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its wrote by me
« on: November 26, 2010, 08:04:23 AM »
khud nu phullan to v pyara das k,
sanu kandia de samaan bana dita,,,
asi ta teri khushi lai khud nu v bhula dita,,
par tu ohna khushia nu gum karaar dita,,
tainu ena pyar keeta,,
par os pyar nu mada aakh k us pyar nu aj tu hara dita,,,,
sach jani v aj tu "JASS" nu jiondia he maar dita.........................
majhboori kade dillan ch doori pa nahi sakdi,,,

eh jismi doori sache pyar karan vaalia de pyar te farak pa nahi sakdi,,,

pyar nu samjhan lai sache dil di lod paindi aa,,,,

jhoothe pyar karan vaalia nu kade sache pyar di samajh aa nahi sakdi..........................
pyar kade mukda nehi,,
bas pyar nu sache dillon samajhna painda hai,,,
pyar vich kade paun di umeed nahi rakhi di,,,
eh ta bina umeedon nibhauna painda,,,
pyar di koi manjhil nahi ,,
eh ta har sacha pyar karan vaala kehanda...................................
yaar ta ohi ne par,,
kade kade halaat badal jande aa,,
pyar ta ohu hunda.,
par waqt naal naal wafa de halaat badal jande aa,,
sanu aj v teri jaan di nahi pyar di lod hai sajna,,,
par ki kariye holi holi insaan de khyalaat badal jande aa...........

shikayat bhi tum humse kya karoge,,
chat bhi mil jaegi agar use paane ki kaamna karoge,,
takdeer upar vala likhta hai par badaln hume parti hai,,
takdir bhi badal jaegi agar tum use badalne ki koshish karoge................

tainu bhul ta kade asi sakde nahi,,
bas tere naam de jaal he jeende marde aaa,,
tainu soh lage meri je mainu aad kar k ik athru v vahaia,,
tere akhan cho dulan vale hanjua to darde aa.............
dil ta tu kar dita naam mere,,
fe das dil tera door maitho hovega kive,,
hassia ta janda nahi taitho mere bina,,
mere bina dass tu rovega kive,,,
"JASS' bina dass tu rovega kive..........................

tainu dekh k asi kade luke nahi,,
bas tainu khon to darde rahe,,
asi ta taitho kade parae hoe he nahi,,
asi ta bas tere ute he marde rahe...........


asi ta apna pan jataunde c,tu opra pan samajh baitha,,
dil sade nu tu kade samajh  sakia he nai,,
asi ta apne chehre da noor tere mukh te dekhna chahunde c,,
par tu sade val kade takia he nahi...........jass


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its wrote by me
« on: November 26, 2010, 08:04:23 AM »

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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2010, 08:19:16 AM »
jass.....marvelllous all these poems r written by u ...too gud......keep it up....,
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2010, 08:31:40 AM »
Quote from: jass_cancerian on November 26, 2010, 08:19:16 AM
jass.....marvelllous all these poems r written by u ...too gud......keep it up....,

thanx dear :love:
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2010, 08:33:21 AM »
NICE AA........ =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2010, 08:34:08 AM »
Quote from: ੴTIGER☬STYLEੴ on November 26, 2010, 08:33:21 AM
NICE AA........ =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>

thanx g
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2010, 11:28:02 AM »
nice likhde ho ...
kida eh shaunk pe gya tuhanu likhan da..
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #6 on: November 26, 2010, 12:36:50 PM »
 :Tumbup:
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #7 on: November 26, 2010, 12:46:07 PM »
wow bht wadia likya tusi jass siso  =D>

behja behja krti tusi ta  :okk:


love em   :excited:
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #8 on: November 26, 2010, 01:09:05 PM »
 =D> =D> =D> =D> :okk:
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #9 on: November 26, 2010, 01:18:03 PM »
Quote from: ~simarii~ on November 26, 2010, 12:46:07 PM
wow bht wadia likya tusi jass siso  =D>

behja behja krti tusi ta  :okk:


love em   :excited:

thanx simari siso :love:
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #10 on: November 26, 2010, 02:23:13 PM »
Very nice sis....
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Re: its wrote by me
« Reply #11 on: November 26, 2010, 03:11:32 PM »
bahut vadiya likhia, Raje  =D> =D>
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