September 16, 2025, 08:57:11 AM
collapse
« previous next »
Pages: [1]   Go Down

Author Topic: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,  (Read 6978 times)

Offline Nadeem

  • Retired Staff
  • Lumberdar/Lumberdarni
  • *
  • Like
  • -Given: 82
  • -Receive: 80
  • Posts: 2297
  • Tohar: 20
  • Gender: Male
    • View Profile
chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« on: September 01, 2008, 08:35:26 AM »
Dubbde loka di kahani kaun sunda,
gal hove j purani kaun sunda,
Bhul janda a rab jawani ch,
chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
Pyar ta sab karke vekhde ne
kise da pyar jubani kaun sunda,
Lok ta labhde har gal cho munafa,
kis di hoi hani kaun sunda,
Asi likh ta dita dil da hal,
par dil di eh ndani kaun sunda.
Logged

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand

chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« on: September 01, 2008, 08:35:26 AM »

Offline Pind_di_kudi

  • Ankheela/Ankheeli
  • ***
  • Like
  • -Given: 0
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 630
  • Tohar: -1
    • View Profile
Re: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 01:29:49 PM »
BAHUT SACH KEHA  TUT PENEYA   KOI NI SUNDA SACHI JLAIM DUNIYA  HA JI
Logged

Offline PuNjAbAn_KuRhI

  • Vajir/Vajiran
  • *****
  • Like
  • -Given: 14
  • -Receive: 27
  • Posts: 7276
  • Tohar: 26
  • Gender: Female
  • PuNjAbANnNnNn...........
    • View Profile
Re: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 02:35:38 PM »
hehe bohut sohna tusi likh te ditta asi sunane a hehe
Logged

Offline Tezy_Sandhu

  • PJ Gabru
  • Lumberdar/Lumberdarni
  • *
  • Like
  • -Given: 59
  • -Receive: 178
  • Posts: 2026
  • Tohar: 25
  • Gender: Male
  • TeZy SaNdhU
    • View Profile
Re: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2008, 05:29:17 PM »
Koun kahinda dubdiyan di koi sunda nahi....
Guru Tegbahadar ne dubda hindu dharm bachaya c...
kayon bhulge Guru Gobind Singh de sahibjadiyan nu...
jihna chaddi umre kurban hoke nava etihas rachaya c..
Sadi dharti jame aashiq Mahiwal jahe...
jihna yaar nu pat da maas khuwaya c...
Tezy dosh kise nu kee dena asi kitiyan rahe aa pa sajna...
je hove pyar naseeban wich te bewafa v den nibha sajnaa....


Logged

Offline Grenade Singh

  • Administrator
  • Vajir/Vajiran
  • *
  • Like
  • -Given: 310
  • -Receive: 571
  • Posts: 7685
  • Tohar: 194
  • Gender: Male
  • Sardar
    • View Profile
    • Punjabi Janta
  • Love Status: Married / Viaheyo
Re: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« Reply #4 on: September 01, 2008, 11:29:24 PM »
Quote from: punjabi_jatt on September 01, 2008, 05:29:17 PM
Koun kahinda dubdiyan di koi sunda nahi....
Guru Tegbahadar ne dubda hindu dharm bachaya c...
kayon bhulge Guru Gobind Singh de sahibjadiyan nu...
jihna chaddi umre kurban hoke nava etihas rachaya c..
Sadi dharti jame aashiq Mahiwal jahe...
jihna yaar nu pat da maas khuwaya c...
Tezy dosh kise nu kee dena asi kitiyan rahe aa pa sajna...
je hove pyar naseeban wich te bewafa v den nibha sajnaa....




yaar shuruwaat menu vadiya laggi, fer shayari ik dam badal gayi
sanu sareya nu pata tusi likhde bahut vadiya,
mera ik dost aa oh vi bahut vadiya likhda (geet te vaaran)
ohnu mein dasda hunda ohdi ik kamzori (jehdi mein hun tuhadi shayari'ch dekhi)... oh kadey vi kisey ik vishey (topic) te ni likhda, kadey edher hath mar lehnda kadey ohder... eh menu pata kayi geet/lekh ehda vi hunde jehde vich asin sara kuch keh sakde, jidda ke geet aa "sadke punjabiyan de jhande kamyaabiyan de gaddi jande ne" (ess geet da visha hai hi bahut vadda)

jadon koi lekhak ehda likhda (bhevein oh essay, novel, short story hove), tan jehda sunan wala oh mithaas bhalda reh janda, te ohnu mildi bas ik jhalak jahi. I know this because I do this also when I write in english.
bas tuhanu ehna hi kehna chauna, naraz na hoyo... meinu pata mein kadey ni tuhade sareya wang likh sakda, par jo mann vich aaya oh likh jaroor dinna
Logged

Offline Tezy_Sandhu

  • PJ Gabru
  • Lumberdar/Lumberdarni
  • *
  • Like
  • -Given: 59
  • -Receive: 178
  • Posts: 2026
  • Tohar: 25
  • Gender: Male
  • TeZy SaNdhU
    • View Profile
Re: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2008, 12:21:59 AM »
Thanx GS 22 g tusi jhoothi tareef karan di bajaye sadi galti sanu Dasi bahut changa lga. Waise eh sher main nadeem de sher da jawab likhya c te is karke jo kuch ohde sher ch c oh sab mainu laina piya. Par main koshish karunga next time edan na hove. Plz tusi edan e salah dinde rahna jo asi apniya galtiyan sudhar k changa likh sakiye.
Thanx again
Logged

Offline PuNjAbAn_KuRhI

  • Vajir/Vajiran
  • *****
  • Like
  • -Given: 14
  • -Receive: 27
  • Posts: 7276
  • Tohar: 26
  • Gender: Female
  • PuNjAbANnNnNn...........
    • View Profile
Re: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2008, 11:00:31 AM »
TEZY NICE REPLY PEHLIA CHAR LINES RELIGION BARE HOGIA AND BAKI PYAR WALIA LOLZ BT NICE MENU SARA SHEAR BOHUT PASAND AYA BT EHDE DO BNAKE WI SOHNA LAGDA JE RELIGION AND PYAR NU ALAG KARDO
Logged

Offline Rana Saab

  • Naujawan
  • **
  • Like
  • -Given: 16
  • -Receive: 41
  • Posts: 327
  • Tohar: 0
    • View Profile
Re: chardi umre gurbani kaun sunda,
« Reply #7 on: April 22, 2011, 11:43:06 PM »
very nice tezy veer ji
Logged
Pages: [1]   Go Up
« previous next »
 

Related Topics

  Subject / Started by Replies Last post
11 Replies
2774 Views 		Last post February 17, 2011, 04:14:59 AM
by RG
7 Replies
11936 Views 		Last post August 20, 2009, 06:05:31 PM
by _Beast_
6 Replies
1792 Views 		Last post October 05, 2009, 05:52:43 PM
by Deleted User
12 Replies
7638 Views 		Last post May 30, 2010, 12:53:59 PM
by Kudrat Kaur
0 Replies
1948 Views 		Last post May 11, 2011, 03:33:03 AM
by Guglo
0 Replies
727 Views 		Last post May 31, 2011, 03:14:59 PM
by @@JeEt@@
0 Replies
495 Views 		Last post November 09, 2011, 04:27:48 AM
by Inder Preet (5)
0 Replies
546 Views 		Last post November 11, 2011, 02:04:05 AM
by Inder Preet (5)
1 Replies
1722 Views 		Last post January 27, 2012, 05:24:32 AM
by TheStig
4 Replies
1554 Views 		Last post July 15, 2014, 05:47:59 PM
by ਪੇਂਡੂ

* Who's Online

  • Dot Guests: 2144
  • Dot Hidden: 0
  • Dot Users: 0

There aren't any users online.

* Recent Posts

fix site pleae orrrr by Gujjar NO1
[February 24, 2025, 02:34:32 PM]
which pj member do u miss ryt now? by Gujjar NO1
[January 02, 2025, 12:52:22 PM]
your MOOD now by Gujjar NO1
[October 09, 2024, 12:31:28 PM]
Best DP of the Week by Gujjar NO1
[October 08, 2024, 05:24:20 AM]
PJ te kinnu dekhan nu jii karda tuhada ??? by mundaxrisky
[September 15, 2024, 05:45:10 PM]
~~say 1 truth abt the person above ya~~ by mundaxrisky
[September 15, 2024, 05:41:15 PM]
This Site Need Fix/Update by mundaxrisky
[August 20, 2024, 04:41:58 PM]
Request Video Of The Day by mundaxrisky
[July 09, 2024, 04:24:48 PM]
Majh on sale by Gujjar NO1
[April 07, 2024, 03:08:25 PM]
Hello Old Friends/Friendaynaz by Gujjar NO1
[March 14, 2024, 03:42:51 AM]
Test, just a test by Gujjar NO1
[March 11, 2024, 12:32:30 PM]
Good morning (first word ki keha) by Gujjar NO1
[February 27, 2024, 01:10:20 AM]
Throw something at the user above u by Gujjar NO1
[February 26, 2024, 01:13:56 PM]
Just two line shayari ... by Gujjar NO1
[February 15, 2024, 10:46:34 AM]
Hello Old Friends/Friendayna by ☬🅰🅳🅼🅸🅽☬
[July 07, 2023, 08:01:42 AM]
ਚਿੱਟਾ ਤੇ ਕਾਲ਼ਾ ਆਊਡੀਓਬੂਕ by ਰੂਪ ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
[March 30, 2023, 07:50:56 PM]
What is the first thing you do, when you wake up in the morning? by Cutter
[January 12, 2023, 08:23:23 AM]
Chita Te Kala Novel Latest Review by ਰੂਪ ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
[September 14, 2022, 07:03:31 PM]
Book Review by ਰੂਪ ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
[May 19, 2022, 05:25:18 PM]
Books, Novels & Stories by ਰੂਪ ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
[May 19, 2022, 05:20:16 PM]
New Book Release: Chita Te Kala Novel by ਰੂਪ ਢਿੱਲੋਂ
[May 19, 2022, 05:06:16 PM]
What Is the Best Compliment You've Ever Received? by mundaxrisky
[October 15, 2018, 07:24:41 PM]
Last textmessage that u received by mundaxrisky
[October 15, 2018, 07:12:26 PM]
name one thing you can't live without ? by mundaxrisky
[October 15, 2018, 07:09:02 PM]
ONE thing you wish you could do RIGHT NOW... by mundaxrisky
[October 15, 2018, 07:03:57 PM]