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sher da jawab sher ch.....
« on: December 23, 2008, 10:59:03 PM »
Hanji ithe apan sariyan ne sher o shayri karni aa
par sher ohi likhna jo upar wale de sher da jawab hove...
like padan wale nu lage kee jo sher likhiya oh upar wale da jawab aa


chalo main likhda pahla sher te tusi dena jawab...

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laike tainu wich galwakdi main baat pyar di pawan...
sade ghar sade sajna auna te main dharti pair na lawan..
ve deja ek tasali Tezy kite hizar ch na mar jawan....

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sher da jawab sher ch.....
« on: December 23, 2008, 10:59:03 PM »

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #1 on: December 23, 2008, 11:04:56 PM »
ennne sheyar te nahi aounde bai...

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #2 on: December 23, 2008, 11:08:46 PM »
22 g labho kiton.....
je aap likho te sab to wadia

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #3 on: December 24, 2008, 01:10:47 AM »
koi nahi rehnda iss dunia te hamesha lai,
koi aa janda hai koi chla janda hai,
waqt kade kise lai theharda nahi,
bas aapni raftar naal weh janda hai.
Piche chad janda hai kujh adhuure pal,
jad koi adhoori kahani koi kise nu keh janda hai,

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #4 on: December 24, 2008, 01:24:27 AM »
nic shayari :D but id dnt have and :(

manya koi nai rahnda is dunya ta ..
ah tan oni jani a...
wakht kisa lai nai rukha ah tan
ah tan gal bhot purni aa..
jo aduhra pal jinda han is dunya wich
shid osa wich he shid kisa di puri kahani aa :D

k tht stupid shayar was ma own lolz so if u dnt like it dnt say it :D but enjoya
nd punjaban_kurhi meri gulabo u beter reply on tht post cuz i came here for ya :D luv ya

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #5 on: December 24, 2008, 06:11:05 AM »

haye main marja meri kamliiii....koi ni koi ni main karni a reply ahhaah apne shear start karne a asi fer hahahahah
rehnda na koi...par shad janda yaada a....
jidhe piche rona painda sari sari raata a...
na neend andi na chain anda...
mar dinde bande nu ohde hi jazbaat ne....
adhi teri adhi meri ho jandi poori kahani a...
na din rukda na rat rukdi na rukdi teri yaad sanu ani a.....


sry main ghar ni kidre a is karke jaldi jaldi a hi dimaag ch aya lolzzzzz hih hih

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #6 on: December 24, 2008, 04:50:19 PM »
this post ganna go insane lolzz cuz i know we both ganna end up like tht last post we did oh find tht last post of us iight cuz we ganna start frm where we left iight lolzz .. let me c wht m ganna ryte for tht one :D

heeh tera wala adha samjh aya :D


yada he tan rah jandya na jindgi wich
lok tan wishad janda na raha wich...
pyar wich pa ka lok nidhra gawa bahnda na...
phir dosh dinda na anjana nu ...
kahanya tan bandya mukdiya rahndya na..
insan tan ohi jo chalda raha har mushkil raha wich


haha idk ah kee ban gaya ja samjh a gaya theek na nai tan rab rakha lolz luv ya laddo ;)

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #7 on: December 24, 2008, 10:01:17 PM »
badlo pe kali ghatta shay hai
abh jawab dene k meri bari aye hai


par mainu koi sheyar ne aounda halye be

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #8 on: December 24, 2008, 10:12:08 PM »
Zindgi ch kayi war vichhode sahane painde ne...
Par jo din wich wase oh sda yaad rahinde ne...
Door rahke kade v pyar nahi hai bhulda...
Tezy gal sachi eh sayane lok kahinde ne....

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #9 on: December 25, 2008, 02:26:40 PM »
nic lines pandu .. nd tezy :S manu hun jawab nai anda  Cry:) Cry:) Cry:) Cry:)


durya pyar nu mita nai sakdya..
najdikya pyar nu wada nai sakdya
pyar tan dil wich hunda a ..
kisa door ja nada hon da pharak tan panda hai
par phir be is dil wich pyar tan ova he rahnda a

pata nai kee ban gaya enjoya :D i need to work on shyari ;)

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #10 on: December 26, 2008, 11:38:01 AM »
hhahha hanji billo main kiti c try o labhan dii o wali apni shear post nai ik warini kinni wari kiti menu labhdii nii kise din changi tarah labhni hi paini a hahah koi i i"ll find it:D

pyar hunda na kehan ch na dekhan ch na sunan ch..eh te hunda sirf dil ch..
je mil jae te bedhi paar ho jandi a....
je wichad jae te zindgi barbad ho jandi a...
fer wi lok karde ne pyar....
par dhokha kha hi jande ne har waar.....


hahaha a ghatiza jia lines baniya hahaah hun te shear wi likhne nai ande lolzzz mere kol hun koidil ni na haiga is karke lolzzzz
« Last Edit: December 26, 2008, 11:40:03 AM by PuNjAbAn_KuRhI »

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #11 on: December 26, 2008, 02:39:53 PM »
lolzz same here yo lolzz ova nic likya :D

yaar pyar wala shayar mera demag wich nai anda :( koi hor likh layo lolzz

k main chori da shyar likhan lagi a hun lolzz


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rate ta likha naam kada mite da nai...
sabh kahnda na ke main pather dil han..
par pather ta likha naam kada mitda nai :([/
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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #12 on: December 26, 2008, 02:44:33 PM »
Nice sher o sharyi keep it up guys...

Phulan te kade maan na kariye
Phul sda kamla jande ne...
Patharan
nu na karo bekadre
Pather v sath nibha jande ne...
Apniya te kee maan oh Tezy
apne v dga kama jande ne...
Sandhu eh dil ohnu dayie
jo kabran tak nibha jande ne...

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #13 on: December 26, 2008, 08:41:27 PM »
MUDAT BAAD JAMANE NE SAMJIA HAI....
PHULL NU SUNGE DA PHULL NU KHAIDA NI....
PYAR BAKSHADA HAI ZINDAGI NU.....
PYAR POJI DA HAI PYAR THUKRIE DA NAHI...

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #14 on: December 26, 2008, 09:07:45 PM »
mera shayer kise nu pasand nai aounda.
so appa nai likh de..tusi sariye likho appa read kar leva ge..

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #15 on: December 26, 2008, 11:36:14 PM »
Punjabi kudi g edan bahane la k gal nahi banni
likhna te paina kuch chahe jidan da marji likho...

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #16 on: December 27, 2008, 12:08:01 AM »
chalo fir sochde aa kuch.
je kuch lina jodd geya likh deya ge.

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #17 on: December 27, 2008, 01:17:45 AM »
Zamana samajda je phul di kadar kee e...
Phul nu pairan heth kade koi rolda na...
Je duniya jandi sacha pyar kee e...
Pyar nu paise di takdi koi tolda na...
Je pyar bhulona ena sokha hunda...
Te koi kade khoon de hanju dolda na...
Pta hunda je Tezy nu kee ohne nhi wafa karni...
Te oh zindgi bewafa layi kade v rolda na...

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #18 on: December 27, 2008, 01:13:07 PM »
ajj manu thand lagdi a a  main kalu likhu gi ova be
meri post partner to bina mera likhan nu dil nai karda :D

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Re: sher da jawab sher ch.....
« Reply #19 on: December 27, 2008, 05:16:47 PM »
ISHQ NIMAN SANU SAUN NA DINDA.....
OHDI PAL PAL YAAD SATAWE........
JA RABHA GHAR MAUT A JAVE......
PAR DIL NA KISE TE AWE O RABHA DIL NA KISE TE AWE.....

 

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