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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1260 on: June 11, 2012, 01:40:17 PM »
buhat hi vedia ji thanx so much
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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1260 on: June 11, 2012, 01:40:17 PM »

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1261 on: June 11, 2012, 01:44:43 PM »
shukriya ji
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Sapne tuut jate hai, apne ruuth jate hai,
Zindgi me kaise kaise mod aate hai,

magar jab bhi saath ho aap jaise Dosto ka…..
to raaho ke kaante bhi phuul ban jate hai…..!

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1262 on: June 11, 2012, 01:48:02 PM »
whtever you are
i dnt care for you or your wordings commitments
pehlan apne wall dekho jo kisi de gal da sahi rpl nhi kita
kdi v kise rpl nu accept nhi kita chahe kina chnga aa
then main tere kujh le ke tan khaya nhi aa jo menu teri parwaah hove te main kaha ki main parv sau nhi heer haan man la pls
yuk on these thnks
so better you kn that is heer ton door hi rhi tan chnga rehna aaak tu man nhi lenda mere rpls te comment krn di lod nhi aa

my replies are in red colors

whtever you are
i dnt care for you or your wordings commitments
never expect that
pehlan apne wall dekho jo kisi de gal da sahi rpl nhi kita
agree i never reply in str8 way :)
kdi v kise rpl nu accept nhi kita chahe kina chnga aa
Nobody can convince me so easily :O
then main tere kujh le ke tan khaya nhi aa jo menu teri parwaah hove te main kaha ki main parv sau nhi heer haan man la pls
jekar tu sau ni hai te tenu prove karan ch ki problem hai :O
yuk on these thnks
so better you kn that is heer ton door hi rhi tan chnga rehna aaak tu man nhi lenda mere rpls te comment krn di lod nhi aa
Don't worry u ll never see ny comment now onwards :)

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1263 on: June 11, 2012, 01:48:58 PM »
Muhabat kia hai do lafzon main tumhe batata hoon,

 Tera majboor kar dena aur mera majboor ho jaana.

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1264 on: June 11, 2012, 01:52:30 PM »
my replies are in red colors

whtever you are
i dnt care for you or your wordings commitments
never expect that
pehlan apne wall dekho jo kisi de gal da sahi rpl nhi kita
agree i never reply in str8 way :)
kdi v kise rpl nu accept nhi kita chahe kina chnga aa
Nobody can convince me so easily :O
then main tere kujh le ke tan khaya nhi aa jo menu teri parwaah hove te main kaha ki main parv sau nhi heer haan man la pls
jekar tu sau ni hai te tenu prove karan ch ki problem hai :O
yuk on these thnks
so better you kn that is heer ton door hi rhi tan chnga rehna aaak tu man nhi lenda mere rpls te comment krn di lod nhi aa
Don't worry u ll never see ny comment now onwards :)
okey tell me wht you wanna me to do for proving myself heer or so cold sau
tell me is vari chaj da ques put kri nhi tan teri khair nhi ethe pj te



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Khuli ankhon me bhi khwab hote hain.

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Par hansti ankhon me bhi shailab hote hain.

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1265 on: June 11, 2012, 01:55:49 PM »
Mard Honi Chahiye, Khatoon Hona Chahiye,

 Ab Grammer Ka Yehi Kanoon Hona Chahiye,


Nursery Ka Daakhla Bhi Ab Sar’sari Mat Janiye,

 Aap Ke Bache Ko Aflaatoon Hona Chahiye,


Raat Ko Bache Parhayi Ki Aziyat Se Bache,

 In Ko TV Ka Bohat Mamnoon Hona Chahiye,


Doston English Zaroori Hai Hamare Wastey,

 Fail Honey Ko Bhi Koi Mazmoon Hona Chahiye,


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 Koi Ooper Se Bhi Telephone Hona Chahiye

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1266 on: June 11, 2012, 01:56:08 PM »
okey tell me wht you wanna me to do for proving myself heer or so cold sau
tell me is vari chaj da ques put kri nhi tan teri khair nhi ethe pj te



@ gujr
Ishq me aise arma bhi hote hain,
Khuli ankhon me bhi khwab hote hain.

Gam me hi ashq behte hain,
Par hansti ankhon me bhi shailab hote hain.
menu ni pata tu kida prove kerna but menu enna pata hai main auj tak jooth da sath ni dita te na seh sakda
menu kal da pata lagga ki tu te sau dono ik hi hai
so jekar eh sach nahi hai te prove ker ! kida i don't know :O
ager sach hai te why u did so :(

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1267 on: June 11, 2012, 01:58:46 PM »
menu ni pata tu kida prove kerna but menu enna pata hai main auj tak jooth da sath ni dita te na seh sakda
menu kal da pata lagga ki tu te sau dono ik hi hai
so jekar eh sach nahi hai te prove ker ! kida i don't know :O
ager sach hai te why u did so :(
chal shd 22 tu ki leena prov kar ke
sau hove ya heer boldi taan shona na
:smile: :smile:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1268 on: June 11, 2012, 02:03:47 PM »
okey kal dekh lyi fir tu v
parv
ki kal main kal khud sau nu pj te sareyan sahmne puchungi
 te oh v mrng time
and tu v kal online rhi hun tu
and jis to ya fir tu hi eda da bolya aa ki main sau ikk haan tan us person di tan @$%$#^#$^^#%^7 ho jani aa pj te

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hun is ton baad tu mere naal gal na kri
trust naal di ikk cheez hundi aa agr oh hunda tan tu pehla menu pm ch puchda fir tenu bda easily das dena c ki ki difference aa

but tu tan sari pj sahmne eh rola paya na tan hun tu kal hi dekhi result ehda

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1269 on: June 11, 2012, 02:06:52 PM »
okey kal dekh lyi fir tu v
parv
ki kal main kal khud sau nu pj te sareyan sahmne puchungi
 te oh v mrng time
and tu v kal online rhi hun tu
and jis to ya fir tu hi eda da bolya aa ki main sau ikk haan tan us person di tan @$%$#^#$^^#%^7 ho jani aa pj te

...
hun is ton baad tu mere naal gal na kri
trust naal di ikk cheez hundi aa agr oh hunda tan tu pehla menu pm ch puchda fir tenu bda easily das dena c ki ki difference aa

but tu tan sari pj sahmne eh rola paya na tan hun tu kal hi dekhi result ehda
tenu teri identity prove kern layi dujiya de sahare di ki lod aa :O
hune ker sakdi prove te ker kal te main belive ni kerda :O

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1270 on: June 11, 2012, 02:07:28 PM »
okey kal dekh lyi fir tu v
parv
ki kal main kal khud sau nu pj te sareyan sahmne puchungi
 te oh v mrng time
and tu v kal online rhi hun tu
and jis to ya fir tu hi eda da bolya aa ki main sau ikk haan tan us person di tan @$%$#^#$^^#%^7 ho jani aa pj te
abi gusa jane dain janab poetry ka maza kyun karkra kar rhee hain
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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1271 on: June 11, 2012, 02:38:39 PM »
Wo Jhoot Bol Raha Tha Bade Saleeqe Se
hum Aitebaar Na Kerte To Aur Kia Kerte

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1272 on: June 11, 2012, 02:48:08 PM »
Zindagi kuch bhi nahi pyar ke bina,
jawab kuch bhi nahi sawal ke bina,
barish kuch bhi nahi badal ke bina,
dosti kuch bhi nahi aap ke bina.

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1273 on: June 11, 2012, 02:55:16 PM »
2ndi tera veda garak sirf 2 lines hi likhni :D: :D:: :D:

tum hamare nahi to kya gam hai
hum tumhare to hai yeh kya kam hai...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1274 on: June 11, 2012, 03:00:17 PM »
Zindagi Thak K Girti Hai To Khayal Aata Hai…
Jan-Lewa Hai La-Hasil Ki Tammna Karna…

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1275 on: June 11, 2012, 03:01:54 PM »
zindagi tune lahoo leke diya kuch bhi nahi
tere daman mein mere vaaste kya kuch bhi nahi...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1276 on: June 11, 2012, 03:04:44 PM »
2ndi tera veda garak sirf 2 lines hi likhni :D: :D:: :D:

tum hamare nahi to kya gam hai
hum tumhare to hai yeh kya kam hai...
Kinne keha 2 lines likhni aa

Hasrat hai ke unko jee bhar ke dekheyy.....
Lekin wo pass ho to Nazrein uthae nahi jatii ....

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1277 on: June 11, 2012, 03:06:52 PM »
Hum Na Badlein Gay Waqt Ki Raftaar Kay Sath

Hum Jab B Milen Gay Andaz Purana Hoga

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« Reply #1278 on: June 11, 2012, 03:07:17 PM »
Kinne keha 2 lines likhni aa

Hasrat hai ke unko jee bhar ke dekheyy.....
Lekin wo pass ho to Nazrein uthae nahi jatii ....
chudele couplet nu punjabi ch 2 lines hi kehnde ne
:D: :D: :D:
tenu pass pata ni kon ker dinda :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #1279 on: June 11, 2012, 03:09:28 PM »
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