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Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« on: November 20, 2009, 09:47:46 AM »
(Maa.)
 pehle khat vich maa si boldi,
 mai ta ha rukh nadi kinare !
 ek wari put shaati lagja,
 muk jaane ne dukhde saare !
 sun ne nu kan mere taras gaye,kehnda se kade maaye maaye.
 SADI TA TAKDEER HE MADI,HAR CHITHI VICH ATHRU AAYE !

 (Father)
 jad bapu ji da khat aaye,
 naina de vich neend na aaye !
 darr de si jo daar to langno,
 oh loki aandar wad aaye !
 mukna ta badi dooor di gal hai,karze ho gaye doon-swaaye.
 SADI TA TAKDEER HE MADI,HAR CHITHI VICH ATHRU AAYE !

 (Sister)
 jad khat chhoti behan da aaya,
 vich rakhdi de taage !
 das me kehde gut te bana,
 tu disda na laage !
 jina de pardes gaye si,sab de veere mud aaye.
 SADI TA TAKDEER HE MADI,HAR CHITHI VICH ATHRU AAYE !

 (wife)
 khat os de akhran ne ral,
 mere vain kana vich paya !
 rutan de naal mudian koonjan,
 par tu mud ke na aaya !
 rukhan nu pa jaffian rova,menu panchhi vekhan aaye.
 SADI TA TAKDEER HE MADI,HAR CHITHI VICH ATHRU AAYE !

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Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« on: November 20, 2009, 09:47:46 AM »

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Re: Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« Reply #1 on: November 20, 2009, 10:21:24 AM »
bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttt hi sohniiii hai

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Re: Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« Reply #2 on: November 20, 2009, 05:29:48 PM »
awwwwwwwwwww :sad: :sad:

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Re: Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« Reply #3 on: November 20, 2009, 11:00:09 PM »
thx friends

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Re: Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« Reply #4 on: November 21, 2009, 05:54:11 PM »
nadeem 22 ji bahoot bahoot sohna likhiya ..... just awesum ... thanks for sharing

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Re: Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« Reply #5 on: November 21, 2009, 06:31:48 PM »
bhut sohne Nadeem sabh

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Re: Ik pardesi Veer da Dukh
« Reply #6 on: November 21, 2009, 08:18:22 PM »
wah nadeem saab bohat sohna likheya..

 

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