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« on: June 26, 2010, 09:06:19 AM »
Raba hove na kise hor naal kade
jo dil mere te hai beet rahi
kehnde vichode naal pyaar hor goorha ho janda
kehnde ehi sadiyaan to ishq di reet rahi
mere vargi na bnaayi aadat kise di
raba sire charhavi sache pyaara nu
dukh lukaa lainda mai dil de andar
jhootha jiha hass dikhaunda yaara nu
na dard dhoke da na bewafayi da mainu
afsos oh kade na ban saki mere dil di rani
usda chehra vekhya muddat beet gyi
us kolo judaayi de karke akh meri cho vehnda pani
meri jaan de mukh te tere naalo jiyadi ronak
mai khush ho ke kehnda har vaar bahaara nu
dukh lukaa lainda mai dil de andar
jhootha jiha hass dikhaunda yaara nu
Usnu koi andaaza v nahi
din kive mai ajjkal guzaar riha
dukh muh to bol na dasda kise nu
sab dukh sukh apne mai ajjkal kagaz te utaar riha
usda naam lai likhda geet har roj mehfil ch mai sunaunda yaara nu
dukh lukaa lainda mai dil de andar
jhootha jiha hass dikhaunda yaara nu
rab jo v karda mere changge lyi krda
joban nu pura hai rab utte vishvaas
ik na ik din fir mel hovega us kudi naal
hundal nu taqdeer to bdi jiyaadi hai aaas
vaise kudia di nahi ghaat mainu yaaro
par us kudi de karke mai na keh dinda mutiyaara nu
dukh lukaa lainda mai dil de andar
jhootha jiha hass dikhaunda yaara nu
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« on: June 25, 2010, 12:51:35 PM »
Mainu ta kuj samaj nae aunda ki kraa
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« on: June 25, 2010, 03:43:37 AM »
Umeed puri tra nae muk rahi par 90% muk chali . . . .
Oh kudi mere naal pura ik saal parhdi rahi . . . . ,par mai usde naam to bgair hor kuj nae jaanda . . . . . . .
Even mainu ehsaas saal de end wale dina ch hoya k i luv her . . . . But odo sade exam aa gye nd i didnt wanted to distract her mind in exams . . . . . . Is karke mai usnu kuj na kiha . . . . Te exam to baad usde baare mainu kuj nae pta k oh kithe rehndi wa . . . . . . . . . . . . Bs eni k story aa meri . . . . . But 10% hope haigi wa aje te oh sari umar rahegi . . . . .
Hahahahahaha thanks 4 liking it frnds
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« on: June 24, 2010, 09:22:38 AM »
Ohde pyaar ch dabb lye apne armaan mai
hun usdi mohabat dabaa rahi sab chaa mere
Muk gyi umeed usnu dekhan di hun
shayad muk chale ne sab saah mere
mai apne aap naal kita c
vaada usnu na kade bhulaaun da
ohde naal na sahi par
usdi yaad sahaare jeon da
par ki kraa mai zubaan da pakka nahi
nahi ho sakde maitho vaade sab nibaah mere
Muk gyi umeed usnu dekhan di hun
shayad muk chale ne sab saah mere
jo naam nahi taqdeer ch likhea meri
oh kitab de aakhiri page te likh ke ki karna
aakhri saah tak geet usde lyi likhunga
mai kise hor lyi kavitaava likh ke ki karna
jo ajj tak likhan ch galtiyaa hoyian joban kolo
yaaro maaf karna bakhsho sab gunaah mere
Muk gyi umeed usnu dekhan di hun
shayad muk chale ne sab saah mere
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« on: June 23, 2010, 11:16:41 PM »
Thanks vry much to all of u
thanks mishri g for praying 4 me . . . . . . . . Tusi roj apna name change kr lainde o . . . Mai kihde naam naal bulaaya kraa? He hehehe
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« on: June 23, 2010, 11:18:31 AM »
Thanks veer g ki kra aadat to majboor wa jdo likhan da mood hunda odo bs likhi jayida
aje ta 2 tappe hor c oh likhe nae mai . . . . . Ha ha ha ha lolz
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« on: June 23, 2010, 10:42:12 AM »
Sara sara din tanhayiaa dubbea rehnda mai
har pal us kudi de khyaala ch dubbea rehnda mai
kis haal ch rehndi oh ajj kal
bahut hai jind pareshaan meri
Puchya mai kise to haal ajj usda
shaala Razi khushi hove jaan meri
sidhi saadhi jihi kudi oh suit punjabi paundi aa
ghat wad hi kardi gal kise naal g bahut sharmaundi aa
jdo hasdi dekha usnu
ta jaapda kismat ho gyi meharbaan meri
Puchya mai kise to haal ajj usda
shaala Razi khushi hove jaan meri
mahinay guzar gye mai takya nae apni heer nu
par apne dil ch bahut saambh ke rakhya usdi tasveer nu
bas yaaro ik vaari usda hasda chehra dekhna
vekho kinni hasrat hai nadaan meri
Puchya mai kise to haal ajj usda
shaala Razi khushi hove jaan meri
usnu shayad ptaa nahi oh ghar mere dil ch paa chukki hai
ajj kal ta jaagde hoye te sutte pye nu supne hi usde aunde ne
hun ta sab lok mainu usda naam lai ke bulaunde ne
ajj kal ta usda sohna jiha naam
ban gya hai pehchaan meri
Puchya mai kise to haal ajj usda
shaala Razi khushi hove jaan meri
us pari vargi sohni kudi da chehra dil mera thagg gya
parhya ya sunya c jo shayad mainu ohi rog lag gya
mango tusi sab vi duaa rab kolo
ki charh jaave mohabat parvaan meri
Puchya mai kise to haal ajj usda
shaala Razi khushi hove jaan meri
ki dassa oh joban di rooh vich smaa chukki hai
viyaah krvauna hundal ne us naal kise din
par aje ta supneaa di oh mehmaan meri
Puchya mai kise to haal ajj usda
shaala Razi khushi hove jaan meri
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« on: June 22, 2010, 11:23:27 AM »
Tere kol aaya ajj mai lai ke aas bdi
kaddi bhukh ne jaan te lagi pyaas bdi
ik budhi umar hai
duja gareebi ne maariaan ne maara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara
tere baap daade de pashua nu pathe mai paunda c
jawani vele mai hathi mehnat kar roji roti kmaunda c
hun budhaape ch vatta khod k karda ha mai guzaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara
putar mere umar ch wade ne bade tere nalo
ghar vsaa k apne ohna rishta torh lia mere nalo
apni sass nu v kad ditta gharo
meriaan nuhaa ne maar fitkaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara
ik fulka mai khaa lau ik de devanga apni rani nu
ro ro ke akha cho dikhna band ho gya marjaani nu
budhi umar ch asi ajj v ha ik duje da sahaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara
aaya budhapa te dangori sahaare chalna sikha gya
mangan nalo kehnde marya changa fir v mai mangan aa gya
na band kari darvaja
na kar maitho tu hun kinaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara
de ke gareeb nu roti joban tu duaava sachiaa paavenga
rajj k kar parhayi tu afsar wada ban jaavenga
gareeb bande di sewa karni na shaddi kade tainu khushiaan milangiaa hazaara
Do fulke de mainu khaan lyi sardaara
this is true incident happend wid me last week . . . . . . A poor old man came to me nd asked for 2 fulka (chapaati or roti) . And baaki jo kuj galbaat meri usde naal hoyi oh mai uppar poem de roop ch likheya hai
i hope tuhanu meri baki di poems vaangu eh v pasand avegi
please apne valuable coments shadna na bhulyo . . . . . . Thanks g vry much
tuhada apna
joban hundal
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« on: June 22, 2010, 01:12:24 AM »
Thanks g very much
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« on: June 22, 2010, 01:08:43 AM »
Thanks g . . . . . 4 liking nd comenting on my all poems . . . . .
Please pray k us kudi nu koi mere baare das deve . . . . . . .thanks again
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« on: June 22, 2010, 01:03:57 AM »
Thanks g aaap sb da 4 liking my work . . . . . . .
Special thanks to mishro g . . . Tusi almost meri har poem te coment kita hai . . . . I m really thankful to u
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« on: June 22, 2010, 01:00:38 AM »
Bahut Thanks g aap sab da
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« on: June 21, 2010, 01:30:55 PM »
Kite naah na keh deva mai is karke us kita nahi izhaar
par ptaa nae kinni der hor maitho karvauna intzaar
Lai ke mera naam saheli usdi koyi sataundi hovegi
Shayad mainu v koyi kudi chahundi hovegi
luk luk ke oh kudi mainu takdi honi aa
lag na jaave kite ptaa mainu oh pura dhiyaan rakhdi honi aa
Likh likh naam mera baaha utte oh mitaundi hovegi
Shayad mainu v koyi kudi chahundi hovegi
vekh mainu hor kudi naal gal kardea oh sarh jandi honi
mera mukh dekhan lyi oh mere raaha ch kharh jandi honi
oh ghabru sirf mera hai oh dil nu samjaundi hovegi
Shayad mainu v koyi kudi chahundi hovegi
yaad kar mainu oh thande hauke bhardi honi
kise hor kudi da naa mai ho jawa oh dardi honi
likh ke mere naam naal apna naam oh fullaan naal sajaundi hovegi
Shayad mainu v koyi kudi chahundi hovegi
ikalli baith ke geet koyi oh mere lyi gaundi honi aa
mainu apne dil da haal dassan di roj sakeem bnaaundi honi aa
apne khiyaala de vich oh joban nu 'suno jee' keh bulaaundi hovegi
Shayad mainu v koyi kudi chahundi hovegi
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« on: June 19, 2010, 12:23:34 PM »
Meri mamta de armaan ve
seenay ch dabbe hi reh gye ne
Maa teri de putra hun
saah thode hi reh gye ne
rab to mannat mang ke mai tainu jholi apni ch puaaya
khud gilli thaa te sondi ve tenu sda sukki chadar te paya
haaye ve chandrea tu na mull maa da kaudi v paaya
putar tera ka-putar ho gya mainu dunia wale keh gye ne
Maa teri de putra hun
saah thode hi reh gye ne
mere dil de tukdea ve tenu bda laad larhaya
har zidd teri manni tenu shiddat naal parhaya
parh likh tu afsar ban gya par putar hon da na farz tu nibhaya
jeon jogea tu hasda vasda reh meri ta jholi vich dukh pai gye
Maa teri de putra hun
saah thode hi reh gye ne
maa de dulaarea ve tenu reejha naal viaahea mai
tere sir to vaar pani teriaan blawa nu gal laya mai
par us din to baad na sukh koi v paya mai
teri biwi de taane mehne mainu kabra tak lai gye ne
Maa teri de putra hun
saah thode hi reh gye ne
maawa de dukh nu joban sirf samaj sakdiaa ne maawa
is ghann shaave boote diya badiaa thandia ne shaava
aa jave je hun put mera ghut kaleje lava
raba na liyaavi eh din kise hor maa te jo dukh mainu lai k beh gye ne
Maa teri de putra hun
saah thode hi reh gye ne
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« on: June 18, 2010, 11:51:57 AM »
Lafza di pand chuki kalam meri
dastak de rahi tere darvaje te
eh lafaz jo is kolo likhvaye ne mai
vich armaan mere sab chade ne janaze te
kagaj di kori reej utte sajna ajj Mai gam apna har shingar dita
jdo ghaat mehsus hoyi kuj Ta mai thodia khushia nal isnu savaar dita
lok soch samaj ke likhde ne hr shabd par mai likhan to baad sochda ha
ki buraayi hai dosta is vich
je mai pyar usda lochda ha
kuj meriaan kavitaava nu khoobsurat kehnde kuj kehnde sohna hai har khayal tera
Mai jaana ya mera rab jaane is vich likhya hai dil da haal mera
mai khoon di siyaahi nal nae likhya Mera ta thode jihe hanjua de nal sar gya
vajah asal dassa mai tuhanu dosto usto vichoda hi mainu likhan lyi majboor kar gya
na daga ditta us kudi ne mainu na usne koi v laara laya
na kade oh meri saki kyuki izhaar na mai kade kar paya
loki puchde ne vaar vaar ki tere pyaar di kahani hai
loki vaar vaar us mutiyaar da naam puchde jo dil mere di rani hai
ohna nu mai jawab dinda iktarfaa pyaar nu ishq kahani nahi kehnda mai
jinna chir us kol izhaar nahi kar lainda usnu dil di rani nahi kehnda mai
us kudi di shakal surat te naam to bgair na kuj hor jaanda mai
par fir v khabre kyu lagda pichle kayi janama to usnu jaanda mai
hun usnu dekhya nu mahine beet gye waqt de naal mai us to door ho gya
us kudi da naam lai ke kra shuruaat ise karke har kavita har geet mera mashhoor ho gya
jo lok jaande ne mainu te us kudi nu ohna nu kraa mai arzoyi
je kite mile oh kudi ta kirpa karke usnu mere baare das deve koyi
joban di eh kavita
hai jawab ohna loka nu jo puchde ne likhne di vajah meri
oh kudi jithe v rahe khush rahe te geet likhaundi rahe maitho ehi hai duaa meri
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« on: June 18, 2010, 05:39:58 AM »
Tutte dil di peerh naalo
kite wad dukh dunia ch ne hor bde
lakha bache bhukh naal vilak k ronde ne
beghar ne bde lok taareya di shaave sonde ne
Dukh gareebi da na disdaa kise nu
par aameera de painde ne shor bde
Tutte dil di peerh naalo
kite wad dukh dunia ch ne hor bde
loki rab de naam te lutde ne shareaam
kyi raat nu lutde kyi din ch luttan khuleaam
Robinhood warga jammea na chor koyi
unj dunia ch bhaave ne chor bde
Tutte dil di peerh naalo
kite wad dukh dunia ch ne hor bde
dukh pucho ohna to jina de sir baap da saya nae
yaa puch ohna bhaina to jina veer da pyaar kde paya nae
Sab to wada dukh maawa nu moye putraa da
eh dukh jind nu jande ne khor bde
Tutte dil di peerh naalo
kite wad dukh dunia ch ne hor bde
apna dukh ta har kise nu dinda hai dikhayi
par asal insaan hai oh jisne dujeaa di peerh vandaayi
joban tu likhya kar dukh loka de
dil da dard likhan wale ne hor bde
Tutte dil di peerh naalo
kite wad dukh dunia ch ne hor bde
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« on: June 17, 2010, 10:23:59 AM »
eh rakhdi teri anmol ni bhaine
Tere pooray karunga har bol ni bhaine
akha cho kade dhulan nae dena mai neer tera
Tere sir to kare qurbaan
dunia eh sari ni veer tera
tenu hasdi vekha ta mai v muskuraa deva
je tu rove kade ta dunia nu agg laa deva
tenu khush karan de lyi kamaliye
ban janda joker ni veer tera
Tere sir to kare qurbaan
dunia eh sari ni veer tera
mai tere naal sda na dunia to ghabraa javi
parh likh k naam apna rushnaa javi
tu putraa vargi dhee babul di
tere te maan kare ni veer tera
Tere sir to kare qurbaan
dunia eh sari ni veer tera
tenu khud to na door kraa mere dil di eh chaah ni bhaine
par veer tere nu ik din tera dharna paina viaah ni bhaine
teri doli tor ke ni jhalliye
bda rovega ni joban veer tera
Tere sir to kare qurbaan
dunia eh sari ni veer tera
It is dedicated to my sisters prabh hundal and simran josan. . . . . . . .
Thanks to everybody 4 ur valuable comments . . . . . . .
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« on: June 15, 2010, 01:20:51 AM »
Punjab da haal sunava mai sacha
na rakhna tuhade to koi lukaa ethe
Hawa pani saaf na riha
parvasi parinde nae lainde hun panah ethe
Gareeb naal insaaf nahi ho riha
paise lai ke mukar jande ne gawah ethe
Lut rahe ne mere punjab nu
aise firde ne leader bepanah ethe
sab apniaa jebaa bharde ne
nae janta di kise nu parwah ethe
kive karna rangle punjab nu berang
siyasat milke kardi eh salaah ethe
sab Sadkaa ban ke tut gayiaa
bahute kache ne aje raah ethe
nakal maar ke hunde pass bache
changi sikhiaa di nae kise nu parwah ethe
bijli aundi nae 4 ghante to wad
khetaa di motor de bill dite laa ethe
ghabru shad ke dudh te lassi
peende ne coke te chaah ethe
shokeeni te fukri aashki ne patt dite
lakha ghar nashea naal ho gye tabah ethe
aje ta shuraat hai dosto
tabah honge lok bepanah ethe
kudiaa paun lag payiaa jean ya skirt
suit sareer te chunni sir to diti laah ethe
mobile phona ne vigaad dita
na rahi sharam na koi hayaa ethe
maapea di izzat da khayaal kise kise nu
jo maapea da naam dain rushnaa ethe
sache rab naalo tut ke
lok nave rab lainde bnaa ethe
maar ke fooka pakhandi saadh
parshaad de naam te vechde sawah ethe
jisda dil karda mehngi gaddi ch ghuman nu
khud nu baba oh lainda akhwaa ethe
karde benti tenu hath jorh ke
lok mere punjab de karn ehi duaa ethe
rabba liaa de murh to khushhaali
tu mehar di maar nigaah ethe
joban nu v de akal te honsla thoda hor
sutte eh loka de zameer deve jgaa ethe . . . . . . . . .
THANKS 4 LIKING MY PREVIOUS WORK . . . . . . . Thanks 4 comments . . .
MAI UPAR JO LIKHYA HAI . . . . . MAI POORI KOSHISH KITI HAI PUNJAB DI SACHI TASVEER PESH KARN DI . . . . . . . . . Mainu umeed hai . . . Tusi isnu parhoge . . . . Te pasand karoge . . . . . . Te upar likhe punjab de halaat badlan baare kuj ta jaroor sochoge . . . .
THANKS AGAIN
TUHADA SAB DA CHOTA VEER
Joban Hundal . . . . . .
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« on: June 14, 2010, 01:33:51 PM »
Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . .
Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Jo jaan lagya na das k vajah gyi . . .
Ohi kamli kal ikdum sahmne aa gyi . . . .
Usnu milan di khushi gyi na sambhali
haaye akh meri malo mali ro pyi . . . .
Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . .
Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Ki kami mere vich c mai aj v labhda rehnda . .
Mai kamla usnu tasvera cho labhda rehnda . . . .
Kismat di khed sari a ki kraa mai. . . . .
jihdi oh bewafa ho gyi . . . .
Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . .
Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Odia akha to chura akha mai jhootha hasa hasya . . .
Hanju luka lye apne na dukh usnu dasya . .
khush ha mai ode to bgair . . . . .
oh vekh ke hairan jihi ho gyi . . . .
Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . .
Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Mainu pta oh mainu yaad kar k na kde royi c . . . .
Mainu saarhan lyi nave sajna nu usne galvakdi payi hoyi c . . . .
Ki kraa mai dil hatho majboor
odi eh ada v mainu moh gyi . . . .
Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . .
Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Usnu ki pta joban hauli hauli roj muk riha . . . .
Rohi wale kise rukh vangu roj suk riha . . . .
Chali gyi bin bolea hi yaro
hun eni pathar dil oh ho gyi . . . .
Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . .
Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
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« on: June 13, 2010, 09:07:46 PM »
Bahut kaint aa g . . . . .
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