Author Topic: Romantic 1st lines ....and deadly 2nd ones (Read 3146 times)

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **on:** December 09, 2009, 08:01:27 PM »

A local newspaper ran a competition asking for a rhyme with the most romantic first line... but the least romantic second line. Here are some of the entries they received.

Oh loving beauty you float with grace
If only you could hide your face

Kind, intelligent, loving and hot;
This describes everything you are not

I want to feel your sweet embrace
But don't take that paper bag off of your face

I love your smile, your face, and your eyes -
Damn, I'm good at telling lies!

I thought that I could love no other
Until, that is, I met your brother.

Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you.
But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead,
the sugar bowl's empty and so is your head.

My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife:
Marrying you screwed up my life

I see your face when I am dreaming.
That's why I always wake up screaming

My love, you take my breath away.
What have you stepped in to smell this way

My feelings for you no words can tell,
Except for maybe "go to helll"

:he: :he:

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** December 09, 2009, 08:01:27 PM »

¸¸.•のæ-☪•.¸¸ · « **Reply #1 on:** December 10, 2009, 09:57:19 AM »

This kind of man is not worth ur love and glance even for less than a fraction of a second
lol
nice post malko again

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #2 on:** December 10, 2009, 10:11:56 AM »

thanks malko.. :he:

Nav Braich · « **Reply #3 on:** December 10, 2009, 10:25:52 AM »

eH LINea TA KUCh Din HI wadIA lAGdIYEa nYE

Singhsaab · « **Reply #4 on:** December 10, 2009, 11:28:18 AM »

Quote from: ♥кнαη∂ мιѕняι♥ on December 09, 2009, 08:01:27 PM

My feelings for you no words can tell,
Except for maybe "go to helll"

:he: :he:

i like that ji =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #5 on:** December 10, 2009, 02:10:36 PM »

thank u guys

urmysunshine · « **Reply #6 on:** October 13, 2011, 06:28:01 AM »

Lol made me laugh.

Dhaliwal. · « **Reply #7 on:** October 13, 2011, 08:12:39 AM »

kinda of funny

G@RRy S@NDHU · « **Reply #8 on:** October 13, 2011, 11:27:29 AM »

aaaawwwww.,., vry nice ji.,., thnku 4 shairing

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