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Offline Jatt Yamla

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First Sher of my life
« on: October 24, 2008, 10:11:05 PM »
Jey tu Hundi kol jaani ni
Tenu rakhda vang nishani ni
Bann da tere gal di gaani ni 
Tenu koi pouchan dinda na haani ni

ok guyz this might be the first and last sher i ever write so let me know what you think about that.feel free to make corrections for me.
« Last Edit: October 24, 2008, 10:27:02 PM by yamla jatt punjab da »
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First Sher of my life
« on: October 24, 2008, 10:11:05 PM »

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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2008, 11:36:06 PM »
kind of didn't understand the last line but it was good. keep it up =D>
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2008, 11:43:55 PM »
HAANI MEANS A PROBLEM OR HARM
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #3 on: October 25, 2008, 03:07:14 AM »
gùð wrk
Hun  yäär tu sher märan £aggya ahha
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #4 on: October 25, 2008, 09:10:11 AM »
hehe nice
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #5 on: October 25, 2008, 02:14:45 PM »
thanks guyz
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #6 on: October 25, 2008, 03:51:58 PM »
Quote from: sukhpal_916 on October 24, 2008, 11:36:06 PM
kind of didn't understand the last line but it was good. keep it up =D>

he meant this: Tenu koi pouchan dinda na haani ni (i wouldn't allow any harm to you)
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2008, 08:19:57 AM »
thas gud tried vick keep it up i really like that....
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2015, 07:01:29 AM »
Kya Baat Hai :)
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #9 on: May 01, 2015, 11:02:06 AM »
Omg Viku  :O hume nahi pata tha aapne kabhi shayeri bhi ki hogi haha
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #10 on: May 01, 2015, 08:01:57 PM »
Quote from: Miss Khan on May 01, 2015, 11:02:06 AM
Omg Viku  :O hume nahi pata tha aapne kabhi shayeri bhi ki hogi haha

Yes Miss Khaan :) Yamla Ji ne too Watt kadd diyea :p
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #11 on: May 02, 2015, 12:05:18 AM »
Us ajnabi ka yu intzar na krte
Is ashiq dil ka aitbar na krte
Roz niklenga uski yad me ansu
Ye malum hota to itna kbhi usse pyar na krte..
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #12 on: May 02, 2015, 03:06:27 AM »
Quote from: Vijay Gohal on May 02, 2015, 12:05:18 AM
Us ajnabi ka yu intzar na krte
Is ashiq dil ka aitbar na krte
Roz niklenga uski yad me ansu
Ye malum hota to itna kbhi usse pyar na krte..
Tu tah sher da badshah yar Att Karda rehnda ajj Kal Bhot
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Re: First Sher of my life
« Reply #13 on: May 02, 2015, 09:39:33 PM »


Dil Bhi Ek Jid Pe Arra kisi Bacche Ki Tarah...

Ja tu Sab kuch hi esse chayie ..Ja kuch Bhi Nehi...
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