Author Topic: Competition: Complete The Story (Read 13522 times)

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #40 on:** January 15, 2011, 05:19:53 PM »

but how many words???

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **Reply #40 on:** January 15, 2011, 05:19:53 PM »

Jioavtar · « **Reply #41 on:** January 15, 2011, 05:50:51 PM »

Gud luck to all ..... Jitan wale nu mere wali oh signal dita jao jhede ne eh sare pawade paye ne :hehe: Hun oh eh such da huna rabb karke oh os kharab hi hu janda ta maja a janda....lozzzzzzz

╬нƹ ѕσυℓ мα╬ƹ™ · « **Reply #42 on:** January 16, 2011, 04:31:59 PM »

jayada time aa janta kol :he:

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #43 on:** January 16, 2011, 05:07:48 PM »

jas theres no limit...u can write 3 paraghraphs or a whole page...upto u :excited:

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #44 on:** January 18, 2011, 08:42:40 AM »

Participation List:
1. NoName
Entry Date: 12/27/10
2. The desi dude
Entry Date: 12/27/10
3. Simarii
Entry Date: 12/27/10
4. Shokeen Munda
Entry Date: work in progress
5. Jatti_Killa4nia_di
Entry Date: work in progress
6. Sarb Gill
Entry Date: work in progress
7. Guglu Muglu (ਗੁਗਲੋ ਮੁਗਲੋ)
Entry Date: work in progress
8. Marjana Gill
Entry Date: 12/29/10
9. ※ḨҰĐṜØŞŦẨ₮ῘḈŜ
Entry Date: work in progress
10. "Mર. ◦[ß]гคг રừlểz™"
Entry Date: work in progress
11. SillyGal
Entry Date: work in progress

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #45 on:** January 18, 2011, 09:06:47 AM »

alrite i need atleast 20 participants to sign up...come on people. i know u hate writing...but jyada ni likhna pehna...if u can write a paragraph ...dat works fine. so lets gooooooooooo ..jaldi likho apni stories te mere inbox ch pej do... jyada lazy ni bani da pj wasio... hun mara mota dimag nu chla loh...dekiya ta kina ku haga thoda..hahahha :Laugh: anywys have ur stories in by feb. 28, 2011 and goodluck :excited:

Jhanda_Amli · « **Reply #46 on:** January 18, 2011, 02:25:04 PM »

Quote from: ♥ Sahiba ♥ on January 18, 2011, 09:06:47 AM

alrite i need atleast 20 participants to sign up...come on people. i know u hate writing...but jyada ni likhna pehna...if u can write a paragraph ...dat works fine. so lets gooooooooooo ..jaldi likho apni stories te mere inbox ch pej do... jyada lazy ni bani da pj wasio... hun mara mota dimag nu chla loh...dekiya ta kina ku haga thoda..hahahha :Laugh: anywys have ur stories in by feb. 28, 2011 and goodluck :excited:

:hehe: ... why 20? :hehe:

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #47 on:** January 18, 2011, 05:52:16 PM »

oda hi random number agya dimag ch lolz :hihpanga:

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #48 on:** January 18, 2011, 09:24:32 PM »

ohh ok mein likhugaaaa :excited: :excited: :excited:
feb 28 ta bohat dur hai make it feb 10 shorter is better
ki pata odho tak duniya hi naa khatam ho jawe lolzz
awe baad ch sare hell ch jaa k dharmrajj kole roula paunn gye k simraii nu milyeooo assi story de result dekhne a

Sardar_Ji · « **Reply #49 on:** January 20, 2011, 06:44:05 PM »

good idea.

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #50 on:** January 23, 2011, 07:13:09 PM »

  :pjrocks:

Participation List:
1. NoName
   Entry Date: 12/27/10
2. The desi dude
   Entry Date: 12/27/10
3. Simarii
   Entry Date: 12/27/10
4. Shokeen Munda
   Entry Date: 1/18/11
5. Jatti_Killa4nia_di
   Entry Date: work in progress
6. Sarb Gill
   Entry Date: work in progress
7. Guglu Muglu (ਗੁਗਲੋ ਮੁਗਲੋ)
   Entry Date: work in progress
8. Marjana Gill
   Entry Date: 12/29/10
9. ※ḨҰĐṜØŞŦẨ₮ῘḈŜ
   Entry Date: work in progress
10. "Mર. ◦[ß]гคг રừlểz™"
   Entry Date: work in progress
11. SillyGal
   Entry Date: work in progress
12. ♥ღஜ♥ .....♥ღஜ♥
   Entry Date: 1/18/11
13. Gurpinder Mand
   Entry Date: 1/20/11
14. Tarn Ji
   Entry Date: 1/21/11
15. Kudrat Grewal
   Entry Date: work in progress
16. Grenade Singh
   Entry Date: work in progress
17. Powerlifter
Entry Date: work in progress
18. →ੴ ਯਮਲਾ ਜੱਟ ੴ←
   Entry Date: work in progress
19. Gucci
   Entry Date: work in progress
20. Soni
   Entry Date: work in progress
21. Titlee
Entry Date: work in progress
Folks you have 7 days left...lets goooo....Get writing :thaa: :he:

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #51 on:** January 24, 2011, 09:51:31 AM »

the deadline has been changed...story's are due before january 28, 2011 :excited:

_noXiouS_ · « **Reply #52 on:** January 29, 2011, 11:58:43 PM »

chalo deadline over, let's see the stories, start the voting!

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #53 on:** February 01, 2011, 05:22:50 AM »

Thank You to all those who participated in the competition. You all did great! =D>

Now i do voting a little different. I'm going to present two stories every day and whichever one gets the most votes is going to move on to compete with other stories. :comeon: :excited:

For today our first stories are written by Gurpinder Mand and Tarn Ji. :okk:

You have to vote whose story you liked better over all. :excited:

Enjoy! And dont just vote for friends guys, do it for the person that deserves it! :rockon:

Gurpinder Mand:-

IK kudi car vich behti jah rai hundi ah ....te red light te jake ruk jandi...ohde nal ik munda pull up krda... jera motorcyle te hunda...n fer oh ohdi tarf dekh da... te oh odi purani school friend hundi ah... oh ohnu bulonda but janu signal green ho janda te oh chale jandi ! ........... Jado signal green hunda tae munda b apne ghar wali sadak tae ghar chala janda. Pher agla din ous time oyi signal tae munda dubara ous nu dekh da, par ess time kuri kise munda naal hundi tae munda soch da shaydh ous da pati hao ga. pher green signal hunda tae oh apne ghar chali jandi tae munda apne ghar chala janda. Pher next day munda thora late ho janda par oh pher ous kuri ous signal tae milda ki dekh ajj oh 4 different mundaya naal haa. tae mundae 4 bahut kush san par oh kuri apna dhyan sadak rakh k signal di wait kar rahi c. tae ana nu signal green hunda tae oh apne ghar chali jandi tae munda apne ghar chala janda. ajj 4th day c oh apna office kam finish time ous signal tae ponch janda par oh kuri ous signal tae nai dekh da kush time motorcyle side ta la k wait kar da par o kuri nahi andi pher apne ghar chala janda..... pher 5ve din ous di wait karda par kuri nahi andi. 6ve din oh pher ous kuri nu ous signal tae dekh da tae ess waar oh 2, 40 saal dae kareeb bandaya naal ja rahi c tae sab bahut kush najar rahe san... aah dekh k Munda sochan tae majboor ho gaya k roj aah nave bandaya ja mundaya aah andi aa chakar ki aa........ tae munda nu oh kuri school time toa bahut pasandh c par oh apne dil di galh das ni sakya. ess time b oh dasna chounda c par nahi dass sakya. ana nu oh ghar ponchya gaya tae ous di mata nae pushya putt odas kayun haa tae munda khenda kush ni maa ajj office vich kaffi kam hun kar k thoda jaya thakya haan. anae nu ous da dost aa janda tae pushda da kanjra ki galh ajj totae udae lagg dae aa... tae pher ous sari galh das dae tae ous dost khenda salya ohde pishae jaa k dekh pher koi decision. tae munda haaaaaaa aah tae mae sochaya nahi c. pher agla munda 1 ghanta phela ja k signal tae khara rehnda kuri andi tae oh apna bike ous dae pishae la lenda. pher oh ki dekh k kuri ik thaa gadi ta othe 2-3 munde gaddi vich bethae utar jande tae 3-4 hor char jande oh munda hakka bakka rahh gaya k ho ki raya ........ pher oh ous dae pishae 50-60 km janda tae oh kuri ohna munda nu utyaar rahi hundi k oh apna biki ik dam ous gaddi dae aggae la k khara kar dinda tae utar k khar janda... anae kuri b gaddi cho utar di tae ous valah dekh k thora jaya hass di tae pher valah tur pendhi aa.. tae munda ous valh tur penda..... tae kol k kuri push oye bandar dae bacha motorcycle kyu khari ti... tae mundaya ni bandar diya bachiya ki galh roj tu nayae nayae bandar na ghum di chakar ki aa.... oh kuri kehndi teri matt ta ni vajj gae bhootni daya mae ta apna kam kar di aa.. munda anda manu pata tu jerda kam kardi aa roj navae mundaya la k kadae odar kadae adar ghum di rehndi aa... kuri kahndi chup karja nahi ta ik thoak deni mae ana sundae munda da sara pyar bhoot utar janda tae pher push da hasha pher dass galh ki a? tae dass di k galh ni tenu pata ayi aa india da haal. jidae kolo paisa tae safrish ous nu job mil jandi aa mae apni ist grade vich degree lan toa badh unemployment aa tae ghar dang saran layi mae hun taxi chalandi aa. tae bapu ji tae maa ji tae shotae veer di pardayi likhayi sari jumevari mere taae aa gae haa. tae mundae akha vich athroo aa jande tae apna ghar chala janda aah sab sunn k tae... tae badh vich oh pher kinaae dina baad ous nu signaal tae milda tae ous nu ishara karda oh ess time ous kolo andi tae munda ous nu signal tae vichkar traffic intersection tae vichar kar sare side traffic jam ho gaya tae sab ohna valh dekhan gussae vich dekhan laggae tae ana nu oh munda ous kuri nu purpose karda tae kuri hass k mandh jandi tae oh purpose ta chalon theek ana nu traffic police vala janda oh phar k munda da sara ashqi da bhoot thane vich kadh dae ....... pher oh munda ous kuri naal shaadi kar lenda tae ous dae mummy daddy tae shotae veer nu sab nu laa k ik family vich rehna shuru kar dinda tae....

hun kuri nae taxi job shad diti tae oh mundae nae safarish labh k paisa pusae dae k kuri nu b job utae lava ta happy happy rah rahe nae.........

Tarn Ji

IK kudi car vich behti jah rai hundi ah ....te red light te jake ruk jandi...ohde nal ik munda pull up krda... jera motorcyle te hunda...n fer oh ohdi tarf dekh da... te oh odi purani school friend hundi ah... oh ohnu bulonda but janu signal green ho janda te oh chale jandi !

THEN BOY US NU FOLLOW KARDA HAI …. GIRL FEEL KARDI HAI KI KOI US NU FOLLOW KAR REHA HAI…. THEN OH POLICE NU CALL KARI HAI. BOY APNE MAN CH BAHUT HI KUSH HO REHA HUNDA HAI KI OHH APNI FRIEND NU MILAN JA REHA HAI BUT US NAHI PATA KI US NAAL KI HOON WALA HAI … KUDI DI CAR FIR IK RED SIGNAL TE JA RUKDI HAI THEN MUDA GAAL KARAN HI WALA HUNDA HAI TE INNE TIME CH POLICE UTHE AA JANDI HAI … BOY DI KOI GAAL NAHI SUNDA OHHHH BOLAN DI KOSHISH KARDA HAI BUT POLICE US NU NAAL LE JANDI HAI … MUNDA KEHDA MERA KI KASUR HAI MAIN TE KUCH KITA VI NAHI BUT KOI NAHI SUNDA …. OHHH SARI RAAT POLICE STATION CH SPEND KARDA TE SOCHDA USNE KITA KI JO US NU SAJA MIL RAHI HAI ….

THEN NEXT DAY POLICE OHH KUDI NU VI BULANDI HAI SETTELMENT LAI … JADOO KUDI ANDI HAI TE MUDA LITTLE BIT RO REHA HUNDA HAI …. OHHH KUDI NU IGNORE KARAN DI KOSHISH KARDA HAI INNE HI TIME CH KUDI US BOY NU PEHCHAN LENDI HAI THEN US DA NAAM LE KE BULANDI HAI JADO MUNDA US WAAL DEKHDA HAI TE KUDI SORRY FEEL KARDI HAI … OHH KEHNDI MENU MUAFF KAR DE KEHANDI INNE DINNA BAAD MILE OHHH VI GAL FEHMI DI SIKAR HO GAI MAIN PEHCHAN NAHI SAKI C TENU US TIME…
BOY US TIME US DI SORRY ACCEPT KAR LENDA HAI THEN SMILE KARDA HAI. KUDI APNI COMPLAINT WAPIC LE LENDI HAI TE BOY NU APNE GHAR INVITE KARDI HAI …

KUCH MONTH BEET JANDE NE THEN …. MUNDA KUDI DE BIRTHDAY PARTY TE JANDA TE NAAL KUDI TE MAAN PASAND FLOWER LE K JANDA TE NAAL HI KUDI NU PERPOSE KAR DENDA HAI … US DI SHAYAD KISMAT CHANGI C JO KUDI VI US NU ACCEPT KAR LENDI HAI … MUNDA BAHUT HI KUSH KAMLA HOYA FIRDA …. JIVE US NE RAB NU PA LEYA HUNDA HAI … US NE KUDI NU PROMISE KARDA J US DI LIFE CH AA JANDI HAI TE OHH APNI SUB MADIYAAN ADTAAN CHAD DU GA … US NE KITA VI KUDI VI CAHUNDI C KI OHH US NAAL RAVE …..

OHHNA TE PARMATMA DI MEHAR HOI TE DONA DA VIYA HO GEYA …. KUCH MAHINE BEET GAYE ….ACHANAK BOY DE FRIEND DE GHAR PARTY CHAL RAHI HUNDI HAI TE MUNDA BAHUT HI JAYADA DRINK KAR LENDA HAI .. TE US DE FRIEND US NU FIR TOON US DI WIFE DI GAAL US NU YAAD KARWA DENDE NE KI US WIFE DE KARAN OHHH SARI RAAT JAIL CH REHA … JO INSULT HOI OHHH KIVE BARDASH KAR SAKDA HAI….US NE DARU TE PEHLAAN HI PETI HUNDI HAI OHHH GHAR PAHUNCH K APNI WIFE NU KUTNA SURU KAR DENDA HAI … PATA NAHI JIVE US TE KOI SHATAAN SAVAR HO GEYA HOVE OHH TE JANWAR BAN GEYA APNI WIFE NU JANWARAAN DI TAAN MAARI JA REHA TE KEHNDA TERI WAJHAN NAAL MAIN SARI RAAT JAIL CH REHA … THEN AGAIN KUTNA SURU HO JANDA HAI ….

BUS MORNING HUNDI HAI TE MUNDE NU YAAD VI NAHI HUNDA KI US NE KITA KI C … OHH DEKHDA HAI KI US DI WIFE GHAR NAHI HAI OHH TE US NU CHAD K JA CHUKI HUNDI HAI US NU PATA OHH FLOOR TE KUCH BLOOD DEKHDA HAI TE SOCHDA HAI KI KI HOYA BLOOD KIS DA HAI TE US DI WIFE KITHE HAI … OHH APNI WIFE DE CELL TE CALL LARDA HAI BUT OHH VI SWITCH OFF HUNDA HAI … OHH TENSION CH AA JANDA TE KUCH HOR NAHI SOCHDA SIDA POLICE KOL CHALA JANDA TE MISSING COMPALIANT LIKHA DENDA HAI OHH SOCHDA SHAYAD US DI WIFE KIDNAP HO GAI HAI …

KUCH DIN BEETDE NE…….. TE US NU IK UNKNOWN NUMBER TOON CALL ANDI HAI … OHH KEHNDA HAI KI IK DEAD BODY MILI HAI TE VERIFCATION LAI AA JAOOO … OHHH RONA HOYA TENSION DE VICH PAHUNCHDA HAI … JADOO OHH DEAD BODY NU DEKHDA HAI OHH BURII TARAN DAMAGED HUNDI HAI … OHH PEHCHAN CH NAHI AUNDI OHHH US DEAD BODY DI FINGER CH IK RING DEKHDA HAI TE APNI MANGNI DI RING YAAD AA JANDI HAI …. TE BODY VERIFY KAR K US NU LE JANDA HAI AND ANTIM SANSKAR VI KAR DENDA HAI ….. OHH ALMOST SHOCK WICH HUNDA HAI KI ACHANAK AA SUB KI HO GEYA …

IK DIN OHH APNE OFFICE JA REHA HUNDA HAI TE IK KUDI TE ACHANAK DEKHDA HAI OHH HOR KOI NAHI US DI WIFE HUNDI HAI OHH US DE KOL JANDA HAI TE RONA SURU HO JANDA TE KEHNDA TU KIYOO CHAD K CHALI GAI US NU … OHHH US NU KUCH NAHI KEHNDI TE JAN LUGDI HAI …
MUNDA US DA HUTH FAD LENDA HAI TE DEKHDA HAI US DE HUTH TE
BAHUT SARE NISHAN HUNDE NE TE PUCHDA AA KIVE HOYA
TE KIS NE KITA … KEHDA OHH KOUN HAI JIS NE US DI WIFE TE HUTH CHUKAN DI KOSHI KITI …. OHH US NU KHATAM KAR DEVE GA …

US DI WIFE US NU KEHNDI OHH INSAAN HOR KOI NAHI OHH TU HI HAI
….. FIR INNI GAAL GAAL SUN K OHH CHALA JANDA HAI US NU YAAD AUNDA KI US NE KI GALTI KITI C … OHH FIR APNI WIFE NU MILDA TE MUAFI MANGDA OHH MUAFF NAHI KARDI .. EH GAAL US DE DIL TE LUG JANDI HAI ..TE OHHH SUCIDE KAR LENDA HAI TE APNI LAST NOTE TE LIKH JANDA HAI KI “JO HOYA US NU PATA NAHI PAR HO SAKE TE US NU MUAF KAR DEVI”

FIR HONA KI C KUDI NU JADO US DA KHAT MILDA HAI TE TE DEPRESION CH CHALI JANDI HAI AND OHHHH PAGAL HO JANDI HAI … KI SOCHDE HOYE KI US DE KARAN AA SUB HO GEYA ……ITHE HI IK LOVE STORY KHATAM HO JANDI HAI …………

AA KOI FILMI KAHANI NAHI JO REALALITY CH HUNDA MAIN OHHH DUS REHA ….IF JE MERI STORY KISE NU PASAND I HOVE TE DHANWAD …. US DA JIS NU PASAND NA I HOVE US DA VI DHANWAD

SUB DA HURMAN PIYAARA

TARNBIR SINGH

Alright you have your stories, start voting! Either Gurpinder Mand or Tarn Ji! Whose your pick? :excited:

ਕਰਮਵੀਰ ਸਿੰਘ · « **Reply #54 on:** February 01, 2011, 05:40:48 AM »

meri vote e ji mand sahb nu vadia likhya
Nd taran ji likhya tuc v changa e bt apni apni pasand e ji sry

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #55 on:** February 02, 2011, 07:05:26 AM »

You need to vote or I'm takin final decision :waitin:

_noXiouS_ · « **Reply #56 on:** February 02, 2011, 10:28:28 PM »

Can you clarify the voting rules again? So, the voting will be only between two users that you chose for that day? How are you choosing these users, for them to have competition between each other? If so, how long are planning to give the users time to vote? - this will be endless and messy!

Doesn't it make sense to have the voting all at once by creating a poll?

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #57 on:** February 02, 2011, 10:30:45 PM »

Quote from: _noXiouS_ on February 02, 2011, 10:28:28 PM

Can you clarify the voting rules again? So, the voting will be only between two users that you chose for that day? How are you choosing these users, for them to have competition between each other? If so, how long are planning to give the users time to vote? - this will be endless and messy!

Doesn't it make sense to have the voting all at once by creating a poll?

yea ur right..janta's too lazy... i knew dis would have never worked out yo yo

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #58 on:** February 02, 2011, 10:31:43 PM »

ill post da othr stories but poll kida bnona...dnt knw :lost:

_noXiouS_ · « **Reply #59 on:** February 02, 2011, 10:35:17 PM »

Quote from: ♥ Sahiba ♥ on February 02, 2011, 10:31:43 PM

ill post da othr stories but poll kida bnona...dnt knw :lost:

Create a separate topic with the poll: poll ch sare users de naam paa jinha ne participate kita.

And post everyone's story in this topic.

Also, provide a voting close date.

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