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Messages - joban jit hundal
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« on: May 30, 2010, 09:45:44 AM »
raste ta kayi dikhaayi de rahe ne par mainu samaj nae kis raah jawa jis raste wal vekhaa mai ni apne ateet nu hi mai pawa ki kraa tera hi sheher disda mainu jdo takda mai ghar de banere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
kuj vigaadea mainu yaara ne te kuj haan diya mutiyaara ne haye kamla keh keh kamla kar ditta mainu ginti de kuj samajdaara ne door jana chahunda ha mai zindgi ch faille hanere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
matlabkhori is dunia hatho hun dosto bahut jiyaada akkk chukka ha mai mohabat da naam sun k har muh vicho bahut jiyaada thakk chukka ha mai mainu jaapda koyi bula riha hai ranjhe wale jogi de dere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
navi hawa nave loka ch rabba hun navi meri shuruaat hove yaad kar k na tadpa tainu din vele te sakoon wali meri har raat hove badiyaaa aasaa ne joban nu rabba aun nave wale savere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
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« on: May 30, 2010, 09:42:41 AM »
kyu har pal garam rahe tu ni thoda gusse nu tu jarrya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
agge rabb ne kihdi ghat kiti jo asi nahi tere college vich parhde ha utto tu kardi gussa ni je raah tere ch asi kharhde ha ni yaari laa ke nibhaauga jatt tu aive hi na darrya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
jado kade nikle tu scooty te asi bullet piche tere launde ha tu ta loafer keh ke tur jaave tu ki jaane kinna petrol asi udaaunde ha sanu aunda vekh ke door to tu raah apna na badlea kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
tu sunya kar maan sahab de gaane te thandiyaa cheeja khaaya kar kude lambe lambe saah liya kar jdo gussa aunda ya ikalli beh ke kite shor machaaya kar kude je fir v nae hunda control tere to gussa ta savere utth ke yoga karya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
tainu kive dassa ni tu jaan joban di sohniye ni tu kar ke har vaar nakhra mera dil thaggdi a par ik gal tainu hor dass deva ni tu gusse ch hor v sohni laggdi a keh de hundal nu apne dil di ik vaar ni aive loka de kolo na darrya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
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« on: May 30, 2010, 02:48:45 AM »
khushiyaa muh maitho kuj is traa fer rakhya hai jive badalaaa ne chann nu ajj gher rakhyaa hai tutdaa taara vekh usne meri lambi umar mangi shayad tutt java taare vaangu mai bahutea da jee karda bas duaaava hatho majboor ha mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
kuj chahunde ne mukaa na mai akha de paani vaangu bahute chahunde mukk java kise pari di kahani vaangu kuj kehnde jug jug jee sajjna bahute kehn tu cheti kyu nae marda bas duaava hatho majboor haa mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
neend sakoon wali mai sauna chahunda ha usde kadmaa ch jind apni mukauna chahunda ha khabre kamli na ho jaave jo shad gyi mainu haaye rabba mai ese gal to dardaa ha bas duaava hatho majboor ha mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
sabar rakh joban cheti hi rabb sun lauga teri mil aa usnu te ode sheher paa lai akhri feri rabba cheti apne kol bulaa lai mainu hundal har pal eh ardaas rehnda karda bas duaava hatho majboor ha mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
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« on: May 29, 2010, 11:02:10 AM »
Mai nae chaunda oh akho hanju dhole usnu kehna meri lash wal vekh k bas hass deve . . . . . . . Na kare tareef meri mere etho tur jaan picho bas loka vangu oh v koi taana kass deve . . . . . . . . . hor nae mangda hundal tuhade to yaaro bas ik ehsaan hor kar deo. . . . . . . . . Odi udeek ch joban mar muk chalya Koi mere marn to pehla usnu dass deve
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« on: May 28, 2010, 07:38:10 AM »
ssa janta.... 2-3 din pahilan main kise pj member naal gal kar riha c te ohne kuch thoda jiha mainu apni life bare dasiya te ohdiyan gallan sunke mainu jo feel hoya oh main is poem wich likh riha.... padke dasna kive lagga...
Chhad tur gaye ne dona de hi hani mere dosta.... Teri meri eko jahi kahani mere dosta...
Chhad tainu koi jive tera taithon door ho giya... Dor sahan wali wich moti ghaman de pro giya... Inj vichhdi oh maithon mar jani mere dosta... Teri meri eko jahi kahani mere dosta...
Pakke than te kacha rakh sohni nu eh rohdde... Nohan naalon maas jag wale ni vichhoddde... Reet eh badi e puarani mere dosta... Teri meri eko jahi kahani mere dosta...
Kite hor jake duniya wasalayi dildaran ne... Hanjuan naal jholi bhar diti sade yaaran ne... Eho sade pyar di nishani mere dosta... Teri meri eko jahi kahani mere dosta...
Dukh eko jahe bhaven wakhre sareer ne.. Kheliya jo khel sade naal takdeer ne... Tezy dase kive bol oh jubani mere dosta... Teri meri eko jahi kahani mere dosta...
Chhad tur gaye ne dona de hi hani mere dosta.... Teri meri eko jahi kahani mere dosta...
bahut wadia veer g . . . . . . . . Mai v kuj likhan di gustakhi krna chahunda ha . . Ajj kal sohne sadi gal ch na hungare bharde ne Sade jeen de sahare hun gaira utte marde ne Khabre oh v kise din mianu yaad kar rovegi jdo shad giya mai eh jag faani mere dosta teri te meri iko jihi kahani mere dosta
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« on: May 24, 2010, 07:46:41 AM »
Kade khushi naal khushi vall nahi vekheya O meri si par usne kade mere vall nahi vekheya Zindagi naal mulakat hoi kujh is taran Usne mere vall te main usde vall nahi vekheya .................................................. Akkhan band karan ta tera hi supna hove Je kholan ta samne tera hi chehra hove Marr vi javan ta koi gham nahi Je kaffan di tha teriya zulfan da hanera hove .................................................. Bewafai karan di soch asin vi rakhde si Qatal kar den jo O nazar asin vi rakhde si Tuhade naal vada si kade na ron da Unj akkhan ch samandar asin vi rakhde si
bahuta wadiaa likhea veer g
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« on: May 23, 2010, 07:42:28 AM »
bhull jana chahunda ha mai us kudi nu te usde naal har yaad judi nu bhull gya mai keetia vadeekiaa us diyaa par usdi surat nae bhulaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
changa nae hunda staauna kise nu jaan bujj ke aive ravauna kise nu oh v shayad anjaane ch dil naal khed gyi par mai nasamaj ode vaang nae chit parchaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
usne sochea hona k mai aive hathi shaava karda mai v usde vaang pyar da dikhawa karda afsos usde naal ishq da natak nae kar paya te mai eh kirdaar nae nibhaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
jis naam naal kade oh mainu bulaaya kardi c jo naam lai ke kde kde oh mainu sataaya kardi c te usde sohne jihe naam de sohne jihe lafzaa nu mai kade v nae bhulaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
je oh na hundi ta mai kis nu chahuna c usto bina mere kolo kisne likhvaauna c rehndi duniaa tak intzaar karu joban usda aive haar mann ke mai apni jind nae mukaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
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« on: May 23, 2010, 07:35:57 AM »
meri zindagi khulli kitaab wargi afsos us kol parhan da vela nae mera hath farh ke ishq dia paudiaa us kol charhan da vela nae ajnabee loka naal hass hass galla krdi par mere naal ta us kol larhan da vela nae
bhullan di koshish usnu mai roj krda par usnu na bhull sakya mai us sohne chehre wali nu shad ke kise hor kudi te na dhull sakya mai kehnde lok ishq ch mar jande ya botal farh lainde shukar rabb te us kudi da na rull sakya mai
lok ranjha rajha keh mainu puchde ne teri heer kithe tere naam naal mera naam jud jaave aisi meri taqdeer kithe teri yaad ch joban likh deve geet ya kavita koi eh taa kamlaa jiha munda "shiv" warga fakeer kithe
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« on: May 23, 2010, 07:33:42 AM »
kyu mehfila ch ikalla jiha reh gya kis da eh gamm mainu lai ke beh gya kaun hai oh bewafaa jdo koi keh gyaa ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gyaa
kisdi surat mai dil ch wasaayi c zindagi mai apni kis de naam layi c kaun c oh kudi jdo koi sawal eh lai k beh gya ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gya
ki dasda mai onaa nu kaun c rab mere layi kade soch ke dekhi mai ki nae kita tere layi teri jitt hundi dekh ni mai apni har haar seh gya ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gya
tu fikar na kar tainu badnaam nae karunga zikar tera loka samne shareaam nae karunga joban likhan lyi ajj fir teri tasveer agge beh gya ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gya
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« on: May 22, 2010, 07:27:44 AM »
hun ta tu mainu pehchaandi v nahi kehndi a ke mainu jaandi v nahi ni odo ikalli tu hazaara vich hovegi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovegi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
ni tu raat jaag ke bitaaya karengi fir beetay waqt nu pashtaaya karengi us vele teriaa sohniaa palka ch mai hanju ban ke aavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
tera tanhaayiaa naal rishta jud jaana tu meri yaad de sagar ch rud jana fir tere sir te hath rakh mai tainu chup kraavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
hun mukh na mera taknaa chahundi tu naveaa naal saanjh rakhna chahundi tu har vele har paase mai tainu hi nazar aavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
tu jhootha haasa hassengi na dukh kise nu dassengi tere dil di peerh fir mai aa ke vandaavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
tainu change nahi lagne sohne nazaare ni tere dost ban jaange kali raat te taare ni tainu chann vicho v mai hi nazar aavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
aah dekh nabaz meri ruk challi tere piche jind joban di muk challi tera pyaar paun de lyi agle janam ch rab to lekh likhavaanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
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« on: May 22, 2010, 07:26:03 AM »
bdaa siyaana tu dosta par yaad rakhi gal ik meri ishq samundar hanjua da te birho di raat haneri bahutaa pyaar na jataavi kise naal oye vichode bure sajnaa de enaa chaahi na kise nu ke oh rooh ban jave teri
kite akha ch akha paa ke kise naal muskuraa na baithi anmol jind apni bhang de bhaane guaa na baithi tu anjaan aje dosta lok ta jaan ban ke jaan kad lainde ne aive sohni surat nu bholi samaj ke apni jaan na bnaa baithi
apne mithe bolaa naal lok tainu fasaunge do char tere dil naal khed ke dil parchaunge tur jaange oh apna matlab kad ke ik din mud mud yaad aa ke oh tainu ravaunge
laa ke rog avalle sohne lainde nae saar shutt janda jag sara chann taare ban jande ne yaar yaad kar kar yaad laare onaa beparwahaa de joban har pal rehndaa hai rooh nu maut da intzaar
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« on: May 22, 2010, 07:23:33 AM »
likhnaa shauk nae c mera tere deedar ne shayer bnaa ditta kuj nafrat lokaa di te kuj pyaar tere ne shayer bnaa ditta tu hi ta meri soch nu parwaaz ditti tu mere bejubaan jazbaata nu awaaz ditti
jo supne tere baare aunde ne onaa nu lok bahut salaunde ne jis geet ch zikar hove tera oh mainu pasand hai je supneaa ch tu aave mainu hamesha di neend sauna pasad hai
rang gora tera surat dil luttan wali hai bull ne patte gulaab de teri akha ch diwali hai kite v chali jaave tu lakha cho jaave pehchaani tu bdaa changa subaah tera mere dil di raani tu
tainu hasdi dekh apne saare gamm bhull jaava dil darda mera kidre tere ishq ch na rull jaava iko benti meri tu mainu bhulaa na jaavi kidre mainu birho de gal laa na jaavi
mera pyaar waqt naal nahi badlu mera ishq haqeeki hai tu mere layi rabb ni eh kavita v tere layi hi uleeki hai ni hauli hauli tere layi geet mai likh daunga hazaar bas kardi rahi tu joban nu hamesha ese traa pyaar
mai tuhaada bahut thankful haa sab da.....tusi mere kamm nu enaa pyaar de rahe ho te apne anmol comments dinde ho..... i hope future ch v tusi mere kamm nu pasand karoge.............te apne comments likhde rahoge.....ssa g sa rab raakha
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« on: May 22, 2010, 01:53:46 AM »
jo muh cho na bol sakeaa mai kade oh kalam apni to likhaaunda haaa jo dil ch dabbe reh gye armaan mere onaa te lafzaa di chaadar charhaaunda haa
dil kardaa badlaa lai lawa mai pith te hoye vaara da par dil onaa da dukhaaun to ghabraaunda haaa ki karaa kamle dil te na jor mera onaa sajjnaa nu ajj v chahunda haaa
ptaa laggan nae dinda mai onaa nu ke kinna khud nu onaa lyi tarfaaunda haa oh haal je kade meraa puch lain bhul bhulekhe aive jhootha jiha hass dikhaaunda haa
mera rab jaanda banda mai dil da maarha nae khabre kyu duniaadaari ch bura kahaaunda haa lok ta rabb nu vech ke khaa jaan je wass challe onaa da mai kamlaa onaa nu zameer na vechan lyi samjaaunda haa
sach bolan di bimaari puraani hai mainu te sach bolan to na kade katraaunda haa joban chaar bande shadd lavi tu v modhaa dain lyi ehi gal siyaaneaa di mai khud nu samjaaunda haa
....................joban hundal
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« on: May 21, 2010, 03:38:57 AM »
ssa friends............mainu kuj lok puchde ne teri umar aje bahut ghat hai par tu enaa kuj kyu likh dinaa hai......aisi ki wajah hai jo tu likhda rehnda hai.......... te ajj mainu kise ne puchya ke tenu inspiration kitho mildi hai ta .....mere bulla te kuj aaya jo mai likh ditta ....mai usda jawab dain di koshish kiti hai...i hope tuhaanu sab nu pasand aavegi.......je pasand aave ya bhaave na aave please apne comments jaroor shadnaa ....mere wallo sab nu ehi apeal hai..........
apni majboor kalam di siyaahi naal apnaa har gamm likh ditta mai wajah ik hove ta dassa mai har wajah te ik geet likh ditta mai
jdo usnu dekhyaa c mai pehli vaar usdi tareef ch sab likh ditta mai usnu dekh ke jo khyaal dil ch aaye onaa khyaala nu kagaz te likh ditta mai
fir jado oh supnea ch aun laggi apna har supnaa jhat pat likh ditta mai usde khyaala ch chan tareaa de naal jo waqt bitaaya oh likh ditta mai
fir rut jo pyaar wali aayi c sade utte usda har din khushiaa bharea likh ditta mai jo gallaa asi kitiaa jo waqt bitaya usdiaa baaha ch likh ditta mai
fir hauli hauli oh mere to door hon laggi ta usda badaldaa vateera likh ditta mai har bahaana jo bnaa ke mainu shadd gyi oh dil te pathar dhar likh ditta mai
kade vaada jo lagdaa c mainu usda har laara likh ditta mai apne geeta ch kade changi usnu te kade buri likh ditta mai
usne ta pyaar kitaa hi nae kade mere naal aive apne dil da haal likh ditta mai usde ishq ch hoya jo khajjal khuyaar oh tazurbaa likh ditta mai
likhdaa likhda kade thakea na mai ajj tak usto bgair guzar riha waqt likh ditta mai chotee jihi umar hai "joban" di te chotee jihi kahani lok kehnde khabre kyu dukhaa da pahaad likh ditta mai
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« on: May 20, 2010, 08:39:53 AM »
ki ki hoya nae mere naal tere ishq ch mai sab kuj chup chap seh gya bade sanmaan mile mainu tere karke koi kamla koi jhalla koi marjana v keh gya
tu jis raah te shad gyi c ikalle nu teri udeek ch mai ose raah de vich beh gya tu ta kayi manzilaa sar kar lyiaaa ni te mai othe da othe hi khada reh gyaa
ki kahaa mai tainu ni tere pyaar baare kise puraane geet vaangu jo tere mann to leh gya tere dil cho ta bade chir to muk gya ni ptaa nae kyu mere hi dil de vich hi reh gya
kade tere sheher roz mai aunda c hun moh usda v dil to leh gyaa bada khazzal khuyaar ho ke tere sheher cho haar maan ke mai bandale vich beh gya
loki puchde teri akh ch hanju kyu aaye ne mai keh dina yaar bas akh ch kuj pai gya khabre kyu joban ne manni nae gal us siyaane di " ishq annaa kare sujaakhea nu" jo kade keh gya
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« on: May 20, 2010, 06:48:19 AM »
enaa pyaar kyu ghoorha paya ni jihda janda nae hun bhulaaya ni vicho vich aive marya na kar kinni vaar tainu aakha ni mainu yaad na karya kar
tainu ki dassa bhullan di koshish mai v karda ha mera rab jaanda mai eh peerh kive jarda ha hun tu aive fikar meri karya na kar kinni vaar tainu aakha ni mainu yaad na karya kar
kyu nae tu armaana nu dil ch dabdi kyu tu rehndi chann ch mainu labhdi ni mai kothe chad taare ginne shad ditte tu v aive thand ch tharya na kar kinni vaar tainu aakha ni mainu yaad na karya kar
bhull ja ni waqt ikathea jo bitaaya kade asi bhull ja oh pyaar jo anjaane ch paya kade asi lok kar dainge aive badnaam joban de pyaar nu tu aive mehfila ch mera zikar na karya kar kinni vaar tainu aakha mainu yaad na karya kar
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« on: May 20, 2010, 06:45:38 AM »
tera inrzar kardea karea muk jana tu beparwhe kade auna.nae .... tu chete mainu nahi karna mai kade tainu bhulaauna nahi
ni tu mul na paya heere warge yaar da tainu kyu nahi aunda khiyaal mere pyar da mai kyu khud nu tarhfaunda ha tere lyi tu te kade pachtauna nahi tu chete mainu nahi karnaa mai kade tainu bhulaauna nahi
lok kehnde ne mai tainu bhull jawa ya kise hor de utte dhull jawa mai sab nu bulauna shad ditta hun kise ne mainu samjauna nahi tu chete mainu nahi karna mai kade tainu bhulaauna nahi
rab kare kade tu bhul bhulekhe aa jaave ta shayad joban de chehre te muskaan aa jaave mai jaan v vaar devaanga teri khaatir par tu kade mainu aajmauna nahi tu chete mainu nahi karna mai kade tainu bhulaauna nahi
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« on: May 20, 2010, 06:43:41 AM »
jus awesummm g
thanks g very much
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« on: May 20, 2010, 06:40:46 AM »
je shaer nu shad ke yaadan mitt jaan tan ajj ethe sare kush hunde...
2 lines mere vallo vi..
izzat teri tey meri sanji ve.. babul da keeha morh na saki ohna di hanji ch hundi meri hanji ve veyah ke lai challe ne ek jinda lash nu meri tan jholi ajj vi banzi ve meri tan jholi ajj vi banzi ve hmmmmm ..........ehi ta mushkil hai ........... u wrote very well ...... thanks 4 the comment................but she didnt had any such prob vaise hi kise hor naal chali gyi hahahahhahahaahhhha
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« on: May 12, 2010, 08:52:28 AM »
sikhar dopeher ch kyu ajj eh keher hoya jisnu apna kade kehnda c ajj begaana oh sheher hoya na rokea kise ne mainu na koyi meri vidaayi te roya laasha wasdia ne is sheher vich te har dil hai ethe moya
ik tere karke ni bekadre mai sheher tere nit aunda c fir pind apne jaa ke mai tere sheher di sift sunaunda c tere sheher naal moh bdaa paa lya sikhar dopeher mai khud nu jalaunda c pair v sarh ke kaale ho gye c par khud nu rok nae paunda c
mainu sdaa ghaat radakdi rahi haaye ni apne jigri yaara di kuj tere sheher walea ne nafrat kiti te tu v bhull gyi saanjh pyaara di raah band kar ditte tusi saare mere layi mainu rokan di duty laa ditti pehredaara di jaa khushi khushi was tu pathar dila naal sanu lorh nae hun jhoothe mulaajedaara di
sijda karna shadd ditta tere sheher nu te nazar v jhukaauni shadd diti tere sheher di paak pavitar bani c jo hun dil cho oh tasveer v kadd ditti shadd ditta sheher tere auna jaana mai te sheher di gal v sunauni shadd diti hun joban ne visaar dena tenu te tere sheher nu aive teri yaad ch akh ravauni shadd diti
.........................joban hundal
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