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« on: February 05, 2011, 06:55:40 AM »
malham patti kar de mainu de-de tu dawaaa
zakham mere rabba aje alle-alle ne
tere shoohan naal khabre bhar jaan eh
mai sunya hath tere bde hi sawalle ne
ajj tak kitaa har peedh nu angaaulaa mai
tera naam dhiyaa ke bde dard jhalle ne
par eh takleef nae jhall hundi mere kolo rabba
tenu ta ptaa ishq de dukhde hunde avalle ne
ohdi galti nae c koi mera hi kasoor c
ishq di gustaakhi kiti tahio dukha vihde malle ne
mainu galatfehmi c k mohabataa ch saudebaazi nae chaldi
sone di zanjeeri agge saade haar gye challe ne
teriyaa dittiaa rehmataa te ohde ditte dukh
bas rabba hor koi tohfe na joban de palle ne
ik vaari mere zakham nu raazi karde rabba
fir nae satt khaani, zindgi kad laini hundal ikalle ne
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« on: February 05, 2011, 06:30:02 AM »
ssa ji veere
veere bot hi bot gud likha ah tusi,
:won: :won: :won:
:happy: thanks g vry vry vry much
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« on: January 19, 2011, 11:49:28 AM »
Asi ohna diljalea cho
jina gam ne puttaa vangu paale
hun chandre ho gye jawaan
saatho na jaan sambhaale . . . .
Nae mannde kehna mera
apni hi marzi karde ne
hanjuaa naal yari paa lainde
jdo chete maa nu karde ne
vilakde rehnde kamle raat din
samaj nae aundi kive vraava
mangde ne maa mere kolo
samaj nae aundi kitho liyaawa
dunia de mele ch gwaach jaan gam mere
rab agge kde kde dua eh karda ha
par vichaarea nu lok anaath kehnge
mai ese gal to darda ha
joban nu sab kehnde navi dunia vsaa lai
mai vi ehi karna chaundaa
chali gyi jo chup chaap ban anjaan
usdi khaali jagah nu hundal pyar karn wali naal bharna chaundaa
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« on: January 16, 2011, 07:13:22 AM »
Tere tak jdo mera eh suneha pahunchega
odo tak tu khud nu duniaadaari vich dhaal lavengi
je tenu vi kde mere lyi kuj mehsoos hoya hou
shayad kuj hanju tu odo ushaal lavengi
Mainu ik vari milan nu jee tera jaroor karu
par dunia de darro tu mulakaat taal lavengi
ik khushi paa k jive lok sab dukh bhul jande
tu oda hi visaar mulakaat da khiyaal lavengi
tenu apna aap adhoora adhoora lagu
saade naal parhan wale kise to puch mera haal lavengi
soch k puraane din oh apni zindgi wale
shayad ro ro k akhaa kar laal lavengi
Ajj tak Mere walo likhe lafza cho
naam apna tu ik din bhaal lavengi
joban aas krda hai eho tere kolo
hundal di us kavita nu tu sambhaal lavengi
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« on: January 08, 2011, 11:16:19 AM »
Hahahaha nae veer g rab naal koi narajgi nae . . . . .g
thanks to u all for liking g
@kudarat g ---> bs g kde kde likhya janda g jdo lonely feel kara ya sad howa . . . . . . . . . . . . . Vaise ji One-sided luv da ta g kafi experience aa
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« on: December 31, 2010, 10:12:12 AM »
:balle: thanks
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« on: December 31, 2010, 10:04:13 AM »
"joban" da dil nae krda joban rutte marne nu
par jeon joga nae shad ke gyi jihnu mai yaad kara
zindgi mili rab kolo eni sohni
kyu ehnu tere piche barbaad kara
unj tere uppar mera haq nae anjaane
mai ta aive daawe bebuniaad kara
zindgi da matlab sikhaaun waliye
mai isde lyi tera dhanwaad kara
jee karda aa bhull ke tainu
mai dunia apni abaad kara
yaara naal waqt bitaauna chaunda
jinna di yaari nu nitt mai yaad kara
samaj nae aundi kyu ohi hunda nae
jisdi mai rabb agge fariaad kara
lok uth ke amrit vele rab da naam lainde
mai tadke uth ke iktarfa ishq di zindabaad kara
kasak jihi uthdi rehndi seenay vich
pyaar tainu maran to vi baad kara
"joban" da dil nae krda joban rutte marne nu
par jeon joga nae shad ke gyi jihnu mai yaad kara
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« on: December 31, 2010, 01:18:45 AM »
dhannwaad 22 g
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« on: December 31, 2010, 01:17:37 AM »
thanks dude , thanks roopal ..........thanks kudrat g and stylo very much for liking it ...........
thanks for comments g
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« on: December 30, 2010, 12:14:32 PM »
Sofi hi biyaan karda apni kahani
mai yaro peenda koi sharaab nae
Na pucho dard kinne ne joban nu
yaro Peeda da koi hisaab nae
jithe likhya hove tareeka pehla pyar bhullan da
mainu aje tak labhi aisi koi kitaab nae
shad ditte hun ta mai supne sajaaune
pura hunda mera koi khwaab nae
bade sawaal nit karda mai rab nu
par milya aje tak koi jawab nae
kyi bootay lgaa ke pani paa thakkea
meri bhagichi ch khidya koi gulaab nae
akha ho jandia ne saaf te taaziaa
hanju vahaun da hor hunda koi laabh nae
ohda naam bda paak te pavittar
ohnu badnaam kara mai ena vi khraab nae
Na pucho dard kinne ne joban nu
yaro Peeda da koi hisaab nae
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« on: December 29, 2010, 10:41:06 AM »
Marhiya dia sunn pippla
mai v ik din 4 modea te auna
Mere jogi rakh layeen jagah
mai v neend sdaa di sauna
Lakkda di pand lagni
naale agg di ik chingari
dilo chaun wale ghat honge
unj bheed hovegi bhaari
Merea pyarea ne
Ethe fut fut k rona
Mere jogi rakh layeen jagah
mai v neend sdaa di sauna
Rab kare din hashar de
Kidre oh anjaan vi aa jaave
Mainu bhaave na pehchaane
Par apna mukh mainu dikha jaave
Ohnu takk ke
sakoon rooh nu auna
Mere jogi rakh layeen jagah
mai v neend sdaa di sauna
Jdo ban gya ve pipplaa
Jism mera eh swaah
Kalam meri chandri nu
fir aa jau sukh da saah
mai fir kade
dobara ehnu nae ravaauna
Mere jogi rakh layeen jagah
mai v neend sdaa di sauna
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« on: December 26, 2010, 11:32:55 PM »
Thanks veer g aap g de coment vaaste . . . . . . Gal tuhadi bilkul sahi aa g . . . . . . Mai ta apne walo puri koshish krda apne aap nu sambhaalan di . . . . But fir v sab kuj putha ho janda hahahahaha chalo koi na g agge to hor jiyada dhiyaan rakhanga . . . . . . Rab raakha g thanks again
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« on: December 26, 2010, 11:25:35 PM »
Thanks g vaise Veerji meri apni story ta incomplete aa aje . . . . . . Eh lines ta kise sajan beli lyi likhiaa g . . . . . . . . . . .
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« on: December 26, 2010, 11:19:23 PM »
Thanks vry much veerji 4 ur valueable comment Sadke tere sohnya ki kalam chlayi e yara rab tainu sukoon ch rakhe
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« on: December 26, 2010, 08:05:40 AM »
Lag gya pta oda thuhptaa
Fir v milan nu dil nae karda
unj mil k onu dasna chaunda
ke mera ode bina nae sarda
ohnu ajj v ona hi pyar karda ha
oh gal hor aa k hun kise nu dasda nae mai
ohnu khush dekh k mainu sakoon mile
oh gal hor aa ke hun hasda nae mai
ohne kiha kise nu ke
pehchaan onu meri bhul gyi a
os din to jind meri
kakha vangu rul gyi aa
mera ta dil ajj v ohnu sambhali baitha
oh gal hor k ohde dil ch vasda nae mai
ohnu khush dekh ke mainu sakoon mile
oh gal hor a k hun hasda nae mai
eh dard inaam ch paya jo
eh ta natija mere hi upraale da
miliaa ne jo haara ajj tak hundal nu
eh ta khel aa uppar waale da
joban de bulla te rehnda oda hi naam
oh gal hor k hun oda naam kise nu dasda nae mai
ohnu khush dekh k mainu sakoon mile
oh gal hor a k hun hasda nae mai
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« on: December 13, 2010, 10:02:13 AM »
mere lekhaa vich rabb ne
dukh beshumaar likhyaa hai
jo kuj mera dil karna chaunda aa
usde lyi maapeyaa da inkaar likhyaa hai
har gall utte saari duniyaa de naal
honaa mera takraar likhyaa hai
bas do pal khush hon de layi
umaraa da lamba intzaar likhyaa hai
kuj matlabkhor lokaa de hatho
pith te hamesha hunda vaar likhyaa hai
haase ohle hanjuaa nu lukaaun da
ik tarikaa bdaa damdaar likhyaa hai
kise pathar dil wali naal hovega shayad
yaaro iktarfaa pyaar hi likhyaa hai
shikwe hor vi ne Joban nu apni zindgi de naal
fir v Hundal da is zindgi naal gooda pyaar likhyaa hai
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« on: December 13, 2010, 09:57:27 AM »
chaahe dhaldi c shaam
ya hunda c savera
ohde kumlaaye bulla te
naam hunda c tera
mainu nae c pehchaanda
oh kde yaar hunda c mera
maran to pehlaa ohde ni
kaash tu paa jandi fera
aakhiri vaar tenu milan lyi
joban agge oh hath jorhda rehnda c
aasmaan wal hath chukk k oh
muthi nu marorhda rehnda c
ho kamla ni tere jaan picho
oh din ch vi taare torhda rehnda c
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« on: November 02, 2010, 03:32:39 AM »
kaaint aa veer ji
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« on: October 30, 2010, 08:19:43 AM »
thanks tezy veer g............... but i think i m junior to u in every way.......... actually mai pehla sirf dil haaulaa karn lyi likhda c fir tuhaadi poems parh k mai v inspire hoyaa te apni poems pj te post karn lag pia so in this way u are my mentor
roop g thanks very much g
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« on: October 29, 2010, 08:05:51 AM »
saari raat oh jaagdi rahi
te neend mainu vi na aayi
aive nikki jinni gal piche
hoyi saadi aapas ch ladaayi
kyu usnu bhull jaan di gal kiti
rabba mai kinna ha shudaayi
mai ta sachi kita c majaak
par usne gal dil te lagaayi
phone cut kar ditta jhatt patt
jado oh gusse vich aayi
mai vi phone na kita
na hi usdi call aayi
savere uth k Joban ne mang lyi maafi
ohne vi maaf karn ch na der lgaayi
kehndi tere bin reh nahi hoyaa
ve Hundal mai vi bdaa pashtaayi
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