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tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« on: May 30, 2010, 02:07:37 PM »
peera te fakeera di duaa wargi vasaayi hai
dil ch paak te pavitar teri tasveer mai
tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasaa
apne hathaa ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai

tu pariyaa to wad sohni arhiye
na koyi tere wargi honi arhiye
ni mai vaise ranjha banan de kaabil nae
par tainu bnaa baitha ha apni heer mai
tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasaa
apne hathaa ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai

tere saaha di khushboo mehkaa jaave fizaava nu
tu apniaa zulfaa vich kaid kar lave havaawa nu
tainu tann mann ch vasaaa ke ni
ban baitha ha tera dilgeer mai
tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasa
apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai

dhadkan ban chukki tu joban de dil di
tainu tak ke akhaa nu khushi hai mildi
tere naam naal mera naam jurh jave
sache rabb kolo mangi aisi taqdeer mai
tainu paun lyi mai kar kar ardaasaa
apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai
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tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« on: May 30, 2010, 02:07:37 PM »

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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #1 on: May 30, 2010, 02:33:42 PM »
BAHUT VADIYA..jOBAN SACHI BAHUT VADIYA LIKHDE HO..
appa nu bus padhna hi ayunda..
so ik padhiya hoyea hi share kar rahi aa..

Gall sun mere yaara bada lagda en pyaara,
Mile jadon v dubara bas hasda rahi,
Satho bhul ke hazoor ho jave koi kasoor,
De ke akhiyan di ghur sanu dasda rahi..
Dhanwaadji..:)
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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #2 on: May 30, 2010, 04:57:01 PM »
Bahut Sohna likhya Hundal 22 sachi kamal aa teri kalam & Kudrat thanx 4 sharing nice sher...
Waise ajjkal edan hunda bahut ghat aa k pyar de badle v ena pyar mile is karke eh bas ek kalpna aa k ago kudi ki kahndi aa...
Gal sun tu meria ve yaara..
Tu te sanu e jaan to v pyara...
Ve main peeran dar jake te manawa lakhan peer main...
Karan eko ardas k bana bas mere ranjane di heer main...
Meriyan ve sohniya duawan wich tu e...
Akhan takdiyan ne jihnu ohna rahan wich tu e...
Devi eni shakti tu rabba k tod sakan is jamane di zanjeer main...
Karan eko ardas k bana bas mere ranjane di heer main...
Has maut gal lake...
Ve main mila Tezy tainu aake...
Kar zindh kurban tap jawan eh pyar di lakeer main...
Karan eko ardas k bana bas mere ranjane di heer main..
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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2010, 10:08:38 PM »
thanks kudrat g te tezy veer g........ kudrat g nice shayr
tusi ta att hi kraa ditti veer g hehehhe
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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #4 on: May 31, 2010, 01:36:20 AM »
Quote from: Tezy_Sandhu on May 30, 2010, 04:57:01 PM
Bahut Sohna likhya Hundal 22 sachi kamal aa teri kalam & Kudrat thanx 4 sharing nice sher...
Waise ajjkal edan hunda bahut ghat aa k pyar de badle v ena pyar mile is karke eh bas ek kalpna aa k ago kudi ki kahndi aa...
Gal sun tu meria ve yaara..
Tu te sanu e jaan to v pyara...
Ve main peeran dar jake te manawa lakhan peer main...
Karan eko ardas k bana bas mere ranjane di heer main...
Meriyan ve sohniya duawan wich tu e...
Akhan takdiyan ne jihnu ohna rahan wich tu e...
Devi eni shakti tu rabba k tod sakan is jamane di zanjeer main...
Karan eko ardas k bana bas mere ranjane di heer main...
Has maut gal lake...
Ve main mila Tezy tainu aake...
Kar zindh kurban tap jawan eh pyar di lakeer main...
Karan eko ardas k bana bas mere ranjane di heer main..


Thanks Tezyji..bahut hi sohniya lines ne..ah tah appa hun save karke rakh leniya ne..jado sade Sardaarji miljaange ohna nu Likh ke bhejange.. :pagel: X_X
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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2010, 08:48:45 AM »
Oye hoye kudrat tusi chori v kar laine aa ?? coz je te tusi ehde ch koi change kita te oh chori aa je nai kuch change karna fer kihnu bhejna paina soch lo hahahaha
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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #6 on: May 31, 2010, 02:39:07 PM »
veeru fatte chakte mere bina hi :he: :he:
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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #7 on: May 31, 2010, 03:39:15 PM »
Quote from: Tezy_Sandhu on May 31, 2010, 08:48:45 AM
Oye hoye kudrat tusi chori v kar laine aa ?? coz je te tusi ehde ch koi change kita te oh chori aa je nai kuch change karna fer kihnu bhejna paina soch lo hahahaha

Hanji chori karan vich assi Sher aa Tezyji.. :pagel: baki jithe tak naam di gal aa ji oh tah ghar de jihra kehnge oh likh dena assi poem vich..no choices..frm my side.. :happy:
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Re: tainu paun lyi........apne hatha ch likhvaayi hai lakeer mai.......
« Reply #8 on: May 31, 2010, 07:31:02 PM »
Kudrat main cali jana rahna address dayo main puch auna kihda naam likhna lolz
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