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Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« on: September 07, 2012, 02:15:02 PM »
One question / ਇਕ ਸਵਾਲ

Please read the link to my attempt at writing a story in Punjabi...consider that I am not from the Punjab, western born and self taught in Punjabi


Is the story, by general Punjabi standards

1) Good as the better ones
2) Good/ ok
3) Average
4) Very bad

Chunga

http://5abi.com/dharavahak/urra-onkar/21-tata-onkar-dhillon-240412.htm
http://5abi.com/dharavahak/urra-onkar/01-onkar-dhillon-281211.htm

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Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« on: September 07, 2012, 02:15:02 PM »

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #1 on: September 09, 2012, 12:31:52 AM »
1) Good as the better ones :okk:

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2012, 10:33:22 AM »
Thank you Yesika Ji

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #3 on: September 09, 2012, 11:23:47 AM »
2) Good/ ok

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #4 on: September 09, 2012, 11:33:28 AM »
good as the better ones

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #5 on: September 09, 2012, 12:28:43 PM »
Good/ ok

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #6 on: September 09, 2012, 02:36:21 PM »
1) Good as the better ones  :smile:

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2012, 04:04:23 PM »
ਸਭ ਨੂੰ ਬਹੁਤ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ
ਅੰਗ੍ਰੇਜ਼ੀ ਹੋਤੇ ਬੰਦੇ ਦਾ confidence ਘੱਟ ਹੁੰਦਾ, par your responses give me confidence to carry on

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #8 on: September 09, 2012, 04:23:25 PM »
1.) Good as the better ones

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #9 on: September 10, 2012, 07:42:12 AM »
1) Good as the better ones  :okk: :okk:

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #10 on: September 10, 2012, 07:54:55 AM »
1) Good as the better ones :rockon: :rockon:

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #11 on: September 10, 2012, 08:11:12 AM »
One question / ਇਕ ਸਵਾਲ

Please read the link to my attempt at writing a story in Punjabi...consider that I am not from the Punjab, western born and self taught in Punjabi


Is the story, by general Punjabi standards

1) Good as the better ones
2) Good/ ok
3) Average
4) Very bad

Chunga

http://5abi.com/dharavahak/urra-onkar/21-tata-onkar-dhillon-240412.htm
http://5abi.com/dharavahak/urra-onkar/01-onkar-dhillon-281211.htm
1) Good as the better ones :rockon: :rockon:

 Good as the better ones

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #12 on: September 10, 2012, 03:50:42 PM »
2) Good/ ok

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Re: Question ---ਸੁਆਲ
« Reply #13 on: September 14, 2012, 05:30:19 AM »
Thanks sab nu...ik hor savaal, how does it compare to this?

http://www.5abi.com/dharavahak/sajjri-pair-da-reta/03-sajjri-pairr-reta-kussa-240911.htm

 

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