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Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« on: March 21, 2009, 10:26:11 PM »
Sun lo loko kann khol ke sunaan lagea apni jabani
Sade layi jo shaheed hoye, unha di sachi eh kahani ,
Desh KOMM layi inha ne apniya janaa variya,
Roliya tuhade layi apniya jawani

*”Kartar singh” na yaad kise nu, jinhe gadar di lehar chalayi si
Akhbar kad ke deshbhagti da ,angreza nu khariya khoti v sunayi si
Balidan bina nhi azadi kde mildi, sachi gal inha ne sanu v sikhayi si
Jinha umara vich sadi jawani shuru hundi(18), unha ch shaheedi payi si


**Jalliawala da kaand dekhe ke “Udham singh” to reha na gya
Badla len layi bekasura da punjab to london val tur peya
Bhukhe sher vangra oh goreya te lalkaar peya
Maar ke seene te goliya dyer de, punjabiya da badla le leya


***”Azad” si azadi da laal, kise di v qaid usnu pasand na si
Azad rehna chahunda si, usnu goreya di hukumat pasand na si
Azadi di ladayi vich, angreza te kehar barpaya si
Shaheed hoya khud nu goli mar ke, par angreza de hath na aaya si


*****Desh azad kraun layi “Bose” sab soch baitha si
“khoon badle azadi " da loka naal vaada kar baitha si
Azad hind fauz bna ke, isne angreaza di neend haram kari
Bhave shaheedi mili desh ta bahar par ik ik saah desh de naa kari

******”Bhagat singh” ne soch leya si ki gulami ch jeen da koi fayda nhi,
Jaan dite bina azadi mile, ethe idda da koi kayda(rule) nhi
Chum ke rassa fansi wala, maut nu usne akkha dikha chadi
Shaheed ho gya, par jande jande sutti kaum jaga chadi


Sade to ta panchi change jinha ne azadi da mul ta janeya hai,
Gulami to vadh maut bhi na, inha ne eh pehchaneya hai,
Paida hunde hi azadi de saah leke nasaa tuhadi khul gyiaan
Gulami diya zanzeera ki hundiya tuhani galla eh v bhul gyiaan


Sunil jahe crora ethe jo apne aap nu desh bhagat kahayi firde,
duniya bare sab pta par inha shaheeda nu bhulayi firde
oh jawani kise kam di nhi jo apne desh de kam na aa sake,
usda jeena jeena nhi hunda jo apni maa di laaj na bacha sake
yaad karlo ajj inha shaheeda nu, waqt eh sanu keh reha
salaam karlo inha loka nu, benti de roop vich tuhanu keh reha

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #1 on: March 22, 2009, 12:07:34 PM »
omg nadeeem datz so nice...inni wadiya poem a....parh ke kujh pata wi lagda and bohut wadiya likhea....thx for posting dis...bt so sad k eh tusi khud ni parhi...or poori ni parhi...
« Last Edit: March 22, 2009, 12:10:41 PM by PuNjAbAn_KuRhI »

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #2 on: March 22, 2009, 12:16:12 PM »
 Balle; Balle;

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #3 on: March 22, 2009, 03:17:20 PM »
Very good bro!

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #4 on: March 22, 2009, 05:47:07 PM »
bahout vadiya yaar, bahout he vadiya,

adde nalo jeada hostory da verva likh shadeya ee

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2009, 08:47:44 PM »
bahut he wadhiya nadeem ji.  =D>

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #6 on: March 22, 2009, 08:55:46 PM »
nadeem 22 ch bohat wadhiaa

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #7 on: March 22, 2009, 10:07:51 PM »
thx friends

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #8 on: April 27, 2009, 07:44:25 AM »
ndeem bout sohna likheya,

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Re: Sun lo loko kann khol ke
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2009, 05:49:00 AM »
bahut sohna likheya bai......

 

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