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~~kamli haan mein tuahnu vi~~
« on: February 05, 2010, 08:03:31 PM »
kamli haan mein tuahnu vi kamla bana devangi
dil vich tuahde vi pyar di shama jala devangi
reh lavo jinna vi pathar banke putt
par yaadan naal apni tuahnu vi rula devangi
 



hmmmm itz an old 1 that i wrote.itz adoora ..2 salla ton try kardi c ke poora kar devan buh still can't complete it..
« Last Edit: February 05, 2010, 08:20:24 PM by ஜღкค๓lเ г๏๏קஜღ »
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« on: February 05, 2010, 08:03:31 PM »

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Re: ~~kamli haan mein tuahnu vi~~
« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 03:18:30 AM »
kamli haan mein tuahnu vi kamla bana devangi
dil vich tuahde vi pyar di shama jala devangi
reh skda jinna vi pathar banke reh mitra
par yaadan naal apni tuahnu vi rula devangi

suneya ajj kal akh horna utte rakhda
sanu larreyan ch rakhe na gal dil wali dsda
hass lai tu horan naal hi bhave khush reh mitra
kde na kde main v chete aa tainu rula hi devangi
 kamli haan main tohanu v kamla bna devangi

sochdi aa hr pal klli beh k chubare
kite kasma vadde koul tere bn gye ne larre
kosaan waqt nu ya kde smja ehi taqdeer de najare
pr kra tere layi duavan tu razi sda reh mitra
tu v ta dua kri sayd main mrr k tainu bhula hi devangi
kamli haan main tohanu v kamli bna devangi
« Last Edit: February 06, 2010, 03:59:41 AM by iltii_jwak »
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Re: ~~kamli haan mein tuahnu vi~~
« Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 06:30:39 PM »
thank u itli..g..
par shayed that is the only reason i wasn't completing it.. coz.. shayed ungal munde tey chukk honi c..
but tusan bahut sohna likeya..awesum
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