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Shayari / Re: A He Fariyaad Meri Rabb Tenu Har Mushak Ton Bacha Lavey
« on: June 24, 2009, 12:04:21 PM »
good job bro :)

Me is no bro me is sis if you say so ...........ok ji thank you

1842
Shayari / Re: Kar Tu Ishq De Balle Balle
« on: June 24, 2009, 12:02:31 PM »
Nic veerji.. very nic ji :)

Hello ji i am not veer ji i am kuri ji i mean female ji.......thank you so much ji

1843
Shayari / A He Fariyaad Meri Rabb Tenu Har Mushak Ton Bacha Lavey
« on: June 24, 2009, 07:34:21 AM »
A he fariyaad meri rabb tenu har mushak ton bacha lavey…..
Dukh menu miljaan teriya, sukh teree wayria daaran lalavey….
Azadi nalo gulami chagi,,, jay koi dil da kadi banna lavey…..
Hor koi khuash na baki,,, bamaya rab hun sanu appane kol bulalavey….
Meri tataree di sadiya di pyass buj jaya,,ek bar jandi var gut seene lalavey…..
Byshak c saddi eh nadani,, pyaar vich hoi main dewani….
Hun bass ishq sanu apnalavey,,, fir bamay jhuthi arzi likhoa lavey
A he fariyaad meri rabb tenu har mushak ton bacha lavey…..
Dukh menu miljaan teriya, sukh teree varay daaran lalavey….

1844
Shayari / Kar Tu Ishq De Balle Balle
« on: June 24, 2009, 07:01:06 AM »
Kar tu ishq de balle balle.....
Ishq ton sab thalle thalle.....
Eh na chahan te v dil vich ghar kar leanda,,,
Fir zoor dimang da na challe challe…
Kar tu ishq de balle balle....
Mar ke v eh amar hai randa,,,
Bamay ashiq mar de kalle kalle.....
Kar tu ishq de balle balle….

This is for your answer to Death_dream shayar from yesterday....

1845
Shayari / Re: ishq....
« on: June 23, 2009, 12:30:12 PM »
Na sadi akha vich addiyai hanju ,,,,
Na he tenu koi gonegaar tha-hranda…..
Assi v bybass ha sajana appne dil ton,,,
Amay ta nahi shayaram baitha zakama te malam laganda…..
Appne appne neseeba diya galla hai yaara,,,,,
Na he koi kisse de khushi dekh appan gam bhul janda…..
Rokiya tah assi v c,,,ki na zazabaata de samudaar vich bah,,,,,
Ajj tu dubia, ishq baith dekh taree bajanda ….
Na sadi akh vich addiyai hanju….
Na he tenu koi gonegaar tha-hranda…..

Your write so well keep up the good work......

1846
Shayari / Na Sadi Akha Vich Addiyai Hanju
« on: June 23, 2009, 12:25:29 PM »
Na sadi akha vich addiyai hanju ,,,,
Na he tenu koi gonegaar tha-hranda…..
Assi v bybass ha sajana appne dil ton,,,
Amay ta nahi shayaram baitha zakama te malam laganda…..
Appne appne neseeba diya galla hai yaara,,,,,
Na he koi kisse de khushi dekh appan gam bhul janda…..
Rokiya tah assi v c,ki na zazabaata de samudaar vich bah,
Ajj tu dubia, ishq baith dekh taree bajanda ….
Na sadi akh vich addiyai hanju….
Na he tenu koi gonegaar tha-hranda…..

1847
Shayari / Badi Soini Surat Hai Yaar Di
« on: June 23, 2009, 10:00:50 AM »
Badi soini surat hai yaar di,,,,
Jo dil vich wasayai  baitheai ae……
Ik kahar dhaanda jobain jaanab da,,,
Mar de kadea ashiq baitheai ae…..
Dil ohde vich “Preet” le kuch v nahi,,,,,,
Amay he assi jhuthi ass lage baithea ae….

1848
Shayari / Shad Ditta Hai Assi Tenu
« on: June 23, 2009, 07:47:27 AM »
Shad ditta hai assi tenu,,,,
Na bhuliya tera pyaar bay
la ke tor nebaana ahe sada satkaar bay...
Na sanu moiea nu chain aani,,,,
Na he jeeade jee,,,,
Ehay sadiya le saja de shurwat bay

1849
Shayari / Re: beparwah yaar
« on: June 23, 2009, 07:45:59 AM »
yaar de ditte hanju peen da maza hor hai,
kisi diyan yaadan che jeen da maza hor hai,
ki hoya je yaar saada beparwah hai,
ik BEPARWAH nu vi CHAUN DA MAZA kuch HOR hai.....


uw


Shad ditta hai assi tenu,,,,
Na bhuliya tera pyaar bay
la ke tor nebaana ahe sada satkaar bay...
Na sanu moiea nu chain aani,,,,
Na he jeeade jee,,,,
Ehay sadiya le saja de shorwat bay
........

1850
Shayari / Yaar De Ditte Pyaar Da Karz
« on: June 19, 2009, 05:53:27 PM »
Yaar de ditte pyaar da karz assi mar ke chukka nahi sakde…
Dil te langeeya chota nu aram di need assi soya nahi sakde….
Ke hoya je saada dil beparwah hai…..
Assi saareya dey samne onu nakaar nahi sakde……

1851
Shayari / Re: Likh De Dil Di Gall Paigaam Vich
« on: June 19, 2009, 01:22:33 PM »
Yaar de ditte pyaar da karz assi mar ke chukka nahi sakde…
Dil te langeeya chota nu aram di need assi soya nahi sakde….
Ke hoya je saada dil beparwah hai…..
Assi saareya dey samne onu nakaar nahi sakde……

Going home now ok.

1852
Shayari / Likh De Dil Di Gall Paigaam Vich
« on: June 19, 2009, 01:04:33 PM »
Likh de dil di gall paigaam vich ,,,,,
fir waqt gaye kee...
Pyaar nu zara beyan kar ke dekh,,,,,
Fir rabb v miljanda, insaan de Oqayat kee..

1853
Shayari / Re: Tenu Assi Roj Balla Lende Han
« on: June 19, 2009, 12:59:18 PM »
likhaan paigaam ta kalmm rukk jave
fir sochan main likhaan taan kee...

dil di dil vich reh na jave
akhraan ch beyan kra taan kee....


Likh de dil di gall paigaam vich
fir waqt gaye kee...
Pyaar nu zara beyan kar ke dekh
Fir rabb v miljanda, insaan de Oqayat kee..


1854
Shayari / Tenu Assi Roj Balla Lende Han
« on: June 19, 2009, 12:38:26 PM »
Tenu assi roj balla lende han…
Khayala vich har khushi pa lende han…
Pata hai sanu eh haqeekat nahi,,,,
Par khaba vich tah assi tenu pa lende han….


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Shayari / Re: Na Khushyai De Tu Sanu
« on: June 19, 2009, 11:22:13 AM »
Well why iam asking that if guys can Suggestion something we can write better.......sadiya galltiya kadu then we can improve and become better at.........

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Shayari / Re: NAHI LIKHA AGAR NASEEB ME USKA NAAM
« on: June 19, 2009, 09:33:47 AM »
Really nice jee dil vich ja vaja je i mean really touch my heart. did you write yourself or...........

Rab jee mara to ek kaam karde
meriya khushyai sajana de nam karde
Na de sakiya assi kuch ve oss ko jeetaya jee,,,,
marne ke baad unka udaar karde..........

1857
Shayari / Re: Na Khushyai De Tu Sanu
« on: June 19, 2009, 09:14:21 AM »
raje ki ehe hale incomplete ya  complete

ya fr pura post ni krna chounde....


likheya boht hi wdia aa

Well my friend i can go on and on with this but some ppl fall in sleep reading long shayari so i stop writing long one now this completed one... Thanks but kade kade kuch advise v de daya karo ke assi lok koi benfit le sakiya.. tuhanday kolo........

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Shayari / Na Khushyai De Tu Sanu
« on: June 19, 2009, 08:59:52 AM »
Na khushyai de tu sanu,,,,
Sadiya liya ton gam he baitheriaya ne…..
Zandgi jeeyon le sadiya jo sath jo meriya ne….

Daar nahi lagada hun tufaana too,,,,
Pathar ban chukiya jo jajabaat jo meriaya ne…..

Jeeta gaya har bazi assi hun,,,,
Haran le sadiya koll bachiya hoiaa kujj hanju jo ajj main keray ne…..

Please do write some comments bcoz ppl who write will know where they can do imporve......

Thanks

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Shayari / Re: "Ek Jogi Ne Sadiyai dil Under Alkh Jagyai"
« on: June 18, 2009, 09:57:45 AM »
means tarn JI is too lazy to read lol
nice written dilreek!


Thank you Tarn je........ i know he mean that my shayari is too long....right sorry for that..........

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Shayari / Re: "Ek Jogi Ne Sadiyai dil Under Alkh Jagyai"
« on: June 18, 2009, 09:04:51 AM »
lumbiyaan kahaniyaan na paya karo  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:


WHAT IS THIS SUPPOSE TO MEAN:  lumbiyaan kahaniyaan na paya karo

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