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..........Manjil......
« on: September 04, 2008, 05:26:53 PM »
SSA PJP... Ek war fer tuhade naal sachi hadbiti di gal karan lga umeed aa hadbiti nu poem da chola paya tuhanu changa laguga...
Kehde rah ute main khada jithe manjil koi dikhe na...
Bas kala e main turi jana koi mere age piche na...
Dekh sun san rahan har koi mukh mod gya...
Jehda koi v sada c ajj oh v nata tod gya...
Kihnu main bulawan te kihnu dasan had bitiyan...
Main te har wele bas gallan kalam naal e kitiyan...
Dar jiha rahinda kite eh v rus jave na...
Bas eko e sahara kite eh v khus jave na...
Jidan chhad gayi eh sath fer jeena aukha hojuga...
Fer chhad Tezy v is duniya nu neend sda di sojuga...
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..........Manjil......
« on: September 04, 2008, 05:26:53 PM »

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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #1 on: September 04, 2008, 05:35:56 PM »
aawwwwwwww............niceee sandhu ji .....hadbiti matlab eh tusi aapne bare likhiyaa....saaaddddddd sad;> sad;>
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #2 on: September 04, 2008, 06:03:12 PM »
Ssa Preet... Hanji likhya te apne bare e aa pta nhi sad aa ja nhi jo v c likh dita..
Thanx
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2008, 08:27:59 PM »
sachi yaar bohat hi jada wadhia likhia veere
lafz hani mere kol..its speachless yaar
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #4 on: September 04, 2008, 08:29:26 PM »
gal teri kafi hadd tak sachii a..ki wari edha diyian feelingz aundia mind vich...
bande nu edha laggda jiwe o kise road te ekala janda howe toria te bas ik odha parsawa
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #5 on: September 04, 2008, 09:40:47 PM »
sandhu bai tu sachi buhat nice likhiya..... yaar ahh gallen bas ohi banda likh sakde hai or soch sakde aa... Jahdeh haddbitti hove.... & really jahde Banda nu kissa hathoo buhat burri haar khaddi hove..... yaar really Nice.......

Teri haddbitti ahh shayari andaajh vich sunan da treeka hi vakh aa... lagde nai kissa di kahni sun rahe.. injh lagde jivva app iss rah vicho di nikal rahe hain....
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #6 on: September 04, 2008, 09:48:40 PM »
Thanx veere tuhada dona da bahut nimane je bande di eni tareef karan layi.
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #7 on: September 04, 2008, 09:49:36 PM »
Bas kala e main turi jana koi mere age piche na...
Dekh sun san rahan har koi mukh mod gya...
Jehda koi v sada c ajj oh v nata tod gya...
Kihnu main bulawan te kihnu dasan had bitiyan...
Main te har wele bas gallan kalam naal e kitiyan...


sachi sandhu ji bohat sohna likhiya .... eh tuadi hadbitti ne lagda jidda mere nal vv kuch eeda ee ho reha......lagda eh sab nal hona ee hunda
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #8 on: September 04, 2008, 09:49:52 PM »
sach ahh te dasne hi bhull giya...Yaar plz adde di shayari likhde rahe kar..... & apne dil da dukh daske dil thoda holla ho jande aa..... Sachi teri likhi shayari parn da mazza hi vakhre yaar.....
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #9 on: September 04, 2008, 09:57:35 PM »
wah ji wah mera ik msg complete karde karde 2 msg hoor agge.. atho patta lagde changi cheejh di kinni khadar pandi aa....

But yaar Sandhu Ek gal hoor aa... yaar kai mera vargiya nu bas shoonk jahe hunda aho jahe dukh laon daa........ Patta nai ki milde mera varge lokka nu....
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #10 on: September 04, 2008, 10:01:08 PM »
kuch lokaa nu dukh laon da shonk hunda te kuch lokkaa nu dukh dain da..meri life ch kuch lokkaa nu lagda ki ohna de dukh da karan main aa..but mere bare koi sochda ee ne.....
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #11 on: September 04, 2008, 11:31:45 PM »
Sachi yaar bas mere kol lafaj nhi jina naal main tuhada sab da thanx karan.. Yaar eh tuhada sabda pyar e aa jo mainu war war likhan nu majboor karda nhi te kade kade main sochda ke bas hun nhi likhya karna par fer kalam chak laina
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #12 on: September 04, 2008, 11:41:41 PM »
Preet yaar ajjkal harkoi ek duje nu blame karda ke main ohda karke dukhi aa. Par gal te eh aa kee Nanak dukhiya sab sansar... Main te kahna k jina sath kalam de sakdi aa koi v nhi dinda ithe. Je ho sakda tusi v likhya karo kuch man halka ho janda kalam naal dukh sukh karke...
Apni te ajjkal oh halat aa k...
Ajj fer dil gareeb ek ponda e wasta deja meri kalam nu eh hor hadsa...
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #13 on: September 04, 2008, 11:44:52 PM »
hanji theek kehaa tusi sandhu ji kalam aa jo kadi dhokha ne dindii.....ehda ee sath changaa...har dukh sukh ch sath dindii aa........
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #14 on: September 05, 2008, 12:00:48 AM »
yaar i think tusi dove mistaken hoo yaar.... burra time ta rabb vi nai saith dinda tusi ahh takke di kalam toh assh lai firda sath niboon di......
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #15 on: September 05, 2008, 12:17:23 AM »
sandhu ji bahut wadiya likhya tusi.

ohh preet te aman tuhnu donna nu ki ho geya. tusi kehdi gal toh dukhi ho gaye.
tuhnu kon tukha dee geya hun.
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #16 on: September 05, 2008, 12:20:34 AM »
kuch ne sis mainu  ki honaa kuch ne hoiyaa....
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Re: ..........Manjil......
« Reply #17 on: September 05, 2008, 11:19:30 AM »
Aman 22 ehi te kalam da kamal aa kee jadon koi sath nhi dinda udon eh sath dindi aa. Even dukh ch te likhna hor v sokha hunda.
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