Author Topic: chota veer... in memory of ma loving sis... (Read 6086 times)

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **on:** March 11, 2009, 02:58:02 PM »

1st

reh geya ikalla tera veer zindgi de mor te....
laye gai teri mout sare supne rorr k.....
ki galti hogi das tere chote veer to.....

chali gai tu kithe sare rishte torr k........

2nd

didi jado yad teri menu ondi a.......
udasi mere chare passe chondi a........
najar jado v tasveer teri vall mur jandi...
hanju di ek bund aakhan cho barish ban k ondi a......

jad kidhre v aa jandi a yad teri....
main dekhea mummy luk luk fir rondi a....
upro upro dady jee v hassde ney...
andro teri yad khordi jandi a......

dosto aa jehri shayeri main aaj post kiti a...
mere dil de bohat karreb a bohat jada... main 14 year da si jado likhea si...... meri sis jado menu chad k gai...
main ek dam kalla pai gea si.... main dekhea hoea.... k log kiddan barwad ho jande ney sirf ek insan de jan nal...
kiddan sab bikhar janda... bari mushkil nal sametea asi sara kuch....

plzz dhean dena nd ess topic ch koi fun nai...
ho sakda kuch khas na lage tuanu par odo experience nai si ena shayeri da..

han par ek dard jeha jaroor si..........

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Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** March 11, 2009, 02:58:02 PM »

_Beast_ · « **Reply #1 on:** March 11, 2009, 03:03:40 PM »

DEV bai sorry yaar ehe gal sunn k bahout dukh lagea te, te bahout touching lines hai oh jehriya tusi kahiya

M. · « **Reply #2 on:** March 11, 2009, 03:11:06 PM »

very touching,..
bohat nice likheya tussi veer ji
and im sowwie to hear it. sad;>

KuriPataka · « **Reply #3 on:** March 11, 2009, 03:29:23 PM »

Bahut sohna likhya Dev. Such a way with words.

ƁΔƘΓΔ · « **Reply #4 on:** March 11, 2009, 03:34:04 PM »

Waheguru!

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **Reply #5 on:** March 11, 2009, 03:59:09 PM »

yar rishte bare ajeeb hunde ney... hassonde v bohat ney rulande v nohat ney.......te mere kheal ch sab to pyara rishta bhain te bhara da hunda...... asi bara larde hunde si..... bhaina to ek din sarea nu juda hona penda...par o judai bari mithi hundi..o pall bare sohne hunde ney...
par ode jan nal na main o pall jee sakea na mere mma dady.....

aaj main pata ni kitho apni o purani fatti jei diary kadh betha te sab yad aagea...mann bhar lea gea.. koi siga ni kol gall karn nu....dil kita te ethe sab likh dita......

shukria tusi kadar pai yaro... tuada gulam hogea dev ta...........

shukria.......

KuriPataka · « **Reply #6 on:** March 11, 2009, 04:13:46 PM »

Awww, *jaffi* Dev.

✘Rö¥ål Råj ✘ · « **Reply #7 on:** March 11, 2009, 06:07:23 PM »

bahut wadiya dev ...nd bahut afsos hoya eh sun ke v sad;>
its really hrt touchin wrds =D> =D> =D>

jass saini · « **Reply #8 on:** March 11, 2009, 11:23:02 PM »

aaawwwwwww hasda hoyaa dev hi changa lgda hai yaar .....udaas naa hovo .....inak hi sath c didi da tuhade sb naal ....honi nu koi nai taal skda naa....i cn understand ohnaa di kami poori nai kiti jaa skdi...bt koshish te kiti jaa skdi hai ....n poem bahu sohni likhi tusi ....realy nice ....

ṡώεεετ-ਅਲ੍ੜ੍ ਮੂਟਿਆਰ੍ · « **Reply #9 on:** March 11, 2009, 11:28:45 PM »

yaar bahut pyara likhia tusi padh de same akhan ch hanju aa gaye c very touching lines
sad;> sad;> rabb:) may u get watever u want in life hameshan khush reha karo ji hasde sohne lagde ho

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **Reply #10 on:** March 12, 2009, 03:13:51 AM »

bohat bohat shukaria....heer ,
jass nd sweet thnk u so much vese tusi thik keha hassda e sohna lagda main.....loll... vese main thik aa hun...

$$MaStaNa$$ · « **Reply #11 on:** March 12, 2009, 10:18:22 AM »

chal koi na dev jindge wich ehh utav charav aounde rehande ya.......is te kese da jor ne chalda rabb:) rabb:)....but really nice bout sohna likhiyaa I love u dude.....hats off to u ...... =D> =D> =D>

~PunjabiKudi~ · « **Reply #12 on:** March 12, 2009, 02:08:47 PM »

bahut sohna likhya aa dev ji.

█ ▌ﻝαᔕ ▌█ · « **Reply #13 on:** March 12, 2009, 06:37:26 PM »

dev 22 bohat wadhiya
kise cheez upper likhna bari esay as per jado appa edha da likhde a bara aukha cuz i noe apnina feelingz espacially dukha nu shabdata vich purna bara hi muskil kam hai
baki o waheguru agge kise da jor nahi chalda...
jinni banda likh wonda odhe kolo ohnu bhog k tur janda..

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **Reply #14 on:** March 21, 2009, 02:43:19 AM »

thnks velly jatt.. thanks guddi nd bohat bohat shukria chare......

dukh bare tra de hunde ney.... kaian nu yar di judai mar jandi a te kaian nu apne hor sakea sambhandian di.....

par dukh dukh he hunda.......waheguru na kise te a ghari leawe...... baki sahi keha rabb ney jinni likh diti kismat ch oni he milni a tuanu.........

Sw33tgirl · « **Reply #15 on:** March 21, 2009, 07:29:29 AM »

seriously dev g.............its really touching ........

powerlifter · « **Reply #16 on:** March 21, 2009, 07:50:15 AM »

8-> 8->wow sad;>bot achi aa

•°¯`•• ÄŖĶÏȚËĊȚ... ••´¯°• · « **Reply #17 on:** March 21, 2009, 12:54:06 PM »

bohat bohat shukrian tuada sab da menu ni si pata eda sathi banoge mere dard de.... hug:) hug:) hug:)

Er. Manni · « **Reply #18 on:** March 21, 2009, 01:32:51 PM »

Balle; gud

Pind_di_kudi · « **Reply #19 on:** March 25, 2009, 03:17:25 PM »

mai aaj hi read kitta sun ke realy teri ek kalai kalai line wich kina dard ha realy dear manu read ker ke eena dukh laaga h na das ni sekdi .....bahut pyara rista hunda bhena naaal te eeni kat umar wich je koi chal jaye na shad ke saari umar har pal har wale yaad aandi har kam te oona di....rab aapne charan wich rekhe baas sis ji no

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