1598 | Y | | lakhwinder singh | laraki_jatti | 13 | N | | behl.him | laraki_jatti | 766 | Y | | innocent grewal | laraki_jatti | 25 | N | | Lucha_Indien | Sanj | 4867 | Y | | Kareena12 | Sanj | 1335 | Y | | rabbdabanda | Sanj | 5371 | Y | | Sweet_Desi_kuri | ღ jαттı 25 мυяαвєα ѵαłłı ღ | 3416 | Y | | apurv | ღ jαттı 25 мυяαвєα ѵαłłı ღ | 2698 | Y | | harmeets1991 | ღ jαттı 25 мυяαвєα ѵαłłı ღ | 1998 | Y | | kamal.preet | ღ jαттı 25 мυяαвєα ѵαłłı ღ | 6316 | Y | | NIMANI KAMAL | ღ jαттı 25 мυяαвєα ѵαłłı ღ | 1285 | Y | | Lucha_Indien | zeherili Jatti | 4867 | Y | | JAtt In sTYle | zeherili Jatti | 7863 | Y | | NoorSandhu | zeherili Jatti | 4637 | Y | | rabbdabanda | zeherili Jatti | 5371 | Y | | rajinder62 | Qainaat | 2229 | Y | | harmeets1991 | Jatt Di Juliet | 1998 | Y | | gohalsaab | Jatt Di Juliet | 39 | N | | NIMANI KAMAL | Deepi Kaur | 1285 | Y | | harmeets1991 | Gurleen | 1998 | Y | | harmeets1991 | Sehaj | 1998 | Y | | harmeets1991 | Manmeet | 1998 | Y | | rabbdabanda | Manmeet | 5371 | Y |
| Top User | Votes | 100+ Voters | | Pangebaaz Mutiyaar | 5 | Lucha_Indien, deep shergill, NIMANI KAMAL, punjabi mutiyaar, rabbdabanda | | Taur kaur | 7 | s_deep, nambar_dar, inder.shergill, jaspreetmand, Mani Kaur, NIMANI KAMAL, Mor di Morni | | Raunak | 1 | rabbdabanda | | Preeti mand | 1 | jaspreetmand | | Lado_rani | 5 | lado_rani, pOwerLifter, Sania., Mani Sidhu, lush | | laraki_jatti | 9 | ashfaq_gujr, Sweet_Desi_kuri, riskyjatt01, mundaxrisky, jaspreetmand, MANU MAAN, NIMANI KAMAL, laraki_jatti, behl.him | | Sanj | 3 | Lucha_Indien, Kareena12, rabbdabanda | | ღ jαттı 25 мυяαвєα ѵαłłı ღ | 5 | Sweet_Desi_kuri, apurv, harmeets1991, kamal.preet, NIMANI KAMAL | | zeherili Jatti | 4 | Lucha_Indien, JAtt In sTYle, NoorSandhu, rabbdabanda | | Qainaat | 1 | rajinder62 | | Jatt Di Juliet | 1 | harmeets1991 | | Deepi Kaur | 1 | NIMANI KAMAL | | Gurleen | 1 | harmeets1991 | | Sehaj | 1 | harmeets1991 | | Manmeet | 2 | harmeets1991, rabbdabanda |
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« on: April 15, 2014, 11:34:02 AM »
Introduction/Bhoomika"Japuji" nu Guru Nanak sahib da shahkaar manneya janda hai. Jis nu Shri Aad Granth da saar keha janda hai. "Japuji" nu poori trah samjh leya jawe tah shri aad Granth wich darj sabh guru sahibaan te doosre sant-Mahatma di baani nu samjhna asaan ho janda hai.Japuji rache jaan da samhaKujh vidhwaana da khyaal hai ke Guru Nanak saheb ne "Japuji" di rachna apne jeevan de antale dina wich keeti. "Japuji" di rachna de samhe bare pakke taur te kujh keh sakna bhawein sambhav na howe par eh gal nishchit hai ke es di mahanta nu dekhde hoye guru arjan dev ji Shri Granth di sampaadna karde samhe "Japuji" nu es mahaan granth de arambh wich darj kita. "japuji" wich sansaar di sarbotam vichardhaara da saar samaayea hoea hai te es nu sansaar de uttam roohani sahit wich shreshat sthaan paraapt hai.
Japuji da adhaar - Nijhi roohani anubhav"Japuji" da adhaar Guru Nanak saheb da nijhi roohani anubhav hai. eh rachna bahron granth shastar padh ke nahi, khud andron pramatma roopi sach de darshan kar k likhi gayi hai. es wich ek pooran satguru ne apne nijhi roohani anubhav de adhaar te parmatma de saroop utte parakaash payea hai te kartapurukh duaara rachna keete jaan di vidhi te rachna de sanchalan wich kam kar rhe niyama da ulekh keeta hai. Guru saheb ne manukh janam de mool udesh utte prakaash payea hai te ous jugti te roohani abhiyaas nal pehchaan karwayi hai. Jis nu apnaa k parmeshwar ton vichhri aatma, murh parmeshwar nal milaap kar sakdi hai. aap ne roohani abhiyaas wich saflta layi lorheende guna da khulaasa keeta hai te jehde roohani mandlan wichon langh ke jeevatma ant nu parmeshwar wich leen hundi hai, ohna da vi haal beyaan keeta hai.
"japuji" nu aam kahani, novel ya naatak waang nahi parh skde. eh goorh sidhaanta utte adharit bahut gehri te vishaal rachna hai. "japuji" wich pargat roohani bhedan nu bhali bhaant samjhan lai eh jaan lena jruri hai ke "japuji" adhiyaatmik ya roohani anubhavan te vichaaran wali rachna hai. es rachna nu samjhan layi roohani ya parmaarthi nazariye nu motte taur te samjh lena jruri hai.
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« on: April 15, 2014, 08:20:35 AM »
Song :- Tum ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Singer:- Nusrat Fateh Ali KhanKabhi Yahaan Tumhein Dhonda, Kabhi Wahaan Pohncha
Tumhari Deed Ki Khaatir Kahan Kahan Pohcha
Ghareeb Mit Ga'ay, Pamaal Ho Gaye Laikin
Kisi Talak Na Tera Aaj Tak Nishaan Pohncha
Ho Bhi Nahi Aur Her Jaa Ho
Ho Bhi Nahi Aur Her Ja Ho
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Her Zarray Mein Kiss Shaan Say Tu Jalwa Numa Hai
Hairaan Hai Magar Aqal K Kaisay Hai To Kia Hai
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Tujhay Dair-O-Haram Mein Nai Dhonda Tu Nahi Milta
Magar Tashreef Farma Tujhay Apne Dil Mein Daikha Hai
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Dhonday Nahi Milay Ho Na Dhonday Say Kaheen Tum
Aur Phir Yeah Tamasha Hai, Jahan Hum Hein Waheen Tum
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Jab Bajuz Tairay Koi Dosra Maujood Nahi
Phir Samajh Mein Nahi Aata Tera Purdah Karna
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Harm O Dair Mein Hai Jalwa E Purfan Tera
Do Gharoon Ka Hai Charaagh E Kurkhe Roshan Tera
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Jo Ulfat Mein Tumhari Kho Gaya Hai, Usi Kho'ay Hoay Ko Kuch Mila Hai
Na But-Khanay, Na Kabay Mein Mila Hai, Magar Totay Hoay Dil Mein Mila Hai
Adam Bun Ker Kaheen To Chup Gaya Hai, Kaheen To Hast Bun Ker Aa Gaya Hai
Nahi Hai Tu To Phir Inkaar Kaisa, Nafi Bhi Tairay Honay Ka Pata Hai
Mein Jiss Ko Keh Raha Hoon Apni Hasti, Agar Wo Tu Nahi To Aur Kia Hai
Nahi Aaya Khayaloon Mein Agar Tu, To Phir Mein Kaisay Samjha Tu Khuda Hai
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Hairan Hoon Is Baat Pay, Tum Kon Ho Kia Ho
Haath Aao To But, Haath Na Aao To Khuda Ho
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Aqal Mein Jo Ghir Gaya La-Intiha Kiyoon Ker Hoa
Jo Samajh Mein Aa Gaya Phir Wo Khuda Kiyoon Ker Hoa
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Falsafi Ko Behas K Ander Khuda Milta Nahi
Dour Ko Suljha Raha Hai Aur Sira Milta Nahi
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Pata Yoon To Bata Daitay Ho Sub Ko La-Makaan Apna
Ta'ajub Hai Magar Rehtay Ho Tum Tootay Hoay Dil Mein
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Jab K Tujh Bin Nahi Koi Maujood
Phir Yeah Hangama Ay Khuda Kia Hai
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda HoChuptay Nahi Ho, Samnay Aatay Nahi Ho Tum, Jalwa Dikha K Jalwa Dikhatay Nahi Ho Tum
Dair O Haram K Jhagray Mita'tay Nahi Ho Tum, Jo Asal Baat Hai Wo Batatay Nahi To Tum
Hairaan Hoon Mairay Dil Mein Sama'ay Ho Kiss Tarah, Haan'la K Do Jahan Mein Samatay Nahi To Tum
Yeah Ma Bud O Haram, Yeah Qaleesa-o-Dair Kiyoon, Harjayii Ho Jabhi To Bata'tay Nahi To Tum
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Dil Peh Hairat Nai Ajab Rung Jama Rakha Hai, Aik Uljhi Howi Tasveer Bana Rakha Hai
Kuch Samajh Mein Nahi Aata K Yeah Chakkar Kia Hai, Khail Kia Tum Nai Azal Say Yeah Racha Rakha Hai
Rooh Ko Jism K Pingray Ka Bana Ker Qaidee, Us Pay Phir Mout Ka Pehraa Bhi Bithaa Rakha Hai
Day K Tadbeer K Panchi Ko Uranay Tu Nai, Daam-E-Tadbeer Mein Her Sumt Bicha Rakha Hai
Kar K Araish E Qounain Ki Barsoon Tu Nai, Khatam Karne Ka Bhi Mansooba Bana Rakha Hai
La-Makaani Ka Bahr Haal Hai Dawa Bhi Tumhein, Nahl-O-Akrab Ka Bhi Paighaam Suna Rakha Hai
Yeah Burai, Wo Bhalai, Yeah Jahannum, Wo Bahisht, Is Ulat Phiar Mein Farmao To Kia Rakha Hai
Jurm Aadam Nai Kiya Aur Saza Baitoon Ko, Adl O Insaaf Ka Mi'aar Bhi Kia Rakha Hai
Dai K Insaan Ko Dunya Mein Khilafat Apni, Ik Tamasha Sa Zamanay Mein Bana Rakha Hai
Apni Pehchaan Ki Khaatir Hai Banaya Sub Ko, Sub Ki Nazaroon Say Magar Khud Ko Chup Rakha Hai
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Nit Naye Naqsh Banatay Ho Mita Daitay Ho, Janay Kiss Jurm-E-Tamanna Ki Saza Daitay Ho
Kabhi Kunker Ko Bana Daitay Ho Heeray Ki Kani, Kabhi Heeron Ko Bhi Mitti Mein Mila Daitay Ho
Zindagi Kitnay He Murdoon Ko Ata Ki Jiss Nai, Wo Maseeha Bhi Saleebon Pay Saja Daitay Ho
Khuwahish-E-Deed Jo Kar Baithay Sir-E-Tuur Koi, Tuur Hee Bark e Tajaali Say Jala Daitay Ho
Nalay Namrood Mein Dalwatay Ho Qudrat Na Khaleeq, Khud Hee Phir Naar Ko Gulzaar Bana Daitay Ho
Chahay Kin Aan Mein Phainko Kabhi Maah Kinaan, Noor Yaqoob Ki Aankhon Ka Bujha Daitay Ho
Day Ke Yusuf Ko Kabhi Mirs K Bazaaron Mein, Aakhir Kaar Shah-E-Misr Bana Daitay Ho
Jazb O Masti Ki Jo Manzil Pe Pohonchta Hai Koi, Baith Ker Dil Mein Anal Haq Ki Sada Daitay Ho
Khud He Lagwatay Ho Phir Kufr K Fatway Us Per, Khud He Mansoor Ko Sooli Peh Charha Daitay Ho
Apni Hasti Bhi Wo Ik Rooz Gawa Baith'ta Hai, Apne Darshan Ki Lagan Jiss Ko Laga Daitay Ho
Koi Ranjha Jo Kabhi Khooj Mein Nikle Teri, Tum Usay Jhang K Bele Mein Rula Daitay Ho
Justujo Lay K Tumhari Joh Chalay Qais Koi, Us Ko Majno Kisi Laila Ka Bana Daitay Ho
Jot? Sassi K Agar Mun Mein Tumhari Jagay, Tum Usay Taptay Hoay Thal Mein Jala Daitay Ho
Sohni Gar Tum Ko Mahiwaal Tassawur Ker Le, Us Ko Bikhri Howi Lehroon Mein Baha Daitay Ho
Khudh Joh Chaho To Sar-E-Arsh Bula Ker Mehboob, Aik He Raat Mein Mairaaj Kara Daitay Ho
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Aap Hi Apna Pardah Ho
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Jo Kehta Hoon Mana Tumhein Lagta Hai Bura Sa, Phir Bhi Hai Mujhay Tum Say Baharhaal Gila Sa
Chup Chaap Rahay Daikhtay Tum Arsh-E-Bareen Per, Taptay Hoay Karbal Mein Mohammad Ka Nawasa
Kiss Tarah Pilata Tha Laahu Apna Wafa Ko, Khud Teen Dino Say Wo Agarchay Tha Piyasa
Dushmun To Bahar Haal Thay Dumshun Magar Afsoos, Tum Nai Bhi Faraham Na Kia Pani Zara Sa
Her Zulm Ki Taufeeq Hai Zaalim Ki Wirasat, Mazloom K Hissay Mein Tasalli Na Dilasa
Kal Taaj Saja Daikha Tha Jis Shaqs K Sir Per, Hai Aaj Usi Shaqs K Haathon Mein Hikasa
Yeh Kia Hai Agar Pochon To Kehtay Ho Jawaban, Is Raaz Say Ho Sakta Nahi Koi Shanasa
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Hairat Ki Ik Dunya Ho
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Har Aik Jaan Pey Ho, Laikin Pata Nahi Maloom
Tumahra Naam Suna Nai, Nishaan Nahi Maloom
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Dil Say Armaan Jo Nikal Ja'ay To Jugnu Ho Ja'ay, Aur Aankhon Mein Simat Aa'ay To Aanso Ho Ja'ay
Ja Pe Ya Huu Ka Jo Be Hu Karay Hu Mein Kho Ker, Us Ko Sultaniyaan Mil Jaein Woh Baahu Ho Ja'ay
Baalgi Ka Na Kisi Ka Ho Churi Ke Neechay, Halk-E-Asghar Mein Kabhi Teer Tarazu Ho Ja'ay
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Kiss Qadar Beniyaaz Ho Tum Bhi
Daastan E Niyaaz Ho Tum Bhi
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Raah-E-Tehqeeq Mein Her Gaam Pay Uljhan Daikhoon, Wohi Halaat O Khayalaat Mein Anaban Daikhoon
Bana Ke Rah Jaata Hoon Tasaveer Pareshaani Ki, Ghaur Say Jab Bhi Kabhi Dunya Ke Darpan Daikhoon
Aik He Khaaq Pay Fitrat Ke Tajaadaat Itne, Itne Hisson Mein Banta Aik He Angan Daikhoon
Kahin Zahmat Ki Sulagti Howi Patjhar Ka Sama, Kahin Rahmat Ke Barastay Hoay Sawan Daikhon
Kahin Punkartay Darya, Kabhin Khamosh Pahar, Kabhi Jungle, Kahin Sahra, Kahin Gulshan Daikhoon
Khoon Rulata Hai Yeh Taqseem Ka Andaaz Mujhay, Koi Dhanwaan Yahaan Per Koi Nirdhan Daikhoon
Din Ke Haathon Mein Faqat Ek Sulagta Suraj, Raat Ki Maang Sitaroon Say Muzayyan Daikhon
Kahin Murjha'ay Howe Phool Hein Sach'chaii Ke, Aur Kahin Jhoot Ke Kaanton Pay Bhi Joban Daikhon
Shams Ki Khaal Kaheen Khinchti Nazar Aati Hai, Kaheen Sarmad Ki Utarti Howi Gardan Daikhoon
Raat Kia Shay Hai Sawayra Kia Hai, Yeah Ujala Yeah Andhera Kia Hai
Mein Bhi Naayib Hoon Tumhara Aakhir, Kiyoon Yeh Kehtay Ho K Tera Kya Hai
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda HoDaikhnay Wala Tujhay Kia Dekhta
Tu Nai Her Rung Say Pardah Kia
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Masjid Mandir Yeh Mekhanay, Koi Yeh Manay Koi Woh Manay
Sub Tere Hein Jaana Kasahanay, Koi Yeh Manay Koi Woh Manay
Ik Honay Ka Tere Qaail Hai, Inkaar Pay Koi Maail Hai
Ik Khalq Mein Shaamil Karta Hai, Ik Sub Say Akela Rehta Hai
Hein Dono Tere Mastanay, Koi Yeh Manay Koi Woh Manay
Sub Hein Jab Aashiq Tumhare Naam Ke, Kiyoon Yeh Jhagray Hein Rahim-O-Raam Ke
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Dair Mein Tu Haram Mein Tu, Arsh Pe Tu Zameen Pe Tu
Jiss Ki Pohonch Jahan Talak Us K Liyeah Waheen Pe Tu
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Her Ik Rung Mein Yakta Ho
Her Ik Rung Mein Yakta Ho
Tum Ek Gorakh Dhanda Ho
Markaz E Justuju, Aalam E Rung O Boo, Dum Ba Dum Jalwagar Tu He Tu Chaar Su
Hu K Mahool Mein Kuch Nahi Illah Hu, Tum Bohot Dilruba Tum Bohot Khoobaru
Arsh Ki Azmatein Farsh Ki Aabro, Tum Ho Qonein Ka Haasil-E-Aarzo
Aankh Nay Ker Lia Aanso'on Say Wazu, Ub To Ker Do Ata Deed Ka Ik Sabu
Aao Parday Say Tum Aankh K Ru Baru, Chund Lamhay Milan Do Ghari Guftagu
Naaz Jabta Phiray Ja Baja Qo Ba Qu, Wahdahu Wahdahu La Shareeka Laho
Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu
Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu Allah Hu
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« on: April 14, 2014, 05:28:24 AM »
Sat Shri Akal pYaareo!
gabhruan , chobran , mundean te baabea ( :D: ) wadh charh daarhi mele ch hissa leya.. :superhappy:
vote te vote payi mittro... :okk:
te ehna votean de cheekh chihaarhe chon :pagel: asin kadd k leaaye aa.. ik khoobsoorat jeha alarh gabhru :D:
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« on: April 13, 2014, 01:03:01 PM »
Sat Shri Akal Sajjno Belio,
Pichle dini hoye Nouhan di kalakaari wale samaagham ch aap ji (bibian) ne wadh charh ke hissa lea si.. :pagel: sareyan da bahut bahut dhanwaad, es competition nu sirre chaarhan layi, Rabb tuhanu raazi rakhe! hassde - wassde raho!!
tuhade sahmne pesh aa original votes count te ous utte based Winner aa,
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« on: April 08, 2014, 05:53:24 AM »
Hanji!!! :excited:
ho jao shuru Pyaareo!! paao votean bibia nu!!!
chakkdo fatte :superhappy:
leaado haneri :superhappy:
8-> 8-> 8->
PS : New Names Added! You Can Revote if you want to :pagel:
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« on: April 06, 2014, 08:37:05 AM »
What is Prayer?
When you want to achieve something, you focus your intention and intensity on it with your will. This is called ‘your vow’. Soon you realize, however, that to fulfill it, you need the help of some higher energy as well. When this understanding happens, your vow becomes a prayer! You start praying to the energy. ‘I can do it’ is a vow, ‘I need the grace of the energy that is beyond me’ is prayer. So come with a deep prayerful mood.
When you open up your feelings in the presence of an enlightened master, it is like putting a slide in front of a projector. What is on the slide gets projected on the screen as reality. In the same way, your desires that need to be fulfilled for your own good and the good of others will materialize. The desires that don’t need to be fulfilled will get burnt away along with the unfulfilled feeling that created them. Either the desire is fulfilled or your mind forgets about the desire. Either the seed of the desire sprouts or it is burnt away. Both ways you experience fulfillment.
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« on: April 05, 2014, 04:14:44 PM »
WHAT A WONDERFUL WAY TO EXPLAIN DEATH......
A sick man turned to his doctor, as he was preparing to leave the examination room and said, "Doctor, I am afraid to die. Tell me what lies on the other side." Very quietly, the doctor said, "I don't know."
The doctor was holding the handle of the door; on the other side came a sound of scratching and whining, and as he opened the door, a dog sprang into the room and leaped on him with an eager show of gladness.
Turning to the patient, the doctor said, "Did you notice my dog? He's never been in this room before.
He didn't know what was inside. He knew nothing except that his master was here, and when the door opened, he sprang in without fear. I know little of what is on the other side of death, but I do know one thing...
I know my Master is there and that is enough." :rabb: :smile:
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« on: March 28, 2014, 09:33:56 AM »
Sat shri Akal ji. tuhade wichon bahutean nu confusion howegi k, message of the day kiwe likhida hai? so, main clear karna chahunda k eh ek automatic feature hai PJ da. jo sirf te sirf sade admin saab de hath ch aa. sub admin nu vi eh aam user di tarah hi milda hai, normally 24 hours de baad eh jiwe main neeche picture post kiti hai, eda show hunda hai. ho skda tusi galati nal, miss vi kar gye howo. and ik war miss kita, ho sakda eh awe ya na aawe. so eh lucky draw di tarah hi hai. and eh Regular Members nu nahi show hunda, jad tak oh PJ gabru ya PJ mutiyaar or es ton upprle level te nahi pahunchde. P.S = main admin saab nu appeal kar k dekhunga je sub-admin de hawale eh option kr den. fer apa tuhade lai thode easy rule krn di koshish krange ji :) khush raho!! abaad raho!! tuhade bache jeen :) :)
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« on: March 25, 2014, 06:47:27 PM »
Sat shri akal ji sarean nu!! :hehe: nails competition (female) te beard competition(male) di apaar saflta ton baad  : , aap sabh de pyaare :D: , naujwaan dilan di dhadkan :laugh: , nikki umar ch waddia pulaanghan puttan wale :D: te PJ bujurgan di laathi da sahara :laugh: , jinha bare PJ da bacha bacha kehnda hai k aaun wali peedi wich te agge de samhe ch ehna nu bahut tarrakian milian walian ne.. :D: ji haan tusi pehchaan gaye ehna da naam hai Jeet mrs lonely. :hehe: :D: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: eh jidda k kidda bahle jyada excited ne es rangrang program de lai.. :D: so ehnu nu samparpit si eh shotti jehi shardhaanjli :laugh: aap sabh nu benti kiti jandi hai k bhai saab, manukhi jeevan baar baar nahi milna, PJ competitiona ch hissa lai k ehnu safal bnao.. aiwe facebooka te jindagi roli jane o.. sikho es mahaan rooh ton jinha ne apni sari zindagi PJ de naam laa ditti te kade v esda saath na shaddeya.. jinha da naam ajj vi sunehari akhran grenade singh ji ne showpiece likha k apne office ch laya :pagel: karam singh ghdaah khaan de shounki :hehe: wadu bhakayi hogi , hun bande ban k vote pao .. :hehe: :he: :5:
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« on: March 23, 2014, 11:30:48 PM »
A suggestion for all the gals who are in relation, Be wise while choosing your BF. Never be that much open with him k some day he able to take advantage of that.
These days it's in fashion. Desperate morons who blackmail their GF's by clicking their nude or personal pics to take advantage of them. I'm sure many gals of you are facing this problem.
How it happens, molest kar ke, behosh kar, kasam deker, pills dekar, ya hidden cameras laga kr ye sb hota h. So why you're so open with ur Bf. Why do u trust blindly.
Sex isn't love.
Ye sb abi krloge toh marriage life k bad kya kroge. Keertan.
Their Common dialogue is'Do This'otherwise i will upload it on net.
That time girl either do that or else commit suicide&in d end vo video b net pe upload ho b jata hai 75%.
Your ans for dat bastards must be.. Ja abi ja upload kar de, ja posters laga de, go meri family ko bata de.
Please girls grab your courage and say that words and immediately call police and say about that.
Family ko bura lagega par at least they feel proud that their child did a correct thing in the end, aur bura nai hone diya&society nd vo jaye bhadd me vese konsa vo kbi apko sahi manege.
Jo apka h vo apka sath dega nd main point is u can save your self respect. Police will also support you and arrest that rackets and also they can tell everyone ki fake photo h, manipulated video chahe na b ho toh b so yar daro mat, jo ho gya hum usko nai change kar sakte bt at least afterwards fight for yourself.
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« on: March 23, 2014, 03:14:30 AM »
ek waar ek musalmaan faqeer, drakhat di thandi shaa hethan betha si te os de aale duaale ous de sewak ate hor bahut sare lok vi san. ohna wich kujh kaazi te ulma(shariyat nu mannan wale) shariyat de doonge nukteyan te behas kar rhe san! ene wich ous faqeer da ik chela aaya jis da parhda khullla hoea si ate badi khushi wich si. faqeerne puchea, "ki gal hai? ajj bada khush nazar aa reha?" tan jwaab wich kehnda hai, hazrat! jo tusi keh rhe ho bilkul theek hai, main bahut khush haan , kyun k ajj khuda marr gya hai. faqeer ne hairaan ho k kihea, " eh ki pgalpan hai? lagda hai tera dimag kharaab ho gya!" faqeer ne apne kol bethe hoyean nu kihea k es paagal nu parre karo. kujh kaazi ous nu fadd ke parre lai gaye te fer shariyat diyan gallan karn lag paye. kujh ku minutean baad oh chela fer aaya te uchi uchi awaaz ch kehan lag pea, "Bhraawo! Khuda sach much marr gya hai!"
Faqeer ne cheek k kihea k "es nu dhakke maar ke bahar kadd aaayo, eh Kaafir hai"
es war kaazi te ulma ous gareeb nu maarn lagge te jad diggda tehnda jaan lagga tan shariyat walean ne ohnu watte marne shuru krte.sare shariyat wale apni apni gal khatam kar k, chale gaye par kujh lok faqeer laage bethe rhe.oh eh dekh k hairaan reh gye k oh chela tan fer waapis aagya. ohda mukhda anand nal bharbhoor si, ohne lokan nu fer kihea k "mera yakeen karo! k khuda sachmuch marr gya hai"!
Faqeer ne keha, Mere Dosto! aao mere kol betho! sach much khuda marr gya hai. tusi bade khush-naseeb ho kyun k tusi sach da anubhav kar lea hai. eh gal sun ke faqeer de aale duaale sabh hairaan hoge te faqeer nu puchea, Hazrat! esda ki raaz hai? tusi ki kar rhe ho? do waar tan tusi kihea k eh aadmi paagal hai te hun tusi esda swaagat kar k keh rhe ho k eh aadmi sach keh reha hai!
faqeer ne ohna nu saari gal samjhaayi k oh inj kyun kar rhe san! faqqer ne kihea, Bhrawo! kaazi te ulma , shariyat de banne hoye han te ohna da khuda mann hai, oh sache khudah di ibaadat nahi karde, oh anne han te mann piche lag ke manmarzi di bhagti karde han. aatma amar hai te sach hai, jad ke mann jhooth hai te dhokha hai. kaazi te ulma mann de ghulaam ne te es lai oh saade chele nu gaalan de ke khush si. jad ke saade es taalab(chele) ne mann nu jitt ke, apni andarli nazar utte paye parde nu , jis ne sach nu dhakkea hoea si, nu paad ditta hai.es lai ajj oh khush hai kyun k oh sach de raah te chal k hun churaasi de chakkar chon mukat ho jawega.ate usda apne preetam prabhu nal milaap ho jawega.hun kaazi te ulma chale gye ne , es lai hun asin apne taalab di khull k prasansha kar skde haan kyun k es ne apne mann utte kaabu paa lea hai te es lai Khudah(mann) sach-much marr gya hai
Rabb g mehar karn te sabh da khudah marr jawe tan jo asin ous sache khudah de ho sakiye :smile:
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« on: March 22, 2014, 05:44:58 AM »
2 din mera internet ki band hogya... pata lag gya k, intenet ton bina zindagi da ki haal a.. gal bhave kujh v nahi si, par socheya jawe te gal v badi waddi si.. :D: jiwe zindagi rukk jehi gayi howe... roti paani khada v mainu lagda na howe.. X_X pehli war realize hoea k main kina addicted ho chuka es cheez nu, ik paase main sochda huna k ah syaapa galon laah dena, internet ne par snau ena jakkad ke rakh lea k eh v hun kise nashe ton ghat nahi, hun 3 waj ke 43 minutes ho gaye swer de. main 2:30am waje da utheya. te ethe aa k jhaaki janda edr udr.. banda koi rabb nu yaad krle... din safal hoju... par eh gallan da ki fayida? ki ghat aa mere ch te ohna nashe karn waleya ch... :lost: oh v tadke uth ke feem dia golian ya nashe krde honge. jis ton keete bina akhan na khulldian hongia... ohi haal mera. Mainu aah cheez ton chutkara pauna paina... :wait: kujh karna paina...eda te nahi gaddi chalni zindagi di :waitin: :waitin: socho  : sochoo.... :wait: sochhhhooooo :waitin: :waitin: :dnk: socho :dnk:
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« on: March 16, 2014, 04:21:38 AM »
saawdhaan!! vishraam!!
:D:
main keha karta koonda... patt da joonda.. :D:
aagya sher... laa te dher :D:
paa te khilaare.. chad ke chubaare :D:
leyaa tian haneria... ganne dia ganeria.. :D:
krlo gheo nu paanda..
na bouker na maanja :D:
main chalea wekhan waanda :D:
peo dwayi karao faanda..
de es shubh waak de nal asin sabh guru roop guru pyaari sadh sangat nu es bhaagan wale din te eh soochna den de thode thode jehe chaahwan jehe hoye aan ke ajj de dihade, ehna mahapurkha da es duniya te auna hoea si.. :he:
aaundeya hi aap ji ne, sangh ch baante aali goli fasaa k sangha khulla krwaya te aap nu gaun di aamad hoyi :D: ese kar k hi aap ji khulle hi geet gaunde ne te parthu paunde ne..
aap ji da janam patti shehar jilla tarntaran, punjab wikhe hoea. aap ji shuru ton hi padhai de virodhi san.. :D: par ghardeya dia jutiyan agge aap ji da zor na chal skea te aap ji aukhe saukhe 10vi , panj- she war fail jehe ho k karni pai :laugh: aap ji os ton baad merica di banjar dharti nu bhaag laun li jahaze chad aaye.. te aundea hi aap ji nu pizza naami hatti te naukri mili te sabh nu pizzea nal nihaal krn de kaaraj wich lagg gye. aap ne bahut saal atoot pizze wartaye :D: fer achanak baante ali goli ne asar dikhaya te aap ji geetan sangeetan di duniya ch apne nanne munne pairan nal aaye :D: aap ne bahut geet gaye.. te ajj v aap ji gayi hi ja rhe ne.
aap ji nu jad da PJ ton juttiyan maar k kaddya gya si :laugh: os ton baad aap ji ne pichha bhaun ke na dekhya. aapji di piche jehe khichi gayi tasveeer tuhade nal sanjhi krange.. dilan te hath dhar ke dhyaan nal aap ji da noorani chehre de darshan karo ji..
jai Jatt Masala Din Ladein... Mohammad Aman Ali Akbar Azgar Khan :D: :D: :D:
te wadhayian dao meri jaan nu :kiss: :hug:
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« on: March 14, 2014, 09:05:03 AM »
Ki Kariye Duniya De Mele Nu
Koi Denda Ni Kudi Vahele Nu
Oh De Layi Ohda bapu var sarkari afsar labda ae
Pad likh k v putt jatt da na india vich naukri lagda Ae
Yaar digreean karde reh gaye
ohnu moh k mahel seeshe de le gaye
ruzgar de mauke ghat hi reh gaye
ni tu leder chuthe vargi se jaheda le k vota paar geya
putt jatt de beruzgar nu rakhwan kota mar geya-2
ki kariye duniya de mele nu
koi dinda nahi kudi vahele nu
c aakh teri vadd Zameena te
Main lakh hazaaran wala nai
main balda wala jatt kude jeepa caara wala nahi
phave neetre pani vargi c par mull na peya mahobbat da
ik tu hi dil de neede c main bahutiya yarran wala nahi
dil ten a layi keh gayi c dil tera khota maar geya
putt jatt de beruzgar nu rakhwan kota mar geya-2
ki kariye duniya de mele nu
koi dinda nahi kudi vahele nu
mile rakhwa karan greeba nu
sanu ros na koi haige jatt v kai gareeb unha da dosh na koi
pakh pat ne lut ruzgar leya ki khateya padke
thara choon da order la dinda bapu tadke tadke
Jhinjher de hath mukadran da reha khali lota mar geya
putt jatt de beruzgar nu rakhwan kota mar geya-2
ki kariye duniye de mele nu
koi denda ni kudi vahele nu
be baas to tu v koh layi rabb ne
pareya ghutt sabar main kode da
naa maan koi na khan main desi jatt haan pind kahrode da
Vattan te rulde firde nu tera ishk bana kla-kar geya..
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