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Socha de samundar ch dubb janda . . . . .
jdo tere naam warga koi naam sunaa mai. . . .
Mainu ghaat hamsafar di rarhakdi jdo . .  .
Ehna raaha te turaa mai. . . .
Sochda sochda khyala ch. . . . .
gum ho janda  mai aksar  . . . . .
Ho gyi jo juda tu maitho . . . . .
Aise keetay ki gunaah mai. . . . . .

Siyaane kehnde bina parkhea . . . .
kise nu kahiye mera mera na . . . .
Azaad parinde vangu shad dayiye usnu. . . . .
aive baaha da usnu payiye ghera na . . . . .
je mud aave sohna yaar ta rehmat rab di. . . . .
je na murhe ta samji oh kde v dilo hoya tera na . . . . .

tu shadna chahundi  c mainu . .  . .
ta mai v baaha nu khol ditta . . .
Pyar sache dilo kita c tainu mai . . .
tere lyi hanju rorh har ik anmol ditta. . . . .   
tu vaapas na aayi kade v. . . . . .
te mai apni javani nu mitti de vich rol ditta . . . . . .
 
chal koyi na j tu tur gyi aa . . . .
mai v gal dil te nae launi . . . .
Nae rog jind nu lgauna . . . . . .
te Rooh hijar de faahe nae launi  . . . . .
Joban ne v laa laini hun navea naal yari . . . . . .
aive tere dukh ch apni zindgi nae mukauni . . . . . . . . . . . .

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