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dis is the only poem jihnu mai bahut pasand karda.......so plz rate dis poem for me ki kinne point milne chahide aa,,,,???

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« on: August 06, 2008, 03:37:59 PM »
Dil apne nu lakh-lakh
Minnata karke main
manunda riha.......
Khush ho jave dil mera
Main geet khushi de
Gaunda riha............
Par dil mere ne Khed ki khedi
Ral ke akhia meria naal
Eh deep hanjua de
jalunda riha.............
Main taan apni har diwali
Bas is tarah hi
Manunda riha............

Bachapan di diwali
Oh dhushere da mela
Khushia vich langda si
Har ik vela
Mudd aa jave oh bachapan
Main ehi rabb to
Chaunda riha...........
Main taan apni har diwali
Bas is tarah hi
Manunda riha...........

Ik diwa MAA de charana
vich darhke
Rabb de naam di ardass main karke
Phir ja hanere kamre vich vaddke
Khali kandha to darda riha
kade daruanda riha......
Main taan apni har diwali
Bas is tarah hi
Manunda riha......... [/color] [/size]
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rate ma poem......
« on: August 06, 2008, 03:37:59 PM »

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Re: rate ma poem......
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 04:04:44 PM »
first vote meriiiii4++++
very niceeeee i like this poemmmm very mucchhh kaboooter thx for postinggg
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Re: rate ma poem......
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 04:16:21 PM »
ya really nice poem. From me   4++ too
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Re: rate ma poem......
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 04:50:20 PM »
Sunny bai dil nu touch kargi ahh peom bai buhat buhat sohni aaa...

& i kno pretty well ki ahh poem teri life vich ki moiyana rakhdi aaa.....

bai buhat hi sohna likhiya


bai ahh bas main hunna likhiya kissa di story bare sunnka..... & naal hi athe vi likh dittaa......



jinna rooka hasana sikhiyaaa ohnu na pushu dukh ki hunda va...
jinna Hass hass ka ronna sikha ohnu na pusha hassa ki hunda va....
Jinna Rona vich hassa labhiya ohnu pusha Piyar ki hunda va.....

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Re: rate ma poem......
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2008, 08:54:56 PM »
bahut wadiya cheena master ji. mere valo ve 4 point.
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Re: rate ma poem......
« Reply #5 on: August 07, 2008, 01:36:45 AM »
Quote from: ਅਮਨ ਪੰਨੂ on August 06, 2008, 04:50:20 PM







jinna rooka hasana sikhiyaaa ohnu na pushu dukh ki hunda va...
jinna Hass hass ka ronna sikha ohnu na pusha hassa ki hunda va....
Jinna Rona vich hassa labhiya ohnu pusha Piyar ki hunda va.....



bahut sohna likhia 22g

nd thks all for response
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« Reply #6 on: August 07, 2008, 01:25:01 PM »
hih hih hih hih hih hih hih AMANNNN I KNW KIDHI STORY SUNKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE  hih hih hih hih hih hih hih
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« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2008, 10:01:02 PM »
 lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:)
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« Reply #8 on: August 08, 2008, 01:43:15 AM »
YAAR MAIN LATE HOU GEYA MERA VOOT CHAL JAOU YAAR TU +4 KIOU RAKHYA +10 RAKHNA CE CHALOU +4 KER DENAY A
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« Reply #9 on: August 08, 2008, 04:19:43 PM »
Quote from: ਚੀਨਾ_ਕਬੂਤਰ on August 07, 2008, 10:01:02 PM
lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:) lost:)


hun mere hassan di warriiii
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahhahahahahahah

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