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pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« on: May 22, 2010, 07:23:33 AM »
likhnaa shauk nae c mera tere deedar ne shayer bnaa ditta
kuj nafrat lokaa di te kuj pyaar tere ne shayer bnaa ditta
tu hi ta meri soch nu parwaaz ditti
tu mere bejubaan jazbaata nu awaaz ditti

jo supne tere baare aunde ne
onaa nu lok bahut salaunde ne
jis geet ch zikar hove tera oh mainu pasand hai
je supneaa ch tu aave mainu hamesha di neend sauna pasad hai

rang gora tera surat dil luttan wali hai
bull ne patte gulaab de teri akha ch diwali hai
kite v chali jaave tu lakha cho jaave pehchaani tu
bdaa changa subaah tera mere dil di raani tu

tainu hasdi dekh apne saare gamm bhull jaava
dil darda mera kidre tere ishq ch na rull jaava
iko benti meri tu mainu bhulaa na jaavi
kidre mainu birho de gal laa na jaavi

mera pyaar waqt naal nahi badlu mera ishq haqeeki hai
tu mere layi rabb ni eh kavita v tere layi hi uleeki hai
ni hauli hauli tere layi geet mai likh daunga hazaar
bas kardi rahi tu joban nu hamesha ese traa pyaar




mai tuhaada bahut thankful haa sab da.....tusi mere kamm nu enaa pyaar de rahe ho te apne anmol comments dinde ho..... i hope future ch v tusi mere kamm nu pasand karoge.............te apne comments likhde rahoge.....ssa g sa rab raakha
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pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« on: May 22, 2010, 07:23:33 AM »

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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #1 on: May 22, 2010, 07:29:38 AM »
 =D> =D> =D> =D> awesome mitraaaaaaaaaaa
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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2010, 08:14:01 AM »
Chaki aa fatte Joban mitra bada dum aa teri kalam ch...
Par try kar kuch kom apni bare likhan di badi lod aa kon nu change writeran di. Gud luck
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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #3 on: May 22, 2010, 05:53:02 PM »
JUNIOR tezzy_sandhu is on pj... joban g..tsi bahut sohna likehde o g..keep it up =D> =D>
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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #4 on: May 22, 2010, 06:20:36 PM »
Rupu age ch junior ho sakda par writing ch te Senior lagda mere to. bade time baad Pj te kuch special padan nu miliya. i just love his shayri. its so natural
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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #5 on: May 24, 2010, 03:09:04 PM »
jo vi ne hez awesum in shayri... sahi keha tusan veer g... keep it up joban g.. n yeah veere his shayri is natural..agree with ya
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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #6 on: October 30, 2010, 08:19:43 AM »
thanks tezy veer g............... but i think i m junior to u in every way.......... actually mai pehla sirf dil haaulaa karn lyi likhda c fir tuhaadi poems parh k mai v inspire hoyaa te apni poems pj te post karn lag pia so in this way u are my mentor

roop g thanks very much g
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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #7 on: November 02, 2010, 01:00:49 AM »
BAUT WADIA JNAAB....GREAT!!.
AND MAI V PEHLI WARI LIKHEA KUJ DIL HAULA KARAN LAAE...CHECK KARKE DASO KI MAHOOL A...:p
http://punjabijanta.com/shayari/this-one-written-by-me-my-first-try-%28v%29/
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Re: pj te meri pehli romantic poem............ i hope tusi pasand karoge
« Reply #8 on: October 17, 2012, 06:41:49 PM »
mein read tah nai kiti too long ah sab nh gud keyaa gud ah  =D> =D> =D>
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