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~~menu apna bana lai~~
« on: October 29, 2009, 05:59:30 PM »
vich rakh k kitabi tasveer ve,
main akhraan nal gallaan krdi.
mainu aapni bna lai channa heer ve,
main tere utte kina mardi.

hye koi ni khabar mainu apne haal di.
supne ch fira bs tainu bhaaldi.
chitt kre la lva udaari aasmaan di,
main udne nu fira chir di.
mainu aapni bna lai..............

sadi nabz vi tu sada saah vi tu hai.
sada judge vi tu sada gwaah vi tu hai.
kar lai kabool kine chir di main arzi fira tere muhre dhardi.
mainu aapni bna lai........

sadi ban ja diwali sohne yaara ve.
sanu tere nalo vadh na koi pyara ve.
sheti-2 aaja hun "deep" ve,teri nitt di udeek channa kardi.
mainu aapni bna lai channa heer ve,main tere utte kina mardi....

ps: writer deep
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~~menu apna bana lai~~
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #1 on: October 29, 2009, 06:59:39 PM »
sohna likheya.... thnx 4 sharin sohne
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #2 on: October 29, 2009, 07:04:47 PM »
bahut vadhiya ji  =D> =D>
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #3 on: October 29, 2009, 11:52:15 PM »
veryy nyc sisoo
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #4 on: October 30, 2009, 10:18:03 AM »
thank u guys :hug:
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #5 on: October 30, 2009, 10:46:02 AM »
WOW NICE COPY PASTE,,,MAI FLAT HOGEYA  :surp: :surp: :surp: :lol: :lol: :lol:

GUD JOB ROOP
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #6 on: October 30, 2009, 10:48:14 AM »
Quote from: ♥кнαη∂ мιѕняι♥ on October 29, 2009, 05:59:30 PM
vich rakh k kitabi tasveer ve,
main akhraan nal gallaan krdi.
mainu aapni bna lai channa heer ve,
main tere utte kina mardi.

hye koi ni khabar mainu apne haal di.
supne ch fira bs tainu bhaaldi.
chitt kre la lva udaari aasmaan di,
main udne nu fira chir di.
mainu aapni bna lai..............

sadi nabz vi tu sada saah vi tu hai.
sada judge vi tu sada gwaah vi tu hai.
kar lai kabool kine chir di main arzi fira tere muhre dhardi.
mainu aapni bna lai........

sadi ban ja diwali sohne yaara ve.
sanu tere nalo vadh na koi pyara ve.
sheti-2 aaja hun "deep" ve,teri nitt di udeek channa kardi.
mainu aapni bna lai channa heer ve,main tere utte kina mardi....

ps: writer deep

this is also nice poem....but but..chalo chhaddo  :hehe: :hehe:
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #7 on: October 30, 2009, 05:35:51 PM »
Quote from: sukhbeer on October 30, 2009, 10:46:02 AM
WOW NICE COPY PASTE,,,MAI FLAT HOGEYA  :surp: :surp: :surp: :lol: :lol: :lol:

GUD JOB ROOP
flat na hoyeye plz.. vaise tkx
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #8 on: October 31, 2009, 03:23:11 PM »
tusi tan already mere o  :love:  :hug: :hug: :hug:
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Re: ~~menu apna bana lai~~
« Reply #9 on: November 02, 2009, 04:54:56 PM »
Quote from: קยภןค๒คภ Ŧ๏гєvєг on October 31, 2009, 03:23:11 PM
tusi tan already mere o  :love:  :hug: :hug: :hug:
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yeah g already tuahde aan.. :hug: :hug:
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