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Pj shayri comp voting

laraki jatti (pj layi shayri)
6 (27.3%)
pangebaaz mutyar (pj layi shayri)
10 (45.5%)
Sandhu fridkotia (pj layi shayri)
4 (18.2%)
Desi desi ( pj layi shayri)
0 (0%)
Ni yaar tera malang jiha urf kinnu (pj layi shayri)
2 (9.1%)

Total Members Voted: 22

Voting closed: May 11, 2014, 11:31:22 PM

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VOTING Theme 1: PJ shayari Competition April-May 2014
« on: April 28, 2014, 11:42:09 PM »
Lao bai pj valyo ajj pj shayri competition di entries pesh karan jaa rahe aa so apne apne dimag te dil te zor de k tuc ehna vicho sab to vadia likht nu vote pauni hai. (manani te haini kise ne :D: )

ik jo khas gall e k es comp da result users dia votes te judges de faisle nu combine karke kadhya jayega. Dona catagories cho  ik ik winner. Catagoriea to bahr jo entry e ohnu disqualify kita jayega te es di v janch kitti jayegi k entries original ne ya nahi 

Lao ji kafi sma pitari ch rehn to baad pesh ne entries.

[size= 18] PJ  LAYI SHAYRI [/size]

LARAKI JATTI

lao chuki meri entry  meri poem pj members nd rabb both li aa je pasand awee ta like jaroor mar deo 
zindagi de kujh pal haseen
ayye asi b jag te jeen
jo jo aya mere hisse
nafrat pyar de kujh kisse
karan lagii haan sabb nal sanjhe
sunio  sare heera te ranjhe
meri kismat rab ne ki likhi
kujh pal kushi kujh pal gam
kujh ke apniya da saath
te
kujh ke apniya dia judaniyan da gam
ik din mein pj te ayii
holi holi sabb nal jaan pehchan wadai
lagiya sohna bada hi mela
per samjh na aya eh topics wala jhmela
pir preeto ne rola box raah dikhayi
appa b yaroon role bx baadi khap payi
pir  yarro asi b sabb de agge apni intro payi
ess mele ch mile  kayi mitr
pinku .. te shotu jeet bedi de raj raj laye badde mein shittar
pir neha sheli bani holi holi pj te mein b lag gyi hon khadi
pir kayian nal laye mein pange
kayian de saah suli b tange   
kayian de dil mein b tode
kayian ne mukh mere ton mode
gs di eh duniya niari
ho gyi menu sabb ton pyari
karme ji da viah richiya
gs de gwache kashe li topics rajj ke roula paya   
intakshri khedi  asi b raj raj ke
challe huna b sath ditta bhaj bhaj ke
kinnu..pinder  te  oh ma gwad di yarri
pj te payi inha ne att bhari
kamal roop zehrili jatii
taur kaur na b  ho gyi yari kachi paki
risky menu jaan ton pyara
kanuu ban gya akhiya da tara
preet,,,gagni ....gia te meawo
pata nhn hon pj te aoo ja na aoo
ohna nu ajj b chete karde
pj te jad b appa warde
jap ne b see khap machi yenki nal b mein kiti lardai
kujh loka de mein naam nhn laine
rabba kynki ohna nal hon adde yarane
vju,,,rj jeet ,,rabb da banda ...kultej kang nal na lia kade koi panga
sabb ton wadda adi mera vehla jaat amrit see jehda
preet mand ..preet dhaliwal te pamma sada
hnu bnu ne b dil lutiya thada
indershergill te motua deep de ki kehne
ehna ta ohi haal jehna koti dane ohi siyane
gurpreet kaur gill  di dil kre kara pitai bina gal ton mere nal payi  ehne lardai
mulle ne bas  2 topics dera liyan
gym te radio bas ehna do kama li pj te aya
pyara ji sadde sabb ton piyare karde sabb de ware niyare
raunak b tode time ton pj te ayii
gujar ji ne b shyri nal  sabb li mehfil  sajai
hor ki bola gs di nagri ware
ehte sabb de ho jande waare niyare
pj wangu ik ghar hai bangyi
khatiya mithiya yadan bar gayi
mine di zindagi da hissa sun lia tusi pj wala kissa
mine grewal <laraki jatti>



PANGEBAAZ MUTYAR URF NEMANI DEEP


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Vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda

GS ji de eh supneya da eh kheda
vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda

nikke nikke hase and nikke ros
koi lad painda dooja karda sppourt
kehnde chal javega kiwe suka
sade muhre khangu jehda
vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda

sari duniya de kone kone vich baithe
jado karde ne galla sare lagda ikhthe
ik family da wang eh lahgda a jehda
vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda

koi ik dooje di khushi de vich khushiyan nu pawe
koi ik dooje di dukh vich nal hi royi jawe
koi new member awe ohdi khichayi kari jawe
fr aap hi manode ohnu rus jawe jehda
vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda

koi birthday manoda koi ros pargtonda
karde sawagat jo nawa(new) eithe aounda
ese family na jud janda eithe aounda a jehda 
vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda

koi kehnda na kuj jado aondi
laanl , nele ,kale ,hareya di foj( admins, mods )
par ohna nu ki pata eh rehnde vich apni hi moj
sareya nal awe panga na eh lain
j koi karda khrabi kar dende eh ban
fr ehna kolo aanke bachave kehda
vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda

main ki sunwain meri ki hai kahni
bhulla ute hassa kade akhiyan ch pani
“Deep” eh gal eh te ho gayi a purani
sab nal khush reh chhad hon eh jhagda te jheda

vasda rahe punjabi janta da eh vehda
GS ji de supneya da eh kheda
vasda raehe punjabi janyta da eh vehda

Pangebaaz Mutiyar (nimani deep)

*****************************************

GARRY SANDHU FARIDKOTIA

Ki PJ bare dassa main..
Kde rowan te kde hassa main..!
Eh joda de wich beh gyi ae..
Hun kehre paase nassa main..!

Ki saal ku band eh reh gyi ae..
Sara kuj lutt k lai gyi ae..
Kuj sajjan beli nal rhe..
Kayian nal judai pai gyi ae..!
Dukh dil de kisnu dassa main..
Kde rowan te kde hassa main..!

Kuj virse nal judan li aaunde ne..
Kuj aaunde ne tym pass lyi..!
Kuj aaunde ne gand paun lyi..
Kuj aaunde ne kise khaas lyi..!
Shad tu ki laina "sandhu'a" oye..
Ethe ikalla beh beh hassa main..!
Ki PJ bare dassa main..
Kde rowan te kde hassan main..!!
Eh joda de wich beh gyi ae..
Hun kehre paase nassa main..!!




DESI DESI   




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ਓਕੇ ਰਿਪੋਟਾ :-

Nigah pj te sambhe hoye sunehya te gayi,
Hzara sainkde swala de jwaab labh gaye,
Kade hass hass baith pj te sunehe c paye,
Hun hasse mere haukya de vich dabb gaye,
Dil kita ehni hathi pj te paye sunehe saad dya,
Ain mauke te hath v   gaddaar ho gaye !! !!

  ₦ł ₮ɆⱤ₳ Ɏ₳₳Ɽ ₥₳Ⱡ₳₦₲ JɆⱧ₳.

Jado photo koi nawi paindi aa ya koi likhya janda shayr ni,
Fer tilakdi e gori koi os munde di look te,
Chaska jado lagg jawe ehda fer ehde. Joga hi reh janda,
Vehlya da eh pakka adda sheti janda ni koi facebook te,
Koi karda ashiqi rajj k koi karda dharmik gall aa,
Koi yaraan da yaar aithe koi marda kise yainkan di thukk te,
Kinnu paunda rajj k gaah pange lainda gall gall te,
Loki kehnde besharam bdaa sharam tang k aunda killi di hukk te.



Lao ji eh ne sarya de jazbatta di shabdik tasveer. So tuc ehna nu parho n parkho k kaun zyada gehrayi to likhda e. Sari entries di janch padtaal karke voting shuru kitti jayegi. Onna chir w8 karo ji. Dhanwaad pj team. :smile:
« Last Edit: May 03, 2014, 11:44:35 AM by Jeeta Mullanpuria »

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