Author Topic: Competition: GANA LIKHO (Read 15605 times)

PUNJABI lion · « **Reply #20 on:** February 28, 2010, 02:40:02 AM »

bahut vadia mishri..... :happy:

n tezy veer ji tusi ta haige hi kaamaaal aa.... =D> =D> tuhadi koi rees ni kr skda.. :happy:

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **Reply #20 on:** February 28, 2010, 02:40:02 AM »

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #21 on:** February 28, 2010, 10:14:55 AM »

Quote from: PUNJABI lion on February 28, 2010, 02:40:02 AM

bahut vadia mishri..... :happy:

n tezy veer ji tusi ta haige hi kaamaaal aa.... =D> =D> tuhadi koi rees ni kr skda.. :happy:

Thanx Bahoot Bahoot 22 Punjabi loin....

powerlifter · « **Reply #22 on:** February 28, 2010, 12:12:34 PM »

=D> =D> nice topic

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #23 on:** February 28, 2010, 04:57:59 PM »

bahut sohna likeya tezzy veere.. =D> =D>

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #24 on:** March 01, 2010, 11:06:20 AM »

Thanx Rupu

Jhanda_Amli · « **Reply #25 on:** March 01, 2010, 11:30:22 AM »

Why it should only be on Desh Bhagati .. Make it open ended .. ek agge ethe :happy:

Both the entries so far are good.. Good Job!! But I like Emotional works for me better so that why I think It should be open ended may be cause we already have an entry :happy:

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #26 on:** March 01, 2010, 04:31:19 PM »

Quote from: Jhanda Amli on March 01, 2010, 11:30:22 AM

Why it should only be on Desh Bhagati .. Make it open ended .. ek agge ethe :happy:

Both the entries so far are good.. Good Job!! But I like Emotional works for me better so that why I think It should be open ended may be cause we already have an entry :happy:

oh shoot... it suppose to be a deshpagti..mah bad.ek kam karo..mera delete kardo plz

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #27 on:** March 03, 2010, 03:53:18 AM »

No dnt delete it plz its nice song

Y "BB" · « **Reply #28 on:** March 03, 2010, 03:57:11 AM »

no way
no one has told me abt dis
hun dekhi chaleo kadun ma desh bhagti de vatt

babbu mann baba nanak ji le ke aya c
ma tan sare ghadees laine aa :

huhuhuhhahaha

The Goru · « **Reply #29 on:** March 03, 2010, 03:59:11 AM »

j mainu gaanaa likhnaa aaundaa taa mai hun ehthe ni honaa c ..tusi mere likhe hoye gaane sunde...... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

.............jai hind.................

PUNJABI lion · « **Reply #30 on:** March 03, 2010, 04:08:39 AM »

Quote from: ѕмυяєттє on March 03, 2010, 03:57:11 AM

no way
no one has told me abt dis
hun dekhi chaleo kadun ma desh bhagti de vatt

babbu mann baba nanak ji le ke aya c
ma tan sare ghadees laine aa :

huhuhuhhahaha

:dumlak: :dumlak: :dumlak:

The Goru · « **Reply #31 on:** March 03, 2010, 04:22:43 AM »

haalle ni likhnaa
jdo mai vdddaa ho gyaa odo likhaagaaa........... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :hehe: :hehe: :hehe: yo yo :lol:

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #32 on:** March 03, 2010, 04:56:48 AM »

@ smurftte
U talking bout desh bhagat n shaheed plz dnt use kind of cheap word ghadees laine.

Y "BB" · « **Reply #33 on:** March 03, 2010, 05:05:51 AM »

Quote from: Tezy_Sandhu on March 03, 2010, 04:56:48 AM

@ smurftte
U talking bout desh bhagat n shaheed plz dnt use kind of cheap word ghadees laine.

sory ji

★raman preet is back★ · « **Reply #34 on:** March 03, 2010, 05:21:34 AM »

mennu aun da hi nahi gana likhna :sad: :sad:

ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ · « **Reply #35 on:** March 04, 2010, 03:32:41 AM »

nice song mishro =D> =D> =D>
and tejy ji tuhada wi bahut pyaara hai =D> =D>

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #36 on:** March 04, 2010, 10:23:18 AM »

Kine afsos di gal aa jadon pahilan gana likho competition hoya c singer bare gana likhan lai udon kine lokan ne participate kita c par je hun saheedan bare ja desh bhagti song likhan nu kiha te sab gayab. y is tht ??? just think bout it.

¸¸.•のæ-☪•.¸¸ · « **Reply #37 on:** March 04, 2010, 01:01:08 PM »

Quote from: ღкђคภ๔ ๓เรђгเღ on February 27, 2010, 07:27:04 PM

here is mah try guys..
..i arnt writing it to win any compitition par..papa laye kujj likhna cahhunde c..mere papa varga koye hor nahe hega..jinna sanu kurian nu puttan vangu paleya..kadie bro di vi kami mehsos nahe hon diti hamesha bro banke sade ang sang rehna.. meri enni aukad nahe hegi ke mein papa da dite nu akhran ch paro sakan.. ..i dun thnk there is words to put his pyar in words..buh i jus wanna dedicate this to mah papa.. i arnt that gud in shayeri but..papa g.. this ones for ya

Putta vanju paleya dheeyan nu nu
Kiwe tera ehsan cukavan ve babula
Rabh kare kadie koye dukh na aveh terian lai lavan sarain balavan ve babula
Nikki jehi nu hathan ch cukk ke khelna oh kiwe bachpana bapis leyavan ve babula
Putta vanju paleya dheeyan nu..kiwe tera ehsan cukavan ve babula

Bina mannge hath vich sabh hona
Shote hundeya ma dian chikran ton bacHayona
Je dil chahve rona tan tuahada ghut seene naal layona
Rabh kare kadie mein tenu na ruvavan ve babula
Putta vangu paleya deheeyan nu
Kiwe tera ehsan cukavan ve babula

Jado nikki hundi ne rona hath ch farh rakhri
Ghut ke seene naal la ke khad leyaoni oh purani chakri
Bankee ghut tere reshmi door dena tera oh pyar ve babula
Pullna nahe menu oh roti pAkAYONA ajj vi dil kare oh choori kawan ve babula
Puttan vangu paleya dheeyan nu kiwe tera ehsan cukavan ve babula

Hath jorh manga maffian rabba ajj babul nu tera darja de bethi
Ohdian sareya supneya nu apna jeyon da maksad bana bethi
Je karrni vi pawe tan karegi roop papa laye kheti
Rabba rakhi salamat hath mere mein apne babul da har farz nibvan ve babula
Puttan vangu playe dheeyan nu
Kiwe tera ehsan cukavan ve babula

Massi nu putt keh ke bulayona
Dil dian gallan nu pyar naal samjayona
Jado jeju kare makual ohdo ohna nu pyar naal khut ke samjayona
Swarg mileeya menu tere vehre ehde bina na mein reh pawan ve babula
Putta vangu payea dheeyan nu
Kiwe tera ehsan cukavan ve babula

Har vari keh dende dheeya dhan paraya hundian
Jana penda eh apne gahre ehi reetan jagh ne khandian
Nah tori ve babul menu teri bukal da nigga sir kadie mil na payona ve babula
Jee nahe hona vichad ke tere kolo kiwe pa lavan kisse hor dian gal bah van ve babula
Puttan vangu paleya dheeyan nu
Kiwe tera ehsan chukavan ve babula

8-> 8-> 8-> veryyyyyyy gooooood =D> =D> but topic te v likhna si kujj

cнιяρу νιвєѕ ツ · « **Reply #38 on:** March 04, 2010, 02:22:25 PM »

nice one mishro and tezy ji

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #39 on:** March 04, 2010, 02:25:01 PM »

Quote from: (ןเภ๔) on March 04, 2010, 01:01:08 PM

8-> 8-> 8-> veryyyyyyy gooooood =D> =D> but topic te v likhna si kujj

oh g mein vekaye hi nahe ke deshpagti tey likhna eh.i thought jehra marzi likh sakde aan.. tahi tan keh rahi aan delete kardo mods sare busy laghde ne /:) /:)

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