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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #880 on: May 28, 2012, 09:15:26 AM »
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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #880 on: May 28, 2012, 09:15:26 AM »

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #881 on: May 28, 2012, 09:54:05 AM »
so nice ji
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Wo to khushbu hai hawaon main bikhar jayega
Masla phul ka hai phul kidhar jayega


Ham to samjhe the k ek zakhm hai bhar jayega
Kya khabar thi k rag-e-jan main utar jayega


Wo hawaon ki tarah khanabajan phirta hai
Ek jhonka hai jo ayega guzar jayega


Wo jab ayega to phir us ki rafaqat k liye
Mausam-e-gul mere angan main thahar jayega


Akhir wo bhi kahin ret pe baithi hogi
Tera ye pyar bhi dariya hai utar jayega

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #882 on: May 28, 2012, 09:56:37 AM »
thnks gujr i was waiting for you here
so kujh choti ji shayri tuhade lyi
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Dard jb had se gujar jata hai
to ensaan bedard ho jata hai

na to aankhe roti hai uski
na hoth thartharate hai

na koi ahsas na jajbaat rahte hai sine me
dil to dharkta hai

par wo ek bejaan jism ek jinda laas bankar rah jata hai......

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #883 on: May 28, 2012, 09:59:17 AM »
so nice hi great words thanx for shering
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teri khushbu ka pataa karti hai,
mujh pay ehsaan hawa karti hai,


shab ki tanhai mei ab to aksar,
guftagu tujh say raha karti hai,


dil ko us raah pay chalna hee nahi,
jo mujhay tujh say juda karti hai,


zindagi meri thee lekin ab to,
teray kehnay mei raha karti hai,


us nay dekha he nahi warna yeh aankh,
dil ka ehwaal kaha karti hai,



shaam parrtay he kisi shakhs ki yaad,

koocha e jaan mei sadaa karti hai.

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #884 on: May 28, 2012, 10:01:33 AM »
very well said,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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choti ji lines but hai bhut anmol
dhyan krna ji jra
-,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
♡ ♥• ਪਿਆਰ ਤਾਂ ਸੱਜਣਾ
ਹਰ ਇੱਕ ਨੂੰ ਹੋ ਜਾਂਦਾ . . .

. . . ਪਰ ਇੱਕ ਦਾ ਹੋਣਾ
ਹਰੇਕ ਨੂੰ ਨੀ ਆਓੁਂਦਾ •♥ ♡

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #885 on: May 28, 2012, 10:04:27 AM »
very well said,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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choti ji lines but hai bhut anmol
dhyan krna ji jra
-,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
♡ ♥• ਪਿਆਰ ਤਾਂ ਸੱਜਣਾ
ਹਰ ਇੱਕ ਨੂੰ ਹੋ ਜਾਂਦਾ . . .

. . . ਪਰ ਇੱਕ ਦਾ ਹੋਣਾ
ਹਰੇਕ ਨੂੰ ਨੀ ਆਓੁਂਦਾ •♥ ♡
mainu ji punjabi nahi aundi
plz tusi eydhi transltion kar deo...thanx ji
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Toti hai meri Neend Mgar tum ko es sy kya
Bajty rahein hawaoon say dar tum ko es sy kya


Tum moj moj Misl-e-Saba Ghoomty raho
Kat jaen meri soch k par, tum ko es sy kya


Oron ka hath thamo, unhen rasta dikhao
Mein bhul jaoon apna hi ghar, tum ko es sy kya


Lay jaein Mujhay Mal-e-Ganeemat k sath adouu
Tum nay to daal di hai sapar, tum ko es sy kya


Tum nay to thak k dasht mein khaimay laga liyee
tanha kattay kisi ka safar,tum ko es sy kya..

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #886 on: May 28, 2012, 10:08:24 AM »
okey ji
then have a look on this eng transformation.......
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♡ ♥• pyar tan sajjna
har ik nu ho janda . . .

. . . par ik da hona
har ikk nu nhi anda•♥ ♡

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #887 on: May 28, 2012, 10:13:34 AM »
buhat vedia ji
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Aadat Hi Bana Li Hai Is Sheher k Logon Nay
Andaaz badal lena,awaaz badal lena


Dunia ki muhabbat main atwaar badal lena
Mosaum jo naya aaye raftaar badal lena


Agyaar wohi rakhna aehbaab badal lena
Aadat hi bana li hai es sheher k logon nay


Rasty main agar milna nazron ko jhooka lena
Awaaz agar do to katra k nikal jana


Har ek say juda rehna har ek say khafa rehna Har ek ka gila karna
Jaty hoye raahi ko manzil ka pata day kar rasty main rula dena

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #888 on: May 28, 2012, 10:17:36 AM »
thnks ji
unj tusi v ghat nhi ho gujr
======
Agar Kush Hai Woh Dekh
Kar Ansu Meri Ankhon Me,

To Khuda Ki Kasam Hum
Muskurana Hi Chor Denge.

Tadapte Rahenge Use Dekhne Ko
... Magar Uski Taraf Palke

Uthana Hi Chor Denge.
Wo Manzil Hi Kya Meri Jo

Dukh De Us Ko,
Khuda Ki Kasam Us Manzil
Pe Hum Jana Hi Chor Denge......!!

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #889 on: May 28, 2012, 10:19:00 AM »
lo ji hor sun lo
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kal halki halki barish thi,
kal sard hawa ka raqs bhi tha,
Kal phool bhi nikhray nikhray the,


Kal un main app ka aqs bhi tha,
kal badal gehray kaale the,


Kal chand pe laakhon pehre the..
Kuch tukry app ki yaadon ke,


Bari dair se dil main thehre the..
Kal yaadien uljhi uljhi thien,


Aur kal tak yeh na suljhi thien..
Kal yaad buhat tum aye the?..


Kal yaad buhat tum aye the?.. :sad:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #890 on: May 28, 2012, 10:21:45 AM »
Only 2 lines plz

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #891 on: May 28, 2012, 10:23:04 AM »
'HANS' kr dekha; 'RO' kr b dekh lia,
'PAA' kr dekha; 'KHO' kr b dekh liya.
'PYAR' b kia or 'JAN' b liya,
k zindgi whi jee skta h jisne"AKELE" jeena Sikh liya.

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #892 on: May 28, 2012, 10:23:30 AM »
thnks ji
unj tusi v ghat nhi ho gujr
======
Agar Kush Hai Woh Dekh
Kar Ansu Meri Ankhon Me,

To Khuda Ki Kasam Hum
Muskurana Hi Chor Denge.

Tadapte Rahenge Use Dekhne Ko
... Magar Uski Taraf Palke

Uthana Hi Chor Denge.
Wo Manzil Hi Kya Meri Jo

Dukh De Us Ko,
Khuda Ki Kasam Us Manzil
Pe Hum Jana Hi Chor Denge......!!
shukriya ji.....ey ghzal taan kamal di vedia ji
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?Kiun Rakhoon Main Apne Qalam Main Sayahi?!?


?Jab Koi Armaan Dil Main Machalta Hi Nahi?!?




?Na_Jane Kiun Sabhi Shak Karte Hain Mujh Par?!?


?Jab Sookha Gulab Meri Kitaabon Main Milta Hi Nahi?!?




?Kashish To Bohat Thi Mere Pyaar Main?!?


?Magar Kya Karoon Koi Pathar Dil Pighalta Hi Nahi.!




Agar Khuda Mile To Us Se Apna Pyaar Mangoon Ga.!


?Par Suna Hai Wo Marne Se Pehle Kisi Se Milta Nahi?

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #893 on: May 28, 2012, 10:24:12 AM »
nice ji gujr
tuhadi shayri tan dino din nikhri jandi aa mere wang
:loll:
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Dekhi Hai Meri Udaasi Os Ne
Aur Dekh Ke Muskura Diya Hai

Ab Tou Mujhe Sabar Aa Gaya Tha
Ye Kis Ne Mujhe Rula Dia Hai ?

Wo Chaahay Tou Raasta Badal Le
Mein Ne Tou Dia Jala Dia Hai.....
!!!♥ kalyugi heer ♥!!!

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #894 on: May 28, 2012, 10:28:31 AM »
nice ji gujr
tuhadi shayri tan dino din nikhri jandi aa mere wang
 :loll:
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Dekhi Hai Meri Udaasi Os Ne
Aur Dekh Ke Muskura Diya Hai

Ab Tou Mujhe Sabar Aa Gaya Tha
Ye Kis Ne Mujhe Rula Dia Hai ?

Wo Chaahay Tou Raasta Badal Le
Mein Ne Tou Dia Jala Dia Hai.....
!!!♥ kalyugi heer ♥!!!
great ji so nice poetry
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Dard Kia Hota Hai Batayein Gay Kisi Roz
Kamal Ki Ghazal Tum Ko Sunayein Gay Kisi Roz


Thi Un Ki Zid K Main Jaaoun Un Ko Manane
Mujh Ko Ye Veham Tha Wo Bulayein Gay Kisi Roz



Kabi B Maine To Socha B Nahi Tha
Wo Itna Mere Dil Ko Dukhayein Gay Kisi Roz


Har Roz Sheshay Se Yehi Poochta Hoon Main
Kia Rukh Pe Tabassum Sajayein Gay Kisi Roz


Urney Do In Parindon Ko Azaad Fizaon Mein
Tumhare Hon Agar To Lout Aayein Gay Kisi Roz


Apne Sitam Ko Dekh Lena Khud Hi Saqi Tum
Zakhum-E-Jigar Tumko Dekhein Gay Kisi Roz

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #895 on: May 28, 2012, 10:30:50 AM »
very well said ji gujr
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Sham Sooraj Ko Dhalna Sikhati He,,,
Shama Parvane Ko Jalna Sikhati He,

Girne Wale Ko Hoti He Taklif,,,,
Par Har Thokar Insaan Ko Chalna Sikhati hai
« Last Edit: May 28, 2012, 10:32:11 AM by gujr »

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #896 on: May 28, 2012, 10:31:15 AM »
for u sphl
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Mere paas itnay sawaal thay
 meri umar se na simat sakay


Tere paas jitnay jawaab thay
 teri ek nigaah main aa gaye!! :smile:

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #897 on: May 28, 2012, 10:35:37 AM »
ssa sarean nu  ....

Dhoonte Rahe Is Duniya Main Humsafar,
Kisi Ko Dhoke Baaz, Kisi Ko Bewafa Hi Paya…

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #898 on: May 28, 2012, 10:39:56 AM »
for u sphl
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Mere paas itnay sawaal thay
 meri umar se na simat sakay


Tere paas jitnay jawaab thay
 teri ek nigaah main aa gaye!! :smile:

jindagi taan os to vishad ke vi gujar hi jawegi...!!
par gall aukhi ae usnu bhull jaan wali...

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Re: >>>Dedicate a couplet of share/ghazal to the person above
« Reply #899 on: May 28, 2012, 10:40:27 AM »
ssa ji....
======

Tum Sey Kitna Pyar hai
Dil Me Utar Ke Dekh Lo


Na Yaqeen Aaye To Phir
 Dil Badal Ke Dekh Lo


Hum Ne Apni Har Saanss
 Per Naam Tera Likh Dia


Ek Tujhe Paane Ki Khatir
 Khud Ko Pagal Kar Dia


Ishq Me Tum Bhi Sanam
 Hadh Se Guzar Ke Dekh Lo


Tum Sey Kitna Pyar Hai
dill main utar kar dekh lo


Jaane Kyun Saare Jahaan
 Se
 Ho Gayi Bekhabar




Jab Se Tum Ankhoon Me Aaye
 Jaagti Hai Ye Nazar


Apny Ratoon Se
Meri Ratein Badal Ke Dekh Lo





...
ssa sarean nu  ....

Dhoonte Rahe Is Duniya Main Humsafar,
Kisi Ko Dhoke Baaz, Kisi Ko Bewafa Hi Paya…

hmmmmmmmm


Saza Ban Jati Hai Guzre Huwe Waqt Ki Yaadein,


Najaane Kyun ChoOr Jaane K Liye Meharban Hote Hein LoOg…

 

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