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zehre-jam........
« on: March 15, 2009, 02:40:26 PM »
ehe zehre-jam peen to pehla main tera nam lawa ga....
tu jithe rahe ,bass khush rahe a dua dewanga
fir ik nazam likha ga main nam tere......
puri hon to pehla he par jala dewanga....
koshish karaga fir tasvir banondi teri...
koshish karaga fir tasvir banondi teri...
rang bharan to pehla berang bana devanga........


aakhir nam tera leke main jam bullan te laga lawanga....
kuch  na kaha ga bassssss..... mout nu gale laga lawanga...

a ona dina di gall a...
jado dev udas bara si....nawa nawa kise da sath chutea c...
 awain ajeeb jeha mahol... bass kuch sad jea likhi jana...
bohat likhda reha c main ode lai...ede ch ohi keha main k...
dil karda fer likha main tere lai kuch..par puri hon to pehla e onu jala dewa...
ek tasveer v bnai c main odi kade... hun chonda c k ek hor tasveer shuru kara...
par ovi puri na kara...sab adhura chad jawa.....
sunea c k vadia shear likhna howe ta khud te sara kuch handona penda...... tusi vadia das sakde o....k sachi dard hega si dev kol odo ja awain e......


  ਦੇਵ ਨਿਮਾਣਾ.....
« Last Edit: March 15, 2009, 02:51:35 PM by ਦੇਵ – mr. ਰਾਈਟ ™ »
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zehre-jam........
« on: March 15, 2009, 02:40:26 PM »

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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2009, 03:00:09 PM »
very nice veer ji..
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2009, 12:08:23 PM »
thnks sis..par lagda ena nice nai...kio k no replys ..........any ways soon main kuch hor likhu vadia.........
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2009, 12:10:03 PM »
 Balle; Balle; Balle;
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2009, 12:54:28 PM »
 w39: w39: w39:
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #5 on: March 18, 2009, 12:53:11 AM »
nice... =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D> =D>
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #6 on: March 21, 2009, 02:27:25 AM »
thnks u aal......... rabb:) rabb:)
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #7 on: March 21, 2009, 04:10:04 AM »
happy0005
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #8 on: March 21, 2009, 04:55:22 AM »
 Laugh;) Laugh;) Laugh;) Balle; Balle; Balle;
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #9 on: March 21, 2009, 05:36:39 AM »
 :tongue: :tongue: :tongue:
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 01:32:49 PM »
hmmm aa dekho jee a v odo he likhea si..... par ede ch words v vadia si nd feelings v..........
par moat da zikar ede ch v aa gea hehe... :hehe:
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 11:17:35 PM »
theek c  :wait:   :hehe: nahi sohni hai ji eh v bahut
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #12 on: April 30, 2009, 07:30:08 AM »
vese sachi sohni si ja awain utto utto he kahi jande o... :wait: :wait: :wait:   :hehe:lolll
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #13 on: April 30, 2009, 10:49:47 AM »
wah kiya baat hay dev tuadda dard es vich saaf disda afsoos k tuannu ina halata vicho guzarna peya bute yup really nice shayari  =D>
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Re: zehre-jam........
« Reply #14 on: April 30, 2009, 10:52:53 AM »
Dard haiga par menu lagda nahi pyar da. Lagda jive teri navi navi jutti gawachi hove te tu ohdi loss wich tarpda.

But written very beautifully.
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