Pyaar jay sach hove tah ooh bhujdilan kol na krda….
Deke hallashari eh, app upar jaa chrda….
App bolada sir char ke,,,,,
Na kisi di wait krda…..
Jaan di waji har ke v ah,,,,,,,
Jeetan da daawa krda…..
Heer Sassi Sohni de dil wich jado ah a vrda,,,,,,
Fir Ah jag nall khud larda,,,,,,
Na kisi kol Ah drda…….
Samjan di koi gall nahi ,,,,,,
Ah tah ehsas hain jo har kisi de dil wich ghar krda…..
Waqt aan te Ah Rab da roop ban Yaar wich ann krda….

pyar ta rajje sareyn kol hai khad da..
eh v sahi aa sir te v chad da...
eh v sach hai mout gal naal lave..
fir v jittn da davva krda..
pr sacha pyar na ajj kal koi krda..
koi ni ajj kal sirf ik nu pyar krda..
kise da ishq ni kise ik sir chad da..
koi ni kise ik layi mout naal lad da..
baki soch hr ik d theak hai..
ajj kal hr koi pyar soch k krda..
ehsaas hai eh ghr dil ch krda..
ik nal hove tan pyar kahave..
bohateyan naal sonu ishq badnaam hai krda..

nd srry teri poem poori nahi padhi c  X_X X_X


jo tun likheyaa sahi hai..........te sahi nahi v hai......main aje v tere naal agree ni kardi....poem teri bahut sohni hai........te srry ajj ni.....kade v nahi......main discuss nahi karaangi.......

te fer mind naa kari......4 me love is just a feeling......ehnoo nibhaana naa nibhaana kuch ni aa   8-> 8->

hahahahah
aoukha biba tera..

main ni mind kita na krna..
agree or not koi frk ni..
poem puri read kiti ya nhi ..koi chkr ni..
discuss kre ya nhi.. no prob..
mainu ehna gallan ton koi matlb ni

haan eh theak aa pyar ehsas aa..
nibhe ya na eh gal alg aa..
but ishq puri zindgi ch mout tk sirf ik naal hunda ..
thats what i want to say in poem..

sachi gal aa teri te meri thinking ch thoda ni bohat frk aa...
i mean hr koi apni soch sochda..

::lough::lough::

srry may be u r right.......parr mere layee life da koi meaning hi ni aa je main love ch believe naa karaa.....ho sakda main galat hovan hamesha...te kise nu pyaar naa kardi hovan....selfish hovaan...chaahe kuch v hove...parr agar pyaar hi hi nahi hai te yr zindgi nahi hai....

chalo chhadd yr....main ess baare nahi boll sakdi,...

help kro g koi help kro
ya ta es kudi nu sheyar padn ch kro
ya fr mainu shyer likhn ch kroo...
help kro g help koi tan help kro..

very funny.....but yr plzz dis isn't true... i believe in love.......halaanke ohnoo labhnaa bahut mushkil hai......but hai...

haan funny aa ehe but koi ishara v eh krda..
tusi pyar ch yakeen krde o khushi hoi sun k
nhi ta ajj kal koun kise nu pyar krda..
tusi kehne oh eh sab true ni haiga
main kehna dosto sach nu ajj kal koun hai jarda...
mnda k pyar yaaar lbhna hai mushkil
mushkil ena v nhi k pehla 10 horaan utte mrda..
chlo theak aa k pyar ajj kl v sacha hunda aye
ik naal pyar shi te bakiiyan ton kyun prda..
kyun yaar de pyar da dil pta lgn ton drda..
mdm lafz na dekho padho tan os da arth pachano
hasse ch na tallo sonu byenti hai krda..
maff kreyo j koi hun galti ho gyi hove..
pta ni mainu v kyun main eda de gunaah haan krda..
 

ik duje naal khed de aa ajj kal pyar tan kithe reh gya ...
jazbataan naal ajj kal khed de ishq da ta bs naa hi reh geya...
na g na time waste krna ni prograam hor v hunde ne
main ta dujje nu v milno late pehla yaar pta ni kithe reh geya..
chnga apni yarri hun ethe tk hi c tu mind na kri
meri kismt ch jo mainu milna tu kite v mainu find na kri
actually gal pta ki aa kyun main tainu bye kehni aa
kde shoping krounda c phn krda c tu sohneya ajj kal miss call te reh geya..
koi pyar nii hunda ajj kal pyar ta bs paise da hi reh geya..

gal kriye j sache ishq de jamane d dso ki kheyal ne
ghadeyan d shoping c kiti sohni ton mahiwaal ne
majhan 12 saal chariyan heer diyan ranjhe yaar bemisaal ne
mrri tan c shaiba mirze de naal fir kyun uthde swaal ne
shayd tan shaiba tu maddi kiti ni janda hoeya mirza keh geya...
sassi tapde reat ch lbhdi punnu mera kithe reh geya...
koi pyar ni hunda ajj kal ishq da tan bs naa hi reh geya..

kudiyan ki munde koi pichye ni brobr da hai compition
tere ton wadd main yaar pyar bnaoune hunda dova da decision
mundye kehn ik nu bye odo nu djji hello keh jandi
kudiyan nu ik ghr drop krda dujje naal lake te hai jandi
hunda duji nu miln nu late munda kehnda ghr kmm pai geya..
milli duje nu kudi kehndi ghr frnd i c tu eve naraz ho k beh geya..
dillan naal ajj kal khed de pyar ta man-prchawa ja bn reh geya..
koi ni krda sacha ishq ajj kal tan bs kahaniyan ch hi reh geya...
koi mrda ni kise layi sache ishq nu mildi mout sonu mrda hoeya keh geya..
ajj kal koi ni krda pyar pyar da tan bs naa hi reh geya..

hmmmm ehi kalyug aa ji ... evein hi ni lok kalyug kehnde .... ik duje naal khed de aa ajj kal pyar tan kithe reh gya ...  X_X

sorri biba teri line chori krn lgeya main..


ik duje naal khed de aa ajj kal pyar tan kithe reh gya ...
jazbataan naal ajj kal khed de ishq da ta bs naa hi reh geya...
na g na time waste krna ni prograam hor v hunde ne
main ta dujje nu v milno late pehla yaar pta ni kithe reh geya..
chnga apni yarri hun ethe tk hi c tu mind na kri
meri kismt ch jo mainu milna tu kite v mainu find na kri
actually gal pta ki aa kyun main tainu bye kehni aa
kde shoping krounda c phn krda c tu sohneya ajj kal miss call te reh geya..
koi pyar nii hunda ajj kal pyar ta bs paise da hi reh geya..

gal kriye j sache ishq de jamane d dso ki kheyal ne
ghadeyan d shoping c kiti sohni ton mahiwaal ne
majhan 12 saal chariyan heer diyan ranjhe yaar bemisaal ne
mrri tan c shaiba mirze de naal fir kyun uthde swaal ne
shayd tan shaiba tu maddi kiti ni janda hoeya mirza keh geya...
sassi tapde reat ch lbhdi punnu mera kithe reh geya...
koi pyar ni hunda ajj kal ishq da tan bs naa hi reh geya..

kudiyan ki munde koi pichye ni brobr da hai compition
tere ton wadd main yaar pyar bnaoune hunda dova da decision
mundye kehn ik nu bye odo nu djji hello keh jandi
kudiyan nu ik ghr drop krda dujje naal lake te hai jandi
hunda duji nu miln nu late munda kehnda ghr kmm pai geya..
milli duje nu kudi kehndi ghr frnd i c tu eve naraz ho k beh geya..
dillan naal ajj kal khed de pyar ta man-prchawa ja bn reh geya..
koi ni krda sacha ishq ajj kal tan bs kahaniyan ch hi reh geya...
koi mrda ni kise layi sache ishq nu mildi mout sonu mrda hoeya keh geya..
ajj kal koi ni krda pyar pyar da tan bs naa hi reh geya..

oh sadi saari shaam karde rahe wait
par assi na aa paaye..ho gaye assi bhut late
fer pata nai kyun oh chale gayee
bye vi keh k nai gayee yaaar
saanu badaa dukh hai aaaj laga na sake dil ohna da
nai te aaj vi dende hassa hassaa maar  =D> =D>

taaaaaaaliyaaaaa DID veere me vi ban gayaaaa shayar shyari karan wala :cool: :hehe:

wah janaab wah
bohat sohna likheya bikku tu
awsum yaar
=D>=D>=D>=D>

Thanks sonu 22 g

thnx to u too bai g...

eh v ta tusi hi likhvaeya g
thnx for that one

o sanu dusman samjde rahe
te assi una nu yaar
o sanu nafrat karde rahe
te assi una nu pyaar      X_X

wah g wah tusi apne ohnu
bohat dita pyar satkaar

pr ik gal smj ni ai mdm g
kyun likhde likhde rukk gye
kyun sheyar chadta adh vich-kaar...
ya fr dso g sheyar pura ho geya
lgda main galt soch geya yaar(frnd)????????????

::lost::lost::