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dis is the only poem jihnu mai bahut pasand karda.......so plz rate dis poem for me ki kinne point milne chahide aa,,,,???

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rate ma poem......
« on: August 06, 2008, 03:37:59 PM »
Dil apne nu lakh-lakh
Minnata karke main
manunda riha.......
Khush ho jave dil mera
Main geet khushi de
Gaunda riha............
Par dil mere ne Khed ki khedi
Ral ke akhia meria naal
Eh deep hanjua de
jalunda riha.............
Main taan apni har diwali
Bas is tarah hi
Manunda riha............

Bachapan di diwali
Oh dhushere da mela
Khushia vich langda si
Har ik vela
Mudd aa jave oh bachapan
Main ehi rabb to
Chaunda riha...........
Main taan apni har diwali
Bas is tarah hi
Manunda riha...........

Ik diwa MAA de charana
vich darhke
Rabb de naam di ardass main karke
Phir ja hanere kamre vich vaddke
Khali kandha to darda riha
kade daruanda riha......
Main taan apni har diwali
Bas is tarah hi
Manunda riha......... [/color] [/size]
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