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vE SaJjNa..........
« on: November 26, 2008, 11:51:37 AM »
Mahi ve majboor ve sajjna...tere ton hain door ve sajjna
ohnu vv pashtava hai ik.....main vv rahi aa jhoor ve sajjna
eeon tere ton vakhri hoke ..jinna mainu maut barabar,,,,,
onjj oh vv koi mere vargi ton ,reh nai sakda door ve sajjna
mainu lagda mere layi tan ohde dil wich thann ee haini,,,
vasdi aa jiss dil wich pehlan methon sohni hor ve sajjna,,
nibha nai sakdi sada eh rishta,tere kol vv aa nai sakdi,,
je mar gayi kuch khaa ke aareya,,kar dayin maaff kasoor ve sajjna
              kar dayin maaff kasoor ve sajjna.....
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vE SaJjNa..........
« on: November 26, 2008, 11:51:37 AM »

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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2008, 12:05:24 PM »
 waoooooooooo     
BE AITBAR WAQAT MAIN JUNJALA KAR RO PADAY
KHO KAR KABI USKO TU KABI PA KAR RO PADAY
KHUSHIA HAMARAY PASS KAHAN MUSTKIL RAHI
BAHAR KABI HANSAY B TU GHAR A KAR RO PADAY
KAB TAK KISY K SOOG MAIN ROAIN GAY BETH KAR
WASEEM HUM KHOD KITNY BAR YEH SAMJA KAR RO PADAY
  nice likhia a tusi preet ji bohat sona likhia a
 ^#(^
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2008, 12:10:25 PM »
thank you wasim ji...tusi vv bohat sohna likhiya...

gud job  :-bd :-bd

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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2008, 12:40:31 PM »
nice as always
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2008, 10:18:58 PM »
mera dimaag ajj ka;l kam nahi kar raha
is liyi meinu tuadhi shyeri samaj nahi ayi even i read it twice..mayb i couldn't concentrate on it.
breifly explain kar deo yaar apno apni shyeri.
thanks
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2008, 10:39:19 PM »
jas bai ki hoya aaj kal damagh nu '''souchi piya ta banda giya '''hahahah ......nice preet ji again very nice
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2012, 01:30:47 PM »
Quote from: KUDI _CANADA_ DI on November 26, 2008, 11:51:37 AM
Mahi ve majboor ve sajjna...tere ton hain door ve sajjna
ohnu vv pashtava hai ik.....main vv rahi aa jhoor ve sajjna
eeon tere ton vakhri hoke ..jinna mainu maut barabar,,,,,
onjj oh vv koi mere vargi ton ,reh nai sakda door ve sajjna
mainu lagda mere layi tan ohde dil wich thann ee haini,,,
vasdi aa jiss dil wich pehlan methon sohni hor ve sajjna,,
nibha nai sakdi sada eh rishta,tere kol vv aa nai sakdi,,
je mar gayi kuch khaa ke aareya,,kar dayin maaff kasoor ve sajjna
              kar dayin maaff kasoor ve sajjna.....
oooooo great poatry  =D> :okk:
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #7 on: July 26, 2012, 01:36:00 PM »
bhut shona likheaa
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #8 on: July 26, 2012, 01:40:14 PM »
Quote from: ღ ηεнα ღ on July 26, 2012, 01:36:00 PM
bhut shona likheaa
realy kamal karti so nice
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2012, 01:40:58 PM »
haan gujar
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #10 on: July 26, 2012, 01:42:41 PM »
Quote from: ღ ηεнα ღ on July 26, 2012, 01:40:58 PM
haan gujar
main jadh read kita taan souchda reh gaya eyni vedia poatry buhat katt labhdi read karne nu
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #11 on: July 26, 2012, 01:44:44 PM »
Quote from: gujar NO1 on July 26, 2012, 01:42:41 PM
main jadh read kita taan souchda reh gaya eyni vedia poatry buhat katt labhdi read karne nu
haan gujar sahi khea heart touch shayari likhi ehne
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #12 on: July 26, 2012, 01:48:53 PM »
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Re: vE SaJjNa..........
« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2012, 05:36:41 AM »
nice g
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