Author Topic: Dusre layee do linah likho (Read 47200 times)

KuriPataka · « **on:** June 17, 2009, 07:16:01 AM »

SSA/Namaste...

Mai socheya kyon ke ajj kal PJ te shayar bahut ne, koyee shayari wala topic shuru karde.

Topic haiga, do ya tin line da shayer likhna. Likhna tuhade tau pehla reply karan walay layee. Jiddan ke jehra sareya tau pehla reply karuga, oh mere baray likhu, and so on and so on...

Ho jao shuru..

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** June 17, 2009, 07:16:01 AM »

__BlสckLisTed__ · « **Reply #1 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:09:48 AM »

Rehe Nit Tu Kardi majak wade ,
Nahi Takreya koi teno sade warga
Tu kar te sahi koi gal sade ware :mean:
dek kime main pj ch tere koke jarda :mean:
:he: :he: :he: :he:

KuriPataka · « **Reply #2 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:10:35 AM »

lol.

Jarro ji Jarro. Assi nahi darde.

KuriPataka · « **Reply #3 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:14:24 AM »

Sach hai, mazak kara naal sareya de
Tu kehre baag di mooli ve
Baneya vadda PJ da daku
Sidda kardu tenu maar ke chaku
Banda Internet te sher
Lagya hath mere, dekhi tu fer...

Haha that was so bad.

ਮਾਨ ਸਾਹਿਬ · « **Reply #4 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:16:06 AM »

kp ji sher app likhna ja appa koi ganne de vicho vi khad sakde ah

KuriPataka · « **Reply #5 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:17:01 AM »

Nahi yaar, avdi koshish karo.

Original is better, duje da likhya ta koyee vi copy kar sakda.

ਮਾਨ ਸਾਹਿਬ · « **Reply #6 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:17:53 AM »

ok ji.main kosish karda

ਮਾਨ ਸਾਹਿਬ · « **Reply #7 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:24:03 AM »

jad vi tennu milan di takdeer nazar ayi
mennu pairan vich banni hoi zanzeer najar ayi
teri yaad vich nikal pae mere hanju
har hanju vich teri tasveer nazar ayi

KuriPataka · « **Reply #8 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:26:30 AM »

Mann Sahib eh vi das deyo, kehde layee likhyea? Mere layee yaa Gangsta layee?

Deleted User · « **Reply #9 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:28:37 AM »

le kp aake vich mera sara shyr kharv karta :huhh: :huhh: :huhh: :huhh:...hun tare lai sochna pena...tenu pata sochna vare ch dimag nai chalda ena :huhh: :huhh: :huhh: :huhh:

KuriPataka · « **Reply #10 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:29:22 AM »

Sorry Lado

Tussi Mann sahib te likh lo..its ok.

ਮਾਨ ਸਾਹਿਬ · « **Reply #11 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:29:41 AM »

kp ji yuhade lai likheya.mere ton pehla tuhada reply tan si

__BlสckLisTed__ · « **Reply #12 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:32:11 AM »

Quote from: Kuri Pataka on June 17, 2009, 08:14:24 AM

Sach hai, mazak kara naal sareya de
Tu kehre baag di mooli ve
Baneya vadda PJ da daku
Sidda kardu tenu maar ke chaku
Banda Internet te sher
Lagya hath mere, dekhi tu fer...

Haha that was so bad.

Na kar maan ena adiye :mean:Ni ik din pastamegi..
Chnagi bhali G ji kardi firdi eEme ver pumamage
Shera nu koi farak ni pena bilia diyan chika da
rang fika hun pe tere hatha diyan lika da :mean: :mean:

KuriPataka · « **Reply #13 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:36:49 AM »

Quote from: __GคரGรTă___jaTT__ on June 17, 2009, 08:32:11 AM

Na kar maan ena adiye :mean:Ni ik din pastamegi..
Chnagi bhali G ji kardi firdi eEme ver pumamage
Shera nu koi farak ni pena bilia diyan chika da
rang fika hun pe tere hatha diyan lika da :mean: :mean:

Maan oh karde, jinna nu maan jachda
Tu kyon ehna mere te machda
Dekhe tere varge bathere
Rehnde bethe raha wich mere
Tenu ki mai ji ji akha
Tere varge nu mai paani na pilava

__BlสckLisTed__ · « **Reply #14 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:43:37 AM »

Quote from: Kuri Pataka on June 17, 2009, 08:36:49 AM

Maan oh karde, jinna nu maan jachda
Tu kyon ehna mere te machda
Dekhe tere varge bathere
Rehnde bethe raha wich mere
Tenu ki mai ji ji akha
Tere varge nu mai paani na pilava

last ch tuhadi lassi kar deti bt its ok i manage :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
ASI na karde na karida maan kudiye ,,
Sadi ume pore jag te wadi shaan kudiye ,,
Tere rahan nalo sade rah khoho dor reh jande,,
Dhan bhag samaj apne jehda asi teno Ssa keh bula jande . :mean: :mean: :mean:

KuriPataka · « **Reply #15 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:47:49 AM »

Likhan nu appa donay bahut kuch likh sakde...

Kisse hor nu chance de daiye? Je kisse ne na likhya i'll come back to it :)

__BlสckLisTed__ · « **Reply #16 on:** June 17, 2009, 08:49:14 AM »

got it ma frnd :pagel:

ƁΔƘΓΔ · « **Reply #17 on:** June 17, 2009, 09:11:16 AM »

Quote from: ਮਾਨ ਸਾਹਿਬ on June 17, 2009, 08:24:03 AM

jad vi tennu milan di takdeer nazar ayi
mennu pairan vich banni hoi zanzeer najar ayi
teri yaad vich nikal pae mere hanju
har hanju vich teri tasveer nazar ayi

mann saab tun kiyon ronda rehnda ae
das ladoo dekh ke tera munh kiyon chonda rehnda ae
kholke apne kann sunla meri ik matt
likh koi haso heeni gal jidda likhda gangster jatt

KuriPataka · « **Reply #18 on:** June 17, 2009, 09:16:49 AM »

Nice Nice..

Edha karde topic nu thora badal dinde.

Tussi appay pick kar sakde kiss baray likhna as long as os banda/bandi ne es topic wich kuch likhya.

M. · « **Reply #19 on:** June 17, 2009, 09:18:36 AM »

Jeh tu rusna eh.. tan zaroor rus...
bas menu edhi koi wajjah dus...

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