Author Topic: request to tezzy g/dilreek sista/death_in_dreams (Read 4621 times)

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **on:** November 11, 2009, 02:19:09 PM »

hey guys ssa.. we all know that you guys r great in shayri.. i been trying to write shayri on babul n dhee..buh m preety bad with these kinda stuff..menu start point jeha nahe milda ke mein kitho suru karn..so if u guy have time..tan can we all try togheter to write sumthing... itz jus mah request.. plz..

tezzy bro kuj likho na plz..

Punjabi Janta Forums - Janta Di Pasand · « **on:** November 11, 2009, 02:19:09 PM »

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #1 on:** November 12, 2009, 11:16:58 AM »

kisse ne reply nahe kareya :sad: :sad: :sad:

ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ · « **Reply #2 on:** November 12, 2009, 12:02:52 PM »

mainu ta shaayri nahi au :sad: :sad: :sad:

Jhanda_Amli · « **Reply #3 on:** November 12, 2009, 12:15:30 PM »


Yudhvir Manak- chadar

May be song can help in writing :)

¸¸.•のæ-☪•.¸¸ · « **Reply #4 on:** November 12, 2009, 12:17:45 PM »

Quote from: ♥кнαη∂ мιѕняι♥ on November 12, 2009, 11:16:58 AM

kisse ne reply nahe kareya :sad: :sad: :sad:

u can write awesome shayari .. may be u can start first.. we will help u complete it

Jatt Yamla · « **Reply #5 on:** November 12, 2009, 12:28:09 PM »

Khand Mishri pata nai tenu pasand ave ja naa..par mai ek line likh dinda aa..

Dhee kookh vich na maar bablaa..
Ehnu Jeyounde jee na saar bablaa..
(Baki hun aap likh lai mai starting kar diti..)

ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ · « **Reply #6 on:** November 12, 2009, 12:35:57 PM »

may be babul te dhee te pyaare rishte te shaayri likhan nu kehndi hai khand mishri :dnk:

death_in_dreamz · « **Reply #7 on:** November 12, 2009, 01:14:37 PM »

eh kaisa din aeya ve rabba..
kaisa khed khidaeya ve rabba..
ki duniya de dstoor bnaye..
na ro ve babulaa
chup kr ja meriye maaye...

kinjh russi nu hass mnaounda c
mainu ghut k kalje laounda c
kinne laaddan de naal khidounda c
chete kr din oh ajj
akh meri hanjhu vahaye..
hass k tor ve babulaa
ajj sagn mna lai meriye maaye..

dukh na koi aave meri ammddi de vehre
sda rhn babul ghr khusiyan te khede
mehr rakhi rabba devi sukh duniya de jehre
hanjhu na ave mere veeran akh
jiounde rehn meri amdi de jaye
sukhi vse tera mehal ve babula..
reh chali chaar dihade meriye maaye..
na ro ve babulaa
chup kr ja meriye maaye..

dheeyan dhann praeya ik din tur janiyan
lambhi udari maar chiriyan eh udd janiyan
rakh ske na rajje raniyan dheeyan
kaise dheeyean lekh likhaye
ve rabba kyun dheyan
kr jandiyan desh praye
na ro dheeye doli beh ja
tainu lain prdesi aye

kyun dhee pyari nu torna painda ghr praye..
sonu kise d smj na aye ve rabba
kyun eh dastoor bnaye
babula ve roeya na kri
aj sagan manna lai meriye maye
ja ni dheeye doli beth ja
tainu lain pardesi aaye..

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #8 on:** November 12, 2009, 05:24:39 PM »

Quote from: קยภןค๒คภ on November 12, 2009, 12:17:45 PM

u can write awesome shayari .. may be u can start first.. we will help u complete it

sohne hmm ok i will try buh arn't sure kiwe di honi eh

Quote from: Punjabi Soorma on November 12, 2009, 12:28:09 PM

Khand Mishri pata nai tenu pasand ave ja naa..par mai ek line likh dinda aa..

Dhee kookh vich na maar bablaa..
Ehnu Jeyounde jee na saar bablaa..
(Baki hun aap likh lai mai starting kar diti..)

.
.hey soorma g ssa..thank u ..for the words..buh i was gonna write it on babul n dhee de pyar tey ..eh gohre riste tey likhna eh...buh will surely complete ur sharyi ..

Quote from: *ღ* HooR *ღ* on November 12, 2009, 12:35:57 PM

may be babul te dhee te pyaare rishte te shaayri likhan nu kehndi hai khand mishri :dnk:

yep thatz wot i wanna do..

Quote from: death_in_dreamz on November 12, 2009, 01:14:37 PM

eh kaisa din aeya ve rabba..
kaisa khed khidaeya ve rabba..
ki duniya de dstoor bnaye..
na ro ve babulaa
chup kr ja meriye maaye...

kinjh russi nu hass mnaounda c
mainu ghut k kalje laounda c
kinne laaddan de naal khidounda c
chete kr din oh ajj
akh meri hanjhu vahaye..
hass k tor ve babulaa
ajj sagn mna lai meriye maaye..

dukh na koi aave meri ammddi de vehre
sda rhn babul ghr khusiyan te khede
mehr rakhi rabba devi sukh duniya de jehre
hanjhu na ave mere veeran akh
jiounde rehn meri amdi de jaye
sukhi vse tera mehal ve babula..
reh chali chaar dihade meriye maaye..
na ro ve babulaa
chup kr ja meriye maaye..

dheeyan dhann praeya ik din tur janiyan
lambhi udari maar chiriyan eh udd janiyan
rakh ske na rajje raniyan dheeyan
kaise dheeyean lekh likhaye
ve rabba kyun dheyan
kr jandiyan desh praye
na ro dheeye doli beh ja
tainu lain prdesi aye

kyun dhee pyari nu torna painda ghr praye..
sonu kise d smj na aye ve rabba
kyun eh dastoor bnaye
babula ve roeya na kri
aj sagan manna lai meriye maye
ja ni dheeye doli beth ja
tainu lain pardesi aaye..

n thank u sonu itz jus awesum... =D> now i feel like crying..

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #9 on:** November 12, 2009, 05:41:40 PM »

Quote from: Punjabi Soorma on November 12, 2009, 12:28:09 PM

Khand Mishri pata nai tenu pasand ave ja naa..par mai ek line likh dinda aa..

Dhee kookh vich na maar bablaa..
Ehnu Jeyounde jee na saar bablaa..
(Baki hun aap likh lai mai starting kar diti..)

dhee kokh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na saar babula
puttan ne tan jameena vandanian..
dheeyan ne sambalne ne gharvar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na saar babula

labhdi reh jayegi dunia sari
assin turr jana eh mar lamdi udari
ek din nahe rehan es jagh tey dhee bina sansar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na saar babula

ek vari devo mauka dheeyan nu es jagh nu vekhan da
ristedarian nu nibayon ke dukhan nu sekhan da
har farz niba ke karange tere sir nu uccha har var babula
dhee kukh vicn na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na sarr babula

kadie avehga na hanju teri akh vich
pawe sadna pawe menu lakhan sekan vich
tere nehre kadie dukh na ayon devange pandar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na sarr babaula

tun royeya c meri jammi tey
lakh mare c tahne mere ammi tey
jado hasske kehndi dunian roop varga koye nahe
ohdo sir uccha hunda eh tera har var babula
ajj keh tuvi ke dhee jam tun nahe hega gunehgar babula
karde roop tey enna upkar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na sarr babula
...layo sorrma g..i tried..agge je kujj changa na lagge tan tusi ehnu edit kar sakde o..

Jhanda_Amli · « **Reply #10 on:** November 12, 2009, 06:15:18 PM »

wah ji wah.. Bhut sohna likhiya aa ji Mishri ji :)

Sonu is awsome too.. :)

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #11 on:** November 12, 2009, 06:35:05 PM »

Quote from: Jhanda Amli on November 12, 2009, 06:15:18 PM

wah ji wah.. Bhut sohna likhiya aa ji Mishri ji :)

Sonu is awsome too.. :)

ur bug is too scary X_X X_X nale eh ji kitho aa gea vich.. thank u for checking..koye glati tan kadh deni c /:) /:)

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #12 on:** November 12, 2009, 11:31:25 PM »

Sorry Mishri ji main tuhada topic padia nai c te ajj e padiya main tuhada topic chalo je tusi hun kiha te likh dina jaroor kuch par patta nai sayad tuhanu pasand aave ja na...
Main nikki jahi baldi rowan....
Rondi chup kara layo oye...
Putran wangu chuk k mainu...
Koi te gal naal layo oye...
Main nikki jahi baldi rowan....

Main duniya rang dekhan aayi...
Aake hun pachhtawan main...
Rabb to vidia laike aayi..
Kehde muh wapis jawan main..
Mainu rabb di daat samjh k...
Jholi wich pawa layo oye...
Main nikki jahi baldi rowan....
Rondi chup kara layo oye...

Jamdi nu na mainu maro...
Eh dunia rang dikhan do...
Dade jag di nafrat wali ...
Chandri agg nu sekan do...
Dahej di khatir sadan layi hi...
Mainu ajj bacha layo oye....
Main nikki jahi baldi rowan....
Rondi chup kara layo oye...

Mere layi koi kalam na chale....
Geet mere koi gounda nai...
Jamdiyan dheeyan na maro...
Kio koi waste pounda nai...
Kalam Tezy di bol sunaya...
Hun te dard wanda layo oye...
Main nikki jahi baldi rowan....
Rondi chup kara layo oye...
Putran wangu chuk k mainu....
Koi te gal naal lalo oye...
Main nikki jahi baldi rowan....
Rondi chup kara layo oye...

ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ · « **Reply #13 on:** November 13, 2009, 03:59:23 AM »

Quote from: ♥кнαη∂ мιѕняι♥ on November 12, 2009, 05:41:40 PM

dhee kokh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na saar babula
puttan ne tan jameena vandanian..
dheeyan ne sambalne ne gharvar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na saar babula

labhdi reh jayegi dunia sari
assin turr jana eh mar lamdi udari
ek din nahe rehan es jagh tey dhee bina sansar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na saar babula

ek vari devo mauka dheeyan nu es jagh nu vekhan da
ristedarian nu nibayon ke dukhan nu sekhan da
har farz niba ke karange tere sir nu uccha har var babula
dhee kukh vicn na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na sarr babula

kadie avehga na hanju teri akh vich
pawe sadna pawe menu lakhan sekan vich
tere nehre kadie dukh na ayon devange pandar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na sarr babaula

tun royeya c meri jammi tey
lakh mare c tahne mere ammi tey
jado hasske kehndi dunian roop varga koye nahe
ohdo sir uccha hunda eh tera har var babula
ajj keh tuvi ke dhee jam tun nahe hega gunehgar babula
karde roop tey enna upkar babula
dhee kukh vich na marr babula
ehnu jeyonde jee na sarr babula

bahuyt waddiya sis ji, now m feeling likr cry :cry: :cry: :cry:
:sad: :sad:

bahut wadiya sis

ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ · « **Reply #14 on:** November 13, 2009, 04:01:06 AM »

Quote from: death_in_dreamz on November 12, 2009, 01:14:37 PM

eh kaisa din aeya ve rabba..
kaisa khed khidaeya ve rabba..
ki duniya de dstoor bnaye..
na ro ve babulaa
chup kr ja meriye maaye...

kinjh russi nu hass mnaounda c
mainu ghut k kalje laounda c
kinne laaddan de naal khidounda c
chete kr din oh ajj
akh meri hanjhu vahaye..
hass k tor ve babulaa
ajj sagn mna lai meriye maaye..

dukh na koi aave meri ammddi de vehre
sda rhn babul ghr khusiyan te khede
mehr rakhi rabba devi sukh duniya de jehre
hanjhu na ave mere veeran akh
jiounde rehn meri amdi de jaye
sukhi vse tera mehal ve babula..
reh chali chaar dihade meriye maaye..
na ro ve babulaa
chup kr ja meriye maaye..

dheeyan dhann praeya ik din tur janiyan
lambhi udari maar chiriyan eh udd janiyan
rakh ske na rajje raniyan dheeyan
kaise dheeyean lekh likhaye
ve rabba kyun dheyan
kr jandiyan desh praye
na ro dheeye doli beh ja
tainu lain prdesi aye

kyun dhee pyari nu torna painda ghr praye..
sonu kise d smj na aye ve rabba
kyun eh dastoor bnaye
babula ve roeya na kri
aj sagan manna lai meriye maye
ja ni dheeye doli beth ja
tainu lain pardesi aaye..

bahut wadiya likhiya sonu ji =D> =D> =D> =D>
dheeyan hi begane ghar kyun jandiya ? putt kyun nahi :sad: :sad: :sad:

bahut wadiya lines sonu ji

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #15 on:** November 13, 2009, 09:40:52 AM »

tezzy bro..papa de n dhee de pyar tey likhan eh.. buh thank u..tusi bahut sohna likeya..thank u so much =D>

@horr sis.. plz rovo na.. plz... dun cry..sada vi dil udas ho jana :sad:

ღ--● ♥ ĦṒṓṝ ♥ ●--ღ · « **Reply #16 on:** November 13, 2009, 10:30:34 AM »

Quote from: ♥кнαη∂ мιѕняι♥ on November 13, 2009, 09:40:52 AM

@horr sis.. plz rovo na.. plz... dun cry..sada vi dil udas ho jana :sad:

sis rona ayi janda aaj ta waise hi :sad: :sad: pata ni kyun :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

*rAbh RaKHA* · « **Reply #17 on:** November 13, 2009, 10:52:26 AM »

Quote from: *ღ* HooR *ღ* on November 13, 2009, 10:30:34 AM

sis rona ayi janda aaj ta waise hi :sad: :sad: pata ni kyun :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

menu vi aa reha chalo ekathe ronde aan.. :cry: :cry: :cry:

Tezy_Sandhu · « **Reply #18 on:** November 13, 2009, 12:09:37 PM »

Quote from: ♥кнαη∂ мιѕняι♥ on November 13, 2009, 09:40:52 AM

tezzy bro..papa de n dhee de pyar tey likhan eh.. buh thank u..tusi bahut sohna likeya..thank u so much =D>

Chal ok theek aa main try karunga kuch likhan di par problem aa ajjkal time nai milda anyway i'll try my best.... thanks

ਬਿੱਲੋ ਦੀ Blori ਅੱਖ · « **Reply #19 on:** November 13, 2009, 01:26:22 PM »

Quote from: ♥кнαη∂ мιѕняι♥ on November 11, 2009, 02:19:09 PM

hey guys ssa.. we all know that you guys r great in shayri.. i been trying to write shayri on babul n dhee..buh m preety bad with these kinda stuff..menu start point jeha nahe milda ke mein kitho suru karn..so if u guy have time..tan can we all try togheter to write sumthing... itz jus mah request.. plz..

tezzy bro kuj likho na plz..

Hello sis ji here is app di pasand te kujh line hazar hain ji kabool faramna..

Dheeyan di loko ajb kahani….
Na peeke ghar apna na soureyan ghar rani…….
Dheeyan dhan praeya mappe keh begana kar dinde,,,,,
Soure ghar uss di kise sar na jaani…
Dheeyan di loko ajb kahani….
Na peeke ghar na soureyan ghar rani…….

Kadi bn dhee kade bn nooh,,,,
Dindi sabh kuch apna war,,,
Fir v kyun eh rehndi begani…….
Maa bn ke kade eh laad ladavey,,,,
Kade apneya di khushi di khatar Suli chad jave,,,,,
Fir v iss di kise ne kadar na jani….
Apniyan khushiyan di eh kr dindi kurbani,,,,
Dukhan nu handhaa k beet jandi jindgani….
Dheeyan di loko ajb kahani….
Na peeke ghar apna na soureyan ghar rani…….

Khukha wich hi kade tod jandi hain sahaan di door nuu
Jagg aoun to pehlan hi samj lendi hai maapeyan di loor nuu….
Preet hath jod ke kahe bass karo oye loko,,,,
Na loho ess nu hur farza di bathi wich,,,
Aha tah hain pehla hi khra sona
iss upar na putra wang jhoothi jhaal fari baymani

Dheeyan di loko ajb kahani….
Na peeke ghar appna na soureyan ghar rani…….

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