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Aksar........By NaVi Sidhu ( i wrote it plzz read it) Totally FresH
« on: August 04, 2008, 12:26:51 PM »
Aksar lokhi bhull bhala hi jande a
waqt naal dil vich mitta hi jande a
koi rakh da kise nu yaad nahi
odha hi jidda kise sarkari office tingi(hanging) tasveer howe
meinu umeed a rakhu yaad meinu
ek meri pyari mom jisne meinu janam ditta te ek mera babul
baki sab shaid galla meri nu kitte yaad karn ge
mein odha hi marja janna jidda
baad jawani phull kumbla hi jande a
"navi" tu phulla wargi a
tu yaar din mehak de k duniya otte tor jannna
unj te meinu pata hai kise tenu karna yaad nahi..shaid a mere likhe shyer yaad de wande rehen ge
aksar lokhi bhull bhalla hi jande a
waqt naal dil cho mitta hi jande a

ssa ji mein appne arman is vich likhe a u ill astonished to noe that k a cheez m,ein hunne hi ette hi likhi a ..mein siddi type out kitti a...totally freshhh..
hopefully u like it..i luv to type in gurmukhi formatt but most of ppl can't accesss to that formatt so i hav to type in roman..proabally if hav time then i ill type it again and i ill edit some stuff so i guess u liked it ..plz leave a comment..

kyun ki sanu shyera nu bas tuadhee comment pani wangu a
jiwe insane nu jeende rahen liyi pani chaida odha hi sanu tuadhee pyare comments chaide a..thanxx
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