Author Topic: For gURLS: le BAbuLa ajj Eh DIN aYEYA!! (Read 3444 times)

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **on:** July 12, 2009, 09:59:18 AM »

I WROTE THIS for my sista.. shez my jaan.. n when shez goona go to her house na..i dun know how m i gonna live without her.. itz story of every gurl when she leave her babhul vehra n go to her sohre ghare.. papa says that kudian dhan pareya hunda eh..pata nahe i wish papa u can keep me with u 4ever..:(

Le babula ajj eh din aaya,
Khushiyan naal tera vehda mehkaaya.
Bajjan shenaiyan hun chaaron paase,
Khidd de mukh dinde dil nu dilaase.

Par sukki jaandi meri jind nimaani,
Pal vich kiven ho gayi begaani.
Kal tak si jo mera sara apna,
Chadd ke challi jiven do pal da sapna.

Hun aauna yaad tera palkan te bithauna,
Russi hoi nu pyaar naal manauna.
Galtiyan hon te sehaj naal samjhauna,
Poonj ke hanju gall naal launa.

Jad aai sewa karan di meri baari,
Khadey sii bhuhey bahar laike savaari.
Jinnhe marzi tarle kar laye eh dhee pyaari,
Hun tan maarni hi pau udaari.

Assesan laike teriyan hun challi ghar paraaye,
Pai gayi us raste jo mainu tu dikhaye.
Izzataan nu chaar chand sabde main laavangi,
Kuj is taran farzaan nu apne main nibhavangi.

haye ve mere dadeya rabba eh tun kehri khed banaye kithe dheeyan jamian tey kithe chog udaye.........

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** July 12, 2009, 09:59:18 AM »

M. · « **Reply #1 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:01:12 AM »

wauw.. very touching.. aww... :cry:

☬🅰🅳🅼🅸🅽☬ · « **Reply #2 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:04:13 AM »

this girl is all about Poetry =D> m sooo going to steal it... hahaa
thank you for shairing :superhappy:

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #3 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:09:04 AM »

@manmohniya..tkx sista 4 liking it..
@belmont.. u gotta sis?... awwww..chori karna eh..karlo no problem..

death_in_dreamz · « **Reply #4 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:35:14 AM »

awesum aa g ::thumbup::thumbup::

=D>=D>=D>=D>=D>

Deleted User · « **Reply #5 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:37:36 AM »

woww realy nice heer

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #6 on:** July 12, 2009, 12:17:22 PM »

tkx guys 4 liking it :hug:

"AWARA PANCHI" · « **Reply #7 on:** July 12, 2009, 03:55:09 PM »

IT IS VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY NICEE

I LIKE IT SO SO SO SO SO SHO SHO SHO MUCH =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #8 on:** July 12, 2009, 04:02:27 PM »

awesome ..sachi bada wadhia likhia per itz sad too..i gotta sis too
i wonder hw i wuld feel when she ill get married ..... :sad:

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #9 on:** July 12, 2009, 06:32:04 PM »

@jassi tkx for liking it g

@meet.. itz so hard to send away ur love one.. but ehi jagh di reet eh as bajurg says.. :)..letz chill if eh judaye lai ke ayonda eh pal tan kushi vi ohni hi hundi eh ek veyah di ryt..:)

Grenade Singh · « **Reply #10 on:** July 12, 2009, 10:04:21 PM »

Quote from: Śυנαρυяια® ਮੀਤ™ on July 12, 2009, 04:02:27 PM

awesome ..sachi bada wadhia likhia per itz sad too..i gotta sis too
i wonder hw i wuld feel when she ill get married ..... :sad:

jina marzi koshish karlayo, jado doli uthdi aa, tan sari duniya bhul jandi, te dil dukh janda.

BTW, marjani heer, I love this type of poetry. Keep writing...

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **Reply #11 on:** July 12, 2009, 11:03:32 PM »

menu bohat vadia lagda jado koi eda di poetry karda i mean to say personal feelings nu... eda shabad dena... bohat bohat shukria sade nal apnian enian sohnia feelings shear karan lai...... please give ma wishes to yor sis... waheguru ona nu sari zindgi de sukh aaram deve...waheguru dunian dian sarian bhaina nu khushian te sirf khushian deve..... bohat mushkil hunda ek kuri lai apna sab kuch chad k nawe ghar jana.... par ode bhain bhara lai koi bohta sokha ni hunda.... par ess dukh ch v kinna sakun hunda hona..... main o sakun kade v hansil nai kar sakda.... a judai da vela kade v meri zindgi ch nai aa sakda....main o pal kade jeeo ni sakda.. ess gall di hamesha menu apne rabb nal narajgi rehni a... kismat...

maf karna main gall nu hor e passe le gayea jada emotional ho gea....

btw bohat sohna likhea...... =D> =D>

death_in_dreamz · « **Reply #12 on:** July 12, 2009, 11:17:01 PM »

Quote from: тнє ਲਾਸਟ..яєνσℓυтιση(∂∑√) on July 12, 2009, 11:03:32 PM

menu bohat vadia lagda jado koi eda di poetry karda i mean to say personal feelings nu... eda shabad dena... bohat bohat shukria sade nal apnian enian sohnia feelings shear karan lai...... please give ma wishes to yor sis... waheguru ona nu sari zindgi de sukh aaram deve...waheguru dunian dian sarian bhaina nu khushian te sirf khushian deve..... bohat mushkil hunda ek kuri lai apna sab kuch chad k nawe ghar jana.... par ode bhain bhara lai koi bohta sokha ni hunda.... par ess dukh ch v kinna sakun hunda hona..... main o sakun kade v hansil nai kar sakda.... a judai da vela kade v meri zindgi ch nai aa sakda....main o pal kade jeeo ni sakda.. ess gall di hamesha menu apne rabb nal narajgi rehni a... kismat...

maf karna main gall nu hor e passe le gayea jada emotional ho gea....

btw bohat sohna likhea...... =D> =D>

bai g tohada emotional hona v shi aa
but tusi ikalle ni jihna nu rabb naal es gal ton narazgi aa ..
hor v bohat eda de ne jihna nu eh pyar naseeb ni hunda ..
te kahiyan naal ta rabb ehnni maddi krda k ohna nu sb kujh de k kho v lainda cheti hi..
chal chaddo g ki gila krna os rabb naal v....

rabb da bhahna mn-naa painda
hr khsuhi gaumm nu sir mathe launa painda..
bai g siyane sach hi kehnde ne
jithe rabb rakhe othe rehna painda....

Jhanda_Amli · « **Reply #13 on:** July 13, 2009, 01:05:58 AM »

bhut he sohna likhiya ji.. :)
very touchin n emotional ...

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **Reply #14 on:** July 13, 2009, 03:09:28 AM »

Quote from: death_in_dreamz on July 12, 2009, 11:17:01 PM

bai g tohada emotional hona v shi aa
but tusi ikalle ni jihna nu rabb naal es gal ton narazgi aa ..
hor v bohat eda de ne jihna nu eh pyar naseeb ni hunda ..
te kahiyan naal ta rabb ehnni maddi krda k ohna nu sb kujh de k kho v lainda cheti hi..
chal chaddo g ki gila krna os rabb naal v....

rabb da bhahna mn-naa painda
hr khsuhi gaumm nu sir mathe launa painda..
bai g siyane sach hi kehnde ne
jithe rabb rakhe othe rehna painda....

sahi keha yar.... apni story kuch eda di he hai... bhain na hona udasi dendi a par gum nai..edhar ta gum aa 22 jee.. meri sis sigi par hun nal nai sade..... doli ta ki main arthi v ni dekhi odi... bass onu cheeta te lete dekhea si... 15 k sec basss......... 15 sal da sath si..jan lage bass 15 k sec he sath de sakea....

khair a gall kade fer sahi.......
waheguru rakha....

death_in_dreamz · « **Reply #15 on:** July 13, 2009, 04:25:41 AM »

Quote from: тнє ਲਾਸਟ..яєνσℓυтιση(∂∑√) on July 13, 2009, 03:09:28 AM

sahi keha yar.... apni story kuch eda di he hai... bhain na hona udasi dendi a par gum nai..edhar ta gum aa 22 jee.. meri sis sigi par hun nal nai sade..... doli ta ki main arthi v ni dekhi odi... bass onu cheeta te lete dekhea si... 15 k sec basss......... 15 sal da sath si..jan lage bass 15 k sec he sath de sakea....

khair a gall kade fer sahi.......
waheguru rakha....

main dukh apna luka chipaa k dsda c
nhi janda c tu v fatt ohi ne sahare,

mrn nu dil kre akhiyan cho neer vagge
yaad aounde jd din hass khed bhaina naal guzre,

kash main ohdiyan talliyan te sagnaa d mehndi launda,
kash main ohnu apne hathi doli ch bithounda,
kash ohdi tha te siva mera balll janda,

pr hun eh kash adhura khwab bn k reh geya,
rabba hor kise kolon na khohee ,
sade kolon jo tu pyar satkaar khoo k laigeya....

waheguru sab nu khush rkhi .....

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **Reply #16 on:** July 13, 2009, 05:06:00 AM »

Quote from: death_in_dreamz on July 13, 2009, 04:25:41 AM

main dukh apna luka chipaa k dsda c
nhi janda c tu v fatt ohi ne sahare,

mrn nu dil kre akhiyan cho neer vagge
yaad aounde jd din hass khed bhaina naal guzre,

kash main ohdiyan talliyan te sagnaa d mehndi launda,
kash main ohnu apne hathi doli ch bithounda,
kash ohdi tha te siva mera balll janda,

pr hun eh kash adhura khwab bn k reh geya,
rabba hor kise kolon na khohee ,
sade kolon jo tu pyar satkaar khoo k laigeya....

waheguru sab nu khush rkhi .....

sat nam sri waheguru.........

sal beet gaye.... din raat beet gaye.....
sanu bhain bhara vichre nu kai itehas beet gaye...
hun ta yad v chandri odi kade ondi a kade nai ondi....
aage ta akh sada e gilli rehndi si....
hun ta ovi kade rondi aa kade nai rondi...

tu cher dita aaj ohi dard fer mere yara.....
o hassa o chehra yad aagea jehra menu si bara pyara.....

hun o hassa gum gea kidhare..kann sunna nu tarsde jehnu.....
main jan de dau oss rabb varge bande lai jehra meri didi mor du menu.....

i know a possible nai hai.... menu ni si pata 22 tere nal v kuch eda da he beetea...j main tera dil dukha dita jane anjane menu maf kari yara....

dost hun ethe kuch na kahi.... plz...

$$ TARN JI $$ · « **Reply #17 on:** July 13, 2009, 05:28:49 AM »

=D> =D> =D>

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #18 on:** July 13, 2009, 10:23:05 AM »

Quote from: Grenade Singh on July 12, 2009, 10:04:21 PM

jina marzi koshish karlayo, jado doli uthdi aa, tan sari duniya bhul jandi, te dil dukh janda.

BTW, marjani heer, I love this type of poetry. Keep writing...

TKX G..TUAHNU pasand ayeya..

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #19 on:** July 13, 2009, 10:27:17 AM »

Quote from: тнє ਲਾਸਟ..яєνσℓυтιση(∂∑√) on July 12, 2009, 11:03:32 PM

menu bohat vadia lagda jado koi eda di poetry karda i mean to say personal feelings nu... eda shabad dena... bohat bohat shukria sade nal apnian enian sohnia feelings shear karan lai...... please give ma wishes to yor sis... waheguru ona nu sari zindgi de sukh aaram deve...waheguru dunian dian sarian bhaina nu khushian te sirf khushian deve..... bohat mushkil hunda ek kuri lai apna sab kuch chad k nawe ghar jana.... par ode bhain bhara lai koi bohta sokha ni hunda.... par ess dukh ch v kinna sakun hunda hona..... main o sakun kade v hansil nai kar sakda.... a judai da vela kade v meri zindgi ch nai aa sakda....main o pal kade jeeo ni sakda.. ess gall di hamesha menu apne rabb nal narajgi rehni a... kismat...

maf karna main gall nu hor e passe le gayea jada emotional ho gea....

btw bohat sohna likhea...... =D> =D>

sacchi ksimat vale hunde ne jinna nu sis bro da pyar milda eh... ek gal asisn vi tuahnu ajj apne vare dasde aan g..mera vi koye real bro nahe hega.. but han mere jeju honi n jinne vi bro ne mere net tey ja kite vi..ohna nu mein real ton vi vadh ke chahundi aan...sista de veyah kite..har vari.. ohna di kami mehsos hundi eh nah chahundeya hoyeya vi but m happy that waheugur g ne bro de roop de vich menu mere jeju honi ditte..jina nu mein enna pyar kardi aan ke pusho na..
am so sorry to hear about ur sis g.. but tusi ohna nu har pal yaadh tan karde o na.. she still stays alive in ur heart ehi bahut vaddi gal eh g... tusan tan apna bro hon da har farz nibha rahe o g.. fir tusi kyon udas hona.. n yeah u r lucky that she is ur sis...dila vich kisse nu jeyonde rakhna sabh nalo vaddi gal hundi eh..n meri narzran ch tan tusi har farz nibha rahe o g..god bless ya g

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