Author Topic: meri wafai ....plz help me (Read 2441 times)

$$ TARN JI $$ · « **on:** December 20, 2009, 01:19:08 PM »

har pal main v tainu chaunda c bada
tere har faisley ch tere naal c khada
fer jad tu mere kolon mukh morh leya
tera oh janma janma da rishta tu isey janam ch torh leya
main socheya chal teri koi majboori honi hai
tu v mainu yaad kar dhada ronni eh,
kash eh sabh kuch sach ho janda
fer main hasdey hasdey sada layee so janda
hun maut v ni auni mainu mere is haal ch

last line if u can
bcoz i culd not find best line
thnx

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** December 20, 2009, 01:19:08 PM »

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #1 on:** December 20, 2009, 01:30:14 PM »

har pal main v tainu chaunda c bada
tere har faisley ch tere naal c khada
fer jad tu mere kolon mukh morh leya
tera oh janma janma da rishta tu isey janam ch torh leya
main socheya chal teri koi majboori honi hai
tu v mainu yaad kar dhada ronni eh,
kash eh sabh kuch sach ho janda
marr awaz tarn nu ek vari das de apne dil di tun ki chahuni eh
je jana eh tan cahlli jaa par supneya ch aa ke kyon tun satayoni eh
har vele tun ruvayoni eh ruvayoni eh

here is it taran g i tried.. agge pata nahe kiwe da likh hoeyya

Nav Braich · « **Reply #2 on:** December 20, 2009, 01:34:07 PM »

Quote from: ♥кђคภ๔ ๓เรђгเ♥ on December 20, 2009, 01:30:14 PM

har pal main v tainu chaunda c bada
tere har faisley ch tere naal c khada
fer jad tu mere kolon mukh morh leya
tera oh janma janma da rishta tu isey janam ch torh leya
main socheya chal teri koi majboori honi hai
tu v mainu yaad kar dhada ronni eh,
kash eh sabh kuch sach ho janda
marr awaz tarn nu ek vari das de apne dil di tun ki chahuni eh
je jana eh tan cahlli jaa par supneya ch aa ke kyon tun satayoni eh
har vele tun ruvayoni eh ruvayoni eh

here is it taran g i tried.. agge pata nahe kiwe da likh hoeyya

aWesUM JOB DoNE BY KM

$$ TARN JI $$ · « **Reply #3 on:** December 20, 2009, 01:39:34 PM »

nice try dear thanks reply lai ... par main ik eve da end lub reha hana jis vich ohs de aan di umeed hove .... "hun maut v ni auni mainu mere is haal ch"
means ohdi fikar ch mout nu v nahi bulana cahunda main ... kuch inj da hona cahida aaj te word hi khatam ho gaye ne mere ... sumjana vi nahi aa reha menu te ...........

$$ TARN JI $$ · « **Reply #4 on:** December 20, 2009, 02:27:33 PM »

yaar gill saab yaan tazzy saab tusi hi help karo tusi te vadiya poet ho ... plz help me aa pura karan lai

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #5 on:** December 20, 2009, 08:21:28 PM »

ok wot abt..

tu v mainu yaad kar dhada ronni eh,
kash eh sabh kuch sach ho janda
fer main hasdey hasdey sada layee so janda
hun maut v ni auni mainu mere haal ch
dil tadafda eh tere hi kyal ch

now m stuck

TheStig · « **Reply #6 on:** December 20, 2009, 08:32:54 PM »

har pal main v tainu chaunda c bada

tere har faisley ch tere naal c khada

fer jad tu mere kolon mukh morh leya

tera oh janma janma da rishta tu isey janam ch torh leya

main socheya chal teri koi majboori honi hai

tu v mainu yaad kar dhada ronni eh,

kash eh sabh kuch sach ho janda

fer main hasdey hasdey sada layee so janda

hun maut v ni auni mainu mere haal ch

dil tadafda eh tere hi khyal ch

je teri khushahli di koi khabar ajave ,

tera eh Taran Janma di neend so jaave..

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #7 on:** December 20, 2009, 08:34:44 PM »

awesum rahul g =D>

par i think tarn chaunde ne ke end ch kuri bapis aa jave ohna kolo or sumthing :lost: :lost:

TheStig · « **Reply #8 on:** December 20, 2009, 08:36:16 PM »

jo ik war chala gaya oh mud wapas nahi aunda

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #9 on:** December 20, 2009, 08:37:02 PM »

Quote from: ©o∂€л@M€→47 on December 20, 2009, 08:36:16 PM

jo ik war chala gaya oh mud wapas nahi aunda

sahi keha g tusi :sad: :sad:

$$MaStaNa$$ · « **Reply #10 on:** December 21, 2009, 04:04:40 AM »

Quote from: ©o∂€л@M€→47 on December 20, 2009, 08:36:16 PM

jo ik war chala gaya oh mud wapas nahi aunda

thik keha rahul ... par awesum end kita taran da :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

TheStig · « **Reply #11 on:** December 21, 2009, 04:57:31 AM »

Quote from: $$VELLY_JATT$$ on December 21, 2009, 04:04:40 AM

thik keha rahul ... par awesum end kita taran da :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

thanks veere..
mere kehan da matlab hor si ithe ..je oh khush aa ta oh taran khatam ho jau jehra ohnu pyar karda si ..ik wakhra insan bann jau shayad

Y "BB" · « **Reply #12 on:** December 21, 2009, 05:00:37 AM »

Quote from: ©o∂€л@M€→47 on December 20, 2009, 08:32:54 PM

har pal main v tainu chaunda c bada

tere har faisley ch tere naal c khada

fer jad tu mere kolon mukh morh leya

tera oh janma janma da rishta tu isey janam ch torh leya

main socheya chal teri koi majboori honi hai

tu v mainu yaad kar dhada ronni eh,

kash eh sabh kuch sach ho janda

fer main hasdey hasdey sada layee so janda

hun maut v ni auni mainu mere haal ch

dil tadafda eh tere hi khyal ch

je teri khushahli di koi khabar ajave ,

tera eh Taran Janma di neend so jaave..

weldone rahul ji

TheStig · « **Reply #13 on:** December 21, 2009, 05:05:19 AM »

Quote from: ѕαя∂αяηι on December 21, 2009, 05:00:37 AM

weldone rahul ji

thanks ji mai shayri likhda si par kade share nahi karda

$$ TARN JI $$ · « **Reply #14 on:** December 21, 2009, 05:09:34 AM »

Quote from: $$VELLY_JATT$$ on December 21, 2009, 04:04:40 AM

thik keha rahul ... par awesum end kita taran da :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

oye velly kiho geya menu kiyo mari jana main te age hi mariya ...

$$ TARN JI $$ · « **Reply #15 on:** December 21, 2009, 05:12:48 AM »

veere bahut sohna end kita is da ... main umeed v nahi kiti si ... aa nikal v sakda hai par main aa nahi kehanda ki nava tarn suru ho sakda us din to baad vi ... us din tarn da vi end hi hona ... te janma di need so jana aa tarn ne vi ..,... thanks complete karan lai

$$ TARN JI $$ · « **Reply #16 on:** December 21, 2009, 05:14:07 AM »

thanks ji mai shayri likhda si par kade share nahi karda

rahul ji tusi kiyo nahi share karde ...

TheStig · « **Reply #17 on:** December 21, 2009, 05:57:01 AM »

Quote from: Tarn Ji on December 21, 2009, 05:12:48 AM

veere bahut sohna end kita is da ... main umeed v nahi kiti si ... aa nikal v sakda hai par main aa nahi kehanda ki nava tarn suru ho sakda us din to baad vi ... us din tarn da vi end hi hona ... te janma di need so jana aa tarn ne vi ..,... thanks complete karan lai

veere insaan kade khatam nahi hunda.. bas nave roop ch aunda. am pretty sure u will remember my words one day

Y "BB" · « **Reply #18 on:** December 21, 2009, 05:58:57 AM »

veere insaan kade khatam nahi hunda.. bas nave roop ch aunda. am pretty sure u will remember my words one day

rahul ji i will olways remmebr ur words

@@JeEt@@ · « **Reply #19 on:** December 21, 2009, 06:05:39 AM »

NICE BROO =D> =D>

Author Topic: meri wafai ....plz help me (Read 2441 times)

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand

Related Topics

Who's Online

Recent Posts