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~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« on: July 23, 2010, 05:46:24 PM »
sis de naal vichora.

sim jado di gaye eh veyahi apne ghare
roop tan sacchi bas ekalepan ch marre
ni aja mereye behne teri yaadh badi satave
amri kehke kamliye rondi nu gal lavee..
tere naal bite har ek pal di yaadh badi satave..
ni aja mereye behne tere bina na waqt langayeya jave..

jee karda tere kolo marr udari aa javan
bas tere naal reh ke sari zindgi langa javan
moh de vich pawe tun burki mein oh pyar naal kah javan
bachpan de beeteya pal kash koye morh leyave...
tere naal bite har ek pal di sim yaadh badi satave
ni aja mereya behne tere bina na waqt langayeya jave..
tere bina na waqt langayeya jave..

jado aye c vari teri doli toran di
roop ho ke kamli apne hanjuya nu paro gaye c
dil de vich uthde c cheesan veere de gal lag ke taha mar ro gaye c
tere naal kite ladhan di yaad badi satave..
das ni sim tere bina roop nu oh kaun ladh ladave
ni aja merye behne tere bina na wawt langayeya jve
tere nal bite har ek pal di yaadh badi satave..


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~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« on: July 23, 2010, 05:46:24 PM »

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #1 on: July 23, 2010, 05:53:34 PM »
nice one motto...

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2010, 05:55:05 PM »
nice one motto...
thank u vicksss..
missh mah sis alot.. sahi keha kisse ne..ke veyah ton badh oh pehla vallli gal ni rehndi :sad: :sad:

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #3 on: July 23, 2010, 06:10:14 PM »
sohna likheya par hun eh ta jag de reet hai.. badlana saukha nahi. yaad kuch is tarah rakheo ki osdi yaad tuhanu hamesha agge wadan nu push kare :)
god bless you

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #4 on: July 23, 2010, 06:50:19 PM »
ji sahi keha ji tusi... yaadh tan har ek gal eh buh reha ni janda.. i gues itz gona take timee.. :sad: :sad:

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #5 on: July 23, 2010, 06:54:14 PM »
awwww very nice ji,
a read kerke mainu a ehsaas hoeya k jis din meri sis mere to door jayegi mera ki haal hovega, i luv my sis,  :sad: :sad: :sad:

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #6 on: July 23, 2010, 07:03:28 PM »
itz very tuff to go thru that moment..  :sad: :sad: buh letz jus pray that oh hamesha hasde vasde rehn..

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #7 on: July 23, 2010, 07:05:21 PM »
ji bilkul, ohdi khushi layee taa me kuj v ker sakda haa, le de k ik o hi taa hai mere kol,  :rabb: :rabb: :rabb:

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #8 on: July 23, 2010, 08:09:34 PM »
Rupu beta dnt be sb nai te tera v viyah karke tor dena... smile now

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #9 on: July 23, 2010, 09:58:37 PM »
yup sis appan dowe same he aaa me miss my sisi toooooooooooo   :cry: .

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #10 on: July 23, 2010, 10:10:46 PM »
bhi dheeyian bhena ne aksar jaana hi hunda ik tusi v udd jaanaa
chalo itz a reet jheri chaldi ayi a

and nice shyer

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #11 on: July 23, 2010, 11:27:49 PM »
very nice ji.. really u r awesome write.. its a great ability to write ur feelings over paper in such a woderful way..
Raje Bhena ne tah ik din apne ghar jana hi aa.. appa hege aa ithe tuhada dil layun layee..

Baki i cant say more.. i have not experienced this feeling.. ajj tak veereyean de hi vyah vekhe ne.. vase tah veere v vyah toh baad praye ho jande ne.. :pagel: :happy:

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #12 on: July 24, 2010, 12:25:09 AM »
Nice ji

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Re: ~~bhen(sis) da vichora~~
« Reply #13 on: July 24, 2010, 01:32:05 PM »
ji bilkul, ohdi khushi layee taa me kuj v ker sakda haa, le de k ik o hi taa hai mere kol,  :rabb: :rabb: :rabb:
hasdiya vasdian rehn dheeyan apneya ghara vich ehi dua sadi..
Rupu beta dnt be sb nai te tera v viyah karke tor dena... smile now
nah nah i arn't sad .. c m  :happy:.. torna ni hega aje 2 saal hor plz X_X X_X
yup sis appan dowe same he aaa me miss my sisi toooooooooooo   :cry: .
rovo na plzji
bhi dheeyian bhena ne aksar jaana hi hunda ik tusi v udd jaanaa
chalo itz a reet jheri chaldi ayi a

and nice shyer
kash kujj reetan hi ni hundian jagh utte... bahute ehsan hone c roop de rabh utte..

very nice ji.. really u r awesome write.. its a great ability to write ur feelings over paper in such a woderful way..
Raje Bhena ne tah ik din apne ghar jana hi aa.. appa hege aa ithe tuhada dil layun layee..

Baki i cant say more.. i have not experienced this feeling.. ajj tak veereyean de hi vyah vekhe ne.. vase tah veere v vyah toh baad praye ho jande ne.. :pagel: :happy:
itz lil diff.. mayebe veere vi paraye hunde ne..par sis da eho jeha rhista hunda sis ji.jehda bahut jeyada close hunda.. mein tan sim bina ek pal ni c rehndi tey ajj menu.. ohde bina door rehna pai reha..itz hard.. sahi kehnde c mom honi..ke sanu bachpan ch ek duje ton thora door rakhna c so that jad oeh vela aveh tan enna mish na karan mein sim nu...  :sad: :sad:
Nice ji
thank u ji

 

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