Author Topic: Competition: Complete The Story (Read 11139 times)

♥Simmo♥ · « **Reply #60 on:** February 03, 2011, 02:11:59 AM »

Shokeen Munda
oh kudi jehri hundi aa ohnu chete aonda aa ke, haye mai taa pehla hi late aa minu time naal viah ch phuchna c, oh confuse oh jandi ah soch rahi hundi ah, ke hun ki kariye je ehde naal gall karagi taa late hona hi hona, ohde kol ek coin hunda ah, tuwanu chete howe taa eh sikka(coin) tusi pehla v vekhea howega, sholey movie ch jehra lamboo kol sikka hunda ah, mera mtlb amitabh bachpan, oh sory bachhan, aho ohi sikka kuri ute nu suttdi ah, like jida cricket match ch tose karde hunde ah, te fer tusi jande hi oh ke sikka dowe passe ek sign wala siga, oh kuri viah wala passa hi wish karke suttdi aa sikke nu, fer hona ki oh jitgi, te chali oh kush hoke apne frnd de viah ch, gaddi shooooooooooooo karke legi mitro, oh munda chalan lag pea ah taa vekhda bike nu puncher ho gea, hun oh puncher lawan li phuch janda aa shop te, othe jake ki vekhda ah ke eh banda taa oh ah jehri mai exam sheet chori karke exchange karti c, like jida mel karade rabba movie ch hunda ah, same to same bas bai oh banda masa hi otho jan bacha ke onda ah, te suddenly ohnu raste ch ohda ek frnd mil janda ah, oh bolda aja mitra viah ch chaliye, oh v chal pehnda aa viah ch, mundeya nu taa mauka chaida hunda ah, bas fer oh kuri v othe hi aai hoyee c, ah mai thori jehi hindi movie di story churai ah, kise nu naa dassi ok, hanji aghe suno bai fer ki oh munde te kuri nu taa pata ni c, ke ethe mil jange, bai mundeya ne gaah paya hoyea c, sare rurki marka pegg laye hoye, sab nu 1 bande de 4 dis rahe c, bai kuria v rajj ke nach rahia sigia, te oh kuri da v man kita ke mai v nachagi, oh v hulle hullare karan lag peyee, bas fer munde ute ohdi najar peh jani ah, kuri nu kushi hundi ah bot bot, kushi kahdi guess taa karo.........hmmmmmmmmmm........oh yaar oh kuri nu kushi esh karke hundi aa je oh sika karke tose na kardi te viah attend karan toh reh jandi hun vekho viah v attend ho gea, utto viah ch bane aa garam garam gulabjamun or goll gappe, kuri nu dowe hi bot pasand bas fer ohdi kushi da tikana ni reha, te munda v mil gea, bai fer ki eda hi oh dowe mil jande ah, ohna di sohni jehi love story chal pehndi ah, oh kuri school time toh hi like kardi hundi c waheguru ne hun ohna di love story sire lati, yaar thora suspense karde aa, subhash ghai di movie toh chura lende aa thori jehi story, acha aghe suno bai kuri dilo jaan toh munde nu pyar karan lag peyee, or munda v, done jane ek duje bina nahi reh sakde c, bai kuri ne keya ke mere nal viah kado karona ah,
munda v ohnu bot chaunda siga, but mai ek suspense paon laga movie toh chakk ke oh ah ke munde da viah hoya hunda aa pehla, v but oh pehla toh hi ek duje nu pasand karde c,oh school wali kuri nd eh munda kade oh viah wali kuri nu smj leyo ok, or munde di gharwali ohnu payr c ni kardi, bas fer bai ethe panga peh janda, hun kuri bole ke viah kar lende ah, hun ni vichora seh hunda, hun munda kiwe ohnu dasiye, oh soch soch kamla hoyee janda, ke mai ehnu kiwe dassa, mai taa apne pyar naal dhoka kar reha ah, oh sochda ke minu eh sab pehla hi dass dena chaida c, dowe pyar jaano wadh chuande ek dujje nu but munda darda naa dasse ke kade mera pyar minu shadd dewe, taa kiwe dassa, mitro fer ki ohne himmat karke ek din osh kuri nu sab dass deya, oh kuri sacha pyar kardi c ohnu, osh kuri ne pushea ke tusi mainu eh dasso tusi apni life ch kush nahi c, oh munda dassda bai ohnu kuri nu ke nahi sohniye je mai kush hunda taa, mai inna begairt ni ke dokah deke mai apna pyar poanda, bolea mai shru toh hi tainu pyar karda, bas bapu di job karke ohne ekdum bharo jana peya, othe ghar deya ne thakke naal viah kar deya c munde da, ohne sab dassiya ke ohdi biwi ohnu kuttdi aa, rojj kutta khani kardi ah ohde naal, or ohdi wife ch bot atitude hunda aa, paise da, oh munde nu tourcher kardi rehndi ah, fer ohna wicho kade pyar nih hoya, hun bai vehlro fer kuri ohnu pajj ke jaffiiiiiiiiiiiizzzzzzzzzzz pa lendi ah, boldi ah ke haye tu inna pyar karda minu, boli tusi mere pishe inne dukh sehe, boli hun nih dukh jarne asi, mitro fer ki oh court ch case pa ke divorce kar lende ah pehle viah toh, bacho apna viah kar lende ah,
kushi kushi rehn lag jande ah, bot bot bot pyar karde ekdujje nu, haye mai war dewa sara jahaan ehna ute inna pyar karde dowe jane,

waheguru ji sab nu ohna da pyar dewe, sab kushi kushi rehn ekdujje naa,
♥ღஜ♥ .....♥ღஜ
os to baad oh munda ohda pisha karda wa per kuri nikal jandi wa
oh munda himmet nai haarda wa .. oh kehnda j kismet ch milna hoya ta rabh jrur milauga..
fir ik din munda apne ik frd nall ohdi engagement (mangna) lai shopping mall janda wa
uthe oh kuri b hundi .. oh munda us kuri nu wekhda wa te bahut khush hunda wa .. jado tak oh ohde kol janda kuri chal jandi a (sad)
oh munda bahut sad ho janda wa .. fir oh sochna shad dinda wa ik apa kadi milage
finally oh apne frd di engagement te janda wa .. jaddo ohda frd ohnu apni mangetar nall milon lai janda wa
ta oh kuri ohdi ohi purani frd nikaldi (lol).. oh ohnu wekh k bahut khush hunda wa per jad ohde dimaag ch onda ki ehdi ta engagement ah
ohda dil tutt janda .. hun tuci sochegi kiu .. coz oh onh pyaar karda hun wa .. is tarah oh hun uthe shad chal janda wa
hope u like it
thanks

Gurpinder Mand
IK kudi car vich behti jah rai hundi ah ....te red light te jake ruk jandi...ohde nal ik munda pull up krda... jera motorcyle te hunda...n fer oh ohdi tarf dekh da... te oh odi purani school friend hundi ah... oh ohnu bulonda but janu signal green ho janda te oh chale jandi ! ........... Jado signal green hunda tae munda b apne ghar wali sadak tae ghar chala janda. Pher agla din ous time oyi signal tae munda dubara ous nu dekh da, par ess time kuri kise munda naal hundi tae munda soch da shaydh ous da pati hao ga. pher green signal hunda tae oh apne ghar chali jandi tae munda apne ghar chala janda. Pher next day munda thora late ho janda par oh pher ous kuri ous signal tae milda ki dekh ajj oh 4 different mundaya naal haa. tae mundae 4 bahut kush san par oh kuri apna dhyan sadak rakh k signal di wait kar rahi c. tae ana nu signal green hunda tae oh apne ghar chali jandi tae munda apne ghar chala janda. ajj 4th day c oh apna office kam finish time ous signal tae ponch janda par oh kuri ous signal tae nai dekh da kush time motorcyle side ta la k wait kar da par o kuri nahi andi pher apne ghar chala janda..... pher 5ve din ous di wait karda par kuri nahi andi. 6ve din oh pher ous kuri nu ous signal tae dekh da tae ess waar oh 2, 40 saal dae kareeb bandaya naal ja rahi c tae sab bahut kush najar rahe san... aah dekh k Munda sochan tae majboor ho gaya k roj aah nave bandaya ja mundaya aah andi aa chakar ki aa........ tae munda nu oh kuri school time toa bahut pasandh c par oh apne dil di galh das ni sakya. ess time b oh dasna chounda c par nahi dass sakya. ana nu oh ghar ponchya gaya tae ous di mata nae pushya putt odas kayun haa tae munda khenda kush ni maa ajj office vich kaffi kam hun kar k thoda jaya thakya haan. anae nu ous da dost aa janda tae pushda da kanjra ki galh ajj totae udae lagg dae aa... tae pher ous sari galh das dae tae ous dost khenda salya ohde pishae jaa k dekh pher koi decision. tae munda haaaaaaa aah tae mae sochaya nahi c. pher agla munda 1 ghanta phela ja k signal tae khara rehnda kuri andi tae oh apna bike ous dae pishae la lenda. pher oh ki dekh k kuri ik thaa gadi ta othe 2-3 munde gaddi vich bethae utar jande tae 3-4 hor char jande oh munda hakka bakka rahh gaya k ho ki raya ........ pher oh ous dae pishae 50-60 km janda tae oh kuri ohna munda nu utyaar rahi hundi k oh apna biki ik dam ous gaddi dae aggae la k khara kar dinda tae utar k khar janda... anae kuri b gaddi cho utar di tae ous valah dekh k thora jaya hass di tae pher valah tur pendhi aa.. tae munda ous valh tur penda..... tae kol k kuri push oye bandar dae bacha motorcycle kyu khari ti... tae mundaya ni bandar diya bachiya ki galh roj tu nayae nayae bandar na ghum di chakar ki aa.... oh kuri kehndi teri matt ta ni vajj gae bhootni daya mae ta apna kam kar di aa.. munda anda manu pata tu jerda kam kardi aa roj navae mundaya la k kadae odar kadae adar ghum di rehndi aa... kuri kahndi chup karja nahi ta ik thoak deni mae ana sundae munda da sara pyar bhoot utar janda tae pher push da hasha pher dass galh ki a? tae dass di k galh ni tenu pata ayi aa india da haal. jidae kolo paisa tae safrish ous nu job mil jandi aa mae apni ist grade vich degree lan toa badh unemployment aa tae ghar dang saran layi mae hun taxi chalandi aa. tae bapu ji tae maa ji tae shotae veer di pardayi likhayi sari jumevari mere taae aa gae haa. tae mundae akha vich athroo aa jande tae apna ghar chala janda aah sab sunn k tae... tae badh vich oh pher kinaae dina baad ous nu signaal tae milda tae ous nu ishara karda oh ess time ous kolo andi tae munda ous nu signal tae vichkar traffic intersection tae vichar kar sare side traffic jam ho gaya tae sab ohna valh dekhan gussae vich dekhan laggae tae ana nu oh munda ous kuri nu purpose karda tae kuri hass k mandh jandi tae oh purpose ta chalon theek ana nu traffic police vala janda oh phar k munda da sara ashqi da bhoot thane vich kadh dae ....... pher oh munda ous kuri naal shaadi kar lenda tae ous dae mummy daddy tae shotae veer nu sab nu laa k ik family vich rehna shuru kar dinda tae....

hun kuri nae taxi job shad diti tae oh mundae nae safarish labh k paisa pusae dae k kuri nu b job utae lava ta happy happy rah rahe nae.........

Tarn Ji

IK kudi car vich behti jah rai hundi ah ....te red light te jake ruk jandi...ohde nal ik munda pull up krda... jera motorcyle te hunda...n fer oh ohdi tarf dekh da... te oh odi purani school friend hundi ah... oh ohnu bulonda but janu signal green ho janda te oh chale jandi !

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THEN NEXT DAY POLICE OHH KUDI NU VI BULANDI HAI SETTELMENT LAI … JADOO KUDI ANDI HAI TE MUDA LITTLE BIT RO REHA HUNDA HAI …. OHHH KUDI NU IGNORE KARAN DI KOSHISH KARDA HAI INNE HI TIME CH KUDI US BOY NU PEHCHAN LENDI HAI THEN US DA NAAM LE KE BULANDI HAI JADO MUNDA US WAAL DEKHDA HAI TE KUDI SORRY FEEL KARDI HAI … OHH KEHNDI MENU MUAFF KAR DE KEHANDI INNE DINNA BAAD MILE OHHH VI GAL FEHMI DI SIKAR HO GAI MAIN PEHCHAN NAHI SAKI C TENU US TIME…
BOY US TIME US DI SORRY ACCEPT KAR LENDA HAI THEN SMILE KARDA HAI. KUDI APNI COMPLAINT WAPIC LE LENDI HAI TE BOY NU APNE GHAR INVITE KARDI HAI …

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OHHNA TE PARMATMA DI MEHAR HOI TE DONA DA VIYA HO GEYA …. KUCH MAHINE BEET GAYE ….ACHANAK BOY DE FRIEND DE GHAR PARTY CHAL RAHI HUNDI HAI TE MUNDA BAHUT HI JAYADA DRINK KAR LENDA HAI .. TE US DE FRIEND US NU FIR TOON US DI WIFE DI GAAL US NU YAAD KARWA DENDE NE KI US WIFE DE KARAN OHHH SARI RAAT JAIL CH REHA … JO INSULT HOI OHHH KIVE BARDASH KAR SAKDA HAI….US NE DARU TE PEHLAAN HI PETI HUNDI HAI OHHH GHAR PAHUNCH K APNI WIFE NU KUTNA SURU KAR DENDA HAI … PATA NAHI JIVE US TE KOI SHATAAN SAVAR HO GEYA HOVE OHH TE JANWAR BAN GEYA APNI WIFE NU JANWARAAN DI TAAN MAARI JA REHA TE KEHNDA TERI WAJHAN NAAL MAIN SARI RAAT JAIL CH REHA … THEN AGAIN KUTNA SURU HO JANDA HAI ….

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MUNDA US DA HUTH FAD LENDA HAI TE DEKHDA HAI US DE HUTH TE
BAHUT SARE NISHAN HUNDE NE TE PUCHDA AA KIVE HOYA
TE KIS NE KITA … KEHDA OHH KOUN HAI JIS NE US DI WIFE TE HUTH CHUKAN DI KOSHI KITI …. OHH US NU KHATAM KAR DEVE GA …

US DI WIFE US NU KEHNDI OHH INSAAN HOR KOI NAHI OHH TU HI HAI
….. FIR INNI GAAL GAAL SUN K OHH CHALA JANDA HAI US NU YAAD AUNDA KI US NE KI GALTI KITI C … OHH FIR APNI WIFE NU MILDA TE MUAFI MANGDA OHH MUAFF NAHI KARDI .. EH GAAL US DE DIL TE LUG JANDI HAI ..TE OHHH SUCIDE KAR LENDA HAI TE APNI LAST NOTE TE LIKH JANDA HAI KI “JO HOYA US NU PATA NAHI PAR HO SAKE TE US NU MUAF KAR DEVI”

FIR HONA KI C KUDI NU JADO US DA KHAT MILDA HAI TE TE DEPRESION CH CHALI JANDI HAI AND OHHHH PAGAL HO JANDI HAI … KI SOCHDE HOYE KI US DE KARAN AA SUB HO GEYA ……ITHE HI IK LOVE STORY KHATAM HO JANDI HAI …………

AA KOI FILMI KAHANI NAHI JO REALALITY CH HUNDA MAIN OHHH DUS REHA ….IF JE MERI STORY KISE NU PASAND I HOVE TE DHANWAD …. US DA JIS NU PASAND NA I HOVE US DA VI DHANWAD

SUB DA HURMAN PIYAARA
TARNBIR SINGH

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