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Let me die a young man's death
« on: July 22, 2008, 02:25:20 PM »
Let me die a young man's death
not a clean and inbetween
the sheets holywater death
not a famous-last-words
peaceful out of breath death

When I'm 73
and in constant good tumour
may I be mown down at dawn
by a bright red sports car
on my way home
from an allnight party

Or when I'm 91
with silver hair
and sitting in a barber's chair
may rival gangsters
with hamfisted tommyguns
burst in and give me a short back and insides

Or when I'm 104
and banned from the Cavern
may my mistress
catching me in bed with her daughter
and fearing for her son
cut me up into little pieces
and throw away every piece but one

Let me die a young man's death
not a free from sin tiptoe in
candle wax and waning death
not a curtains drawn by angels borne
'what a nice way to go' death

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Let me die a young man's death
« on: July 22, 2008, 02:25:20 PM »

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #1 on: July 22, 2008, 02:26:26 PM »
i like this poem isn't itz realistic w39: w39:

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2008, 12:02:08 AM »
poem tan theeka, par mein apna dasda... ik poem banakey...

Let me die a Sikh's Death,
I live without fear of Death, yet
if God calls, I'll leave the rest,
I just wanna die a Singh's death

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #3 on: July 23, 2008, 02:20:47 AM »
Khush naseeb ho tum jinae hum itani pyaar sae chahte hai , varna hum toh voh hai jo supnae mai be appointment sae attae hai

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #4 on: July 26, 2008, 12:47:27 PM »
nice shear jatti bt main inni burhi ni marna lyk 70 naal mar jana hahahahaha and GS wow really niceee and jotty tere shear da is topic wich ki panga hahahahahahah and jotty nice bt  i knew it alreadyyy  hih hih hih hih hih hih

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2008, 02:27:46 PM »
ahhhhhha sis thanxxxx so hws ur vacations ...ahhhha

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2008, 03:27:50 PM »
gudd aa malwe valio......its something make u feel gudd like Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;) mai 104 da ho ke marna lolzz

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #7 on: July 26, 2008, 03:30:22 PM »
O REALLLY SUNNNY JI MEIN TE 34 SAAL DIO HI LIFE MANGDI SO IS HISAAB NAAL I GOT ONLY 15/16 YEARS TO LIVEE

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #8 on: July 26, 2008, 04:11:05 PM »
 hih hih hih hih hih

marna murna ihne kuj nahi.......ih ta bahana labhia c menu age dassan da ki mai aje 18 di hi haan.......lolz hahahahaha

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2008, 08:05:40 PM »
ahhhhhahun pata laggg gaya............ dekhlooooooooo kinnne smart a meinnnnnnnnnnnnnn hih hih

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #10 on: July 26, 2008, 08:32:14 PM »
jyada kush na ho yaar........inni smart v nahi kiha mai

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #11 on: July 26, 2008, 10:08:17 PM »
ummm...hai ta hai...bas ehna hi kafi a...mein smart hai bas ehna hi kafi a.... gud enough for mee hih hih

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #12 on: July 27, 2008, 02:26:15 AM »
hih hih hih hih hih hih LOLZZZZZ sisu it was nice lolz  Laugh;)

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #13 on: July 27, 2008, 09:07:41 AM »
 hih hih hih theek aa jiii....tusi haare mai jittia.hun mere hath khade aa...... Pagel:) bahut chalak oo tusi ta

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #14 on: July 28, 2008, 01:57:45 AM »
ehvi kai janday main inay sall jina  insan nu ta aglay sah da nai pata keh ouna ke nai ke pata nai kanay kal nu mar jana ke pata kal nu main ehtay ouna wa ke nai baqi mere doua wa ke saray lambhi umaar paou  tey hasday kehday rawaou AAMEN SUMAMEEN

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #15 on: July 28, 2008, 10:29:19 AM »
gudd aa nadeem 22

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #16 on: July 28, 2008, 10:31:59 AM »
gd nadeem.......meri te wish a k sare khush rehan te hatte katte wasde rehan hahahahahah especialy janta wale hahahhahahhahaha nai te main kalli post kari jania kise ne ans ni karna haahhahahaha and ya agle saah da ni pata ki pata hun accident hoje tuhada ni meraaa hahahahaha lolzzzzz

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #17 on: July 28, 2008, 10:34:34 AM »
lai looo......mai kari te jana post nd hahahahahhahahaahhaa.........pc te baithi da accident ho jana tera

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #18 on: July 28, 2008, 10:36:59 AM »
hih hih hih hih hih hih hih hih hih ki pata kursi toon dig pa hahahahahhahahahaha  hih hih hih hih hih nai main keha je kise nu kujh hogea fer kise ne post ni karni  main hi kalli ne kari jani so main sarea di tandrusti mangni a especially pj walea di  hih hih hih hih hih

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Re: Let me die a young man's death
« Reply #19 on: July 28, 2008, 10:39:08 AM »
Oh har khat de vich kehndi si,teri dulhan ban Ki aawagi,agle saal Diwali te Tere ghar vich deep jalawagi,na deep jage na oh aayi,mainu kali raat ne gher Laya,aaj pher uhde kuch khat padd ke, main dard purana yaad kiya……

 

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