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« on: June 17, 2010, 10:23:59 AM »
eh rakhdi teri anmol ni bhaine Tere pooray karunga har bol ni bhaine akha cho kade dhulan nae dena mai neer tera Tere sir to kare qurbaan dunia eh sari ni veer tera
tenu hasdi vekha ta mai v muskuraa deva je tu rove kade ta dunia nu agg laa deva tenu khush karan de lyi kamaliye ban janda joker ni veer tera Tere sir to kare qurbaan dunia eh sari ni veer tera
mai tere naal sda na dunia to ghabraa javi parh likh k naam apna rushnaa javi tu putraa vargi dhee babul di tere te maan kare ni veer tera Tere sir to kare qurbaan dunia eh sari ni veer tera
tenu khud to na door kraa mere dil di eh chaah ni bhaine par veer tere nu ik din tera dharna paina viaah ni bhaine teri doli tor ke ni jhalliye bda rovega ni joban veer tera Tere sir to kare qurbaan dunia eh sari ni veer tera
It is dedicated to my sisters prabh hundal and simran josan. . . . . . . . Thanks to everybody 4 ur valuable comments . . . . . . .
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« on: June 15, 2010, 01:20:51 AM »
Punjab da haal sunava mai sacha na rakhna tuhade to koi lukaa ethe Hawa pani saaf na riha parvasi parinde nae lainde hun panah ethe Gareeb naal insaaf nahi ho riha paise lai ke mukar jande ne gawah ethe
Lut rahe ne mere punjab nu aise firde ne leader bepanah ethe sab apniaa jebaa bharde ne nae janta di kise nu parwah ethe kive karna rangle punjab nu berang siyasat milke kardi eh salaah ethe
sab Sadkaa ban ke tut gayiaa bahute kache ne aje raah ethe nakal maar ke hunde pass bache changi sikhiaa di nae kise nu parwah ethe bijli aundi nae 4 ghante to wad khetaa di motor de bill dite laa ethe
ghabru shad ke dudh te lassi peende ne coke te chaah ethe shokeeni te fukri aashki ne patt dite lakha ghar nashea naal ho gye tabah ethe aje ta shuraat hai dosto tabah honge lok bepanah ethe
kudiaa paun lag payiaa jean ya skirt suit sareer te chunni sir to diti laah ethe mobile phona ne vigaad dita na rahi sharam na koi hayaa ethe maapea di izzat da khayaal kise kise nu jo maapea da naam dain rushnaa ethe
sache rab naalo tut ke lok nave rab lainde bnaa ethe maar ke fooka pakhandi saadh parshaad de naam te vechde sawah ethe jisda dil karda mehngi gaddi ch ghuman nu khud nu baba oh lainda akhwaa ethe
karde benti tenu hath jorh ke lok mere punjab de karn ehi duaa ethe rabba liaa de murh to khushhaali tu mehar di maar nigaah ethe joban nu v de akal te honsla thoda hor sutte eh loka de zameer deve jgaa ethe . . . . . . . . .
THANKS 4 LIKING MY PREVIOUS WORK . . . . . . . Thanks 4 comments . . .
MAI UPAR JO LIKHYA HAI . . . . . MAI POORI KOSHISH KITI HAI PUNJAB DI SACHI TASVEER PESH KARN DI . . . . . . . . . Mainu umeed hai . . . Tusi isnu parhoge . . . . Te pasand karoge . . . . . . Te upar likhe punjab de halaat badlan baare kuj ta jaroor sochoge . . . . THANKS AGAIN TUHADA SAB DA CHOTA VEER
Joban Hundal . . . . . .
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« on: June 14, 2010, 01:33:51 PM »
Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . . Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Jo jaan lagya na das k vajah gyi . . . Ohi kamli kal ikdum sahmne aa gyi . . . . Usnu milan di khushi gyi na sambhali haaye akh meri malo mali ro pyi . . . . Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . . Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Ki kami mere vich c mai aj v labhda rehnda . . Mai kamla usnu tasvera cho labhda rehnda . . . . Kismat di khed sari a ki kraa mai. . . . . jihdi oh bewafa ho gyi . . . . Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . . Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Odia akha to chura akha mai jhootha hasa hasya . . . Hanju luka lye apne na dukh usnu dasya . . khush ha mai ode to bgair . . . . . oh vekh ke hairan jihi ho gyi . . . . Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . . Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
Mainu pta oh mainu yaad kar k na kde royi c . . . . Mainu saarhan lyi nave sajna nu usne galvakdi payi hoyi c . . . . Ki kraa mai dil hatho majboor odi eh ada v mainu moh gyi . . . . Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . . Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . . Usnu ki pta joban hauli hauli roj muk riha . . . . Rohi wale kise rukh vangu roj suk riha . . . . Chali gyi bin bolea hi yaro hun eni pathar dil oh ho gyi . . . . Kal ode nal yaro mulakat ho gyi. . . . Tak k oh mainu khyala vich kho gyi . . .
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« on: June 13, 2010, 05:05:38 AM »
Jaan wale chale jande ona naal nae jayida . . . . Bhulan lyi ona nu hath botal nu nae payida . . . . Us aashik de kadma ch matha tekeaa mai . . . . Ik anne nu tasveer sahare jionda dekhya mai . . . .
Usdi tasveer di nayika gyi c shad usnu . . . . Khabre kyu dil cho gyi c kad usnu . . . . fir v Naam us kudi da rab vangu dhiaunda vekhya mai . . . . Ik anne nu tasveer sahaare jeonda dekhya mai . . . .
Loki niki jihi haar te marna chaunde ne. . . sb kuj oh kismat havaale krna chaunde ne . . . Us fakkar nu kismat te halaat nal takraunda dekhya mai . . . . Ik anne nu tasveer sahaare jeonda dekhya mai
Kehnda Jdo oh zindgi ch nae c mai odo vi jeonda c . . . Hasi khushi yara nal odo waqt bitaunda c . . . . Us kudi de jaan picho usnu yara nal muskuraunda dekhya mai . . . . Ik anne nu tasveer sahaare jeonda dekhya mai
ki hoya joban je usdi akha ch nahi riha noor . . . . Par oh fir v takda har pal apni hoor . . . . Us sache aashik nu ishq kamaunda vekhya mai . . . . . Ik anne nu tasveer sahaare jeonda vekhya mai . . . . . .
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« on: June 03, 2010, 02:10:37 AM »
uchea de nal tera uthna behna teri uchea naal dildaari Uche tere khyal dosta teri uchea de naal yaari na ucha usto tu na shehnshah koi na usdi braabri kar sakda koi badshah sab to ucha a murshad mera mere haal da mehram oh sacha paatshah jisne bakhshi jaan mainu jisne dunia eh sari usaari Uche tere khyal dosta teri uchea de naal yari
mai neeva mera sir v neeva us sache rab agge jo jukda lakh dukh dard lukaun di koshish kiti par us kolo nae kuj lukda dukh dard muk gye mere jdo usne nigah meher di maari Uche tere khyal dosta teri uchea de naal yari mann gal dosta meri tu v us naal preeta paa lai tere uche yaara nalo oh murshad hai ucha berhi teri kinare laggu ode nal wafa nibhaa lai joban kehnda vaar vaar usdi hasti bdi niyaari uche tere khyal dosta teri uchea de naal yaari
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« on: June 01, 2010, 12:37:09 PM »
Haal punjab da ki dassa yaaro isde haal hoye dushvaar ne black karn wale kmaaunde lakha ch te parhe likhe baithe berozgaar ne ajj tak insaaf na milea sanu te azaad ghummde meri kaum de gunahgaar ne
jhootha ajj kal da pyar loko te jhoothe sab dildaar ne loki kehnde munde nu vigaad ditta yaara te maapea de laad dulaar ne bhul k dudh te lassi ena paaye nashea de naal pyaar ne
kudiye baare ki dassa mitro meriaa akhaa nit hundiaa sharamsaar ne salvar kameej shad k ajj kal jean top paa lye har mutiyaar ne kuj pattya ena nu mobilaa ne te kuj beuty parlour de shingaar ne
hor punjab di kraa sift ki mai jithe khudgarza de hath rajneeti de hathyaar ne kayi vichaarea kol rehn lyi ghar nahi te saare shamshaanghaat pakke kar ditte sarkaar ne ik vaar laara laa k panj saal pehla eh lutde sanu vaar vaar ne
lok ajj tak azaad nae hoye mere des de te naale anparhta hatho laachaar ne bachi hoyi c jo mitro thodi bahut kad diti oh kasar votaa de vapaar ne apne is bure haal de yaaro sab iko jihe kasoorvaar ne bhagat , saraabhe nu bhulde jande lok par yaad bollywood de star ne joban tu hi shuruaat kar halaat nu badlan di eh kam karna tere hath wali kalam naam di talvaar ne hauli hauli buland karu awaaz apni je kar hundal de naal tuhade warge yaar ne
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« on: May 31, 2010, 08:09:36 AM »
Socha de samundar ch dubb janda . . . . . jdo tere naam warga koi naam sunaa mai. . . . Mainu ghaat hamsafar di rarhakdi jdo . . . Ehna raaha te turaa mai. . . . Sochda sochda khyala ch. . . . . gum ho janda mai aksar . . . . . Ho gyi jo juda tu maitho . . . . . Aise keetay ki gunaah mai. . . . . .
Siyaane kehnde bina parkhea . . . . kise nu kahiye mera mera na . . . . Azaad parinde vangu shad dayiye usnu. . . . . aive baaha da usnu payiye ghera na . . . . . je mud aave sohna yaar ta rehmat rab di. . . . . je na murhe ta samji oh kde v dilo hoya tera na . . . . .
tu shadna chahundi c mainu . . . . ta mai v baaha nu khol ditta . . . Pyar sache dilo kita c tainu mai . . . tere lyi hanju rorh har ik anmol ditta. . . . . tu vaapas na aayi kade v. . . . . . te mai apni javani nu mitti de vich rol ditta . . . . . . chal koyi na j tu tur gyi aa . . . . mai v gal dil te nae launi . . . . Nae rog jind nu lgauna . . . . . . te Rooh hijar de faahe nae launi . . . . . Joban ne v laa laini hun navea naal yari . . . . . . aive tere dukh ch apni zindgi nae mukauni . . . . . . . . . . . .
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« on: May 30, 2010, 02:07:37 PM »
peera te fakeera di duaa wargi vasaayi hai dil ch paak te pavitar teri tasveer mai tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasaa apne hathaa ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai
tu pariyaa to wad sohni arhiye na koyi tere wargi honi arhiye ni mai vaise ranjha banan de kaabil nae par tainu bnaa baitha ha apni heer mai tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasaa apne hathaa ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai
tere saaha di khushboo mehkaa jaave fizaava nu tu apniaa zulfaa vich kaid kar lave havaawa nu tainu tann mann ch vasaaa ke ni ban baitha ha tera dilgeer mai tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasa apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai
dhadkan ban chukki tu joban de dil di tainu tak ke akhaa nu khushi hai mildi tere naam naal mera naam jurh jave sache rabb kolo mangi aisi taqdeer mai tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasaa apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai
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« on: May 30, 2010, 09:45:44 AM »
raste ta kayi dikhaayi de rahe ne par mainu samaj nae kis raah jawa jis raste wal vekhaa mai ni apne ateet nu hi mai pawa ki kraa tera hi sheher disda mainu jdo takda mai ghar de banere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
kuj vigaadea mainu yaara ne te kuj haan diya mutiyaara ne haye kamla keh keh kamla kar ditta mainu ginti de kuj samajdaara ne door jana chahunda ha mai zindgi ch faille hanere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
matlabkhori is dunia hatho hun dosto bahut jiyaada akkk chukka ha mai mohabat da naam sun k har muh vicho bahut jiyaada thakk chukka ha mai mainu jaapda koyi bula riha hai ranjhe wale jogi de dere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
navi hawa nave loka ch rabba hun navi meri shuruaat hove yaad kar k na tadpa tainu din vele te sakoon wali meri har raat hove badiyaaa aasaa ne joban nu rabba aun nave wale savere to door jana chahunda ha mai apne aap to te bahut door jana chahunda ha mai tere to
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« on: May 30, 2010, 09:42:41 AM »
kyu har pal garam rahe tu ni thoda gusse nu tu jarrya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
agge rabb ne kihdi ghat kiti jo asi nahi tere college vich parhde ha utto tu kardi gussa ni je raah tere ch asi kharhde ha ni yaari laa ke nibhaauga jatt tu aive hi na darrya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
jado kade nikle tu scooty te asi bullet piche tere launde ha tu ta loafer keh ke tur jaave tu ki jaane kinna petrol asi udaaunde ha sanu aunda vekh ke door to tu raah apna na badlea kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
tu sunya kar maan sahab de gaane te thandiyaa cheeja khaaya kar kude lambe lambe saah liya kar jdo gussa aunda ya ikalli beh ke kite shor machaaya kar kude je fir v nae hunda control tere to gussa ta savere utth ke yoga karya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
tainu kive dassa ni tu jaan joban di sohniye ni tu kar ke har vaar nakhra mera dil thaggdi a par ik gal tainu hor dass deva ni tu gusse ch hor v sohni laggdi a keh de hundal nu apne dil di ik vaar ni aive loka de kolo na darrya kar lemon pee k thandi ho kudiye aive saada gussa na karya kar
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« on: May 30, 2010, 02:48:45 AM »
khushiyaa muh maitho kuj is traa fer rakhya hai jive badalaaa ne chann nu ajj gher rakhyaa hai tutdaa taara vekh usne meri lambi umar mangi shayad tutt java taare vaangu mai bahutea da jee karda bas duaaava hatho majboor ha mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
kuj chahunde ne mukaa na mai akha de paani vaangu bahute chahunde mukk java kise pari di kahani vaangu kuj kehnde jug jug jee sajjna bahute kehn tu cheti kyu nae marda bas duaava hatho majboor haa mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
neend sakoon wali mai sauna chahunda ha usde kadmaa ch jind apni mukauna chahunda ha khabre kamli na ho jaave jo shad gyi mainu haaye rabba mai ese gal to dardaa ha bas duaava hatho majboor ha mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
sabar rakh joban cheti hi rabb sun lauga teri mil aa usnu te ode sheher paa lai akhri feri rabba cheti apne kol bulaa lai mainu hundal har pal eh ardaas rehnda karda bas duaava hatho majboor ha mai unj jeen nu mera dil nae karda
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« on: May 29, 2010, 11:02:10 AM »
Mai nae chaunda oh akho hanju dhole usnu kehna meri lash wal vekh k bas hass deve . . . . . . . Na kare tareef meri mere etho tur jaan picho bas loka vangu oh v koi taana kass deve . . . . . . . . . hor nae mangda hundal tuhade to yaaro bas ik ehsaan hor kar deo. . . . . . . . . Odi udeek ch joban mar muk chalya Koi mere marn to pehla usnu dass deve
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« on: May 23, 2010, 07:42:28 AM »
bhull jana chahunda ha mai us kudi nu te usde naal har yaad judi nu bhull gya mai keetia vadeekiaa us diyaa par usdi surat nae bhulaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
changa nae hunda staauna kise nu jaan bujj ke aive ravauna kise nu oh v shayad anjaane ch dil naal khed gyi par mai nasamaj ode vaang nae chit parchaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
usne sochea hona k mai aive hathi shaava karda mai v usde vaang pyar da dikhawa karda afsos usde naal ishq da natak nae kar paya te mai eh kirdaar nae nibhaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
jis naam naal kade oh mainu bulaaya kardi c jo naam lai ke kde kde oh mainu sataaya kardi c te usde sohne jihe naam de sohne jihe lafzaa nu mai kade v nae bhulaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
je oh na hundi ta mai kis nu chahuna c usto bina mere kolo kisne likhvaauna c rehndi duniaa tak intzaar karu joban usda aive haar mann ke mai apni jind nae mukaa sakda tutti us naalo ta ki hoyaa kise hor naal yaari nae laa sakda
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« on: May 23, 2010, 07:35:57 AM »
meri zindagi khulli kitaab wargi afsos us kol parhan da vela nae mera hath farh ke ishq dia paudiaa us kol charhan da vela nae ajnabee loka naal hass hass galla krdi par mere naal ta us kol larhan da vela nae
bhullan di koshish usnu mai roj krda par usnu na bhull sakya mai us sohne chehre wali nu shad ke kise hor kudi te na dhull sakya mai kehnde lok ishq ch mar jande ya botal farh lainde shukar rabb te us kudi da na rull sakya mai
lok ranjha rajha keh mainu puchde ne teri heer kithe tere naam naal mera naam jud jaave aisi meri taqdeer kithe teri yaad ch joban likh deve geet ya kavita koi eh taa kamlaa jiha munda "shiv" warga fakeer kithe
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« on: May 23, 2010, 07:33:42 AM »
kyu mehfila ch ikalla jiha reh gya kis da eh gamm mainu lai ke beh gya kaun hai oh bewafaa jdo koi keh gyaa ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gyaa
kisdi surat mai dil ch wasaayi c zindagi mai apni kis de naam layi c kaun c oh kudi jdo koi sawal eh lai k beh gya ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gya
ki dasda mai onaa nu kaun c rab mere layi kade soch ke dekhi mai ki nae kita tere layi teri jitt hundi dekh ni mai apni har haar seh gya ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gya
tu fikar na kar tainu badnaam nae karunga zikar tera loka samne shareaam nae karunga joban likhan lyi ajj fir teri tasveer agge beh gya ni naam tera bulla utte aunda aunda reh gya
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« on: May 22, 2010, 07:27:44 AM »
hun ta tu mainu pehchaandi v nahi kehndi a ke mainu jaandi v nahi ni odo ikalli tu hazaara vich hovegi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovegi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
ni tu raat jaag ke bitaaya karengi fir beetay waqt nu pashtaaya karengi us vele teriaa sohniaa palka ch mai hanju ban ke aavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
tera tanhaayiaa naal rishta jud jaana tu meri yaad de sagar ch rud jana fir tere sir te hath rakh mai tainu chup kraavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
hun mukh na mera taknaa chahundi tu naveaa naal saanjh rakhna chahundi tu har vele har paase mai tainu hi nazar aavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
tu jhootha haasa hassengi na dukh kise nu dassengi tere dil di peerh fir mai aa ke vandaavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
tainu change nahi lagne sohne nazaare ni tere dost ban jaange kali raat te taare ni tainu chann vicho v mai hi nazar aavanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
aah dekh nabaz meri ruk challi tere piche jind joban di muk challi tera pyaar paun de lyi agle janam ch rab to lekh likhavaanga tu lokaa to luk luk rovengi jdo mai etho tur jaavanga
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« on: May 22, 2010, 07:26:03 AM »
bdaa siyaana tu dosta par yaad rakhi gal ik meri ishq samundar hanjua da te birho di raat haneri bahutaa pyaar na jataavi kise naal oye vichode bure sajnaa de enaa chaahi na kise nu ke oh rooh ban jave teri
kite akha ch akha paa ke kise naal muskuraa na baithi anmol jind apni bhang de bhaane guaa na baithi tu anjaan aje dosta lok ta jaan ban ke jaan kad lainde ne aive sohni surat nu bholi samaj ke apni jaan na bnaa baithi
apne mithe bolaa naal lok tainu fasaunge do char tere dil naal khed ke dil parchaunge tur jaange oh apna matlab kad ke ik din mud mud yaad aa ke oh tainu ravaunge
laa ke rog avalle sohne lainde nae saar shutt janda jag sara chann taare ban jande ne yaar yaad kar kar yaad laare onaa beparwahaa de joban har pal rehndaa hai rooh nu maut da intzaar
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« on: May 22, 2010, 07:23:33 AM »
likhnaa shauk nae c mera tere deedar ne shayer bnaa ditta kuj nafrat lokaa di te kuj pyaar tere ne shayer bnaa ditta tu hi ta meri soch nu parwaaz ditti tu mere bejubaan jazbaata nu awaaz ditti
jo supne tere baare aunde ne onaa nu lok bahut salaunde ne jis geet ch zikar hove tera oh mainu pasand hai je supneaa ch tu aave mainu hamesha di neend sauna pasad hai
rang gora tera surat dil luttan wali hai bull ne patte gulaab de teri akha ch diwali hai kite v chali jaave tu lakha cho jaave pehchaani tu bdaa changa subaah tera mere dil di raani tu
tainu hasdi dekh apne saare gamm bhull jaava dil darda mera kidre tere ishq ch na rull jaava iko benti meri tu mainu bhulaa na jaavi kidre mainu birho de gal laa na jaavi
mera pyaar waqt naal nahi badlu mera ishq haqeeki hai tu mere layi rabb ni eh kavita v tere layi hi uleeki hai ni hauli hauli tere layi geet mai likh daunga hazaar bas kardi rahi tu joban nu hamesha ese traa pyaar
mai tuhaada bahut thankful haa sab da.....tusi mere kamm nu enaa pyaar de rahe ho te apne anmol comments dinde ho..... i hope future ch v tusi mere kamm nu pasand karoge.............te apne comments likhde rahoge.....ssa g sa rab raakha
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« on: May 22, 2010, 01:53:46 AM »
jo muh cho na bol sakeaa mai kade oh kalam apni to likhaaunda haaa jo dil ch dabbe reh gye armaan mere onaa te lafzaa di chaadar charhaaunda haa
dil kardaa badlaa lai lawa mai pith te hoye vaara da par dil onaa da dukhaaun to ghabraaunda haaa ki karaa kamle dil te na jor mera onaa sajjnaa nu ajj v chahunda haaa
ptaa laggan nae dinda mai onaa nu ke kinna khud nu onaa lyi tarfaaunda haa oh haal je kade meraa puch lain bhul bhulekhe aive jhootha jiha hass dikhaaunda haa
mera rab jaanda banda mai dil da maarha nae khabre kyu duniaadaari ch bura kahaaunda haa lok ta rabb nu vech ke khaa jaan je wass challe onaa da mai kamlaa onaa nu zameer na vechan lyi samjaaunda haa
sach bolan di bimaari puraani hai mainu te sach bolan to na kade katraaunda haa joban chaar bande shadd lavi tu v modhaa dain lyi ehi gal siyaaneaa di mai khud nu samjaaunda haa
....................joban hundal
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« on: May 21, 2010, 03:38:57 AM »
ssa friends............mainu kuj lok puchde ne teri umar aje bahut ghat hai par tu enaa kuj kyu likh dinaa hai......aisi ki wajah hai jo tu likhda rehnda hai.......... te ajj mainu kise ne puchya ke tenu inspiration kitho mildi hai ta .....mere bulla te kuj aaya jo mai likh ditta ....mai usda jawab dain di koshish kiti hai...i hope tuhaanu sab nu pasand aavegi.......je pasand aave ya bhaave na aave please apne comments jaroor shadnaa ....mere wallo sab nu ehi apeal hai..........
apni majboor kalam di siyaahi naal apnaa har gamm likh ditta mai wajah ik hove ta dassa mai har wajah te ik geet likh ditta mai
jdo usnu dekhyaa c mai pehli vaar usdi tareef ch sab likh ditta mai usnu dekh ke jo khyaal dil ch aaye onaa khyaala nu kagaz te likh ditta mai
fir jado oh supnea ch aun laggi apna har supnaa jhat pat likh ditta mai usde khyaala ch chan tareaa de naal jo waqt bitaaya oh likh ditta mai
fir rut jo pyaar wali aayi c sade utte usda har din khushiaa bharea likh ditta mai jo gallaa asi kitiaa jo waqt bitaya usdiaa baaha ch likh ditta mai
fir hauli hauli oh mere to door hon laggi ta usda badaldaa vateera likh ditta mai har bahaana jo bnaa ke mainu shadd gyi oh dil te pathar dhar likh ditta mai
kade vaada jo lagdaa c mainu usda har laara likh ditta mai apne geeta ch kade changi usnu te kade buri likh ditta mai
usne ta pyaar kitaa hi nae kade mere naal aive apne dil da haal likh ditta mai usde ishq ch hoya jo khajjal khuyaar oh tazurbaa likh ditta mai
likhdaa likhda kade thakea na mai ajj tak usto bgair guzar riha waqt likh ditta mai chotee jihi umar hai "joban" di te chotee jihi kahani lok kehnde khabre kyu dukhaa da pahaad likh ditta mai
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