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~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« on: June 03, 2010, 06:11:58 PM »
teri jano vahd pyari dhee ni ammiye
turr challi eh beganeya de jee ni ammiye
veyah di tareek aa gaye eh nehre mere pain kaleje see ni ammiyeee
sim nu torh ne sade kolo ni hona jee ni ammiyeee..

kehnde hunde c tusi sanu hansa da jodha..
dekh ajj ni ammiye oh vichad chaleya
kehnde o tusi jinna pyar deve dhee nu ohna hi thoda
sohre ghare ja ke dheeyan firr bahuta ni payndian mohda
sim bina tan roop ek fatti jehi leer ni ammiye
teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye
turr cahlli eh beganeya de jee nu ammiye

mirch vangu tikki par jano vadh pyari ae
vehre de vich aaj tere kushi di mehak khilari ae
torh ke ohnu kushi kushi ni tun ghut sabran da pee ni ammiye
teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye
turr challli eh beganeya de jee ni ammiye


ps.. mah sis is getting married.. n i dun know.. sim de bin reh ni hona ..so was jus trying to write sumthing to express how i feel about it.. buh i can'ttt ..  :cry: :cry:
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~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2010, 07:22:32 PM »
i dont have much knowledge about shayari....

but watever u 've written is really nice... =D>
I can feel ur emotions
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #2 on: June 03, 2010, 07:25:09 PM »
Quote from: ღтєяι мєяι gαℓ ηα вαηєღ on June 03, 2010, 06:11:58 PM
teri jano vahd pyari dhee ni ammiye
turr challi eh begaya de jee ni ammiye
veyah di tareek aa gaye eh nehre mere pain kaleje see ni ammiyeee
sim nu torh ne sade kolo ni hona jee ni ammiyeee..

kehnde hunde c tusi sanu hansa da jodha..
dekh ajj ni ammiye oh vichad chaleya
kehnde o tusi jinna pyar deve dhee nu ohna hi thoda
sohre ghare ja ke dheeyan firr bahuta ni payndian mohda
sim bina tan roop ek fatti jehi leer ni ammiye
teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye
turr cahlli eh beganeya de jee nu ammiye

mirch vangu tikki par jano vadh pyari ae
vehre de vich aaj tere kushi di mehak khilari ae
torh ke ohnu kushi kushi ni tun ghut sabran da pee ni ammiye
teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye
turr challli eh beganeya de jee ni ammiye


ps.. mah sis is getting married.. n i dun know.. sim de bin reh ni hona ..so was jus trying to write sumthing to express how i feel about it.. buh i can'ttt ..  :cry: :cry:

aww bohat pyara likhea tusi sis
 :hug: very touching
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #3 on: June 03, 2010, 07:26:43 PM »
Sachii..Bahut nice likhia.. Appa hege aa Raje thoda Jee layun nu..Plz Rauna nai.. :happy: :hug: :hug:
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #4 on: June 03, 2010, 07:32:11 PM »
Quote from: Pragmatic on June 03, 2010, 07:22:32 PM
i dont have much knowledge about shayari....

but watever u 've written is really nice... =D>
I can feel ur emotions
tkx ji..
Quote from: нαsмυκн κυяί ☺ on June 03, 2010, 07:25:09 PM
aww bohat pyara likhea tusi sis
 :hug: very touching
thank u ji... i still feel like itz incomplete
Quote from: KUDRAT GREWAL on June 03, 2010, 07:26:43 PM
Sachii..Bahut nice likhia.. Appa hege aa Raje thoda Jee layun nu..Plz Rauna nai.. :happy: :hug: :hug:
royeya bina reh ni hona sim di vichora seh ni hona..

tkx sis ji..for ur words..
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2010, 07:52:51 PM »
wah g wah roop bohot nice likhya..

roop ehey duniya de reeti rewaj ne sare,
sim ne tan aaj nahi tan kal lagjana kinare,
khushi khushi kar vida sim nu tu naree,
yaad aunde tuhanu din oho bachpan de purane,
manga rabb kolo dua sim di khushiyan di,
hon aunghey sim de din suhanee.
 
sry je kuch galt likhkeya hove....xd




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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #6 on: June 03, 2010, 07:55:08 PM »
Quote from: ღ ▬╡ℛAGGI ℛAJ╞▬  ღ on June 03, 2010, 07:52:51 PM
wah g wah roop bohot nice likhya..

roop ehey duniya de reeti rewaj ne sare,
sim ne tan aaj nahi tan kal lagjana kinare,
khushi khushi kar vida sim nu tu naree,
yaad aunde tuhanu din oho bachpan de purane,
manga rabb kolo dua sim di khushiyan di,
hon aunghey sim de din suhanee.
 
sry je kuch galt likhkeya hove....xd


This is really thoughtful Raggiji.. =D> =D>
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #7 on: June 04, 2010, 04:37:59 AM »
Quote from: KUDRAT GREWAL on June 03, 2010, 07:55:08 PM
This is really thoughtful Raggiji.. =D> =D>
yah thoughtful tan c...thnxxx kudrat g.
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #8 on: June 04, 2010, 02:34:39 PM »
Quote from: ღ ▬╡ℛAGGI ℛAJ╞▬  ღ on June 03, 2010, 07:52:51 PM
wah g wah roop bohot nice likhya..

roop ehey duniya de reeti rewaj ne sare,
sim ne tan aaj nahi tan kal lagjana kinare,
khushi khushi kar vida sim nu tu naree,
yaad aunde tuhanu din oho bachpan de purane,
manga rabb kolo dua sim di khushiyan di,
hon aunghey sim de din suhanee.
 
sry je kuch galt likhkeya hove....xd





thank u bahut jeyada ji.. it really means a lot..koshish ehi karang eke hasske vida kareyiye.buh never lived without her..na tahi haul pende ne.. thanks again tusan bahut sohna likeya
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #9 on: June 07, 2010, 12:17:15 AM »
This Is awsome.. I read it the other day but was just short of time to comment

But really a Good Job... Very Well Done Mishro  :happy:
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #10 on: June 07, 2010, 03:09:53 PM »
Quote from: Jhanda Amli on June 07, 2010, 12:17:15 AM
This Is awsome.. I read it the other day but was just short of time to comment

But really a Good Job... Very Well Done Mishro  :happy:

thank u kamlo,,aho ji gal jado sadi tey aveh ohdo tusi sort of time ho jande /:) /:)

mattu wants me to sing it on her reception day as a speach i arn't doing that X_X X_X
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #11 on: June 12, 2010, 03:44:32 AM »
Mein Teri Dhee Sheeshe Wargi
Jadh Dil Kita Torh Dita Jadh Dil Kita Maa Tu Jorh Dendi
Kyun Bina Mukh Dekhe Meinu Kukh Vicho He Morh Dendi
Main Nhi Mangdi Heere Motti, Apne Pairan De Vich Davi Thaa
Putta Vangu Na Ghar Vandau Bas Seene De Nal Rakhi La
Kyu Dusman Vangu Pit Te Karke Vaar Rabb Agge Hath Jorh Dendi
Chal Karde Is Janam Ch Avdi Maa Nu Maff
 Maa Te Rabb Da Roop Hundi, Maa Te Rabb Da Roop Hundi
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #12 on: June 12, 2010, 08:40:59 PM »
tank u rav ji.. bahut sohna ji =D>
sahi kehA JI ma hundi eh rab da roop ji

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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #13 on: June 13, 2010, 02:50:28 AM »
oh ta hai he rab da roop g

ur belkum g
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Re: ~~teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye~~
« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2010, 02:02:02 PM »
Quote from: SaNdHu_RaV on June 13, 2010, 02:50:28 AM
oh ta hai he rab da roop g

ur belkum g
thank u ji again :)

mah bruv jus added some more to it so jus sharin it..

sohre ghare ja ke hun kushian eh manai ardas karde
pekeyan ton vadh ehnu mile sohre pyar ehio aass karde
ehnu lai challe bithake vich fulla ali car ch jeeja ji ni ammiye
teri jano vadh pyari dhee ni ammiye
turr challe beganeya de jee ni ammiye
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